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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#31376: Nov 30th 2023 at 5:31:18 AM

Even less necessary, we don't need to make a page for everything

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
Libraryseraph Cross-wired freak from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Cross-wired freak
#31377: Nov 30th 2023 at 5:43:06 AM

[tup] To rictus, cooler, and the fanscription duo

Listen to my podcast
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#31378: Nov 30th 2023 at 7:04:07 AM

Here is short and simple, but weird one I found. May have another one from work.

What is the work?

Invocation is Star Wars Transplanted Character Fic written by SRR 2519. Set in the modern world where Supernaturals have recently come out of hiding, Ray Johansson is young woman and member of The Order, organisation of monster hunters who stive to ensure peacefull coexistence beetwen humans and magical creatures.

However as string of mysterious kidnaping starts to pile up, she has to work alongside Kylo Ren, handsome, centuries old vampire who was slave soldier of the Devil himself and this case may have to do with his past.

As you probably can guess, my candidate is not!Palpatine.

Who is the Devil? What has he done?

Ancient Ethereal of Death who terorised the world centuries ago, creating Kylo and other Knights of Ren to be his servants. He had the slaugther many people while regularly Mind Raping them to make sure they are loyal to him. Eventually he was defeated and banished by combined efforts of Ethereals, led by Luke, and Knigts of Ren who turned against him.

In present his demonic servants Pryde, Wilhuff and Krennic work to ressurect him. They kidnap powerfull Supernaturals, including Asher, son of Knigt of Ren Vicrul for ritual to bring him back. Needing blood of the traitor for ritual, they have Ray kidnaped in order to lure Kylo to them. Using his blood and extracting magic from their other prisoners they sucesfully bring back Devil who posseses Asher.

Devil gets back to work, unleashing demons on the world while he deals with his minions who didn’t aid on his return and collect their heads as trophies. Plagues instantly kill thousands in Singapore and Tokyo, tsunami Hits California coast, earthquake in Russia. Realising that Ray is descendant of Fay and she and Kylo form the Dyad which can defeat him, he plans to marry Ray and have her form dark Dyad so his rule over the world would be absolute. He tortures Kylo some more to Force Ray to say yes to his proposal, planning to kill Kylo afterwads. However, just as his is about to finish Kylo, duo succefuly extertise him from Asher and banish his essence again.

Reddeming qualities?

There is vague mention that he came into being after Luke allowed hate and darkness to run free, but it is given absolute no elaboration and even demons created by him are shown to have agency. Likevise, his creepy lust for Ray is not played as anything more than that.

Heinous standard?

Nasty torture of Kylo and his other Knigts while making them serve him in spreading chaos and death across the world, plots to unleash Hell on Earth and make clear he plots to consumate his marriage to Ray.

Conclusion?

Palpatine as a literal Devil counts? Color me suprised!

Edited by EmperorGeode on Nov 30th 2023 at 7:14:52 AM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#31380: Nov 30th 2023 at 7:30:39 AM

[tup] to Deviltine

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#31381: Nov 30th 2023 at 7:39:47 AM

Have a fun example now from literature

What's the work?

Silverwing is a young reader book, which was adapted to a short animated series. It's about a group of bats, namely our hero Shade and his love interest Marina. The series introduces a lot of magic, and Shade fighting to stop a dark god, but his initial nemesis is none other than this guy.

Goth.

Who is Goth?

A gigantic spectral bat who's also a cannibal and a devout follower of the bat god of evil Camazotz. Captured by humans with another bat named Throbb, the two were banded and goth, not knowing how to get back to South America, decides to find a bat guide. Saving Shade and Marina, Goth plays to their sympathy but intends to find Shade's colony and eat everyone there. Upon Marina growing suspicious, Goth orders Throbb to kill Marina and make it look accidental. Throbb accidentally kills another bat, which Shade witnesses. Goth finds a whole group of other banded bats and killls them all for a meal.Ultimately Shade outsmarts Goth and Throbb, which kills the later, but Goth survives, kills a bird and vows revenge.

Now alone, Goth communes with his God, Cama Zotz who instructs Goth to be taken by humans. The plan? Goth is to help to direct a group of bat suicide bombers, with the intention to sacrifice 100 lives in one go, freeing Cama Zotz from the underworld and bringing destruction and evil to earth. Shade foils the plan and Goth is blown up.

But death isn't the end and Goth ends up in the underworld. Serving Cama Zotz from there, Goth is able to murder several characters, escape the underworld and...

Ends the series free and clear, vowing to bring the word of Cama Zotz to other bats and unleash his god upon an unsuspecting world.

Mitigating issues?

Nope. Goth is a sadistic, monstrous, unfeeling creature, a cannibal and a ruthless schemer whose major trait is his devotion to Cama Zotz because he's drawn to the pure evil that Cam Zotz represents. Goth is devoid of any good qualities and his body count is enormous.

Conclusion?

Easy keeper.

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#31383: Nov 30th 2023 at 7:45:41 AM

[tup]Book Goth.

Who can now go along aside his cartoon counter part.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#31384: Nov 30th 2023 at 7:47:42 AM

[tup] to Goth. Yikes, another Karma Houdini like my last candidate...

I assume Camazotz is Made of Evil and thus not worth E Ping?

Edited by ForgoLight on Nov 30th 2023 at 7:48:19 AM

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#31385: Nov 30th 2023 at 7:55:24 AM

[tup] Goth

"No running in the halls!"
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#31386: Nov 30th 2023 at 7:55:55 AM

Cama zotz prolly keeps, too. the last book Firewing ends with a clear sequel hook but that was....2002

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#31387: Nov 30th 2023 at 8:04:18 AM

Then I say have a go at Camazotz. They sound quite vile.

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#31388: Nov 30th 2023 at 8:04:49 AM

Sure to Goth.

Mir: So would Nemesis not be part of the Millarworld tree? Or have it as part of the tree but with a note saying it's non-canon? Or something else?

Edited by ACW on Nov 30th 2023 at 11:06:29 AM

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LarryT Since: Aug, 2023
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#31390: Nov 30th 2023 at 9:02:55 AM

Uh I dunno. I don't read much of Millar. Just learned that from a review.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#31391: Nov 30th 2023 at 9:09:23 AM

[tup] Goth

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#31392: Nov 30th 2023 at 9:12:47 AM

Dude, I said it multiple times that it's a multiverse. Put it part of the tree, don't, I don't mind either way.

Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Since: Dec, 2015 Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
#31393: Nov 30th 2023 at 9:57:23 AM

[tup]Goth. Remember that book from my elementary school years.

Why so serious?
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#31394: Nov 30th 2023 at 9:57:48 AM

  • Road Kill Volume 1's "Daniel's Dilemma": Tony is a pimp who prostitutes young girls illegally immigrated from Mexico to his disgusting friends. With one of his girls “disappearing” after making plans to escape, Tony threatens to kill and even rape his latest prostitute Maya if she attempts to make a getaway.

"No running in the halls!"
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#31395: Nov 30th 2023 at 12:57:14 PM

[tup] Goth.

[tup] The Devil. I almost wrote a portmanteau of Satan and Palpatine and it almost spelled Satine. Weird how that works.

  • Grand Theft Auto III: Catalina is a sadistic, ambitious, hateful thief and spree killer, turned crime boss, who started her career in San Andreas; purposefully escalating the violence in her robberies, killing numerous bystanders and cops with glee. Having a history of using and discarding her boyfriends and partners, Catalina shoots Claude, leaving him to die during a robbery, before rising through the ranks of the Columbian Cartel; abandoning her next partner, Miguel, later killing him. Catalina starts an empire, flooding Liberty City with the especially potent and mentally deteriorating drug, SPANK; turning even the Leone crime family and Yakuza against her. Among her distribution methods, she spikes SPANK through coffee shops and street vendors across the city. Encountering a vengeful Claude, Catalina drugs multiple addicts into crazed suicide bombers to try to kill him. Out of spite, Catalina then abducts Claude's alleged girlfriend Maria, attempting to lure him into getting executed.

Edited by Beast on Nov 30th 2023 at 12:57:29 PM

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#31396: Nov 30th 2023 at 12:58:20 PM

[tup] to Mr. Rictus, Gunner John, Cooler, Duck, Randall Boggs and Johnny Worthington III, Devil and Goth.

Arawn: Yeah no one counts in Malevolent. So far all the antagonists either have redeeming traits, are to inhuman to really call evil, to insane or their story is still ongoing. I'd still recommend checking it out, its a really good series.

Arawn999 Since: Dec, 2013 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#31397: Nov 30th 2023 at 1:08:15 PM

[tup] to the very naughty bat. I don't think Cama Zotz is Made of Evil given it turns out he's Nocturna's brother... but if no-one else wants to do an EP I'd be happy to take a stab at it. I've been meaning to reread the Silverwing series and it'd give me the excuse to do so.

Edited by Arawn999 on Nov 30th 2023 at 1:11:05 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#31398: Nov 30th 2023 at 1:19:34 PM

Did Catalina get enough votes?

If so, I guess she'll go right after Tenpenny?

Edited by ACW on Nov 30th 2023 at 4:20:42 AM

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43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#31399: Nov 30th 2023 at 1:23:56 PM

Zotz is an easy keep. I meant to propose him but never got around to it.

Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#31400: Nov 30th 2023 at 1:47:18 PM

[up][up] Before. III was released first, with its follow ups being all prequels.

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."

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