Opening.
(Technically, California's AOC is 18, but Switzerland's 16 is far more mainstream. Not that it matters much...)
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Hm. Judging by the intro, the author is using the fetish material to fuel an actual story. OTOH, we're talking about a fifteen-year-old enthusiastically employing a Sex Quirk.
Edited by Ramidel on Sep 12th 2022 at 5:01:00 AM
BURN BURN BURN! BURN TO THE GROUND!note
Edit: Actually, changed my vote to abstain first. I'm waiting until someone reads this.
Double Edit: Someone else has read the work, so I'm agreeing to cut.
Edited by ReynTime250 on Sep 14th 2022 at 3:44:33 PM
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Let's figure out what this actually is first before we start calling for cuts. It could just be pure pedobait, but it could be an actual story, too. Someone's gonna have to read the thing first.
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Abstain until someone doesn't just read the first chapter and reads the entire thing.
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Alright, biting the bullet and taking a look.
Chapter 4: Mentions of much more sexually explicit fetishes, but again no actual sex. Fetishes aren't gone into much more detail than 'this is what x character is into'. Izumi vores Uraraka, but spits her out none the worse for wear.
Chapter 5: Character interactions, nothing of note.
Chapter 6: Izumi vores someone, which the characters tell her is okay because he was a pedophile and deserved to die.
Chapter 7: More discussion of Izumi voring the pedophile; Izumi gained the ability to turn herself into a lamia from it. Very explicit and fetishy scene of Izumi voring her boyfriend and spitting him back up unharmed, which both of them find sexually pleasurable.
Chapter 8: A classmate allows Izumi to vore him and spit him back out in order to give her a powerboost. It's not sexual to the characters, but it's described in so much detail that it makes it seem like the author is getting off to it.
Chapter 9: Explicit sex scenes between Izumi and two classmates, followed by Izumi voring the two of them and spitting them out again (with them finding it extremely sexually pleasurable). Izumi then transforms into a centaur, with the narration lovingly describing how large her breasts and genitalia become.
Chapter 10: Mostly just character stuff, some discussion of fetishes. Izumi turns into a giant centaur to compete in a race.
Chapter 11: More character stuff, focusing on the race that Izumi is competing in.
Given how sexually explicit the content in chapters 7 and 9 is, plus how the narration gets gradually more and more detailed about how great it feels for the characters to be vored, I'm leaning cut on this one. If it were just chapters 1-6, I'd say keep, but past that point it gets too sexual and doesn't seem like it's going to stop.
Edited by Orbiting on Sep 14th 2022 at 3:54:48 PM
Thank you very much.
Barring a reason to call it otherwise, this is a cut for me. I can see that there's some attempt at a plot, but ultimately the ratio of porn to plot is just too high. (And if vore is being used as a fetish, we generally read it as an extreme-sports version of oral sex around here.)
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I'm going to vote cut for being a fetishy lemon involving minors.
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Yeahhhh, cut, this seems a little too over-the-line.
Also the page description irks me, it's very vague and launches into gushing without actually explaining anything about this quirk. Maybe it's just a personal gripe, but it feels like the page description was written intentionally to make people curious without actually discussing the quirk or how it's used (I mean, what does "make fetishes real" even mean if all she does is vore people?).
Edited by WarJay77 on Sep 14th 2022 at 6:41:21 AM
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Yeah, just cut.
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Cut, since we have better information on what it's like.
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Cut per the above reasons
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Changing to cut
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Calling for cut. Locking, cutlisting, cutting, recording, locking.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
The page's description, and that of the fic itself, discuss the fetishistic aspects of the fic rather than any plot, suggesting that it is simply just porn. Additionally, the characters are canonically teens (aged around 15, one year younger than California's Age of Consent, if I remember correctly), and the setting has not been changed for the fic.
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