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This thread is for requesting edits to Locked Pages. Please keep the following guidelines in mind:

  1. Don't ask for a page to be unlocked here. Use this thread instead.
  2. Check Locked Pages first. Often the reason for the lock will give you some indication of what sorts of edits we will not accept.
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  4. State your changes exactly as they should appear on the page, including proper Example Indentation, namespacing, and pothole and quote formatting.
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NOTE: Edited with OP's permission.

edited 17th Oct '14 7:52:33 AM by SeptimusHeap

5251 Fighteer15th Apr 2013 08:21:58 AM from the Time Vortex , Relationship Status: Dancing with Captain Jack Harkness
Geronimo!
[up]Please see Examples Are Not Arguable. Dear lord, that article needs a ton of work — it's loaded with Zero Context Examples. Trope Maker and Trope Codifier also belong in Trivia, not the main page.

edited 15th Apr '13 8:23:13 AM by Fighteer

5252 Larkmarn15th Apr 2013 09:25:58 AM , Relationship Status: Hello, I love you
Yeah, I just remembered the arguable thing. How about "One of his signature elements, which he helped popularize for the Nineties Anti-Hero"
5253 Fighteer15th Apr 2013 09:30:50 AM from the Time Vortex , Relationship Status: Dancing with Captain Jack Harkness
Geronimo!
Much better. Entered.
Please add to the Monster.Live Action TV page under the Highlander: The Series section

  • Morgan Walker is unique amongst other Highlander villains in that he's been a slaver for centuries. While Walker once dealt in the Atlantic Slave Trade, in modern times he uses his job as a modeling agent to capture young women for the sex trade. In prior years, Walker had an attachment to a slave named Charlotte, but after he suspected she had an affair, he killed her throwing her out of a high window and displays no remorse for her death. When hunting Methos, the immortal she had the affair with, Walker also kidnaps the daughter of Methos's good friend with full intention to kill or sell her should her father not betray Methos.
5255 JIKTV15th Apr 2013 12:15:52 PM from Tampa, FL, USA , Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
On the page Characters/TheBible, remove "Bees My God" from under "Deborah." Thank you.
Check out my site. The George The Animal Steele Fan Page!

http://www.angelfire.com/fl3/jasonsite/gsteele.html
5256 Willbyr15th Apr 2013 01:37:19 PM from North Little Rock, AR , Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Anime-ted
[up][up], [up] Done.
Add to Rape Is a Special Kind of Evil (moved from Rape as Backstory):

  • In one The Destroyer book, a minor antagonist sincerely believes that it is not only the right, but the duty, of a true man to have sex with a woman when the opportunity presents itself, regardless of what she feels about it. He even adds that he's raped several lesbians just to "show them what they're missing out on". This serves to establish, very heavy-handedly, how utterly morally bankrupt the character is, so you'll cheer when the protagonists kill him in grisly fashion later.
5258 EarlOfSandvich16th Apr 2013 12:40:20 AM from the Palouse , Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
Adorable Anarch
[up] And you can add Literature/ to that.
Status of possible Fallout RP idea: Thinking of and open to new ideas.

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5259 Willbyr16th Apr 2013 04:13:34 AM from North Little Rock, AR , Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Anime-ted
[up][up], [up] Done.
5260 Renelia16th Apr 2013 04:16:25 AM from Inside a box
Requesting an edit on Pædo Hunt: In the Video Game section it says "The in-game internet in Grand Theft Auto IV includes a Schmuck Bait website titled "Lil' Lacey's Birthday Surprise." Visiting it immediately grants the player a 4-star wanted level." It should say "Little Lacy Surprise Pageant" instead of "Lil' Lacey's Birthday Surprise." Moreover, the player gets a 5-star wanted level, not a 4-star as it currently states.

Thanks!
5261 SeptimusHeap16th Apr 2013 06:17:27 AM from Zurich, Switzerland , Relationship Status: Mu
A Wizard boy
Do I guess correctly that Confirmed YKTS is an archive page and should be locked as such?
5262 Willbyr16th Apr 2013 06:49:09 AM from North Little Rock, AR , Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Anime-ted
[up] That makes sense, but I'd want Eddie's [tup] before taking action.
Minor thing on Final Fantasy VII's character sheet. [= =] can be put on all the / in the tropes. Also, in Zack Fair's Love Makes You Dumb/Love Makes You Crazy entry, it is suggested that 2nd class SOLDIER Kunsel was ready to help Zack and Cloud and Kunsel had A LOT of inside knowledge of Shinra. Besides, finding someone in the slums of Midgar is like looking for a needle in a haystack. Hell, they crushed all of Sectro 7 just to try and kill them and they STILL failed.

"It is suggested that 2nd class SOLDIER Kunsel was ready to help Zack and Cloud and Kunsel had A LOT of inside knowledge on Shinra."

That can go in a bullet point under Love Makes You Dumb.

Edit: Also, for some unknown reason this happened: "For Science! and the Evulz: He". Someone used an "and" instead of a slash which is weird...

edited 16th Apr '13 9:58:11 AM by Thecommander236

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5264 Achaemenid16th Apr 2013 09:54:46 AM from beyond the Wall. , Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
On Monster, could we add:

  • Whilst Your Mileage May Vary greatly as to whether or not he was being entirely serious, or, if he was, his characterization is justified, Jack London's infamous diatribe The Scab paints all strikebreakers as complete monsters so heinous even the Christian cosmology turns against them:
—>After God had finished the rattlesnake, the toad, and the vampire, he had some awful substance left with which he made a scab...When a scab comes down the street, men turn their backs and Angels weep in Heaven, and the Devil shuts the gates of hell to keep him out.

edited 16th Apr '13 9:57:29 AM by Achaemenid

Denn träf' jede Kugel apart ihren Mann,

Wo kriegten die Könige ihre Soldaten dann?
5265 SeptimusHeap16th Apr 2013 10:06:48 AM from Zurich, Switzerland , Relationship Status: Mu
A Wizard boy
That page is unlocked.
[up][up] Do you mean Monster.Literature rather than Literature.Monster? In which case, though the page is indeed unlocked (should it be?), has that example been run through the discussion thread? It sounds as though it might fall afoul of both the "No Groups" and the "No Real Life Examples" rules.

(Also, don't use Your Mileage May Vary when writing examples, ever. It either violates Examples Are Not Arguable (or marks a Justifying Edit) or is redundant if the trope or page is already subjective.)

edited 16th Apr '13 10:18:55 AM by mlsmithca

5267 Willbyr16th Apr 2013 07:20:59 PM from North Little Rock, AR , Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Anime-ted
5260, 5261, 5263: Done. Confirmed YKTS is added to Locked Pages as well.

5264: Not doing that one until whichever work it's supposed to be for gets sorted out.
Lol. Wilbyr, you left spaces before and after the [=/=] in this line "For Science! [=/=] For the Evulz".
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle Series
5269 JIKTV16th Apr 2013 08:31:08 PM from Tampa, FL, USA , Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
On the Headscratchers/FalloutNewVegasArchive1 page, please change NamesToRunAwayFromVeryFast to Names to Run Away From Really Fast. Thank you.
Check out my site. The George The Animal Steele Fan Page!

http://www.angelfire.com/fl3/jasonsite/gsteele.html
5270 EarlOfSandvich16th Apr 2013 08:46:07 PM from the Palouse , Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
Adorable Anarch
[up] We can't edit archives.

Although what bothers me about it is that most of those are from Headscratchers, WMGs and the like...
Status of possible Fallout RP idea: Thinking of and open to new ideas.

Just feelin' like a casual chat? My PM box is ALWAYS open!
[up] Huh. Why is that?
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle Series
5272 JIKTV16th Apr 2013 10:26:26 PM from Tampa, FL, USA , Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
On the WallBangers/WWE page, please change TheIronShiek to Wrestling/TheIronSheik. Thank you.
Check out my site. The George The Animal Steele Fan Page!

http://www.angelfire.com/fl3/jasonsite/gsteele.html
5273 SeptimusHeap16th Apr 2013 11:16:36 PM from Zurich, Switzerland , Relationship Status: Mu
A Wizard boy
Moderators can edit archives, but under policy archives are meant to stay as they are.
5274 Willbyr17th Apr 2013 03:49:22 AM from North Little Rock, AR , Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Anime-ted
5268, 5272: Done.
Cool.
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle Series

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