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This thread is for requesting edits to Locked Pages. Please keep the following guidelines in mind:

  1. Don't ask for a page to be unlocked here. Use this thread instead.
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NOTE: Edited with OP's permission.

edited 17th Oct '14 7:52:33 AM by SeptimusHeap

3026 SeptimusHeap28th Jun 2012 01:21:21 PM from Zurich, Switzerland , Relationship Status: Mu
A Wizard boy
Everything's Worse With Snowclones has this line: This may be the best title if the trope is a really obvious instance of the "playing it up for X when it's not really" schtick across the board. If it's not, you should probably put the effort into coming up with something less muddled.

Given No New Stock Phrases, this should probably be removed.
The newly-restored page for Fifty Shades of Grey has a YMMV sinkhole that presumably should be removed.

edited 28th Jun '12 3:17:35 PM by mlsmithca

3028 desdendelle28th Jun 2012 03:20:02 PM from /dev/null , Relationship Status: What is this thing you call love?
Tenno SKOOM!
Said page also has wonky markup in the links in the description, and a Red Link: All Blondes Are Unpleasant.
The British Plover that isn't British.
[17:27:48] Plummet: Stop being British damn you.
For some reason, the Main.Sengoku Rance redirect was cut. So that needs to be pointed back at VideoGame.Sengoku Rance.
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Anime/PantyAndStockingWithGarterbelt

"However, being that the series is mostly a parody of those Western cartoons," I think this should go. I don't think being inspired by a bunch of comedic, silly cartoons to make a comedic, silly cartoon constitutes a 'parody'. It's like saying that when one comedian takes influence from another comedian, they are making a 'parody'.
3031 SeptimusHeap29th Jun 2012 07:06:56 AM from Zurich, Switzerland , Relationship Status: Mu
A Wizard boy
Adolf Hitler needs Ruined FOREVER wicks removed, as it's Flame Bait now.
3032 Willbyr29th Jun 2012 10:00:35 AM from North Little Rock, AR , Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Anime-ted
We should be caught up except for #3020 (the page doesn't exist as far as I can tell) and [up][up]...that needs some discussion on the page or in its thread in the Anime and Manga forum.
In uffish thought
I believe #3020 would like the page created again (it is locked from being cut). Personally, I think it can probably just be unlocked and function like a normal Headscratchers page, though I can't find its reason for being cut.
3034 jkbeta29th Jun 2012 11:47:00 AM from right behind you , Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
On Quotes Wiki, a hottip is used in the first line of the description. It should be replaced by a note, like this:

Here at TV Tropes Wiki, we love our quotes. A lot. Unfortunately, you can only fit so manynote  relevant quotes at the beginning of a trope article before they overwhelm the article itself.
3035 lu12729th Jun 2012 11:51:44 AM from the Forest of Thorns , Relationship Status: Loves me...loves me not
The hottip is gone.
小さく揺れた向日葵
Oops, edit request for Just a Face and a Caption again, same line:

"Of course, an article about purely visual tropes, like faces, facial expressions, hairstyles, and such are a different matter."

The "are" should be "is"; that refers to a singular (i.e. "an article [...] is"). Also the punctuation should be different, one set of aside parentheses and one set of list commas, instead of two kinds of commas.

"Of course, an article about purely visual tropes (like faces, facial expressions, hairstyles, and such) is a different matter"
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel.
Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
Did the wick migration for Jack Chick. There are six wicks left on locked pages where JackChick should be amended to Creator/JackChick. Can someone with superior editing power do this, please?
It's perfectly possible to admire building a cannon to destroy the moon, whilst lamenting the act of destruction.
Actually, they should be moved to ComicBook.Chick Tracts.

Jack Chick and Creator.Jack Chick are redirects to ComicBook.Chick Tracts.

edited 29th Jun '12 12:57:50 PM by DarkConfidant

Some sort of copy error was made on the Western Animation Complete Monster page in transferring the Family Guy C Ms to the page, and the last line, which reads Crazy Awesome: Adam West, needs to be deleted.

edited 29th Jun '12 1:45:29 PM by LargoQuagmire

[up][up]Yes, I know it's a redirect. But I think it's a legitimate alternative title. I'm for alternative titles.

Edit: Thanks, lu127!

edited 29th Jun '12 11:33:16 PM by LordGro

It's perfectly possible to admire building a cannon to destroy the moon, whilst lamenting the act of destruction.
3042 lu12729th Jun 2012 03:11:15 PM from the Forest of Thorns , Relationship Status: Loves me...loves me not
Done to here.

Three of the wicks on #3037 are archives, so I didn't edit them.

edited 29th Jun '12 3:13:56 PM by lu127

小さく揺れた向日葵
3043 Xtifr29th Jun 2012 05:26:31 PM , Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
World's Toughest Milkman
On The Fundamentalist, please replace Philip Josť Farmer with Philip Josť Farmer (Creator namespace). Thanks.
"Existential Despair" is an oxymoron.
3044 Willbyr29th Jun 2012 07:25:56 PM from North Little Rock, AR , Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Anime-ted
[up] Done.
3045 Xtifr29th Jun 2012 08:59:03 PM , Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
World's Toughest Milkman
I don't know if TVTropesTheTVShow.How To Write Season 1 and TVTropesTheTVShow.Character Holding Bin count as archives or not. If not, please change Nakama to True Companions on both pages (one instance on the first page, three on the second, no rephrasing required).

With that, we'll be able to declare the migration complete, with only four (or six) archive wicks remaining.
"Existential Despair" is an oxymoron.
Ptitleviaitwmfb2hh needs a redirect to Manga.Jojos Bizarre Adventure for 78 inbounds.

edited 29th Jun '12 9:37:27 PM by DarkConfidant

Final Fantasy VII, Touhou, and X-COM all have over ten inbounds - and should be made as redirects to their NightmareFuel/ counterparts.

edited 29th Jun '12 11:13:22 PM by movie007

Also, Ptitle1yvo8o1a5ltl should be redirected to Why Don't You Marry It? for 21 inbounds.
Also, Ptitleviaitwmfb2hh has 0 inbounds now.
On Fetish Fuel, please replace the hottip markup with a note.

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