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Mostly thanks even I can't edit that because of my suspension, But some like "Missing Information content" mid-sentence has to be capitalized because it's named of a HL2 mod.

edited 4th Sep '17 10:19:24 AM by Franco-America2018

For The Simpsons - One-Time Characters (season 17 folder, character: Melanie Upfoot)

• Hypocrite: She is nominated new school principal after Skinner making a sexist statement about women’s math skills. But when Melanie took over as the math teacher for the girls, however, she did not teach math; she used the subject for female empowerment, talking about "how numbers make you feel," "what does a plus sign smell like" and "is the number seven odd, or just different".
• Straw Feminist: Melanie is a sexist woman, favouring the girls and not caring in the slightest about the boys. She lets the boy side of the school get dirty and look like a gang scene in a ghetto neighborhood, with broken equipment. She also had a cage door put in the back of the bus for boys to travel like criminals while the girls rode normally.

edited 5th Sep '17 3:28:15 AM by Robbyn

Touken Ranbu Characters: Urashima Kotetsu

• Character Development: For Kiwame training, Urashima travels sixty years after the Sekigahara Battle in Edo period to looking for his creator, Urashima Taro, who made him. Another reason for his training is that he wasn't sure Urashima was real or not. He stays at his creator and gets a experience how his creator he was made him. However, he wasn't moved after his creator first created Urashima, and he ask him if the sword was actually Urashima, but he said "if it looks like Urashima to me then Urashima it is." He realized he sounds like him and one of his brothers and thinks is runs in smiting style. He found his answer about Urashima Taro an decides to returns to the Citadel with new confident.
• Friend to All Living Things: After Kiwame training, he has strong confident to being friends with anyone, he doesn't even mind of being friends with enemies. He wants to friends with dragons and tigers.

Monoyoshi Sadamune

• Character Development:For Kiwame training, he travels to Owari and decided to train with the founder of Tokugawa clan, Lord Yoshinao. Although he thinks he mistake him for someone else to learn Shinkage-ryu after he first met him. He learns many things from him. He mentions to the Saniwa through his letters, when he was sword, he had no duty other than public ones or in Owari. Afterwards, he learns Lord Yoshinao the reason why he risk his life in front line to protect shogunate is because he did it for morality asked that of him, and he'll keep his faith. Monoyoshi realize that another way to get stronger and he promise to the Saniwa that he will show them his new strength in battle.

Katsugeki/Touken Ranbu

• Foreshadowing: At the end of '''Former Master", Horikawa's behavior of unable to understand about their former masters should died just how history intend to be and there a slightly chance that he want to prevent his former master, Hijikata Toshizo's death in future episodes. Confirmed in Episode 10, where he does want to prevent his former master's demise.

Tearjerker

• Through the episode, Horikawa has been struggling about his duty to protect history and whether or not to prevent his former master's demise.
• After Izuminokami unexpectedly encounter his former master, Hijikata, he begins to shed tears of both joy and deep sadness. He was really happy to see him again, but sad that he can't meet him since that's not how history suppose to be.
• At the end of the episode, Horikawa and Izuminokami has a heartbreaking conflict about whether to interfere to change history or leave it be. Horikawa wants to change parts of change by preventing his former master, Hijikata Toshizo's demise that will happen in the few years after he catch a glimpse of his former master. Izuminokami, on the other hand, wants to protect history and leave his former master's fate be as it. Who can blame them, they were former swords of Hijikata Toshizo.

• In the ninth episode, before Mutsunokami's change his mind and take Ryoma to Sakamoto residence, he was thinking about runaway with him and go somewhere far away. Judging by his tone, he wants to take his former master somewhere no one knows him and he can protect and always be by side as deep down, he doesn't want lose him again. If he haven't change his mind, he would have change majority part of history that was never happen before. Especially, he would have end up betraying the Saniwa and Touken Daishi and his actions will be worse then the History Retrograding Force.
• In the tenth episode, after Horikawa realize history is starting to change by the Revisionists, he thinks that if Ryoma is killed, then his former master's demise will never happen. However at end of episode, it implied that Horikawa is planning to kill Ryoma, meaning that he will do anything to prevent his former master, Hijikata's death and betray Izuminokami.

edited 5th Sep '17 6:53:27 PM by AzuraBlu22

@Robbyn

• She is nominated new school principal after Skinner making ->
  • She is nominated as the new school principal after Principal Skinner makes
• But when Melanie took over as the math teacher for the girls, however, she did not teach math; she used
  • But when Melanie takes over...she does not teach math; she uses

How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense

How does this example make Melanie Upfoot a Hypocrite? In order to qualify for that trope, a person must not "practice what they preach". In other words, they must say one thing and do another. All she does is describe math terms in a flowery "feel good" way. Where does she say anything inconsistent with this?

If you're basing this on information in the Straw Feminist example, you need to copy it over to the Hypocrite example. Under How to Write an Example - Remember That This Is A Wiki, examples should not depend on information that's on other parts of the page.

• She lets the boy side of the school -> She lets the boys' side of the school
• to travel like criminals while the girls -> to travel like criminals, while the girls

edited 5th Sep '17 6:47:00 AM by Arivne

a @Azura Blu 22

• to looking for his creator -> to look for his creator
• he wasn't sure Urashima was real or not. -> he wasn't sure if Urashima Taro was real or not.
• He stays at his creator -> He stays at his creator's
• gets a experience how his creator he was made him. -> experiences how his creator he was made him.
• he wasn't moved after his creator first created Urashima, and he ask him if the sword was actually ->
  • he wasn't moved after his creator first created him, and he asks him if the sword is actually

I'm assuming that when you say "moved" you mean "emotionally moved" and not physically moved.

• actually Urashima, but he said -> actually Urashima. However, Urashima Taro says
• and one of his brothers and thinks is runs in smiting style.

Flat "What"? I have no idea what you meant to say here.

• He found his answer about Urashima Taro an decides to returns...with new confident
  • He finds his answer about Urashima Taro and decides to returns...with new confidence

• he has strong confident to being friends with anyone -> he is able to be friends with anyone
• he doesn't even mind of being friends -> he doesn't even mind of being friends
• He wants to friends with -> He wants to be friends with

• the founder of Tokugawa clan -> the founder of the Tokugawa clan
• Although he thinks he mistake him for someone else to learn Shinkage-ryu after he first met him.

Again, I have no idea what you're trying to say here.

• He mentions to the Saniwa through his letters, when he was sword ->
  • Through his letters, he mentions to the Saniwa that when he was a sword,
• he had no duty other than public ones or in Owari. -> he had no duties other than public ones or in Owari.
• Afterwards, he learns Lord Yoshinao -> Afterward, he learns from Lord Yoshinao
• the reason why he risk his life in front line to protect shogunate ->
  • that the reason why he risks his life in the front line to protect the shogunate
• is because he did it for morality asked that of him, and he'll keep his faith. ->
  • is because his morality asks that of him, and he'll keep the faith.
• Monoyoshi realize that another way to get stronger and he promise to the Saniwa ->
  • Monoyoshi realizes that this is another way to get stronger and he promises to the Saniwa
• Horikawa's behavior of unable to understand -> Horikawa's being unable to understand
• about their former masters should died just how history ->
  • about how their former masters should have died, showed just how history
• and there a slightly chance that he want to prevent ->
  • and how there's a slight chance that he may want to prevent

I'm really just guessing with these last two.

• Through the episode, Horikawa has been struggling -> Throughout the episode, Horikawa struggles
• Izuminokami unexpectedly encounter his -> Izuminokami unexpectedly encounters his
• He was really happy...history suppose to be. -> He is really happy...history is supposed to be.
• before Mutsonokami's change his mind and take Ryoma to Sakamoto residence ->
  • before Mutsonokami changes his mind and takes Ryoma to Sakamoto's residence
• he was thinking about runaway with him and go ->
  • he was thinking about running away with him and going
• always be by side...he doesn't want lose him again -> always be by his side...he doesn't want to lose him again
• If he haven't change his mind, he would have change majority part of history that was never happen ->
  • If he hadn't changed his mind, he would have massively changed history that had never happened
• Especially, he would have end up -> He would have especially ended up
• his actions will be worse then -> his actions would have been worse than
• after Horikawa realize history is starting to change by the Revisionists ->
  • after Horikawa realizes history is starting to be changed by the Revisionists
• However at end of episode, it implied -> However, at the end of the episode, it is implied

edited 5th Sep '17 7:36:24 AM by Arivne

Adding some words for Battle Butler page, Video Games section:

• Many Stage 5 bosses are the Battle Butlers of the stage 6 ones. There is Sakuya in Embodiment of Scarlet Devil, Youmu in Perfect Cherry Blossom, Reisen in Imperishable Night, Sanae in Mountain of Faith, Shou in Undefined Fantastic Object, Futo in Ten Desires... and then Subterranean Animism totally inverts it: the Stage 5 and 6 are the pets of the Stage 4 boss (altough some could said that Rin, the Stage 5 boss of the game is an old friend of Utsuho, the final stage boss' game, so she definitely fits the archetype). Similarly, the stage 5 boss of Double Dealing Character Seija is the actual perpetrator, with the final boss Shinmyoumaru being someone she tricked. In Legacy of Lunatic Kingdom, on the other hand, the stage 5 boss Clownpiece is the subordinate of the Bonus Boss Hecatia and has been empowered by final boss Junko. Hidden Star in Four Seasons brings back the tradition with the introduction of not only one, but two battle butlers named Satono Nishida and Mai Teireida as penultimate bosses.

This one for Promoted to Playable:

• By the release of Hidden Star in Four Seasons, the sixteenth main game, this tradition so far is broken with the addition of Cirno and Aya Shameimaru, the Stage 2 boss from Embodiment of Scarlet Devil and Stage 4 boss from Mountain of Faith respectively, as the additional playable characters.

And this one for Touhou in Darker and Edgier page, video games section:

• By the end of manga, it is revealed that the whole events Kosuzu experienced throughout the story is pretty much a walking lesson for her why humans and youkai are closer than she thought, and much to her rejoice, Reimu and the others accepted her as a part of Gensokyo society.

edited 6th Sep '17 2:57:17 AM by Strafe2409

Katsugeki Touken Ranbu: Funny Page Where Loyal Leads

• After Ryoma sneaks out from the Satsuma residence to watch the plum blossoms in full bloom, one of the first things he do during his visit is making an infant laugh by making a cheerful expression.

Heartwarming Page

• It's nice to see Mutsunokami's former master, Ryoma has a bright side to things and he enjoys helping and playing with the other children. One of them is he make an infant giggle and he helps a child up after falling down.

@Strafe 2409

• this tradition so far is broken with -> this tradition so far is unbroken, with

You did mean to say "unbroken", right?

• By the end of manga -> By the end of the manga
• that the whole events...is pretty much -> that all of the whole events...are pretty much
• a walking lesson -> a walking lesson

What is a "walking lesson"?

• and much to her rejoice -> and much to her rejoicing

edited 6th Sep '17 9:34:41 AM by Arivne

@Azura Blu 22

• one of the first things he do -> one of the first things he does
• making an infant laugh by making -> making an infant laugh by putting on

As a general rule, you should try to avoid using the same word repeatedly. It isn't bad English, but it sounds repetitive and unimaginative.

• It's nice to see Mutsunokami's -> It's nice to see that Mutsunokami's
• Ryoma has a bright side to things and he -> Ryoma has a bright side to him and that he
• One of them is he make an infant giggle -> One time he makes an infant giggle
• helps a child up after falling down -> helps a child up after it falls down

edited 6th Sep '17 9:42:30 AM by Arivne

@Arivne: I'm sorry if I confuse you, what I mean't was "breaks the trend". Anyway, here's the replacement.

• In Hidden Star in Four Seasons, on the other hand, breaks the trend with the addition of Cirno and Aya Shameimaru, the Stage 2 boss from Embodiment of Scarlet Devil and Stage 4 boss from Mountain of Faith respectively, as the additional playable characters.

Syntax errors aside, I'd reword that sentence to make its meaning clearer:

• Hidden Star in Four Seasons breaks the trend by adding the playable characters Cirno (the Stage 2 boss from Embodiment of Scarlet Devil) and Aya Shameimaru (the Stage 4 boss from Mountain of Faith).

edited 7th Sep '17 10:41:16 AM by Jhimmibhob

From Hell Girl

• Crosses the Line Twice: Members of Big, Screwed-Up Family in the third episode of the fourth season are so pathetic, insane or jerk that it even turns into Black Comedy. It even includes a character who is in a relationship with one of his cousins, tries to rape his second cousin (who is in elementary school), while beating his aunt and auncle with his third cousin. Even the main characters are shocked by this, saying that this family is worse than hell, and its members are worse than real demons. After all this, the main The Reveal of episode, will make you think, but does the writer try to troll you?

Good evening. In addition to the general grammar, I have problems with the indication of the sex of cousins, so the spoiler looks very confusing. In this case, we are talking about the three cousins of ​​Complete Monster character, two of which are girls, and one boy.

edited 7th Sep '17 4:57:05 PM by LittleBuster

• Members of Big, Screwed-Up Family in the third episode of the fourth season ->
  • In the third episode of the fourth season, members of the Big, Screwed-Up Family
• are so pathetic, insane or jerk that it even turns ->
  • are so pathetic or insane or such jerks that it even turns
• while beating his aunt and auncle with his third cousin. ->
  • while beating his aunt and uncle with his third cousin.

This appears to be saying that he was committing Grievous Harm with a Body - i.e. using a body as a weapon. Is that what you meant?

• the main The Reveal of episode -> the main The Reveal of the episode
• does the writer try to troll you? -> is the writer trying to troll you?

Try this.

edited 8th Sep '17 6:07:57 AM by Arivne

For Touhou, Hidden Star in Four Seasons character page. Just changing some words for Okina Matara's character folder.

• Expy: Her role in the game is pretty much a love letter to Tsurubami Senri, as both are powerful individuals and the culprits of their respective games who are secretly messing with some of their respective Fantasy Kitchen Sinks' inhabitants to see if one them were capable of taking Tsurubami's current job as a priest of Senri Shrine and Okina's servant, respectively. In Okina's case, her true main goal is making every single inhabitants in Gensokyo (including her fellow sages Yukari and Kasen) to remember her name as one of creators of Gensokyo.

Thank you for your help.

"This appears to be saying that he was committing Grievous Harm with a Body - i.e. using a body as a weapon. Is that what you meant?" - Lol, no. I meant that he was beating both his cousin and his parents.

edited 9th Sep '17 9:13:17 AM by LittleBuster

Thank you so much for correcting my grammars, Arivne. There something I would I like to add as a description for Katsugeki/Touken Ranbu and others too.

• Although Creator/Ufotable adaption does has some lighthearted and funny moments, but unlike Touken Ranbu - Hanamaru, not every battles will always succeed without suffer any causalities.

• Friend-or-Idol Decision: In "Iron Law", Horikawa give Izuminokami two options to choose from: One to join him and prevent their former master's demise together or refuse, he asks him to end his life before he can proceeds with his plan to change history. Izuminokami choose the latter, but he hesitated at first, but prepare to strike him down. It is unknown if he end his life or not.

Katsugeki/Touken Ranbu: Tearjerker page

• Towards the end of "Iron Law", Horikawa asks Izuminokami to end his life before he can proceed with his plans to prevent his former master's demise. At the same time, Mutsunokami is horrified where he witness Izuminokami is about to his end Horikawa's life, he quickly ran to them as he tries to stop them. Horikawa has already accept his fate to be kill by the person he cares about deeply. However, it is never shown whether or not Izuminokami really kills him.

edited 9th Sep '17 6:34:35 PM by AzuraBlu22

@Strafe 2409

• to see if one them were -> to see if one of them is

This is an incredibly long sentence and should be broken up to make it easier to read.

• making every single inhabitants...to remember her name as one of creators ->
  • making every single inhabitant...[[snip:to]] remember her name as one of the creators

@Little Buster

In that case you would say:

• "while beating his aunt, uncle and third cousin."
• "while beating his aunt and uncle along with his third cousin."

edited 11th Sep '17 3:33:56 AM by Arivne

@Azura Blu 22

• Although Creator/Ufotable adaption does has some ->
  • Although the ufotable adaptation does have some

Although "adaption" is a legal word, the more commonly used form is "adaptation".

• moments, but unlike...not every battles will always succeed without suffer any causalities. ->
  • moments, but unlike...not every battle will always succeed without suffering any causalities.
• Horikawa give Izuminokami -> Horikawa gives Izuminokami
• One to join him...or refuse, he asks him to end -> Either to join him...or refuse and end
• before he can proceeds -> before he can proceed
• Izuminokami choose the latter, but he hesitated at first, but prepare ->
  • Izuminokami chooses the latter. He hesitates at first, but prepares
• It is unknown if he end his life -> It is unknown if he ends his life

I was going to correct "towards" to "toward", but upon doing some research I learned that "towards" is British English.

• Mutsunokami is horrified where he witness ->
  • Mutsunokami is horrified when he witnesses that
• Izuminokami is about to his end Horikawa's life -> Izuminokami is about to his end Horikawa's life
• he quickly ran to them -> He quickly runs to them

How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense

• Horikawa has already accept his fate to be kill by -> Horikawa has already accepted his fate, to be killed by

edited 10th Sep '17 6:41:05 AM by Arivne

Katsugeki/Touken Ranbu: Heartwarming

• Tonbokiri, Yagen, Tsurumaru entrust Izuminokami, Mutsunokami and Konnosuke to search Horikawa a while they look after Ryoma and his companions to make sure there safe during their mission.

• Izuminokami share his past to Mutsunokami during their search for Horikawa. It's a heartwarming and tearjerker moment, but it's nice to see how Izuminokami and Mutsunokami are closer than before.

Tearjerker

• Izuminokami tells his past to Mutsonokami about the last time he saw his former master, Hijikata when he was a sword before the Battle of Hakodate. His former master entrust young ward, Tensunosuke to delivered him to his brother-in-law in Tama. It's both a tearjerker and heartwarming since Hijikata wants one of his relatives he's close to as a memento of him before he dies in battle.
• Horikawa tells Izuminokami the reason why he wants to prevent Hijikata's death is because he was there at the Battle of Hakodate and witness his former master's death. He really doesn't want to lose him again. It make senses since Izuminokami wasn't by Hijikata's side after he met his tragic demise.

Nightmare Fuel

• In the eleventh episode, after the destruction of Satsuma residence, many people lost their lives tragic caused by the Revisionists. Not even Izuminokami, Mutsunokami or Konnosuke weren't expect the Revisionists would destroyed the Satsuma residence. Horikawa only manage to saved a young girl, who is the only one survive after the fire.

Touken Ranbu Characters: Horikawa Kunihiro

• Dull Eyes of Unhappiness: In "Katsugeki'', Horikawa's eyes slowly become more dull and lifeless as he becomes depressed and unable to accept his former master's tragic fate just as history intend to be. After he realize that history is changing because of the Revisionists, he thinks there a chance that he can save his former master's demise. However, his eyes become more sadden after his major conflict with Izuminokami about their former master as he strongly disagree with him about changing Hijikata's tragic fate.

edited 10th Sep '17 9:30:01 PM by AzuraBlu22

• Tonbokiri, Yagen, Tsurumaru entrust -> Tonbokiri, Yagen and Tsurumaru entrust
• to search Horikawa a while -> with the mission of searching for Horikawa for a while (?)
• make sure there safe -> make sure they're safe

• Izuminokami share his past to Mutsunokami -> Izuminokami shares his past with Mutsunokami
• It's a heartwarming and tearjerker moment, but it's nice ->
  • It's a heartwarming and tearjerker moment, and it's nice

• Izuminokami tells his past to Mutsonokami about the last time he saw his former master, Hijikata ->
  • Izuminokami tells his past to Mutsonokami about the last time he saw his former master, Hijikata,
• His former master entrust young ward, Tensunosuke to delivered him ->
  • His former master entrusts his young ward Tensunosuke with the task of delivering him
• It's both a tearjerker and heartwarming since -> It's both a tearjerker and heartwarming, since
• wants one of his relatives he's close to as a memento ->
  • wants one of his relatives that he's close to to have a memento (?)
• Horikawa tells Izuminokami the reason...and witness his former master's death. ->
  • Horikawa tells Izuminokami that the reason...and witnessed his former master's death.
• It make senses since Izuminokami -> It make sense, since Izuminokami
• destruction of Satsuma residence -> destruction of Satsuma's residence
• many people lost their lives tragic caused -> many people lost their lives in the tragic events caused
• Not even Izuminokami, Mutsunokami or Konnosuke weren't expect the Revisionists would destroyed
  • Not even Izuminokami, Mutsunokami or Konnosuke weren't expected the Revisionists to destroy
• Horikawa only manage to saved a young girl, who is the only one survive after ->
  • Horikawa only managed to save a young girl, who was the only one to survive after
• just as history intend to be. -> that history intended to be.
• After he realize that history -> After he realizes that history
• that he can save his former master's demise. ->
  • that he can prevent his former master's demise.
  • that he can save his former master by preventing his demise.
• However, his eyes become more sadden...their former master as he strongly disagree ->
  • However, his eyes become more saddened...their former master, as he strongly disagrees

edited 11th Sep '17 3:58:23 AM by Arivne

• Fridge Brilliance: In "Iron Law", It make senses why Sakamoto Ryoma and his companions has to leave the Satsuma's residence early instead of waiting for two weeks to depart is because his encounter with the Revisionists, he realize it's not safety to lay low in Kyoto. It's a good thing that Ryoma and his companions left early since the Revisionists had already burn down the Satsuma's residence as they thought Ryoma was staying at the Satsuma's residence. If he haven't left the Satsuma's residence early, he would have been killed by the Revisionists along with his companions.

• Homage: In "Iron Law" , the scene where the Satsuma's residence is burn down caused by the Reivionists, is similar to the final episode of "Fate/Zero" since the main protagonist only managed to rescue a young boy after the fire, a while Horikawa can only manage to saved a young girl after the destruction of Satsuma's residence.

Touken Ranbu Character Page: Izuminokami Kanesada

• Manly Tears: In Katsugeki, after he catches the first glimpse of his former master, he begins to shed tears of joy and sadness, no matter many times he tried to wipe away his tears.

edited 11th Sep '17 6:41:09 PM by AzuraBlu22

I have a short one for Ducktales 2017

• Not-So-Harmless Villain: Glomgold’s over the top bombastic personality, shallow charm and transparently desperate attempts to one up Scrooge; hide a surprisingly cunning and resourceful mind, and a complete disregard for the rights and lives of anyone other than himself.

edited 11th Sep '17 11:27:15 AM by MGD107

Grammatically, that's okay, but it fails to demonstrate the trope. Not-So-Harmless Villain requires a specific event when the character demonstrates that they are way more dangerous than people believed, and the example must explain that event at the very least.

As an illustrative example, in Dr. Horrible's Sing-Along Blog, there's a scene where the villain, who has been ineffectual up until that point, suddenly decides to up the stakes in response to constant provocation and builds a Death Ray, which he uses in the final act.

edited 11th Sep '17 11:29:51 AM by Fighteer

I see. How does this look?

• Not-So-Harmless Villain: Glomgold’s over the top bombastic personality, shallow charm and transparently desperate attempts to one up Scrooge; hides a surprisingly cunning and resourceful mind, and a complete disregard for the rights and lives of anyone other than himself. Throughout his introductory episode he comes across as comedic, somewhat affable and out of his depth compared to Scrooge. Then he casually pulls a gambit that even Scrooge is forced to admit is brilliant planning, and nearly manages to murder Scrooge, Donald, the children and his own henchmen in one fail swoop.

edited 11th Sep '17 1:45:14 PM by MGD107