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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#325126: Sep 26th 2022 at 10:36:29 PM

We put MLP as a whole on the Never Again list since none of them save Cosmos even breaches the baseline heinousness standard, and the character in question seems to have the same problem.

Edited by MasterN on Sep 26th 2022 at 11:00:47 AM

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#325127: Sep 26th 2022 at 10:47:14 PM

[tup] Sluggo, Durand

Already voted up for your quote there Duck

"She did cause the rift between the pony tribes and was willing to kidnap a baby dragon for power."

That doesn't even seem baseline for a cartoon to be honest.

A million brain cells? That seems excessively destructive...
SailorVenus372 Since: Nov, 2019 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#325128: Sep 26th 2022 at 10:51:37 PM

She just sounds like a Manipulative Bitch, not a CM

I’m plotting my schemes wherever I go! They’re perfect in every way…
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
nwotyzal Since: Sep, 2019
#325130: Sep 26th 2022 at 11:02:11 PM

[tup]Sluggo, Durand

EDIT: Dogpiling

Edited by nwotyzal on Sep 26th 2022 at 11:02:38 AM

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#325131: Sep 26th 2022 at 11:23:57 PM

Yes to Sluggo and Durand, as well as the Ultron quote. I'm cool with you trying a rewrite for Savanti, Flannels!

Gonna snag the new BBC show Inside Man, see potential there.

Edited by Ravok on Sep 26th 2022 at 11:27:55 AM

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#325132: Sep 26th 2022 at 11:51:27 PM

Alright here goes...

Original

  • Savanti Romero, who would become one of the most powerful recurring foes the Turtles ever faced, started off as an assistant to Lord Simultaneous, a powerful wizard that controls the flow of time. Growing jealous of Simultaneous, Romero attempts to erase him from time. However, Simultaneous discovers Romero's treachery and transforms him into a goat demon before banishing him to 13th century Europe, where Romero takes over a village and makes it into his own fiefdom. Simultaneous's new assistant, Renet, accidentally teleports herself and the Turtles to Romero's village, where Romero manages to steals Simultaneous's time scepter from Renet. After the villagers rebel against Romero, Romero uses the scepter's power to create an army of the undead and orders them to slaughter the rebelling villagers. Simultaneous appears and banishes Romero to the Cretaceous period. Later, Romero appears, obsessed with revenge, and lures Renet and the Turtles to the Cretaceous period. After defeating Renet and the Turtles, Romero reveals his new plan: To sacrifice Renet as part of a spell that will cause the comet that wipes out the dinosaurs to miss Earth, causing humanity to cease to exist. The Turtles defeat Romero and he seems to have died, but he was merely frozen in time and reemerges in 12th century Japan. There, Romero attempts to build a new empire and plans to wipe out any Japanese clans that oppose him, which wipes out their descendants in the present. The Turtles travel to medieval Japan and defeat Romero again. After a long absence, Romero appears again, traveling to limbo and planning to use an artifact called the Aga-Moo-Tou to make himself into a god and remake reality in his own image.

Rewrite

  • Savanti Romero was once Lord Simultaneous' assistant who developed a lust for power, eventually trying to erase Simultaneous from existence. Banished to the 13th century, Savanti turns a village into his domain and attempts to use Simultaneous' time sceptre to raise an army of the undead and have them slaughter all who opposes him. In the Cretaceous period, Savanti, consumed with revenge lures Renet and the turtles into a trap and attempts to sacrifice her as part of a spell that would cause the comet that killed the dinosaurs to miss, erasing countless lives. Savanti later appears in 12th century Japan trying to build himself a new empire and wiping out anyone that opposes him, knowing that it would erase their descendants as well. Reappearing after a long absence, Savanti attempts to use an ancient artifact to allow him to become a god and remake creation in his own twisted image.

Thoughts? Manage to cut down by around 120 words while keeping the meat of his crimes intact.

Edited by WetFlannels on Sep 26th 2022 at 7:53:17 PM

A million brain cells? That seems excessively destructive...
KazuyaProta Shin Megami Tensei IV from A Industrial Farm Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
username2527 Since: Nov, 2013
#325134: Sep 27th 2022 at 12:58:55 AM

Kidnapping on its own is not CM material. At least guys like Chrysalis and Sombra have actually attempted murder.

Mediawatcher Since: Dec, 2015
#325135: Sep 27th 2022 at 1:01:32 AM

Alright it’s been two weeks since Cyberpunk: Edgerunners came out, nobody counts.

Faraday is a big time backstabber who sells out the crew and gets most of the main characters killed, even killing kiwi after she betrayed the crew so that he can reach the top of Arasaka, but frankly he simply isn’t heinous enough to qualify, nothing about him really pushes him above the standard of the cyberpunk series, especially since it’s canon to the game with the likes of Adam smasher.

Jimmy kurosaki mind rapes David by making him relive the memory of the previous holder of his sandevistan James Norris as well as getting enjoyment out of making XBD’s of cyberattacks, but like faraday he doesn’t manage to reach the standard as he only has one victim and there’s nothing to establish him doing this to others.

I also looked into some minor characters such as the scientists who used Lucy and other kids for hacking which ended up getting them killed, but the scientists who were responsible have no characterization and none of them are given a name.

It’s a great show, but unfortunately no keepers

Edited by Mediawatcher on Sep 27th 2022 at 1:08:07 AM

CloisterTheStupid from Oop North Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#325137: Sep 27th 2022 at 1:13:26 AM

[tup]slug and Durand.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#325138: Sep 27th 2022 at 1:16:40 AM

Any opinions of the Savanti rewrite I did?

A million brain cells? That seems excessively destructive...
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#325139: Sep 27th 2022 at 1:38:30 AM

[tup]Savanti rewrite.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#325141: Sep 27th 2022 at 4:59:01 AM

Yes to Sluggo and Durand. Adam not do anything to write home about in the anime, Media?

Edit: I also like the rewrite Wet, good work!

Edited by 43110 on Sep 27th 2022 at 7:59:24 AM

Libraryseraph Showtime! from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Showtime!
#325142: Sep 27th 2022 at 6:15:01 AM

[tup] to Sluggo and Durand

Absolute destiny... apeachalypse?
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#325143: Sep 27th 2022 at 6:49:21 AM

Guys, a request: If you do rewrites, please try and use the current potholes if appropriate.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#325144: Sep 27th 2022 at 6:50:30 AM

[up] I'll do that to Savanti for you, what's the pothole limit for a writeup that length?

A million brain cells? That seems excessively destructive...
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#325146: Sep 27th 2022 at 7:00:06 AM

Added 3 others

A million brain cells? That seems excessively destructive...
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#325147: Sep 27th 2022 at 7:14:12 AM

Thanks. Incidentally, that wasn't meant to call you out specifically, just something I've noticed in general at times.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#325148: Sep 27th 2022 at 7:19:11 AM

Oh no it's fine, I've been guilty of it multiple times with my rewrites.

Possible quote from Barbarus?

Barbarus:"I command a power greater than you have ever known... and you will bow down before it! Hmm you have had enough? Very well. Now watch and despair!
Greygnarl:"Wh-What the?!"
Barbarus:"To simply destroy you would not be enough. First, you must witness the obliteration of your home.

Edited by WetFlannels on Sep 27th 2022 at 3:28:01 PM

A million brain cells? That seems excessively destructive...
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#325149: Sep 27th 2022 at 7:28:11 AM

  • Ex Mutants #1-3: Sluggo is the mutant tyrant of Sluggtown, running his town through enslavement of other mutants. Any slave under his role are put to hard labor building monuments of himself to satiate his ego, given collars that explode their heads off for any mistake they could make. In other cases, he puts his slaves in Gladiator Games to fight or killed by monsters to the death for his amusement, something he once done to the titular heroes in the past. Sluggo, growing tired of the Ex-Mutants constant interference, hires thugs to use a mind control device on three of the Ex-Mutant members in order to have them kill in the arena and later try to have them murder their own friends: Once this failed, he leaves his right-hand man to die to preserve his own life.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#325150: Sep 27th 2022 at 7:29:43 AM

Is that all for the Genesis Universe?

EDIT: I'll add the Street Fighter comic to the end of the tree to be safe.

Edited by ACW on Sep 27th 2022 at 10:35:14 AM

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts

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