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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

UsagiSan Mika Misono Since: Jan, 2022 Relationship Status: You're a beautiful woman, probably
Mika Misono
#23026: Aug 12th 2023 at 11:16:35 AM

[tup]Sazella and Palpatine [tdown]Hama.

Mika Mika Mika Mika
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
Zerukin Ninja Gamer Writer from Palmtree Panic Since: Dec, 2016 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Ninja Gamer Writer
TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#23031: Aug 12th 2023 at 12:35:17 PM

[tup] for Salmonella.... er, Sazella and Palpatine.

[tdown] for Hama.

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TotemGenitor Bye Since: Apr, 2021 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#23033: Aug 12th 2023 at 12:45:14 PM

[tup] Salzella, Palpatine

As for why Palpy almost always counts its because one of his most defining character traits is that he is quite possibly the most evil person to ever live, so any adaption of him that stays even remotely true to his character is capital E Evil

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Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#23035: Aug 12th 2023 at 1:28:13 PM

Yes to Sazella and Palpatine

  • The Lord of the Rings: Shelob is "an evil thing in spider-form" and the last child of Ungoliant. A self-serving glutton whose only concern is to feast on as much life as possible, Shelob has haunted Cirith Ungol for thousands of years, targeting Elves, Men, Orcs and anyone else to come near her lair; her capacity for death lead her to become Sauron's unofficial executioner, regularly given Sauron's prisoners to "play with" then consume at her leisure. Shelob injects a paralyzing venom into her victims, then strings them up for sometimes days to stew in their fear before she drinks their blood and rends them with her claws. The progenitor of other giant spiders that terrorize Middle-Earth, like the ones in Mirkwood, Shelob makes a habit of breeding with her offspring, then killing and eating them just as she would any other prey. Shelob's only desire is the consumption of all living beings in Middle-Earth, and she is one of the most evil entities that Frodo and Sam confront on their quest.

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
Braz The Digital from Cyberspace (Troper in training) Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
The Digital
#23036: Aug 12th 2023 at 1:35:49 PM

[tup] to Palpatine, the CM emperor.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#23037: Aug 12th 2023 at 1:53:56 PM

[up][up]I guess she goes to "Others", before Meglin??

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Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#23038: Aug 12th 2023 at 1:59:25 PM

Yep that seems to be the best best imo, thanks!

What's the work?

Too Young to Die? is a 1990 crime drama starring Juliette Lewis as 14 year old Amanda "Mandy" Sue Bradley, a young girl whose youth is marred by abuse and neglect. When Mandy winds up on the streets, she falls down a rabbit hole of debauchery that culminates in murder...and the death penalty.

Who is Billy? What has he done?

  • Billy Canton, played by an extraordinarily skeevy Brad Pitt, is a slimy pervert and ephebobile who prowls the streets looking for young teen girls to prey on, known through the community as a creep who targets underage girls. When he bumps into a homeless Mandy, Billy serenades her with sweet words and apparent kindness, only to quickly reveal he wants her to perform strip dances at a nearby club for cash. Billy lies to the owner that Mandy is over 18—much to the owner's doubt, who sneers that Billy's track record indicates he only brings in minors—and when the girl tries to get away from the situation, Billy slips her drugs that push her to perform.
  • Billy continues to coerce the 14 year old Mandy into sexual dances, addicting her to drugs and even taking advantage of her himself by threatening to leave her on the street and take all her cash for himself. He upgrades her to more powerful drugs, and when Mandy winds up leaving him to stay with an army soldier, Mike, she thinks she loves, Billy stalks and harasses her. Mike throws Mandy out when his superiors suspect him of sleeping with a teen girl, to which Billy immediately swoops in and once more takes Mandy under his wing, upgrading to physically abusing her and pimping her out to paying clients on the streets.
  • Finally, when Billy dopes Mandy up higher than ever, he flies into a jealous rage that she was ever with Mike, and coerces Mandy into punishing him. Billy leads Mandy in kidnapping Mike and his girlfriend at knifepoint, threatening to kill them both, and though Mike's lover slips away, Billy's drugs, coercion and abuse drive an out-of-her-mind Mandy to stab Mike to death as Billy watches on in smug cheer.
  • When the cops hone in on the duo as killers, Billy is caught; he immediately throws Mandy under the bus, claiming she manipulated and used him. Thanks in part to Billy's lies as well as a ruthless court, Mandy is sentenced to die in the gas chamber for her murder, her age and circumstances be damned.

Uhhh fuckin something something uh what a grim adventure for Billy and Mandy eh???

Mitigating features?

Lol no, nasty creep who completely uses and abuses Mandy, seeing her as nothing but a cash machine and sex toy despite his claims to care for her.

Heinousness?

It's a small-scale movie, and while Mandy's stepfather is also a POS who sexually abused her, Billy is the Big Bad and a horrid pimp who subjects Mandy to sexual and physical abuse for months while pimping her out, with it established to be a pattern for him, and he directly leads her into murdering Mike (who is undeniably a statutory rapist, but one who the film oddly plays up as a decent-ish man in contrast to Billy) and threatening the man's innocent girlfriend with the same...before turning on Mandy completely and playing a part in her getting sentenced to death.

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
GamerBoy18 Mr. Since: Apr, 2022 Relationship Status: Abstaining
Mr.
#23039: Aug 12th 2023 at 2:00:06 PM

[tup] To the four Record of Ragnarök candidates.

Edited by GamerBoy18 on Aug 12th 2023 at 2:00:27 AM

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Goku Black
#23040: Aug 12th 2023 at 2:02:29 PM

[tup]Billy

Second I think for Pitt?

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therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#23042: Aug 12th 2023 at 2:15:47 PM

[tup] to Billy, aka the second time evil Brad Pitt does something terrible to Juliette Lewis

"No running in the halls!"
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#23043: Aug 12th 2023 at 2:20:12 PM

Hmm, seems like Billy's just bad enough (if only because it's established this isn't his only time). Yes to him.

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MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#23045: Aug 12th 2023 at 2:42:13 PM

[tup] to Salzella, Palpatine and Billy.

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Libraryseraph Cross-wired freak from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Cross-wired freak
#23047: Aug 12th 2023 at 3:28:57 PM

[tup] To Billy

I'm not sure how I feel about Sazella, mostly because his defeat is so played for laughs. He dies giving a dramatic monologue about everything he hates about opera, which includes him complaining about how dying opera characters can sing a whole aria while he's basically doing the spoken word equivalent

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Tyk5919 Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin
#23048: Aug 12th 2023 at 3:33:58 PM

[tup] for Billy Canton.

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LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#23049: Aug 12th 2023 at 4:12:24 PM

Yes to Billy.

Salzella's death felt more like Karmic Death to me. He ranted about how much hated opera and its tropes, only to be as much a victim to them and die because of them. It definitely doesn't mitigate how much evil he tried to commit. I see it more of an awesome moment for Granny and Walter rather than something meant to posit Salzella as a non serious threat.

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Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#23050: Aug 12th 2023 at 4:19:01 PM

[tup] Billy.

Hey guys, you guys remember Imreann from Final Fantasy XVI? Well I was scrolling through twitter, and I found out that in the Japanese script, Jill reveals one extra crime that makes Imreann EVEN WORSE. Turns out, not only did he murdered the poor kids he captured, but he also MOLESTED them too. As if he wasn't bad enough in the English script. Don't think we can add this to the write up as this crime is exclusive to the Japanese script, but I figured I let you all be aware of it (It certainly made the scene of Jill killing the sick fuck 10 times more satisfying at the very least).


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