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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#16876: Jun 7th 2023 at 12:02:24 PM

[tup] Sauron from what is probably the worst game of the year. Seriously, how can someone fail at making a game THIS badly. I rather Cyberpunk 2077 than whatever Gollum was. At the former had some good elements, Gollum has none of that. Plus, I think the former has less bugs (Though that isn't saying much).

VeryVileVillian (Apprentice)
#16877: Jun 7th 2023 at 12:09:50 PM

Yes to this version of Sauron

TheMadCr0w Gentle Laborer from Insignificant Little Blue Planet Since: Aug, 2015 Relationship Status: Get out of here, STALKER
Gentle Laborer
#16878: Jun 7th 2023 at 12:11:13 PM

We all know the game is bad, guys... Let's focus on the candidate.

[tup] Sauron

PolarPhantom Since: Jun, 2012
#16879: Jun 7th 2023 at 12:17:31 PM

Yes to Sauron. Again. It's probably harder to find official media he doesn't count in. Funny also that Morgoth, the ultimate evil of Arda, only has one "official" keep, and that's all the way back in the Silmarilion. Course, rights to adaptations are the likely reason there.

From what I've read, in a franchise that has many examples of "No Problem With Licensed Games", Gollum might be the worst game adaptation of Tolkien's works.

I'm gonna guess Mouth-Kun is one of the other keeps, given how Ravok describes him.

Also, to all those that actually played it: You have my condolences and admiration.

WatTambor Since: Oct, 2020
#16880: Jun 7th 2023 at 12:27:48 PM

[tup] to Sauron

[up] The reason why Morgoth has only one official keeper is because he is nowhere near as iconic as Sauron. Everyone knows who Sauron is, even people who are not LOTR fans, but far less people know who Morgoth is.

Edited by WatTambor on Jun 7th 2023 at 10:28:08 PM

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#16883: Jun 7th 2023 at 12:59:27 PM

[tup] to Sauron. Is this gonna be like the ATLA film that doesn't exist, wherein a piece that is So Bad Its Horrible gets a CM? I just think it's funny that the worst (read most evil) villains can also come from the worst (read least high quality) works of fiction just as well as they can from good works. You would think that the neccesary poor writing to qualify for So Bad Its Horrible would remove any chance of a villain being bad enough...

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
FlowerPicking Since: Feb, 2023 Relationship Status: A heart full of love
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#16885: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:04:31 PM

[up][up] I mean, being horribly written dosen’t prevent work from having super evil villain. We do have four keepers from Riverdale as an example.

Edited by EmperorGeode on Jun 7th 2023 at 1:06:03 AM

Tyk5919 Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin
#16886: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:06:33 PM

[tup] Sauron the Dark Lord. Again.

...Has it been two weeks already? It feels like the game came out a couple days ago. Christ, it's gonna be 2030 at the rate time is going. X__X

I write stories and shiz. You can read them here.
Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#16887: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:07:05 PM

[up][up] True, we do have Ahmanet after all.

Edited by Michealthehero21 on Jun 7th 2023 at 1:07:26 AM

Mr-ex777 Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#16888: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:09:39 PM

[tdown] to the protagonist, maybe put him in the Never Again list too if he's been shot down twice prior

[tup] to the Gollum Guy. This really reminds me of the Ride to Hell Redemption CM.

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#16889: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:11:12 PM

The Never again list has been renamed to "Resolved items" and that's only for when a character is brought up many, many times with heated discussions

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#16890: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:18:17 PM

Based on the EP, [tup] to Sauron.

@Micheal That's a unique case in and of itself. Not only is the writing bad, but the intended "Tragic Villain" ended up an Unintentionally Unsympathetic CM instead.

therealjackieboy Carrot Clone from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Carrot Clone
#16891: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:23:40 PM

Alrighty, thanks to Rav I'll also be talking about this sleeper hit of a game.

Who is He?

The Mouth of Sauron, with his bizarre teeth obsession, is the mighty eye’s lieutenant of the Dark Tower and lead commander of his orc armies.

What has he done?

Having willingly gotten into Sauron's good graces upon the Dark Lord's rise to power, the Mouth is responsible for making Candle Man the Barad-dûr slave pits’s overseer, thus allowing him to enslave his prisoners and force them through tons of abusive tasks in order to grow Sauron’s army and supply it with weapons, while completely uncaring about any mishaps, abuse, or deaths that ensue under his watch. The Mouth himself spends most of his time plotting a large war between Morder, the Shire, and most of Middle-Earth to acquire the one ring of power for Sauron.

But upon Gollum’s escape and imprisonment in the Elven city Mirkwood, the Mouth orders the Candle Man to commence attacks in multiple Elven cities to find and retrieve Gollum—who knows the location of the ring's wielder, Bilbo Baggins—even getting him to strike Gondor as a diversion. Despite the Candle Man claiming that it’s too early to provoke such a big attack, since it’ll lead to a massive war, the Mouth himself doesn’t care. As a result, Mirkwood is attacked during a celebratory party and is left in ruins, with barely any survivors.

And that's really it. The Mouth ends the game just chillaxing in his pad in Mordor as the player Gollum must suffer through a slog of a climax.

Redeeming Qualities?

None. Dude's a total slimeball who has no loyalty toward anybody but Sauron, and even then he's mainly in it for the power alone, which he uses to flaunt over those he considers lesser than him.

Heinousness?

Mouthy may take orders from Sauron, but he takes great pleasure in what he does, and he does enough on his own to be considered a genuine threat.

And then there's the fact that he's the boss of Candle Man, therefore putting literally everything he's done on his head, from the torturous and deadly conditions of the slave pits, to the raiding of the Elvin villages like Mirkwood.

Conclusion

jackieboy won the argument

"It doesn't matter anymore. You win. It is Duck Season."
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#16893: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:30:52 PM

[tup] Mouth of Sauron (who honestly has a cool design, teeth on front aside)

WatTambor Since: Oct, 2020
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#16895: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:40:12 PM

[tup] to the Mouth of Sauron

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#16896: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:40:19 PM

Yes to the teeth of Sauron!

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#16897: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:42:53 PM

[tup]Mouth of Sauron.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#16898: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:42:55 PM

Yes to the Mouth! Great work.

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Woagh
#16899: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:45:01 PM

[tup] to the Mouth of Sauron. Someone took the name a bit too literally it seems.

NOISE IS CALLING, PICK UP PHONE
Tyk5919 Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin
#16900: Jun 7th 2023 at 1:52:33 PM

[tup] for Teeth Mouth of Sauron.

I write stories and shiz. You can read them here.

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