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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#276: Jan 16th 2023 at 1:46:42 PM

It doesn't require a lot of characterization to meet the minimum, if what we see is that he's an impatient prick that's enough.

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Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#277: Jan 16th 2023 at 1:46:57 PM

[up][up][up][up] Well it is nice to finally get clarification on that. I guess that means that The Lion King Adventures is safe.

Edited by Ordeaux26 on Jan 16th 2023 at 1:47:05 AM

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WatTambor Since: Oct, 2020
#278: Jan 16th 2023 at 1:48:07 PM

OK, thanks for the answers.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#279: Jan 16th 2023 at 2:09:18 PM

Oh, and if it's always going to be this busy, I might need help with the pending stuff. Sometimes I'll be at work, in which case I may only be on mobile. Today's a holiday in the US, but...

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Overlord Since: Mar, 2013
#280: Jan 16th 2023 at 2:19:00 PM

I may have a character to propose, but I am not sure if I should propose her now or wait on her.

I have a question, should I ask about characters I am on the fence on here or the clean-up thread? The podcast Marvel's Wastelanders is on its 6th and final season, but there may be a keeper in season 5, she seems to be dead at the moment, but the overall story is continuing.

Besides that I am reading some Lois Lane and Star Trek novels that may have keepers, but I have to finish them first.

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#281: Jan 16th 2023 at 2:20:21 PM

As long as it is about proposal I think here is okay

Overlord Since: Mar, 2013
#282: Jan 16th 2023 at 2:28:31 PM

Okay, so there is a character from season 1 and season 5, Star-Lord calls her Cora and Dr. Doom just calls her Recorder, I guess I will call her Cora the Recorder. For both Star-Lord and Doom Cora mostly seems to act like a helpful robot sidekick, helping them out of jams. Except Cora mentions several times she is on Earth to help the Rigellian Empire colonize Earth and is programmed to ally herself with the strongest villain on Earth, Dr. Doom. Cora uses Star-Lord to get to Earth and allies herself with Doom until the season 5 finale when Doom and Valeria Richards have the cosmic cube and Cora determines that is a threat to the Rigellian Empire's conquest and nukes the West Coast of the US in order to kill Doom and Valeria. Season 6 is still going on, but Cora seems to be destroyed at the moment.

MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#283: Jan 16th 2023 at 2:37:39 PM

If she is programmed to ally with Dr. Doom, that indicates a lack of agency.

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Overlord Since: Mar, 2013
#284: Jan 16th 2023 at 2:42:34 PM

[up] I would a full EP to discuss her and see how adaptable her program is, she certainly can be pretend to be cute and friendly, but she is a tricky one. However, I think I will wait till season 6 is done, we have a lot of E Ps already.

Edited by Overlord on Jan 16th 2023 at 2:44:44 AM

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#285: Jan 16th 2023 at 3:04:29 PM

Overlord mentions she later tries to kill Doom with nukes, I'm willing to hear him out here.

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#286: Jan 16th 2023 at 3:22:18 PM

Seems worth a try Overlord.

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#287: Jan 16th 2023 at 3:52:21 PM

Hey I’ve been meaning to ask who’s going to do season two of Tiger & Bunny? I know Lighty and Ravok had that work reserved but the threads getting locked affected things

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#288: Jan 16th 2023 at 3:59:05 PM

Happy with Ravok handling if he still wants to!

Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#289: Jan 16th 2023 at 4:04:27 PM

Yeah, I'm planning to tackle Tiger and Bunny there, just taking it slow what with the reopen and all!

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Classy, Refined, Unstable
#290: Jan 16th 2023 at 4:10:15 PM

I've got a possible candidate of mine I had done before that was downvoted due to heinousness but I have a new argument this time. For the actual "what have they done" and "mitigating factors" part can I just C/P it while rewriting the heinous standard part? After the backlog cluster's over that is.

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#291: Jan 16th 2023 at 4:14:36 PM

I have no issue to that. Or link to the old EP and just make a new argument on the HS

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#292: Jan 16th 2023 at 4:18:52 PM

[up] Alright I'll get to that when the reserved backlog ends.

Since it's a new day for me, I'll throw out the other Hellraiser guy who's not so much a strong keep but worth a shot anyway: Trevor. This will be the last of my reserved backlog for CM.

Who is Trevor and what has he done?

Our Julia Cotton stand-in, except he's male and not motivated by horniness for Voight. Trevor is a petty criminal with some minor crimes attached to his name who somehow has an alliance with Voight who's currently stuck being tortured. Lured by the pretence of being granted an audience with the Leviathan, Trevor aids his boss by luring innocents to the Configuration Box to have them mutilated and tortured for eternity so him and Voight can lure the Cenobites to the trap.

Getting in a relationship with Riley, Trevor intends on sacrificing her to the Cenobites, taking her to the Box, resulting in Riley's brother Matt to be killed. Under the guise of helping Riley, Trevor accompanies her and her friends to Voight's manor ,later purposely letting Nora fumble with the Box to get her taken by the Cenobites.

Voight later reveals himself to be alive via Trevor's distraction by stabbing Colin with the box, causing him to be dragged off by the Cenobites , revealing that Trevor was luring them all along. Riley and Trevor find Colin being tortured by The Gasp who offers Colin's freedom in exchange for another soul, prompting Riley to stab Trevor with the box, letting The Gasp flay him and drag the bastard into the labyrinth to be tortured for eternity.

Freudian Excuse or Mitigating Factors?

I mean no? Trevor's horrified by the Cenobites but he's still willingly sacrificing people to them so yeah...

No care for his allies as well so overall just a slimy coward.

Heinous Standard?

New continuuity, new standard.

Trevor just about scrapes it through with being the one to personally manipulate people to the box after Voight's predicament. If he just did and wasn't aware of what happens to anyone who gets cut by the box, he wouldn't pass Hate Sink but he's fully aware and complicit in sentencing people to a mutilated Fate Worse than Death. For now I think he's good but if another Trevoresque character appears in sequels and does worse, I'll be fine with cutting him no issue.

Verdict?

A very tentative keep for now.

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#293: Jan 16th 2023 at 4:22:39 PM

So Voight's the mastermind, Trevor's the muscle?

EDIT: Also, should I bother adding the High on Life dude to the list, or is he not taken seriously enough?

Edited by ACW on Jan 16th 2023 at 7:29:48 AM

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Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#294: Jan 16th 2023 at 4:36:13 PM

I hear that Garmantuous got a EP, and honestly, I ain't too sure he's serious enough. I DID found this video featuring all of Garmantuous' appearances, so I hope this helps:

https://youtu.be/K2wJC9Ku7I4

RyanPuffs She/Her from Big Bill Hell's Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Oh my word! I'm gay!
She/Her
#295: Jan 16th 2023 at 5:46:56 PM

[up] I already posted the video of his appearances so you don't have to worry.

Given the common consensus here is that even if he's taken seriously more than most characters, he still has non-serious moments as well, I can understand that. Even as someone who didn't like the game, I thought it would be worth a shot regardless.

Edited by RyanPuffs on Jan 16th 2023 at 8:47:09 AM

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#297: Jan 16th 2023 at 6:03:11 PM

Indeed no harm in proposing, I personally think the humor is a bit too disqualifying but I'm always happy for discussion on more divisive characters, and you did good work on the proposal!

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Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#298: Jan 16th 2023 at 6:06:15 PM

Nah, no issues at all! You laid everything out honestly, all anyone can ask for!

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#299: Jan 16th 2023 at 6:10:13 PM

So voting starts tomorrow (for me), and hopefully we can clear some of this out.

Still need Reddish to comment on the pets, but I think the others are safe (did we decide Herod has enough personality?).

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papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
#300: Jan 16th 2023 at 6:14:01 PM

Garmantuous is definitely worth talking about since he is really nasty in his actions. With Trevor, I guess he's fine, I'm leery of characters whose main body of crimes is just facilitating another villain's plan with few independent crimes but the lower standard definitely helps here.

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