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Prematurely launched pages and pages that weren't fully fleshed out at the point of launching, are a big problem. Since these usually share several problems at once, this thread is aimed at re-running them through the TLP for fixing - the usual fix - or cutting them if they are too bad.

Problems this thread deals with include bad names, not enough/bad examples, unclear description, etc.

For the interested, here's a list of recently created pages. Launches

Note: Please do not request a mod to unlaunch drafts that don't have any issues besides lacking a launch notice/24hr launch notice. While 24hr launch notices are mandatory, there are a few exceptions to the rule. If you see a draft's sponsor launch a TLP without an announcement, it's best to remind them of our TLP Guidelines first. If they continue to repeatedly launch drafts without a launch notice, you can report them on Ask The Tropers or the TLP Community Issues thread.

Edited by MacronNotes on Jun 24th 2023 at 12:24:55 PM

SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1551: Mar 18th 2014 at 4:01:00 PM

Thanks for the input, Larkmarn.

Anyhow, it's midnight here in Switzerland, so I'll provide just a short work- and replieslist:

Also, the person behind the OOC page replied to a PM and said it was meant to be a page about the players rather than their characters.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
Zzzzzzzzzz
#1552: Mar 18th 2014 at 4:33:52 PM

Freestyle Version: Good page, even without YKTTW. I'd say let it stand.

Tritagonist: Scrap it. As it stands it's useless.

the OOC page: why do we need a page for the players? Dump it.

edited 18th Mar '14 4:34:36 PM by Madrugada

...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
Candi Sorcerer in training from Closer to rimward than hubward Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
Sorcerer in training
#1553: Mar 18th 2014 at 5:52:37 PM

If the OOC page is about the players, then it's about troping RL people, and TVT doesn't do that.

Coming back to where you started is not the same as never leaving. -Terry Pratchett
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1554: Mar 19th 2014 at 12:52:32 AM

Today's work- and replieslist:

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
XFllo There is no Planet B from Planet A Since: Aug, 2012
There is no Planet B
#1555: Mar 19th 2014 at 4:51:16 AM

My (limited) input:


No Phones Tonight was launched with no hats. I'd like it back in YKTTW. Opinions?

edited 19th Mar '14 4:52:33 AM by XFllo

KarjamP The imaginative Christian Asperger from South Africa Since: Apr, 2011 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
The imaginative Christian Asperger
#1556: Mar 19th 2014 at 6:08:41 AM

No Phones Tonight was launched with NO hats, with not a lot of replies and the tags "Needs Examples", "Description Needs Help" and "Up For Grabs".

Personally, I think the name sounds a bit awkward, as well as not describing the fact that it's supposed to be about turning off cellphones in order to have an undesturbed night together with your friends.

shimaspawn from Here and Now Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: In your bunk
#1557: Mar 19th 2014 at 8:05:08 AM

Webcomic.BIBLE should be Webcomic.Basic Instructions Before Leaving Earth. You had it right the first time, Septimus. On this link you can see the cover of the first chapter with the comic name, and a box over on the right side that reads: "Basic Instructions Before Leaving Earth is a fantasy webcomic about a Heaven and Hell that is not cut out in black and white."

edited 19th Mar '14 8:05:24 AM by shimaspawn

Reality is that, which when you stop believing in it, doesn't go away. -Philip K. Dick
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1558: Mar 19th 2014 at 4:07:59 PM

Seeing as I am half asleep at the moment (and was back when I looked at the page described ^; I should slow down a bit), I'll put this evening's worklist out there in case anyone wants to do the work themselves:

  • BIBLE: That should be moved to the extended title.
  • Mythology Porn: See, the problem I have with the page is a) that I don't want to ask for a cut without making sure that the examples have been salvaged and b) an "omnibus mythos" or whatever the proper vocabulary is doesn't look very Mythology Gag to me. I would say that about half the description can go, though - strikes me as a long digression from the trope.
  • Quouse DND: The acronym title does not seem to be appropriate here; nevermind that they added a bunch of questionable redirects.
  • Restaurante Macoatl: Stubby page; also, the grammar in the description looks very fishy.
  • Twitch Plays Pokemon Fire Red: Stub article; creator messaged.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1559: Mar 20th 2014 at 2:08:36 PM

Evening, so I'll list all the unprocessed items here:

edited 20th Mar '14 3:29:02 PM by SeptimusHeap

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Candi Sorcerer in training from Closer to rimward than hubward Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
Sorcerer in training
#1560: Mar 20th 2014 at 4:27:55 PM

Everybody Speaks English In The Future: I say kick it to YKTTW for development and such. If the original editor doesn't want it, stick it with "Up for Grabs".

That One Part Of That One Level: A scan of That One Level shows there's a few examples that mention 'that one spot on that level', but it's fairly integrated in gameplay, since it tends to make the whole level that much trickier because of what happens. I don't see how splitting of that one part would work in most cases, due to the intertwining of that Part with that Level in gameplay.

Coming back to where you started is not the same as never leaving. -Terry Pratchett
XFllo There is no Planet B from Planet A Since: Aug, 2012
There is no Planet B
#1561: Mar 20th 2014 at 4:51:32 PM

[up] I'm willing to take Everybody Speaks English In The Future to ykttw and be its sponsor.

Just remind me please: Do we unlauch it/cut it (i.e. create red link for it), or will the page still be there while its ykttw is active?

I also PM'ed leaskie about prematurely launching No Phones Tonight. Hope it gets back to ykttw.

edited 20th Mar '14 5:14:20 PM by XFllo

Sonzai from Singularity Station Since: Sep, 2010
#1562: Mar 20th 2014 at 5:15:20 PM

About Notebook/Sonzai:

It was created to serve as a place to collaboratively draft a page and paste random stuff I wasn't ready to post yet, much like a Wikipedia user notebook.

However, I haven't really used it for quite a while, but I don't know how (or if) I can delete it.

If you want to delete it, go right ahead. smile (And sorry for any confusion.)

Danger: Intense gravimetric distortions nearby. Please reverse the polarity on your deflectors now.
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1563: Mar 21st 2014 at 12:20:57 AM

Re Everybody Speaks English In The Future: I would cut it. Way too stubby to be worth keeping around.

Today's worklist:

edited 21st Mar '14 12:21:18 AM by SeptimusHeap

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Candi Sorcerer in training from Closer to rimward than hubward Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
Sorcerer in training
#1564: Mar 21st 2014 at 12:25:57 AM

@Sonzai: The Sandbox namespace is useful for that kind of thing, and since by definition things there are works-in-progress, playing around, and the like, they're not held up to wiki standards like the trope, work, and other pages are.

edited 21st Mar '14 5:41:03 PM by Candi

Coming back to where you started is not the same as never leaving. -Terry Pratchett
XFllo There is no Planet B from Planet A Since: Aug, 2012
There is no Planet B
#1565: Mar 21st 2014 at 5:26:48 AM

Re: Everybody Speaks English In The Future. OK then, let's cut it. I'll put it on my do to list and try to gather some examples. It would still be better to call it something like "everybody speaks one language in the future" — I know a Czech sci-fi series where the whole humanity spoke Czech in the 25th century. ;-)

edited 24th Mar '14 6:56:34 PM by XFllo

SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1566: Mar 21st 2014 at 9:06:26 AM

Late afternoon recap, aside from chronic guest Mythology Porn:

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Candi Sorcerer in training from Closer to rimward than hubward Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
Sorcerer in training
#1567: Mar 21st 2014 at 5:42:04 PM

X Fllo -the idea for a title is good, but that one's kind of long. Maybe pare it down to 'One Language in the Future'.

Coming back to where you started is not the same as never leaving. -Terry Pratchett
Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
Zzzzzzzzzz
#1568: Mar 21st 2014 at 6:47:35 PM

Cigarette Burns... Hmmm, that one is that grey area. The page isn't bad; the explanation is concise and clear and really doesn't need much more. The examples are good, what there are of them, and I can think of one from Theatre to add and I know there are bunches in movies...

But I hate the message that letting it slide by without YKTTW sends; most of the pages that aren't run through there are nowhere near as good.

I'd say leave the page (I'll do the crosswicking) and put up a YKTTW just to gather examples.

...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
Zzzzzzzzzz
#1569: Mar 21st 2014 at 6:48:45 PM

One language in the future — how about Single Language Future? Same sort of name as Single-Biome Planet for the same sort of concept.

edited 21st Mar '14 6:49:18 PM by Madrugada

...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1570: Mar 22nd 2014 at 1:08:33 AM

Today's work- and replieslist:

edited 22nd Mar '14 6:51:52 AM by SeptimusHeap

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
ShanghaiSlave Giver of Lame Names from YKTTW Since: Mar, 2012 Relationship Status: is commanded to— WANK!
#1571: Mar 22nd 2014 at 9:37:05 AM

You Know Nothing About X's YKTTW is progressing smoothly.

need input on most recent discussion. it was suggested to split the trope into False Pretense (character misrepresents himself, thus getting You Know Nothing About X) and Outdated Knowledge (character knows about something, but what he knows is incorrect. may get You Know Nothing About X response).

it's also maybe implied was to keep Assuming Familiarity as "person assumes he knows someone, but doesn't for various reasons" (response here is usually "you don't know me" or "you don't know anything about me").

edited 22nd Mar '14 9:37:35 AM by ShanghaiSlave

Is dast der Zerstorer? Odar die Schopfer?
KarjamP The imaginative Christian Asperger from South Africa Since: Apr, 2011 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
The imaginative Christian Asperger
#1572: Mar 22nd 2014 at 10:18:31 AM

Irisless Eye Mask Of Mystery would normally be okay if it weren't for the fact that it was already brought up that many of the examples are Zero Context and weren't fixed by the time of launching.

(It had 5 hats though, but that doesn't necessarily mean it can launch, especially if problems are known already.)

edited 22nd Mar '14 10:19:41 AM by KarjamP

SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1573: Mar 23rd 2014 at 3:20:59 AM

Today's worklist:

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1574: Mar 24th 2014 at 12:55:17 AM

Today's worklist:

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1575: Mar 25th 2014 at 12:55:00 AM

Today's worklist is up. Also, given the lack of further commentary on Mythology Porn I'll consider it done for the purposes of this topic:

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman

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