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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

TheJokster22 Justice for Skywarp from Down Unda Since: Mar, 2017 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Justice for Skywarp
#240676: Dec 19th 2020 at 3:25:41 PM

Yeah, sure, go ahead and I think it goes onto Scripts.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#240677: Dec 19th 2020 at 3:27:03 PM

Please add it to the Drafts.

BTW, Anakin has his own page.

Edited by ACW on Dec 19th 2020 at 6:29:32 AM

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#240678: Dec 19th 2020 at 3:32:24 PM

Funnigly enough Darth Vader has his own seperate page for some reason despite being the same guy

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
TheJokster22 Justice for Skywarp from Down Unda Since: Mar, 2017 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Justice for Skywarp
#240679: Dec 19th 2020 at 3:35:55 PM

The Drafts Page is currently locked out

TheMadCr0w Gentle Laborer from Insignificant Little Blue Planet Since: Aug, 2015 Relationship Status: Get out of here, STALKER
Gentle Laborer
#240680: Dec 19th 2020 at 3:36:00 PM

[tup] to Young-sook.

I wasn't sure about her at first. She's clinically diagnosed with antisocial personality disorder and borderline personality disorder (the movie implies that she inherited it from her biological mother) and she didn't even understand why she was being abused, which only made her condition worse. But, having re-watched the movie yesterday? I'm convinced, none of her excuses are portrayed sympathetically, and we have upvoted several candidates with Hollywood Personality Disorders before... Looking at you David.

DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#240681: Dec 19th 2020 at 3:40:21 PM

[tup] Palps, Virgil, Axel, Young-sook

I was initially gonna propose a different quote, but Reddish notified me that this is the line from the original manga:

"You gentlemen have reaped the extraordinary financial and political benefits of developing weapons with the sole purpose of annihilating the Earth. Your fortunes depend on your ability to concoct new ways of exterminating mankind, and, luckily, the powers that be have been behind you so far. However, there are those out there more interested in developing stronger international bonds in the hopes that it will precipitate peace. These people are the aberrations in a culture of war we in this room wish to propagate. So we must fuel the fires of war now, gentlemen!"
Skull, Cyborg 009

Thoughts?

TheJokster22 Justice for Skywarp from Down Unda Since: Mar, 2017 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Justice for Skywarp
#240682: Dec 19th 2020 at 3:40:42 PM

Drafts Page has been unlocked out and I have posted Palpatine to drafts.

Edited by TheJokster22 on Dec 19th 2020 at 3:41:01 AM

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#240683: Dec 19th 2020 at 4:05:07 PM

So everyone fine with Liu Hong staying and if so the rewrite I suggested?

[down] I already addressed that.

Edited by 43110 on Dec 19th 2020 at 7:20:56 AM

nwotyzal Since: Sep, 2019
#240684: Dec 19th 2020 at 4:12:10 PM

[up]At least until further notice, like if there’s any mitigating factor the OP missed.

Edited by nwotyzal on Dec 19th 2020 at 4:27:19 AM

DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#240685: Dec 19th 2020 at 4:23:34 PM

So far? Sure, keep him. If somebody reads the book and proposes a cut we can handle it then.

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#240686: Dec 19th 2020 at 5:09:52 PM

So like... we fine for the rewrite in that case? No one's said anything and I don't wanna just randomly put it up.

DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
NattesNovgrel from The Middle of Misery, South of Iowa Since: Apr, 2020
#240688: Dec 19th 2020 at 5:18:44 PM

Netflix’s Hilda has released a few days ago after some delay.

I have not watched every episode yet but if anyone wants to discuss things with me, PM me and I’ll get to you after I watch it all.

Edited by NattesNovgrel on Dec 19th 2020 at 7:19:35 AM

RobertTYL Since: Oct, 2019 Relationship Status: Holding out for a hero
#240689: Dec 19th 2020 at 5:38:26 PM

Yes to Axel, Young, the 200-word rewrite

Edited by RobertTYL on Dec 19th 2020 at 8:38:35 PM

DrUnknown Since: May, 2020
#240690: Dec 19th 2020 at 5:42:42 PM

[tup] to Oh Young-sook and the Liu Hong rewrite (I'm cool with him staying too).

LordYAM Since: Jan, 2015
#240691: Dec 19th 2020 at 6:44:09 PM

One thing about palpy that should be emphasized is he sells out THREE apprentices. Maul gets decapitated by Anakin, Greivous gets shot to death and than Padme gets her life drained.

In short he is an INCREDIBLY Bad Boss

TheJokster22 Justice for Skywarp from Down Unda Since: Mar, 2017 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Justice for Skywarp
#240692: Dec 19th 2020 at 7:09:16 PM

I've edited the Palpatine Draft to add a couple more potholes.

Bullman "The Juice is Loose." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
illegaleagle90 A dorp bird from Livin' in the City Since: Jul, 2018 Relationship Status: You can be my wingman any time
A dorp bird
#240694: Dec 19th 2020 at 8:30:59 PM

I'd like to follow up on the post I made earlier... what was it... on the 8th?... It was thumped before I could take it down because there was a rule I wasn't made aware of considering said work went "live" at that point only a day after I campaigned to have this character discussed in this topic. Is it ok now?

ImperialMajestyXO Since: Nov, 2015
#240695: Dec 19th 2020 at 8:32:35 PM

[up] Has it been two weeks since release?

illegaleagle90 A dorp bird from Livin' in the City Since: Jul, 2018 Relationship Status: You can be my wingman any time
A dorp bird
#240696: Dec 19th 2020 at 8:33:43 PM

On the 22nd it will be. So.. I suppose I'll wait.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#240697: Dec 19th 2020 at 8:37:24 PM

None of us watch it, none of us were following it. It's fine to post it now, please do so. The 2 week rule was to prevent spoilers. 11 days after on a word not one of us remotely cares about is keeping with the spirit and we've granted dispensation before.

Edited by Lightysnake on Dec 19th 2020 at 8:38:13 AM

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#240698: Dec 19th 2020 at 8:59:05 PM

I'd just go for it at this point, no one's complained about being spoiled.

SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from The Daily Bugle (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#240699: Dec 19th 2020 at 9:08:07 PM

Part one of my final 2020 effortposts.

What is the work?

"The Guards" is the first episode of the first season of Jack Taylor, an Irish Noir Miniseries.

Jack Taylor suspects that a series of teenage suicides are not what they seem. Jack discovers that the man behind the killings is someone he has heard of before...

Who is Trevor Lanpert and what has he done?

Trevor Lanpert is a prominent businessman in Galway, Ireland, who uses his ownership of the "Planters" facility to prey on the teenage girls who work there, having his subordinate Ford spy on the employees.

Lanpert's modus operandi involves intoxicating the girls, drowning them in his bathtub and recording their demises. Subsequently, Lanpert tries to frame the deaths as suicides, attracting the suspicion of Jack Taylor.

When Sutton blackmails him, Lanpert buys his silence by purchasing paintings off of him.

While searching Lanpert's house, Jack views one of the recordings alongside Sutton, and expresses disgust and fury towards Lanpert, expressing a hyperbolic desire to inflict physical harm on him for his actions.

Sutton himself eventually brutally murders Lanpert and shows Jack the latter's corpse, under the delusion that Jack would approve of his actions.

Heinousness?

To start, Lanpert easily carves his uniquely terrible niche within the episode itself, having drowned and recorded 10 teenage girls among his own employees, and labelled their recordings with their names and ages, of which we see one recording play, as well as one of four mentioned corpses. Additionally, if Sutton is to be believed, Lanpert was already a child abuser when he dealt arms in Kosovo. The fact that Sutton says "You're doing it again, aren't you?", as well as Lanpert paying him off, strongly suggests that Lanpert's employees are not his only victims, so Sutton's allegations against Lanpert aren't unfounded.

Within the episode itself, Lanpert distinguishes himself from Sutton, the blackmailer and twice over murderer who sold out an orphanage in Kosovo offscreen; from an attempted rapist who targeted Garda Kate Noonan; and from the thugs who beat Jack up.

Overall in the series, Lanpert also has to compete with a vigilante squad, a horrifically abusive nun, a drama professor turned Mad Artist (I'll get to him later), a pedophile priest, crime gangs, a woman targeting a family, a group of gunmen, and petty criminals. For what it's worth, Lanpert seems to have a unique and horrific MO, and distinguishes himself in his actions, even considering he has the resources one would expect from a corporate executive.

Mitigating Factors?

Lanpert has a visibly sadistic personality in the portion of the snuff film we see, judging by the line "Just feisty (or is it "lie still"?), little one. There, now. That's better" as he drowns a teenage girl in his tub.

Lanpert is never shown to have any moral standards of any kind, compromised moral agency, or any sort of tragic backstory to mitigate his behaviour.

It is unclear whether Lanpert directly ordered Jack to be beaten for sticking his nose in his business, or whether Ford was responsible, but even if Ford is responsible, Lanpert is paying him to keep things covered.

Verdict?

I think we have a viable contender.

ETA: Part 2 tomorrow. Gonna sleep now.

Edited by SkyCat32 on Apr 18th 2022 at 1:14:17 PM

Your friendly neighbourhood Spider-Man.
nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#240700: Dec 19th 2020 at 9:09:12 PM

What work are you even talking about? I dunno how anybody remembers the contents of a thumped post from 11 days ago.


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