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greatpikminfan Since: Apr, 2009
#26: Feb 7th 2024 at 12:31:58 AM

[up][up][up][up] Ah, thanks for clarifying.

If her age isn't confirmed then I'm leaning (but not voting) keep now. Because it sounds like this skirts the pedo rule, and it was already discussed that there's enough story for it to be tropeable so it passes on the pornography part of the rule. I'm part of the party that wouldn't see any problem if it gets cut, although at this point that may have to be from someone bringing up additional points. Because this sounds very borderline, but not outright over the line, as it is right now.

[down] No problem, you didn't come off as hostile to me.

Edited by greatpikminfan on Feb 7th 2024 at 3:47:04 AM

Zazie122 from New Zealand Since: Jul, 2017 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#27: Feb 7th 2024 at 12:34:09 AM

[up][up] Yeah, that makes sense, and was along the lines of how I interpreted it. I'm always worried I'm missing some obvious rule by not looking in the right place or am misinterpreting things, so I appreciate the clarification. Cheers!

Also, would this article benefit from being locked, then? That way it won't have any unnecessary fetish examples/wordings added to it. Just a thought, though, and I'm sure it's already been/being considered.

[up] That's essentially how I feel, too. I apologise if I sounded hostile by the way, I really was just trying to clarify the rule (and hoping I was correct)! I think we're pretty much on the same page for this.

Edited by Zazie122 on Feb 8th 2024 at 9:37:06 AM

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#28: Feb 7th 2024 at 4:51:53 AM

[up] I wouldn't have any objections to locking it. Fortunately, to date we haven't had any edits that dive too deep into the lurid details of the content, but some of the current examples do have a bit of a hyperbolic tone.

jandn2014 Very Spooky from somewhere in Connecticut Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Hiding
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#29: Feb 7th 2024 at 5:16:00 AM

I’ll go with keep here. I’m opposed to a lock as well; from a glance over the page, there doesn’t appear to be anything perverted, and a lock should only be used as a last resort when it comes to these sorts of issues.

Edited by jandn2014 on Feb 7th 2024 at 8:16:17 AM

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#30: Feb 7th 2024 at 7:33:56 AM

[up] Agreed, no need to push the lock issue if nothing extraordinary needs to be done.

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#31: Feb 7th 2024 at 9:19:20 AM

Okay, I don't think I can be high and mighty and be scared of the manga's reputation.

    Recap 
  • Ch 1: Saki, midschool grad (looks older), changes to look more pretty, get picked on by some guy Hayate, they go to karaoke, and do drugs and graphic sex and both enjoy it. And he tooks a photo of her on his way out.
  • Ch 2: Graphic sex, then Saki prostututes for some old guy, graphic sex, then it's revealed someone published her photo at school.
  • Ch 3: Saki gets blackmailed into graphic sex with classmates and she doesn't mind. Saki's dad had too much drink and rapes her at home. Then they sex again later, then gangraped by classmates.
  • Saki starts to get bullied and realizes she's not actually friends with anyone. She runs home and her mom beats her (and not dad) for incest. So she runs away from home and stays with Hayate.
  • Ch 4: They sex and Saki gives up on school. Saki thinks she's effectively adult now and smokes a lot of drugs. Hayate has a debt and Saki has a genius idea to earn for him. Prostitution rounds ensure for quite a while. Saki gets tattoo, more drugs and more dicks.
  • Ch 5: Saki is pregnant so she gets an abortion. More prostitution. More rape and drugs.
  • Ch 6: More rape. Saki is actually not recovering from debt because drugs she keeps buying are expensive. So Hayato dumps her. So Saki gets raped by the homeless. Saki stays at the hobos camp and they are actually nice to her. Saki realizies she's pregnant again and decides to keep the baby.
  • Ch 7: Pregnancy prostitution. And more drugs. Somehow she gathered a stash of cash so she could give the baby a better life. Which gets promptly stolen by passerby students who accuse her of being a thief. Then she gets beaten. She looks at the mirror and gets a total breakdown. Then eats a whole bag of drugs at once.
  • Time Skip? Normal-looking adult Saki talks to her daughter Hana, and how she's happier than she was before.

I was willing to let it go as porn with heavy plot, but... the porn/plot ratio is too high. Yes, the tone is sad and the ending is tragic, but it's not the most depressing or unusual thing in the world.

It is supposedly be preachy by own admition, and there's an argument that you shouldn't assume a random hooker is like this by choice and don't do drugs, but it's up to interpretation. Almost entirety of it is just a girl getting sexed and pissing with silly face due to own shortcomings + time progression.

I'm leaning on cutting actually.

Edited by Amonimus on Feb 7th 2024 at 10:54:08 PM

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Zazie122 from New Zealand Since: Jul, 2017 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#32: Feb 7th 2024 at 11:47:36 AM

Okay, yeah, judging from that summary I'm changing my vote to Cut, only because it sounds like it's mostly porn. It's porn with some plot, but it's still porn, and TVT doesn't allow pornographic works to have articles, from my understanding.

Even if it's for shock value, if there's that much sex, eh.

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#33: Feb 7th 2024 at 2:22:52 PM

Okay, yeah, with the full review, I'm also switching cut. Call it the proverbial last straw.

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#34: Feb 7th 2024 at 2:50:53 PM

yeah same here, switching to cut now. even if the "dark and preachy" story alone is serviceable, the hentai kills it unfortunately 😔

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#35: Feb 7th 2024 at 3:23:32 PM

Changing my vote to a cut.

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#36: Feb 7th 2024 at 5:20:22 PM

See, this is why I was asking for more word from people who actually read the comic, haha. Again: graphic underage sex from a hentai magazine/publication.

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Amonimus the Retromancer from <<|Wiki Talk|>> (Sergeant) Relationship Status: In another castle
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#37: Feb 7th 2024 at 9:08:23 PM

I admit I'm more on a cynical side and may be missing something profound, so others are free to give it a shot, but disregarding the memetic reputation, we've cut works with longer stories even without the question of age because porn overwhelmed the intended narrative.

Edited by Amonimus on Feb 8th 2024 at 5:27:19 PM

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#38: Feb 8th 2024 at 6:08:09 AM

Yeah, now I'm leaning to cut

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Ramidel Since: Jan, 2001
#39: Feb 8th 2024 at 10:25:38 PM

Maintaining my keep vote. Again, I personally feel that the porn is necessary for the plot.

AbsoluteRainbow Absolute Rainbow & the tales between worlds from Hanoi, Vietnam Since: Jul, 2023
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#40: Feb 8th 2024 at 11:01:19 PM

This is pretty complicated. So if the page get cut, move it to Darth Wiki because of the porn and tragedy that came along.

Also, these taken from Trivia.Metamorphosis 2013:

  • Approval of God:
    • While ShindoL sticks with his canon Downer Ending, he is open with alternative endings. During his guest appearance in Trash Taste, he's asked about the memetic JoJo's Bizarre Adventure ending, and he states that if anyone wants a happy alternate ending for Metamorphosis, they should definitely look for the JoJo ending.
    • Another Fix Fic ShindoL gave his blessing to is an (unfortunately discontinued) manga called Saki: Another Story by BREN, where the events of Metamorphosis never happened, and instead Saki is a Reclusive Mangaka who ends up befriending another loner that was once like her in school. Not out of a sudden desire to change, but out of pure chance due to her sitting in Saki's normal spot in a local internet cafe she goes to.
  • Colbert Bump: The hentai nature of the manga normally means that the more mainstream anime fandom will mostly not recognize this. However, the Fix Fic featuring Josuke Higashikata ("I'm Gonna Fix That Girl Up!") opened the gates for more viewers who mostly don't read hentai... and then led to them appreciating the tragedy of Saki more than the h-scenes.
  • Write What You Know: ShindoL lived in New York for several years, and based many of the things that happen to Saki in the story on actual things that he heard happened to people through news reports or word-of-mouth from people around him.

This vote is going to be difficult. And factoring in the various endings, We're in a little Morton's Fork: Keep it would potentially be a spit in our very own content policy, but cut it and we'll lose an unique Porn with Plot subject.

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Tremmor19 reconsidering from bunker in the everglades Since: Dec, 2018 Relationship Status: Too sexy for my shirt
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#41: Feb 9th 2024 at 5:40:14 AM

I'm a little late, but I've also read this, and my vote is cut. Its hentai. it may have an interesting story as well, and more plot than average, but it's very graphic and very heavy on the sex and the story is clearly secondary to the porn.

Edited by Tremmor19 on Feb 9th 2024 at 8:41:24 AM

ipatrol Since: Oct, 2011
#42: Feb 9th 2024 at 7:58:37 AM

Yeah, I don't think this belongs here, and I was shocked to see it exists. It was clearly intended as porn and only somewhat accidentally became social commentary. If we're gonna have a content policy at all, this has to be outside of it.

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#43: Feb 9th 2024 at 8:00:00 AM

Cut.

...And no, Rainbow, we don't move content violating pages to Darth.

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#44: Feb 9th 2024 at 8:08:32 AM

Yeah that's never been what Darth is for and I'm a little confused about how you even got that idea

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jandn2014 Very Spooky from somewhere in Connecticut Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Hiding
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#45: Feb 9th 2024 at 9:11:06 AM

I’ll have to go with cut.

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greatpikminfan Since: Apr, 2009
#46: Feb 9th 2024 at 5:17:14 PM

Well, I said "additional points" would need to be brought up to make it cutworthy, and that summary sounds like a pretty good point. I was originally going to post "Heavily leaning cut, but I'd like a second opinion from someone who read the manga just to be sure" after Amonimus' summary, but now with Tremmor19's comment I'm convinced to definitely vote cut. Even if the sex is important to the story, it really comes off like the sex (for titilation's sake) was the highest priority here.

Edited by greatpikminfan on Feb 9th 2024 at 10:39:17 AM

AbsoluteRainbow Absolute Rainbow & the tales between worlds from Hanoi, Vietnam Since: Jul, 2023
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#47: Feb 10th 2024 at 3:31:00 AM

[up][up][up][up] Ok then. I'll vote for cut, but only because it's hentai first and foremost, despite being Porn with Plot.

Also, what to do after cutting?

Edited by AbsoluteRainbow on Feb 10th 2024 at 6:32:46 PM

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Ramidel Since: Jan, 2001
#48: Feb 10th 2024 at 5:05:41 AM

  • shrug* Well, looks like the weight is moving to a cut.

[up]We holler a mod, they cut it and file this discussion in the Morgue. After that, check to see if there's any links to it so the examples can be unlinked. (Not cut; we keep legit examples from P5-cut works.)

Siegfried1337 Unofficial co-Wiki Curator for Magnificent Bastard from the Ashes Since: Sep, 2018 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
#49: Feb 10th 2024 at 8:14:18 AM

Votes for keep: Ramidel, Siegfried1337, NotGonnaDoALot4

Votes for cut: Amonimus, Zazie122, StarSword, worldwidewoomy, Ayumi-chan, number9robotic, Libraryseraph, Tremmor19, ipatrol, WarJay77, jandn2014, AbsoluteRainbow

...why did we even approve of making a page for that in the first place?

Edited by Siegfried1337 on Feb 10th 2024 at 8:14:40 AM

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#50: Feb 10th 2024 at 8:25:10 AM

Because there was a lot of debate about whether or not the plot outweighed the porn and most of us who understandably didn't want to read it were going off second-hand info?

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