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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Flowman Since: Dec, 2021
#16851: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:10:40 AM

How bad are these killings? This is a horror work after all.

CapitanoNox Lord of Space from Italy Since: Oct, 2018 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
Lord of Space
#16852: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:12:30 AM

Well, to kill each victim, you gotta give them at least 3 stabs, so they do suffer before dying, even saying things like "Oh God it hurts!" When you stab them a second time they're essentially crawling and bleeding insanely.

Edited by CapitanoNox on Jun 7th 2023 at 8:13:01 PM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#16853: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:12:35 AM

Assuming the protagonist isn't TOO insane, I guess a yes?

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#16855: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:15:32 AM

We've downvoted the killer from this game at least twice before and I see nothing in this post to change my mind. Given it's completely impossible to ascribe their motivation beyond "it's too noisy" (they're not even a sadist or a misanthrope like the guy from Hatred) I'm once again voting "no" on account of minimal onscreen personality/motive—the contradictory, barely-explained motive could just as well hint at total insanity as much as cold sociopathy. Even the trope page says that the idea of them doing it For the Evulz is an assumption.

Edited by Scraggle on Jun 7th 2023 at 12:17:31 PM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#16856: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:16:10 AM

[up] In that case a pretty firm [tdown] for me. I just don't trust his agency.

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AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
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therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#16858: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:17:58 AM

[tdown]Protag

"No running in the halls!"
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#16859: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:18:27 AM

[up][up][up][up]Yeah, that was my main concern: His sanity. Hell, at least "Not Important" just hates everyone.

Edited by ACW on Jun 7th 2023 at 2:18:34 PM

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#16860: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:18:36 AM

No to the Calm Time killer again.

Flowman Since: Dec, 2021
#16861: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:20:54 AM

I suppose he is barely heinous enough if he makes them bloody messes (though just stabbing them sounds like average horror stuff especially given the kill count of only 7, not that much larger than Michael Myers' kill count), but it does sound like he doesn't have a clear motive. [tdown] Protagonist.

Edited by Flowman on Jun 7th 2023 at 1:21:26 PM

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#16863: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:24:05 AM

From what I've heard this feels like his home is an Inescapable prison is the only dialogue he has...... I'd be worried about If he's actually sane if that's all we get...

[tdown] Host.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#16864: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:38:32 AM

No to the player character-killer dude, but Yes to Dread and Oren!

Ok it's a few hours early but honestly, no one cares lmao, so let's go ahead and knock this one out. Jackie will also have a character to discuss from this one at his leisure:

What's the work?

The Lord of Ring: Gollum is a new video game based on the classic fantasy franchise. It's set a short time before Fellowship of the Ring, telling the story of what everyone's favorite little weirdo Gollum was up to in Mordor and such. The game is a shitshow masterpiece of epic proportions, and gives us a couple villains to discuss.

Who is Sauron? What has he done?

  • The Dark Lord himself, Sauron is an ancient evil who has plagued Middle-Earth for years. Dialogue, lore and in-game murals all showcase Sauron's history of waging war and mass death on the lands to spread his rule, and at the time of this game, he resides in Mordor and rules it with a brutal iron fist.
  • In the slave pits of Barad-dûr, we see the full cruelty of a world ruled by Sauron. Thousands of people are rounded up and enslaved to the pits, where they are forced into bone-breaking labor and used as everything from cannon fodder to target practice, their lives thrown away in mine explosions, beast wrangling, and countless other horrid, lethal tasks they are forced to accomplish. Even Orcs themselves are not spared from this fate, those who fall short of expectations being demoted to nothing but slaves to be tortured and killed as easily as the rest.
  • To keep his "dark waters" running, Sauron regularly has batches of dozens of slaves horrifically blasted into bloody mush by crystallic power, their remains dumped into a red river that flows through Mordor, made of nothing but gore. So many people are routinely sacrificed in this manner that the river is constantly flowing, dozens killed every hour.
  • The Heavy baddies of the game, the Candle Man and his daughter the Cruel Woman (pfft), were once royalty of the kingdom of Man before their kingdom was wiped out and them forced to swear allegiance to Sauron. Candle Man has become Sauron's chief torturer, while the Cruel Woman has been corrupted by Sauron's personal touch to make her even worse than her father. Neither count, btw, for redeeming features and tragic pasts despite how awful they are.
  • When the creature Gollum is found by his minions, Sauron tortures him for days by forcing him to play his own game with bladed implements and firey steel, hoping to learn where Gollum lost Sauron's One Ring. Gollum finally cracks and reveals it is in the hands of a Hobbit, and so Sauron dispatches his men to find and kill this Hobbit, then throwing Gollum into the slave pits, through which Gollum and the player then experience the abject horrors of the video game of Barad-dûr.
  • After Gollum escapes to Mirkwood and the Elves, Sauron has his Mouth take the lead, and the Mouth orders Mirkwood and various other cities of Man be raided and massacred in the hunt for Gollum. Sauron also orders the Candle Man to transform the life source of Mirkwood into another beacon of Sauron's power, hoping to corrupt and decimate all life in the wood to gain more power for himself. Luckily, Gollum and the Elves manage to beat the Candle Man and Gollum continues on his quest to find a better plot to be a part of.

Mitigating features?

He's Sauron, so no. He's not in the game physically muchlucky bastard but he's got dialogue to Gollum and he's talked more than enough about by both characters and lore for him to be characterized enough as a vile Evil Overlord.

Heinousness?

He's behind everything in the game in one manner or another, with Barad-dûr being an absolutely hellish place for all occupants that Sauron oversees, and he personally tortures Gollum, too. almost as much as the game devs

why are we still here? just to suffer?

Edited by Ravok on Jun 7th 2023 at 11:39:37 AM

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Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#16865: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:41:10 AM

[tdown] to the killer

[tup] to the Gollum game - er I mean Sauron from the Gollum game

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Goku Black
#16866: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:42:12 AM

[tup]Sauron

Oh this game does have someone...

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
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...Phenomenal
#16867: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:42:53 AM

[tup] for Dread and Sauron.

[tdown] for Calm Time protag.

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#16870: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:45:48 AM

Yes to Sauron. Geeze, is the game that bad? In a good way or not?

[down][down][down] No arguments there. A bad game can be hilariously entertainingly bad, but boring? Not good.

Edited by ACW on Jun 7th 2023 at 2:58:47 PM

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CapitanoNox Lord of Space from Italy Since: Oct, 2018 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
Lord of Space
#16871: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:48:03 AM

[tup] to Sauron from....... that game.......

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#16872: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:48:31 AM

Yes to Sauron, Lord of Ring.

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#16873: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:48:55 AM

[tup]Good ol' one eye himself. I'll have my candidate up soon.

[up][up][up] It's very, very boring. And honestly that's the worst thing a game can be.

Edited by therealjackieboy on Jun 7th 2023 at 11:49:07 AM

"No running in the halls!"
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Bye
#16875: Jun 7th 2023 at 11:56:50 AM

[tup] Dread, Sauron (certainly one of the games of all time)

[tdown] Protag


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