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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
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#31952: Dec 9th 2023 at 9:03:31 AM

Switching [tdown] to Wardack and Zabune

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Paperfly Buzz from On The Wall Since: Jun, 2022
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#31953: Dec 9th 2023 at 9:23:59 AM

Has Monokuma from Danganronpa ever been discussed here? I'm not familiar with the franchise, but AFAIK, he's the reason why the students are trapped in the school and forced into a Battle Royale in the first place... and I wasn't able to find any discussion on him

Edit: Upon further investigation, turns out Monokuma is controlled by Junko

Edited by Paperfly on Dec 9th 2023 at 9:27:23 AM

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#31954: Dec 9th 2023 at 9:38:51 AM

Isnt Monokuma just Junko using a disguise?

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#31955: Dec 9th 2023 at 9:56:19 AM

In the first two games, yes, so he’s technically already up. Not so much in V3, but since he’s presumably a creation of Team Danganronpa, he has potential agency issues.

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#31956: Dec 9th 2023 at 10:15:01 AM

Is there any way to pothole Monokuma's character page in Junko's entry without forcing it in?

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#31958: Dec 9th 2023 at 11:47:17 AM

[tup] for Yula

[tup] for Carlyle

I remember Gary having a throwaway line about not taking his medication anymore. But even then already was an ass before that so [tup]

Abstain on Wardack and Zabune.

Edited by NTG on Dec 9th 2023 at 11:47:35 AM

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#31959: Dec 9th 2023 at 11:48:45 AM

BTW I watched the last Doctor Who special. PM for details.

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#31960: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:04:54 PM

Yes to DOOOOM!!, Yula, Cecile, and Gary.

What's the work?

Superman: The Harvests of Youth is a recent graphic novel following a young Clark Kent as he investigates a classmate's suicide, and how it relates to the rise of an online hate group in the town of Smallville.

Who is Mister Mxyzptlk?

Not a powerful Fifth Dimensional imp, but rather a gross middle-aged incel. Mxyzptlk runs online forums that rage against women and "pickup artists" (in other words, good-looking guys and/or normal people who treat women with respect), drawing in and emotionally isolating teens to encourage them to get angry at everyone and everything around them. One Smallville teen, getting drawn into this hate, failed to answer a riddle that would have allowed him into Mxyzptlk's private groupchat; feeling excluded from everyone and already suffering from depression, he proceeded to commit suicide at his school the next day.

Around this time, another teen and friend of Clark's by the name of Gil gets injured, ruining his dreams for a skateboarding career. With nothing better to do he goes online and gets drawn into Mxyzptlk's forums, and is subsequently manipulated into becoming more and more angry as his friends move on with their lives and get dates and so forth. Eventually, Mxyzptlk encourages Gil to do something drastic, stealing a couple of robots from the local LuthorCorp lab. He helps reprogram the robots, and the two set them to attack a town festival; Gil is talked down, while Mxyzptlk flees town in the chaos.

Mitigating factors?

No redeeming qualities, just an incel asshole. And this is a one-shot connected to no other continuities, as far as I can tell, so the attack on the festival—with lethal intent—makes him the most heinous character in the setting.

Edited by EmeraldEmperor on Dec 9th 2023 at 3:09:41 PM

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#31961: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:08:38 PM

[tup] to....Incel Mister Mxyzptlk(???)

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#31963: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:10:25 PM

[tup]a weird take on Mxyzptlk

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#31964: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:12:40 PM

[tup] Mxyzptlk

If I had a coin for every time Mxyzptlk was CM or human incel I would have 4 coins, which isn’t a lot but its weird both happened twice.

Edited by EmperorGeode on Dec 9th 2023 at 12:13:56 PM

PolarPhantom Since: Jun, 2012
#31965: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:13:41 PM

So. That's every film version of Doom that's a CM?

Hah. Yes there, and to

...[tup] Gary. Barely. Yes also to Mxyzptlk.

I've also seen Doctor Who as well.

Edited by PolarPhantom on Dec 9th 2023 at 12:14:41 PM

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#31966: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:20:13 PM

Yes to Gary if only because of the gym fire.

As for Mxyzptlk, what body count are we looking at for the robots? Right now it looks like he's mostly just a jerk that punches well below the DC baseline.

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#31967: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:23:00 PM

[tup] Mxyzptlk

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#31969: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:28:50 PM

It's stated that nearly everyone in Smallville is attending the festival; no one dies, but that's only because Clark is quick to intervene. Again, this is its own continuity and, like most graphic novels under the DC Ink brand, is primarily a mundane, Slice of Life story with some superhero elements mixed in until the climax. I think it's enough of its own thing to not have to worry about the heinous standard for the wider DCU.

Edited by EmeraldEmperor on Dec 9th 2023 at 3:28:56 PM

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#31971: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:44:19 PM

Enthusiastic [tup] a completely monstrous version of Mr. Mxyzptlk.

OK, I have read the King Magnifico discussion, which I did not partake in because I was and remain on the fence about that character (he seems a touch inconsistent: he can be taken a sympathetic character at first, then he becomes a maniacal monster, and some have claimed the stakes of "making people sad without their wishes" are ridiculously low but when you really look at it like in the EP, what he's doing comes off as absolutely horrible, his defeat is big and grand but his final fate gets played like a joke, etc).

But the point I'm getting at is this: with Magnifico qualfying on the grounds of him taking a whole inner part of his subjects from themselves and hoarding them away for his own benefit while leaving all of them less well off for it, acting with spite towards others and misleading, using and betraying them, and embracing a corruptive power that doesn't override his own moral agency but only makes him crazier and crueller after having been an evil, petty dick even beforehand....would this thread not take too unkindly to some deeper discussion of how exactly King Magnifico differs in the heinous standard compared to King Candy/Turbo?

I say this because I am getting some flashbacks to that guy's rap sheet and it's making me a bit confused. just bugs me

Edited by ANewMan on Dec 9th 2023 at 2:45:38 PM

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#31972: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:53:38 PM

Turbo was downvoted on the grounds that he needs Fridge Horror to pass the baseline. I'm not sure how, exactly, this is comparable.

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#31974: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:57:03 PM

I mean there is a huge difference. One suffers from Fridge Horror, the other goes out of their way to ensure their subjects suffer agonizing soul crushing enslavement.

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#31975: Dec 9th 2023 at 12:58:36 PM

I'll admit I'm someone who does think Turbo counts but I...don't really get the comparison with Magnifico. The 2 are completely different in end goals and crimes. It feels like apples and oranges to compare them.

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