Does Not Illustrate: Wardrobe Malfunction

The current pic doesn't illustrate the trope, just that it's about to happen.

Suggestions: Tried not to make it overlap with Clothing Damage

That '70s Show: [1]◊

Lucifer: [2]◊

TwoKinds: [3]◊

1.1 > 1.3 > 1.2 for now. 1.1 is the most clear. 1.3 works but I'm a little hazy about the outfit; is it supposed to be like a wrap that works as a tube top? 1.2 feels more like Accidental Pervert.

Edited by Willbyr on Feb 15th 2020 at 6:46:07 AM

Is pretty much how I feel too. 1.1 is very subtle, so that leaves me with slightly mixed feelings. But it's probably still the best.

1.3 is stronger on the "malfunction" but too weak on showing the "wardrobe".

And for me, the malfunction in 1.2 actually feels a little clearer than it does 1.1. But not to an extent where I feel like it'd justify that many extra panels.

Yeah, it's a torn sweater improvised into a Sarashi-like top.

Edit of 1 to better show the strap slipping: [1]◊

Edit of 1.2 with less panels: [2]◊, [3]◊

Squadron Supreme

Edited by eroock on Feb 16th 2020 at 1:47:16 AM

This one's good.

Edited by Synchronicity on Feb 15th 2020 at 2:50:42 PM

Ooh, yeah. to 5. That's really good.

to 5, I lay my heart my bare (and not because my shirt fell off...)

Edited by Jester_Punslinger on Feb 15th 2020 at 12:15:52 PM

5's the best so far.

5

5 is not bad, but I like 1.3 better.

5 is the best at illustrating and lampshading.

Another vote for 5.

5

That's plenty of consensus for 5. It's in and tagged; caption?

Old pic:

No caption discussion for a couple of days; locking up.