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Prematurely launched pages and pages that weren't fully fleshed out at the point of launching, are a big problem. Since these usually share several problems at once, this thread is aimed at re-running them through the TLP for fixing - the usual fix - or cutting them if they are too bad.

Problems this thread deals with include bad names, not enough/bad examples, unclear description, etc.

For the interested, here's a list of recently created pages. Launches

Note: Please do not request a mod to unlaunch drafts that don't have any issues besides lacking a launch notice/24hr launch notice. While 24hr launch notices are mandatory, there are a few exceptions to the rule. If you see a draft's sponsor launch a TLP without an announcement, it's best to remind them of our TLP Guidelines first. If they continue to repeatedly launch drafts without a launch notice, you can report them on Ask The Tropers or the TLP Community Issues thread.

Edited by MacronNotes on Jun 24th 2023 at 12:24:55 PM

Nocturna Since: May, 2011
#151: Feb 9th 2013 at 11:24:41 AM

Conceive and Kill is in TRS, which means it's out of this thread's jurisdiction. (Although, for the record, I don't support expanding Black Widow, because its current definition is what the term actually means.)

Re: Lightbulbs For A Face: This thread doesn't do renames, just "(back) to YKTTW" or "cut".

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#152: Feb 9th 2013 at 2:01:13 PM

Re Lightbulbs For A Face: Sending back to YKTTW works as well. From the looks of it, some had noted that it Needs A Better Title during YKTTW stage, but s/he was ignored. As was the mod request for getting rid of or fleshing out the Zero Context Examples.

edited 9th Feb '13 2:05:09 PM by MarqFJA

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#153: Feb 9th 2013 at 8:26:18 PM

Cerberus Logic seems to have been launched before the YKTTW discussion on it was even completely sure what it meant.

  • Strike one: nonsensical name with horrific case of Trope-Namer Syndrome.
  • Strike two: no examples on trope page.
  • Strike three: zero hats.

Nohbody "In distress", my ass. from Somewhere in Dixie Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#154: Feb 9th 2013 at 8:34:19 PM

It breaks the baseball analogy, but snowclones (in this case, of Cerebus Retcon and/or Cerebus Syndrome via misspelling of "Cerebus") are discouraged as well.

edited 9th Feb '13 8:35:31 PM by Nohbody

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#155: Feb 9th 2013 at 8:34:53 PM

Send author a PM about procedure here, then torch it.

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#156: Feb 9th 2013 at 8:51:57 PM

Cutlisted the page and PM'ed the OP, but I think the trope might be salvageable (near as I can tell, the intended meaning is "hero who only got involved because he was attacked personally" or something to that effect). Here's the YKTTW archive if you want to take a look.

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#158: Feb 9th 2013 at 11:34:16 PM

Nocturna, this thread does renames if they're done in YKTTW. When we send tropes back to YKTTW we are not required to keep the names they were mislaunched with.

Do not open new TRS to rename badly launched tropes. They're new enough that better names do not need their own thread. Please keep things here.

As such, I'm leaving Lightbulbs For A Face with you to handle.

edited 9th Feb '13 11:35:47 PM by shimaspawn

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#159: Feb 10th 2013 at 7:06:59 AM

Thank you for the clarification, shima. I apologize for opening that TRS unnecessarily, in any case.

edited 10th Feb '13 7:07:07 AM by MarqFJA

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#160: Feb 10th 2013 at 7:15:09 AM

I don't feel this needs an apology. TRS rules aren't codified anywhere for now, and the only attempt here hasn't had official approval yet.

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Nocturna Since: May, 2011
#161: Feb 10th 2013 at 7:22:59 PM

Ah, okay. It's just that the TRS thread was already opened, so I assumed that meant it had moved out of this thread's proper authority. I'll keep that in mind for the future, though. (Also, to me at least, "rename (without return to YKTTW)" and "back to YKTTW (where it might get a rename as part of the further work on it)" are separate concepts.)

Anyone have any suggestions for a new name for Lightbulbs For A Face? I recall seeing Lightbulb Eyes proposed in either the YKTTW or the TRS thread.

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#163: Feb 11th 2013 at 11:24:59 AM

@Nohbody: Actually, it's not a snowclone. It's a reference to an organization called Cerberus from Mass Effect... although the guy who made the YKTTW doesn't even know that.

... it was a hilariously bad YKTTW.

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#164: Feb 11th 2013 at 1:26:29 PM

Blue-Collar Warlock. Just cutlisted, by the way.

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#166: Feb 11th 2013 at 2:22:44 PM

I think that is a trope, but it needs more examples and a description that doesn't talk so much about "This isn't that trope".

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#168: Feb 11th 2013 at 2:24:57 PM

Another one: Ishida Mitsunari. If this guy is actually a common character in period works, then he belongs in Useful Notes.

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#169: Feb 11th 2013 at 2:26:19 PM

That one looks like Useful Notes material to me.

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Nohbody "In distress", my ass. from Somewhere in Dixie Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
"In distress", my ass.
#171: Feb 12th 2013 at 7:08:01 AM

Besides Cutlist fodder? tongue

Looks like a character sheet for someone who doesn't deserve one, at a glance. (Not familiar with Lovecraft's writings, so no comment on the accuracy of what's given.)

edited 12th Feb '13 7:10:49 AM by Nohbody

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#172: Feb 12th 2013 at 7:15:45 AM

Just to be sure, we are allowed to cutlist Lightbulbs For A Face for re-YKTTWing, right?

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#175: Feb 12th 2013 at 1:16:40 PM

Re: Lightbulb Face: Also kind of annoyed that the guy never bothered to add my Loom example to the text, or offer an explanation as to why it wouldn't count. :S

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