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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Last Unicorn finds and frees her fellows, but at a price. As a human, the Lady Amalthea falls in love with Prince Lír. Returned to her immortal form, she can no longer stay with him (or even feel love anymore), so she leaves both her love and her two human friends behind to return to her home in the lilac wood. Even sadder, however, because she has experienced love, aging, and regret -- experiences foreign to "pure" unicorns -- [[BlessedWithSuck she is no longer as innocent and aloof as others of her kind, separating her even from her own species]].]] And yet, as sad as these things may be, she thanks Schmendrick for them. It is a good thing [[spoiler:to have known love]]. Molly and Schmendrick also fall in love and can live a normal life together now Schmendrick's immortality has ended.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Last Unicorn finds and frees her fellows, but at a price. As a human, the Lady Amalthea falls in love with Prince Lír. Returned to her immortal form, she can no longer stay with him (or even feel love anymore), so she leaves both her love and her two human friends behind to return to her home in the lilac wood. Even sadder, however, because she has experienced love, aging, and regret -- experiences foreign to "pure" unicorns -- [[BlessedWithSuck she is no longer as innocent and aloof as others of her kind, separating her even from her own species]].]] And yet, as sad as these things may be, she thanks Schmendrick for them. It is a good thing [[spoiler:to have known love]]. Molly and Schmendrick also fall in love and can live a normal life together now that Schmendrick's immortality has ended.
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-->'''Nikos''': Therefore I grant that from this day forth you shall not grow old, but will travel the world round and round, eternally inefficient, until at last you come to yourself and know what you are. Don't thank me. I tremble at your doom.
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* CentralTheme: Innocence: [[IncorruptiblePurePureness its value]], [[AmbiguousInnocence its]] [[TrueNeutral various]] [[PureIsNotGood problems]], and [[ComingOfAgeStory its]] [[GrowingUpSucks inevitable]] [[BitterSweetEnding loss]].
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* CentralTheme: Innocence: [[IncorruptiblePurePureness its value]], [[AmbiguousInnocence its]] [[TrueNeutral various]] [[PureIsNotGood problems]], and [[ComingOfAgeStory its]] [[GrowingUpSucks inevitable]] [[BitterSweetEnding [[BittersweetEnding loss]].
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* {{Deconstruction}}: The story is considered one for fairy tales in general, by having the characters pointing out how they're aware that they live inside a fairy tale. The story also deconstructs common cliches of the genre: the princess is cold and aloof (and not even human); the middle-aged woman believes in unicorns the most of them all and is close friends with the princess instead of being her enemy; the heroic prince starts out as a lazy bum and has to make himself into a hero through effort and experience; the wicked witch merely wants to be remembered; the cruel tyrant just wants to find true happiness; and the good wizard is incompetent. Most of all, [[spoiler:the story doesn't end with the princess and the prince marrying and living happily ever after]].
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* {{Deconstruction}}: The story is considered one for fairy tales in general, by having the characters pointing out how they're aware that they live inside a fairy tale. The story also deconstructs common cliches of the genre: the princess is cold and aloof (and not even human); the middle-aged woman believes in unicorns the most of them all and is close friends with the princess princess, instead of being her enemy; the heroic prince starts out as a lazy bum and has to make ''make'' himself into a hero through effort and experience; the wicked witch merely wants to be remembered; the cruel tyrant just wants to find true happiness; and the good wizard is incompetent. Most of all, [[spoiler:the story doesn't end with the princess and the prince marrying and living happily ever after]].
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* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: King Haggard is a ''frightening'' [[ExaggeratedTrope Exaggeration]] of what might happen to someone who never found a purpose and never stopped looking for one anyway. Even the unicorns merely distract him from the emptiness inside.
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* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: King Haggard is a ''frightening'' [[ExaggeratedTrope Exaggeration]] {{exaggerat|edTrope}}ion of what might happen to someone who never found a purpose and yet never stopped looking for one anyway. Even the unicorns merely only distract him from the emptiness inside.
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* FeatheredFiend: The Harpy
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* FeatheredFiend: The Celaeno the Harpy
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** The prince and son of prophecy is an overweight layabout. By the time he grows into himself and fulfils his destiny, the beautiful maiden he's fought so hard to save... leaves him forever.
* GoodIsNotNice: Unicorns may be [[IncorruptiblePurePureness incorruptible]], but they're also ''wild.''
* GoodIsNotNice: Unicorns may be [[IncorruptiblePurePureness incorruptible]], but they're also ''wild.''
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** The prince and son of prophecy is an overweight layabout. By the time he grows into himself and fulfils fulfills his destiny, the beautiful maiden he's fought so hard to save... leaves him forever.
* GoodIsNotNice: Unicorns may be[[IncorruptiblePurePureness incorruptible]], {{incorruptible|PurePureness}}, but they're also ''wild.''
* GoodIsNotNice: Unicorns may be
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* RapunzelHair: Lady Amalthea.
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** This is also one of the reasons why the unicorn doesn't approach the princess -- the princess had made promises like "I will abandon my title and go begging if I can only see your shadow" that the unicorn's actual appearance would have bound her to.
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** This is also one of the reasons why the The unicorn doesn't claims that she didn't approach the princess for this reason -- the princess girl had made promises like "I will abandon my title and go begging if I can only see your shadow" that the unicorn's actual appearance would have bound her to.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: The story is considered one for fairy tales in general, by having the characters pointing out how they're aware that they live inside a fairy tale. The story also deconstructs common cliches of the genre: the princess is cold and aloof (and not even human), the old woman believes in unicorns the most of them all and is close friends with the princess instead of being her enemy, the Prince Charming is originally a lazy bum and has to work to actually turn into a desirable Charming figure, by changing his habits and parts of his personality; the old wicked witch simply wants to be remembered, and the wizard is quite incompetent in his magic. Biggest thing of all, [[spoiler:the story doesn't end with the princess and the prince marrying and living happily ever after]].
* DemBones: The guardian of the passageway that leads to the Red Bull.
* DemBones: The guardian of the passageway that leads to the Red Bull.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: The story is considered one for fairy tales in general, by having the characters pointing out how they're aware that they live inside a fairy tale. The story also deconstructs common cliches of the genre: the princess is cold and aloof (and not even human), human); the old middle-aged woman believes in unicorns the most of them all and is close friends with the princess instead of being her enemy, enemy; the Prince Charming is originally heroic prince starts out as a lazy bum and has to work to actually turn make himself into a desirable Charming figure, by changing his habits hero through effort and parts of his personality; experience; the old wicked witch simply merely wants to be remembered, remembered; the cruel tyrant just wants to find true happiness; and the good wizard is quite incompetent in his magic. Biggest thing incompetent. Most of all, [[spoiler:the story doesn't end with the princess and the prince marrying and living happily ever after]].
* DecapitationPresentation: When Lír is first trying to impress Amalthea, he brings her the heads and other trophies from monsters he slays.
* DemBones: The guardian of the passageway that leads to the RedBull.Bull is a skull. He explains that Haggard took his head off when he was trying out "evil despot" to see if that would make him happy.
* DecapitationPresentation: When Lír is first trying to impress Amalthea, he brings her the heads and other trophies from monsters he slays.
* DemBones: The guardian of the passageway that leads to the Red
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* EsotericHappyEnding: In-universe, the story of Nikos and the unicorn he saved by turning him human. The unicorn considers it a horrifying FateWorseThanDeath.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The unicorn warns Mommy Fortuna that the harpy will turn on her, and then there will be nothing left of her carnival but the sound of a spider weeping. The next chapter, that's exactly what happens.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The {{Foreshadowing}}
**The unicorn warns Mommy Fortuna that one day the harpy will turn on her, and then there will be nothing left of her carnival but the sound of a spider weeping. The next chapter, that's exactly what happens.
**The unicorn warns Mommy Fortuna that one day the harpy will turn on her, and then there will be nothing left of her carnival but the sound of a spider weeping. The next chapter, that's exactly what happens.
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* GenreDeconstruction: Poor Molly eloped with Cully because she imagined the romantic life of an outlaw, thanks to stories of Robin Hood and his Merry Men. The ensuing reality of {{barefoot poverty}} and constantly cooking and washing for scores of rowdy men out in the woods made her prematurely old and bitter.
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* GenreDeconstruction: Poor GenreDeconstruction
** The hopeless wizard, rather than a figure of fun and amusement, is so beaten down by constant failure that he can barely function. For extra ironic cruelty, he keeps taking jobs as an entertainer/clown.
** Molly eloped with Cully because she imagined the romantic life of an outlaw, thanks to stories of Robin Hood and his Merry Men. The ensuing reality of {{barefoot poverty}} and constantly cooking and washing for scores of rowdy men out in the woods made her prematurely old andbitter.bitter.
** The prince and son of prophecy is an overweight layabout. By the time he grows into himself and fulfils his destiny, the beautiful maiden he's fought so hard to save... leaves him forever.
** The hopeless wizard, rather than a figure of fun and amusement, is so beaten down by constant failure that he can barely function. For extra ironic cruelty, he keeps taking jobs as an entertainer/clown.
** Molly eloped with Cully because she imagined the romantic life of an outlaw, thanks to stories of Robin Hood and his Merry Men. The ensuing reality of {{barefoot poverty}} and constantly cooking and washing for scores of rowdy men out in the woods made her prematurely old and
** The prince and son of prophecy is an overweight layabout. By the time he grows into himself and fulfils his destiny, the beautiful maiden he's fought so hard to save... leaves him forever.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:That would be Lír. Twice ... again, alongside Malka in Two Hearts. Leaving The Unicorn to make the heartbreaking choice of who to save ...]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:That would be Lír. Twice ... again, alongside Malka in Two Hearts. Leaving The Hearts, leaving the Unicorn to make the heartbreaking choice of who to save ...]]
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** Result: The people of the town became terrified of one of their children taking the curse for granted and overthrowing Haggard, and chose not to have ''any.'' It's implied that they were abandoning their children to die of exposure; Drinn tells a story of how he came across a foundling in the town square in the dead of winter, surviving due to every cat in town curling up around it. He chased the cats away and went home. Not long afterwards, Haggard announced he had an heir; the child grew up to be Lír.
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** Result: The people of the town became terrified of one of their stop having children taking the curse for granted and overthrowing Haggard, and chose not to have ''any.'' It's (it's implied that they any babies born were abandoning their children left to die of exposure; Drinn tells a story of how he came across a foundling in the town square in the dead of winter, surviving due exposure). Naturally, one survives to every cat in town curling up around it. He chased the cats away and went home. Not long afterwards, be discovered by Haggard announced he had an heir; the child grew up to be -- Prince Lír.
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* NotSoDifferent: Discussed. The Lady Amalthea initially has no interest in Lír because she sees that he wants her just as the Red Bull did, and it frightens her. [[spoiler:After she is restored to a unicorn]], Prince Lír demands to know where she is and states that he must have her, and for a moment he looks just as Haggard did.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Discussed. The Lady Amalthea initially has no interest in Lír because she sees that he wants her just as the Red Bull did, and it frightens her. [[spoiler:After she is restored to a unicorn]], Prince Lír demands to know where she is and states that he must have her, and for a moment he looks just as Haggard did.
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* GenreDeconstruction: Poor Molly eloped with Cully because she imagined the romantic life of an outlaw, thanks to stories of Robin Hood and his Merry Men. The ensuing reality of {{barefoot poverty}} and constantly cooking and washing for scores of rowdy men out in the woods made her prematurely old and bitter.
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* RealityEnsues: Poor Molly eloped with Cully because she imagined the romantic life of an outlaw, thanks to stories of Robin Hood and his Merry Men. The ensuing reality of {{barefoot poverty}} and constantly cooking and washing for scores of rowdy men out in the woods made her prematurely old and bitter.
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* FamousLastWords: Mommy Fortuna's "Not alone! You never could have freed yourselves alone! I ''held'' you!" Mommy Fortuna is clearly akin to those people who keep venomous snakes as pets.
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** The unicorn's alias, "Amalthea," is a reference to the nanny goat who nursed Zeus. The original Amalthea had lost a horn, which became the Cornucopia, effectively making her a unicorn. WordOfGod has it that the author was not aware of the origins of the name when it came to him and suspects he read the myth as a child and got it stuck in his subconscious.
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** The unicorn's alias, "Amalthea," is a reference to the nanny goat who nursed Zeus. The original Amalthea had lost a horn, which became the Cornucopia, effectively making her a the ''first'' unicorn. WordOfGod has it that the author was not aware of the origins of the name when it came to him and suspects he read the myth as a child and got it stuck in his subconscious.
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** The Lady Amalthea's love for Lír gives her courage to [[spoiler: finally face the Red Bull]].
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* TheAgeless: Unicorns. They do not age, but they can be killed.
** Schmendrick, until he learns to master his magic.
** Schmendrick, until he learns to master his magic.
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* TheAgeless: Unicorns. They do not age, but TheAgeless:
** Unicorns are immortal, though they can be killed.
**Schmendrick, Schmendrick is cursed not to age until he learns to master masters his magic.
** Unicorns are immortal, though they can be killed.
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** InUniverse example. Schmendrick, in spite of his loathing of Mommy Fortuna, weeps after she is killed by the harpy.
** Lír is the only one to make even a single sound of mourning for [[spoiler:King Haggard's death]].
* AllTakeAndNoGive: King Haggard. Beautifully demonstrated when the unicorn is first turned into a woman, and both Haggard and Lír look into her eyes. Lír's eyes reflect the light radiating from her eyes, while Haggard's reflect none of it back, as if hoarding it away somewhere.
** Lír is the only one to make even a single sound of mourning for [[spoiler:King Haggard's death]].
* AllTakeAndNoGive: King Haggard. Beautifully demonstrated when the unicorn is first turned into a woman, and both Haggard and Lír look into her eyes. Lír's eyes reflect the light radiating from her eyes, while Haggard's reflect none of it back, as if hoarding it away somewhere.
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** InUniverse example. Schmendrick, in spite of his loathing of Schmendrick loathes Mommy Fortuna, but he weeps after she is killed by the harpy.
** Lír is the only one to make even a single sound of mourning for [[spoiler:KingHaggard's death]].
Haggard]].
* AllTakeAndNoGive: King Haggard. Beautifully demonstrated when the unicorn is first turned into a woman, and both Haggard and Lír look into her eyes. Lír's eyes reflect the light radiating from her eyes, while Haggard's reflect none ofit back, it, as if hoarding it away somewhere.
** Lír is the only one to make even a single sound of mourning for [[spoiler:King
* AllTakeAndNoGive: King Haggard. Beautifully demonstrated when the unicorn is first turned into a woman, and both Haggard and Lír look into her eyes. Lír's eyes reflect the light radiating from her eyes, while Haggard's reflect none of
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* TheLoad: Downplayed. After Haggard allows the trio to stay in his castle, Schmendrick and Molly are immediately put to work as Haggard's personal jester and scullery maid, while the Lady Amalthea is left free to roam the castle. However, the trio make no headway finding her people for ''months'' because Schmendrick and Molly are too busy working all hours to search the castle, while the Lady Amalthea can't be bothered to do anything but sulk about being human. [[spoiler:Once she forgets ever being a unicorn, Molly and Schmendrick then have to do all the work of finding her people for her, while dragging her unwilling self along.]]
* TheLoad: Downplayed. After Haggard allows the trio to stay in his castle, Schmendrick and Molly are immediately put to work as Haggard's personal jester and scullery maid, while the Lady Amalthea is left free to roam the castle. However, the trio make no headway finding her people for ''months'' because Schmendrick and Molly are too busy working all hours to search the castle, while the Lady Amalthea can't be bothered to do anything but sulk about being human. [[spoiler:Once she forgets ever being a unicorn, Molly and Schmendrick then have to do all the work of finding her people for her, while dragging her unwilling self along.]]
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* TheLoad: Downplayed. After Haggard allows the trio to stay in his castle, Schmendrick and Molly are immediately put to work as Haggard's personal jester and scullery maid, while the Lady Amalthea is left free to roam the castle. However, the trio make no headway finding her people for ''months'' because Schmendrick and Molly are too busy working all hours to search the castle, while the Lady Amalthea can't be bothered to do anything but sulk about being human. [[spoiler:Once she forgets ever being a unicorn, Molly and Schmendrick
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy: After the day has been saved, Lír decides to look for the Unicorn. Schmendrick tells him not to, and briefly Lír's rage turns him into Haggard Jr. He realizes before it's too late that it would be a fruitless, self-destructive search.
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy: After the day has been saved, Lír decides to look for go find the Unicorn. Schmendrick tells him not to, that he can't have her, and briefly Lír's Lír has a flash of jealous rage turns him into Haggard Jr. He realizes before it's too late that it would be a fruitless, self-destructive search.makes him look just like his father. Fortunately, he is wise enough to stand down.
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* Recap/TheMetamorphosesArachne: One of Mommy Fortuna's exhibits is a brown spider that she's enchanted to think is the actual Arachne.
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* Recap/TheMetamorphosesArachne: One of Mommy Fortuna's exhibits is a simple brown spider that she's enchanted to think is she displays as the actual Arachne.Arachne of mythology. It's a more effective illusion than most because the ''spider'' believes it too.
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* FamousLastWords: Mommy Fortuna's "Not alone! You never could have freed yourselves alone! I held you!" Mommy Fortuna is clearly akin to those people who keep venomous snakes as pets.
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* FamousLastWords: Mommy Fortuna's "Not alone! You never could have freed yourselves alone! I held ''held'' you!" Mommy Fortuna is clearly akin to those people who keep venomous snakes as pets.
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* LegacyCharacter: When Lír declares he will find the Unicorn at any cost at the end, it's noted he looks like Haggard for the first time. Schmendrick advises against it.
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* TurnOutLikeHisFather: When Lír declares he will find the Unicorn at any cost at the end, it's noted he looks like Haggard for the first time. Schmendrick advises against it.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Last Unicorn finds and frees her fellows, but at a price. As a human, the Lady Amalthea falls in love with Prince Lír. Returned to her immortal form, she can no longer stay with him (or even feel love anymore), so she leaves both her love and her two human friends behind to return to her home in the lilac wood. Even sadder, however, because she has experienced love, aging, and regret -- experiences foreign to "pure" unicorns -- [[BlessedWithSuck she is no longer as innocent and aloof as others of her kind, separating her even from her own species]].]] And yet, as sad as these things may be, she thanks Schmendrick for them. It is a good thing [[spoiler:to have known love]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Last Unicorn finds and frees her fellows, but at a price. As a human, the Lady Amalthea falls in love with Prince Lír. Returned to her immortal form, she can no longer stay with him (or even feel love anymore), so she leaves both her love and her two human friends behind to return to her home in the lilac wood. Even sadder, however, because she has experienced love, aging, and regret -- experiences foreign to "pure" unicorns -- [[BlessedWithSuck she is no longer as innocent and aloof as others of her kind, separating her even from her own species]].]] And yet, as sad as these things may be, she thanks Schmendrick for them. It is a good thing [[spoiler:to have known love]]. Molly and Schmendrick also fall in love and can live a normal life together now Schmendrick's immortality has ended.
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* PainfulRhyme: [[invoked]] Lír's love poetry to Amalthea uses this as a form of StylisticSuck (since his poetry is ''supposed'' to be terrible):
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* PainfulRhyme: [[invoked]] Lír's love poetry to Amalthea uses this as a form of StylisticSuck (since his poetry is ''supposed'' to be terrible):
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* WiseOldFolkFacade: At one point, the [[TheArchmage elderly and extremely competent wizard]] Mabruk is introduced. He briefly seems friendly enough, including talking to [[IneptMage Schmendrick]] about Schmendrick's old teacher and giving Schmendrick encouragement about Schmendrick's struggles with performing magic. The second Mabruk is crossed, however, his kind and grandfatherly facade drops hard and fast and he becomes a terrifying figure. The description of him in the text explicitly foreshadows this as soon as he is encountered.
-->''His beard and his brows were white, and the cast of his face was mild and wise, but his eyes were as hard as hailstones.''
-->''His beard and his brows were white, and the cast of his face was mild and wise, but his eyes were as hard as hailstones.''
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Schmendrick by changing the unicorn into a human ended up saving her from King Haggard and the Red Bull, because the Red Bull can't sense her while she's human. While she understandably freaks out on being put in a mortal body and feeling emotions magical creatures aren't meant to feel, he says it buys them time to find out where Haggard is keeping the unicorns and how to free them. Her love for Lir is enough to get her to [[spoiler:charge at the Red Bull in her true form and defeat him]].
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Schmendrick. He was [[CursedWithAwesome cursed to stop aging]] by Nikos, under the condition that he find out who and what he was. [[CaptainObvious It's implied that he's much older than he looks]]. WordOfGod says he's anywhere from 40 to 60.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Schmendrick. He was [[CursedWithAwesome cursed to stop aging]] by Nikos, under the condition that he find out who and what he was. [[CaptainObvious It's implied that he's much older than he looks]].looks. WordOfGod says he's anywhere from 40 to 60.
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[[WesternAnimation/TheLastUnicorn An animated film adaptation]], with a script by the author, was produced by Creator/RankinBassProductions in the 1980s.
Beginning in April 2010, IDW published a six-issue comic book adaptation.
Beginning in April 2010, IDW published a six-issue comic book adaptation.
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[[WesternAnimation/TheLastUnicorn An animated film adaptation]], with a script by the author, was produced by Creator/RankinBassProductions in the 1980s.
1980s. It's considered extremely faithful, though some events were trimmed out; mostly for time.
Beginning in April 2010, IDW published a six-issue comic bookadaptation.
adaptation that includes back in elements the movie had to trim out.
Beginning in April 2010, IDW published a six-issue comic book
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* GreenEyes: Schmendrick's green eyes are especially mentioned.
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* CatsAreMean: The same cat is a {{Trickster}}, and when Molly gets frustrated at him for his riddling answers, he protests that he cannot give more help than he already has.
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* CatsAreMean: The same cat is a {{Trickster}}, TheTrickster, and when Molly gets frustrated at him for his riddling answers, he protests that he cannot give more help than he already has.
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* OlderIsBetter: The unicorn speaks about the Red Bull this way.
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* OlderIsBetter: The unicorn speaks about the Red Bull this way.way after their first encounter.
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* OlderIsBetter: The unicorn speaks about the Red Bull this way. It's unclear whether StrongerWithAge applies or not.
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* OlderIsBetter: The unicorn speaks about the Red Bull this way. It's unclear whether StrongerWithAge applies or not.
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* OlderIsBetter: The unicorn speaks about the Red Bull those this way. It's unclear whether StrongerWithAge applies or not.
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* OlderIsBetter: The unicorn speaks about the Red Bull those way. It's unclear whether StrongerWithAge applies or not.
-->“He was too strong,” she said, “too strong. There was no end to his strength, and no beginning. He is older than I.”
-->“He was too strong,” she said, “too strong. There was no end to his strength, and no beginning. He is older than I.”
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* EmpathicEnvironment: Haggard's land returns to its former beauty when the unicorns are freed -- and Haggard's four men-at-arms become laughing young men.
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-->'''Skull:''' Oh, no. No, you don't. I'm disloyal, but I'm not ''that'' disloyal. Not ''that'' one. Unicorn! Unicorn! Haggard! Haggard! '''''UNICORN! UNICORN!''''' Haggard, where are you? There they go! Down to the Red Bull! The clock, Haggard! There they go! Unicorn! '''''UNICORN!'''''
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-->'''Ruck:''' The greatest weaver in the world -— her fate's the proof of it. She had the bad luck to defeat the goddess Athena in a weaving contest. Athena was a sore loser, and Arachne is now a spider, creating only for Mommy Fortuna's Midnight Carnival, by special arrangement. Warp of snow and woof of flame, and never any two the same. Arachne.
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* Recap/TheMetamorphosesArachne: One of Mommy Fortuna's exhibits is a brown spider that she's enchanted to think is the actual Arachne.
-->'''Ruck:''' The greatest weaver in the world -— her fate's the proof of it. She had the bad luck to defeat the goddess Athena in a weaving contest. Athena was a sore loser, and Arachne is now a spider, creating only for Mommy Fortuna's Midnight Carnival, by special arrangement. Warp of snow and woof of flame, and never any two the same. Arachne.
-->'''Ruck:''' The greatest weaver in the world -— her fate's the proof of it. She had the bad luck to defeat the goddess Athena in a weaving contest. Athena was a sore loser, and Arachne is now a spider, creating only for Mommy Fortuna's Midnight Carnival, by special arrangement. Warp of snow and woof of flame, and never any two the same. Arachne.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: When the unicorn blows off the princess that tries to summon her because she thinks her time is more valuable than a mortal's, Molly wistfully remarks that she wishes unicorn could turn into something mortal that can't wait. The next chapter, this is exactly what happens.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: When the unicorn blows off the princess that tries to summon her because she thinks her time is more valuable than a mortal's, Molly wistfully remarks that she wishes the unicorn could turn into something mortal that can't wait. mortal. The next chapter, this is exactly what happens.happens.
** This is also one of the reasons why the unicorn doesn't approach the princess -- the princess had made promises like "I will abandon my title and go begging if I can only see your shadow" that the unicorn's actual appearance would have bound her to.
** This is also one of the reasons why the unicorn doesn't approach the princess -- the princess had made promises like "I will abandon my title and go begging if I can only see your shadow" that the unicorn's actual appearance would have bound her to.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Last Unicorn finds and frees her fellows, but at a price. As a human, the Lady Amalthea falls in love with Prince Lír. Returned to her immortal form, she can no longer stay with him (or even feel love anymore), so she leaves both her love and her two human friends behind to return to her home in the lilac wood. Even sadder, however, because she has experienced love, aging, and regret--experiences foreign to "pure" unicorns--[[BlessedWithSuck she is no longer as innocent and aloof as others of her kind, separating her even from her own species]].]] And yet, as sad as these things may be, she thanks Schmendrick for them. It is a good thing [[spoiler:to have known love]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Last Unicorn finds and frees her fellows, but at a price. As a human, the Lady Amalthea falls in love with Prince Lír. Returned to her immortal form, she can no longer stay with him (or even feel love anymore), so she leaves both her love and her two human friends behind to return to her home in the lilac wood. Even sadder, however, because she has experienced love, aging, and regret--experiences regret -- experiences foreign to "pure" unicorns--[[BlessedWithSuck unicorns -- [[BlessedWithSuck she is no longer as innocent and aloof as others of her kind, separating her even from her own species]].]] And yet, as sad as these things may be, she thanks Schmendrick for them. It is a good thing [[spoiler:to have known love]].
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* DeathOfPersonality: [[spoiler:The 'Lady Amalthea' personality essentially dies when Schmendrick restores the unicorn to its rightful form.]]
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* DeathOfPersonality: [[spoiler:The 'Lady Amalthea' personality essentially Lady Amalthea dies when Schmendrick restores the unicorn to its her rightful form.shape.]]
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Haggard's biggest vice--and danger--is his selfishness and obsessiveness.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Haggard's biggest vice--and danger--is vice -- and danger -- is his selfishness and obsessiveness.
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* LastOfHerKind: [[spoiler:But not exactly. It turns out that there ''are'' more unicorns--but they have all been imprisoned in the sea by King Haggard, with the help of the Red Bull.]]
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* LastOfHerKind: [[spoiler:But not exactly. It turns out that there ''are'' more unicorns--but unicorns -- but they have all been imprisoned in the sea by King Haggard, with the help of the Red Bull.]]
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* MayflyDecemberRomance: Prince Lír and the unicorn... sort of. As Lady Amalthea, she's as human and mortal as he is, and when she's turned back into the immortal unicorn she can no longer feel love for him, but he still loves her all the same.
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* MayflyDecemberRomance: Prince Lír and the unicorn... sort of. As Lady Amalthea, she's as human and mortal as he is, and when she's turned back into the immortal unicorn she can no longer feel love for can't be with him, but he still loves her all the same.
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** Lír isn't just a PunctuationShaker - anyone versed in Irish mythology would recognise the name as that of the Irish ''sea'' god, most prominent in ''Literature/TheChildrenOfLir'', in which his three children are turned into swans and bound to three lakes, for three hundred years each per lake.
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** Lír isn't just a PunctuationShaker - -- anyone versed in Irish mythology would recognise the name as that of the Irish ''sea'' god, most prominent in ''Literature/TheChildrenOfLir'', in which his three children are turned into swans and bound to three lakes, for three hundred years each per lake.
* MixAndMatchCritters: The unicorn is a composite creature, with legs like a deer, feet like a goat, a lion's tail, and a long twisting horn. She's extraordinarily beautiful, but when fear of the Red Bull robs her of her grace and her magical glimmer, even Molly has to admit she looks "absurd."
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* WildMagic: Schmendrick does not so much control the magic he uses, as acts as a conduit for it to do what is ''necessary'', which is not the same as doing what he ''wants''.
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* WildMagic: Schmendrick does not so much control the magic he uses, as acts as a conduit for it to do what is ''necessary'', ''needed'', which is not the same as doing what he ''wants''.
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