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* BattleTrophy: Janeway has the shipbuilder's plaque of Chakotay's former command, the rocketship ''Valjean'', mounted in her wardroom. When he suggests she should take it down [[EnemyMine in light of their current alliance]], she refuses."I'm quite proud of that trophy. The captain of that rocketship [[WorthyOpponent gave us a good deal of trouble]], as I recall."
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* WorthyOpponent: In conversation with Chakotay in her wardroom, Janeway acknowledges he was one of these.
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** Nee'Lix and his people are smaller (three or four feet tall) and more rodent-like, with prehensile tails.
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* TheFederation: The Tri-World Federation is an attempt to put Earth, Venus and Mars on an equal political basis, backed by the military power of Spacefleet, to counteract the threat of an overpopulated and expansionist Earth.
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* SolarSystemNeighbors: Earth, Venus and Mars are joined in the [[TheFederation Tri-World Federation]], designed to give the latter two worlds equal political and military status with humanity so they won't be overwhelmed by an overpopulated and expansionist Earth. Venerians are a primitive matriarchal ProudWarriorRace, while Martians are the equivalent of Vulcans (with some Creator/RayBradbury influence). There are also the (unseen) Jovians who [[ExtremophileLifeforms live in the upper atmosphere of Jupiter]].
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* FantasticShipPrefix: ''UNRS Voyager''.
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* FantasticShipPrefix: ''UNRS Voyager''.Voyager'' (for United Nations Rocket Ship).
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** The PrimeDirective is a ban on miscegenation (albeit referring to BoldlyComing rather than interracial romance).
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* CollapsibleHelmet: Discussed -- it's mentioned that [[AwesomeButImpractical practical experience]] has caused the {{space marine}}s to replace their fault-prone collapsible helmet with a sturdy AsteroidMiner helmet made of armorglass and [[TonkaTough boron carbide]].
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* CollapsibleHelmet: Discussed -- it's mentioned that [[AwesomeButImpractical practical experience]] has caused the {{space marine}}s to replace their fault-prone collapsible helmet with a sturdy AsteroidMiner helmet made of armorglass and [[TonkaTough [[MadeOfIndestructium boron carbide]].
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* HotTopicPhlebotinum: As befits the 1950's; Tech Lieutenant [=TuV'k=] is the ship's Tactical Psionics Officer, and Tom Paris brags about the transistors used on their [[MasterComputer Computer Deck]].
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* CallARabbitASmeerp: Justified. What we would call "computers" are "electronic minds", but this is because this version of ''Voyager'' is so low-tech that "computer" retains its original meaning, i.e. a person who does mathematical computation.
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* YourMom: Nee'Lix attempts this against [[spoiler: the Caretaker]], only to be informed, "I was born in a cloning tank so I have no maternal ancestor."
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* YourMom: Nee'Lix attempts this against [[spoiler: the Caretaker]], Caretaker, only to be informed, "I was born in a cloning tank so I have no maternal ancestor."
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* BizarreAlienBiology: As a half-Venerian, B'Elanna has three lungs and retractable "arboreal claws" in the palms of her hands.
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* HumanoidAliens: The work takes several species that were RubberForeheadAliens on the show and turns them into these.
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** The Hirogen are seven feet tall and have claws, snouts, and long tails. They are explicitly described as looking like dinosaurs.
** The Caretaker, as mentioned above, is basically a [[TheGreys Grey]].
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** The Hirogen are seven feet tall and have claws, snouts, and long tails. They are explicitly described as looking like dinosaurs.
** The Caretaker, as mentioned above, is basically a [[TheGreys Grey]].
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* NationalGeographicNudity: When B'Elanna is assigned a sleeping pod, she finds a pin-up left by the previous occupant: an actual ''National Geographic'' pic of a Venerian "Amazon warrior". She is not amused.
-->[The] female Venerian [was] bedecked in jewels, a sword harness, and not much else.
-->[The] female Venerian [was] bedecked in jewels, a sword harness, and not much else.
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--->''To Boldly Go Where No Man Has Gone Before.'' It had been the motto of Spacefleet since its foundation in 1966, when the only space exploration Humanity had to boast of was the Big Wheel space station, a struggling colony on Luna and the Martian fiasco.
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* WorthlessYellowRocks: On Earth, the artificial production of diamonds is so common that diamonds are no longer regarded as precious gems, and are used solely for industrial purposes. But on Venus, the native Venerians still regarded diamonds as rare and valuable when the first Terran colonizers arrived, so the Terrans cut some ''very'' lopsided deals with the locals.
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* AndIMustScream: The Caretaker keeps his human specimen in a form of suspended animation that leaves the subject entirely conscious, but cuts off all sensory input. He casually notes that she probably went insane decades ago.
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* IWantMyJetpack: A 1954 sci-fi pulp set in the far future of the year 2020. Humanity has {{flying car}}s; [[MegaCity megacities]]; colonies on Venus, Mars and the Asteroid Belt; and [[RetroRocket torchships]] powered by AntiMatter.
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* {{Callback}}: The decompression-shelter balloons, first seen in Chapter II, reappear in Chapter XII, [[spoiler: when Janeway is rescued.]]
* ChekhovsGun: The decompression-shelter balloons, first seen in Chapter II, reappear in Chapter XII, [[spoiler: when Janeway is rescued.]]
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*** All that said, the series' treatment of women would still be considered FairForItsDay. Fittingly, as it's meant to be written by "[[MoustacheDePlume K.C. Hunter]]", Major Kira's counterpart from Benny Russel's universe.
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** When Nee'Lix is pointing out all the different alien species aboard the Array, he mentions that [[Literature/MissionOfGravity the ones that look like centipedes come from a fast-spinning, high-gravity world]]. (For bonus points, their home planet is called "Kelemane's World"; "Kelemane" seems to be a play on "[[Creator/HalClement Clement]]".)
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...or, if we can break {{Kayfabe}} for a minute here, it's a fanfic that takes the basic plot of the opening episodes of ''Series/StarTrekVoyager'' and re-tells it in the style of a 1950’s sci-fi short story.
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The complete story is posted [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26418445/chapters/64360138 here ]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13695627/1/Rocketship-Voyager here.]]
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The complete story is posted [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26418445/chapters/64360138 here ]] here]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13695627/1/Rocketship-Voyager here.]]
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The complete story is posted [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26418445/chapters/64360138 here ]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13695627/1/Rocketship-Voyager here]].
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* SpacePirates: The Briori hire the K'Zon and Hirogen as mercenaries to kidnap slaves and steal technology, using the galaxy-spanning PortalNetwork they control.
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The complete story is posted [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26418445/chapters/64360138 here ]] and on [[https://www.trekbbs.com/threads/rocketship-voyager.304808/ TrekBBS]].
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fanfiction.net/s/13695627/1/Rocketship-Voyager here]].
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* KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter: The only RayGun shown is a cumbersome crew-served weapon, with the SpaceMarines using recoilless weapons firing explosive bullets.
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