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* HasTwoMommies: Reinforce Zwei and Vita. At the moment. [[spoiler:The Vivid Arc adds Hayate's new daughter Kyouka.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6550856/1/Blood_That_Flows Blood That Flows]]'' is a ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] {{Crossover}} where Nanoha is the daughter of ''{{LightNovel/Slayers}}'' protagonist Lina Inverse, who was dimensionally and temporally displaced after her possession by the Lord of Nightmares during the battle against Hellmaster. Written by Nanya of the Fanfic/RelationshipsSeries fame, who has described the two as the [[PersonOfMassDestruction queens]] [[StuffBlowingUp of]] [[FantasticNuke magical]] [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill overkill]], the story goes [[TheStationsOfTheCanon through the first two season of Nanoha]] before going on its own tangent, including incorporating plotlines and other characters from ''Slayers''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6550856/1/Blood_That_Flows Blood That Flows]]'' is a ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] {{Crossover}} where Nanoha is the daughter of ''{{LightNovel/Slayers}}'' ''Literature/{{Slayers}}'' protagonist Lina Inverse, who was dimensionally and temporally displaced after her possession by the Lord of Nightmares during the battle against Hellmaster. Written by Nanya of the Fanfic/RelationshipsSeries fame, who has described the two as the [[PersonOfMassDestruction queens]] [[StuffBlowingUp of]] [[FantasticNuke magical]] [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill overkill]], the story goes [[TheStationsOfTheCanon through the first two season of Nanoha]] before going on its own tangent, including incorporating plotlines and other characters from ''Slayers''.
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* Try: Based on the ''LightNovel/{{Slayers}} TRY'' season, with added twists and additional Slayers-verse characters drawn from the light novels and the ''Knight of Aqualord'' manga.
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* Try: Based on the ''LightNovel/{{Slayers}} ''Literature/{{Slayers}} TRY'' season, with added twists and additional Slayers-verse characters drawn from the light novels and the ''Knight of Aqualord'' manga.
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** Luna musing on how the Staff of Bones, a weapon made from Shabranigdo's own body, might be able to withstand the Blast Blade. That's what happens in the final Slayers LightNovel, when Gourry, armed with the Blast Blade, fights Luke-Shabrangido who is wielding the Staff of Bones.
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** Luna musing on how the Staff of Bones, a weapon made from Shabranigdo's own body, might be able to withstand the Blast Blade. That's what happens in the final Slayers LightNovel, ''Slayers'' {{Light Novel|s}}, when Gourry, armed with the Blast Blade, fights Luke-Shabrangido who is wielding the Staff of Bones.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: A number of characters come across far less dangerous than they really are upon first glance, notable is Lina (who's a lot more mellow than she was in [[{{LightNovel/Slayers}} canon]]), Nanoha (who's seen being mischievous quite often), Reinforce Zwei (who's so incredibly cute, bubbly and energetic that you want to take her home), and Caro (who's so cute that people say is too cute sometimes.)
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: A number of characters come across far less dangerous than they really are upon first glance, notable is Lina (who's a lot more mellow than she was in [[{{LightNovel/Slayers}} [[Literature/{{Slayers}} canon]]), Nanoha (who's seen being mischievous quite often), Reinforce Zwei (who's so incredibly cute, bubbly and energetic that you want to take her home), and Caro (who's so cute that people say is too cute sometimes.)
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* PatchworkFic: The fourth arc ''New'' and then the fifth arc, ''Try'' ([[WordOfGod the author wanted to make the arc be named Try but was lazy when posting to the message boards]]), involves blending the plot of the Slayers ''TRY'' season with elements, characters, and plots of the ''Knights of the Aqualord'' manga and the second half of the original Slayers LightNovel series. The result, a Thirty Xellos... err... [[GambitPileup Xanatos Pileup]]. This was due to the author unable [[TakeAThirdOption to decide which storyline to go with.]]
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* PatchworkFic: The fourth arc ''New'' and then the fifth arc, ''Try'' ([[WordOfGod the author wanted to make the arc be named Try but was lazy when posting to the message boards]]), involves blending the plot of the Slayers ''TRY'' season with elements, characters, and plots of the ''Knights of the Aqualord'' manga and the second half of the original Slayers LightNovel series.''Slayers'' LightNovels. The result, a Thirty Xellos... err... [[GambitPileup Xanatos Pileup]]. This was due to the author unable [[TakeAThirdOption to decide which storyline to go with.]]
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** A rather unusual one that doubles as ActorAllusion, but Arisa Bannings, when using her Holy power, has blue wings and a sword made of blue fire, allowing her to fly and fight against Mazoku. If you colored her hair red and turned her flames red, she'd be [[LightNovel/ShakuganNoShana Shana]].
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** A rather unusual one that doubles as ActorAllusion, but Arisa Bannings, when using her Holy power, has blue wings and a sword made of blue fire, allowing her to fly and fight against Mazoku. If you colored her hair red and turned her flames red, she'd be [[LightNovel/ShakuganNoShana [[Literature/ShakuganNoShana Shana]].
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** Reinforce wants to see Erio, Caro, and Rein do the [[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya Hare Hare Yukai]]
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** Reinforce wants to see Erio, Caro, and Rein do the [[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya [[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya Hare Hare Yukai]]
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* {{Stripperiffic}}: In her first appearance, the human form of Earth Lord Rangort is described as a dark skinned, light haired, [[GagBoobs top heavy]] female wearing a bikini-like outfit.
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* {{Stripperiffic}}: In her first appearance, the human form of Earth Lord Rangort is described as a dark skinned, light haired, [[GagBoobs top heavy]] heavy female wearing a bikini-like outfit.
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* {{Stripperiffic}}: In her first appearance, the human form of Earth Lord Rangort is described as a [[DarkSkinnedBlond dark skinned, light haired]], [[GagBoobs top heavy]] female wearing a bikini-like outfit.
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* {{Stripperiffic}}: In her first appearance, the human form of Earth Lord Rangort is described as a [[DarkSkinnedBlond dark skinned, light haired]], haired, [[GagBoobs top heavy]] female wearing a bikini-like outfit.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: A number of characters come across far less dangerous than they really are upon first glance, notable is Lina (who's a lot more mellow than she was in [[{{LightNovel/Slayers}} canon]]), Nanoha (who's seen being mischievous quite often), Reinforce Zwei (who's so incredibly cute, bubbly and energetic that you want to take her home), and Caro (who's so cute that people say is [[TastesLikeDiabetes too cute sometimes.]])
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: A number of characters come across far less dangerous than they really are upon first glance, notable is Lina (who's a lot more mellow than she was in [[{{LightNovel/Slayers}} canon]]), Nanoha (who's seen being mischievous quite often), Reinforce Zwei (who's so incredibly cute, bubbly and energetic that you want to take her home), and Caro (who's so cute that people say is [[TastesLikeDiabetes is too cute sometimes.]]))
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* DoubleEntendre: Taken UpToEleven with [[spoiler:Subaru and Ginga]] vs. [[spoiler:their opponents]] in the [=StrikerS=] arc.
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* DoubleEntendre: Taken UpToEleven up to eleven with [[spoiler:Subaru and Ginga]] vs. [[spoiler:their opponents]] in the [=StrikerS=] arc.
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* WorfBarrage: While present in both series, the fanfic takes it UpToEleven when Dark Star survives an Arc-En-Ciel blast.
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* WorfBarrage: While present in both series, the fanfic takes it UpToEleven up to eleven when Dark Star survives an Arc-En-Ciel blast.
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* KnifeNut: [[spoiler:Ixpellia]]
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: So much so that by the time that the ''Try'' arc gets done, most of all the canon Slayers characters were used, on top of the canon Nanoha cast from season 1.
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* NomDeMom: Instead of taking the last name Takamachi, Fate decides to take Lina's maiden name [[AdoptiveNameChange when being adopted]].
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* TheMaidenNameDebate: Instead of taking the last name Takamachi, Fate decides to take Lina's maiden name when being adopted.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Reinforce]] suffers this at the hands of [[spoiler:Levi]].
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* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Reinforce]] AFateWorseThanDeath: From [[spoiler:Signum's point of view, Cinque may have inflicted this on her if she's unable to fight again for the rest of her life due to her injuries]].
** [[spoiler:Reinforce suffersthis at it as well, as Levi violates her body, mind-wipes her, and sics her on Hayate. The ensuing fight ends with the hands of [[spoiler:Levi]].nearly-dead soulless killing machine that was once Reinforce being permanently Unison-fused with Hayate, essentially ceasing to exist]].
** [[spoiler:Reinforce suffers
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* NotSoDifferent: While standing near one of the sites of the Holocaust death camps, Xellos remarks to Sirius that Mazoku and Shinzoku are both reliant on humans for survival.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: While standing near one of the sites of the Holocaust death camps, Xellos remarks to Sirius that Mazoku and Shinzoku are both reliant on humans for survival.
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** Several of the QuirkyMiniBossSquad are expies of others. Notable examples include [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight "Saber" and "Archer"]], [[Manga/RosarioToVampire "Mokka"]], and [[VideoGame/WildArms1 "Belselk"]]/[[VideoGame/WildArms1 "Berserk"]]
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** Several of the QuirkyMiniBossSquad are expies of others. Notable examples include [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight "Saber" and "Archer"]], [[Manga/RosarioToVampire [[Manga/RosarioPlusVampire "Mokka"]], and [[VideoGame/WildArms1 "Belselk"]]/[[VideoGame/WildArms1 "Berserk"]]
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* AliensMadeThemDoIt: Xellos and [[MsFanservice Rangort]], after being in a [[IntoxicationEnsues haze]] after eating chocolate filled with who knows what... for at least a month.
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** Mazoku-Alicia's disguise is based on [[EvilTwin Material-L]] from ''[[VideoGame/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAsPortable TheBattleOfAces ]]''. She later adopts Material-L's new name Levi found in the game's sequel ''The Gears of Destiny''.
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** Mazoku-Alicia's disguise is based on [[EvilTwin Material-L]] from ''[[VideoGame/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAsPortable TheBattleOfAces ]]''.The Battle of Aces]]''. She later adopts Material-L's new name Levi found in the game's sequel ''The Gears of Destiny''.
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After a long bout of silence, the story was officially declared a DeadFic on March 5, 2021.
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* Try: Based on the [[{{LightNovel/Slayers}} Slayers TRY season]], with added twists and additional Slayers-verse characters drawn from the light novels and the ''Knight of Aqualord'' manga.
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* Try: Based on the [[{{LightNovel/Slayers}} Slayers TRY season]], ''LightNovel/{{Slayers}} TRY'' season, with added twists and additional Slayers-verse characters drawn from the light novels and the ''Knight of Aqualord'' manga.
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* Red: Yuuno, Nanoha, Fate and Miyuki return to Earth from training on Mid-Childa. [[spoiler:And later, Shabranigdo's return.]]
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* [=ViVid:=] Based on the [[Manga/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaViVid ViVid manga]], dealing with the schoollife of Vivio, Arashi and Ixpelia. [[spoiler:While in the meantime prepare for the [[Manga/MagicalRecordLyricalNanohaForce Force]] arc.]]
* [[spoiler:Revolution: An arc starring Nove and the [=ViVid=] kids, while adapting elements of the Slayers season of the same name.]]
* [[spoiler:Fallout: An arc the deals with the aftermath of the Revolution arc.]]
* [[spoiler:Revolution: An arc starring Nove and the [=ViVid=] kids, while adapting elements of the Slayers season of the same name.]]
* [[spoiler:Fallout: An arc the deals with the aftermath of the Revolution arc.]]
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* [=ViVid:=] Based on the [[Manga/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaViVid ViVid manga]], dealing with the schoollife of Vivio, Arashi and Ixpelia. [[spoiler:While While in the meantime prepare for the [[Manga/MagicalRecordLyricalNanohaForce Force]] arc.]]
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* NeverLiveItDown: InUniverse application. When Sirius, one of the Shinzoku under Vorfeed, is beamed aboard the Arthra, he asks if the on board chef routinely blows up the kitchen while cooking, remembering Vorfeed's time as a [[Anime/LostUniverse spaceship]] included such incidents.
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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: When Sirius, one of the Shinzoku under Vorfeed, is beamed aboard the Arthra, he asks if the on board chef routinely blows up the kitchen while cooking, remembering Vorfeed's time as a [[Anime/LostUniverse spaceship]] included such incidents.
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* DealWithTheDevil: The Golden Dragon elder under the Fire Dragon Lord, along with his loyal followers, make one with Dynast Grausherra in hopes of gaining the power to kill the last Ancient Dragon. He's a plain {{Hypocrite}}, as he accused Lina of doing the same earlier with the Lord of Nightmares.
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** The Golden Dragon elder under the Fire Dragon Lord, along with his loyal followers, make one with Dynast Grausherra in hopes of gaining the power to kill the last Ancient Dragon. He's a plain {{Hypocrite}}, as he accused Lina of doing the same earlier with the Lord of Nightmares.
** The Golden Dragon elder under the Fire Dragon Lord, along with his loyal followers, make one with Dynast Grausherra in hopes of gaining the power to kill the last Ancient Dragon. He's a plain {{Hypocrite}}, as he accused Lina of doing the same earlier with the Lord of Nightmares.
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* BatmanGambit: Regius and Quint pull off a beautiful one near the end of [=StrikerS=]: Knowing that [[spoiler:the Brains]] have too many friends in high places, the two instead arrange for [[spoiler:Due]] to "escape" Riot Force custody. When Vita and Leti find her they also find them, and the Leti orders Vita to kill them. As it turned out, they're abominations to the natural order, and Bureau law mandates that such creatures are to be exterminated on sight.
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* BatmanGambit: Regius and Quint pull off a beautiful one near the end of [=StrikerS=]: Knowing that [[spoiler:the Brains]] have too many friends in high places, the two instead arrange for [[spoiler:Due]] to "escape" Riot Force custody. When Vita and Leti find her they also find them, and the Leti orders Vita to kill them. As it turned turns out, they're abominations to the natural order, and Bureau law mandates that such creatures are to be exterminated on sight.
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** Much earlier is [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Death Bringer Garoth]] [[spoiler:and his student Levi, a.k.a. Alicia Testarossa.]]
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** Much earlier is [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Death Bringer Garoth]] [[spoiler:and his student priest Levi, a.k.a. Alicia Testarossa.]]
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* ArcWelding: Original villain Death Bringer Garoth didn't just begin to play his hand during the events of A's. He was also responsible for the catastrophic failure of Precia's experiment, the corruption of the Book of Darkness[[spoiler:, killed [[WorldsStrongestMan Saint Kaiser Olivie]] horribly, {{Mind Rape}}d Nanoha, and corrupted Alicia Testarossa into Levi to continue his legacy.]]
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* ArcWelding: Original villain Death Bringer Garoth didn't just begin to play his hand during the events of A's. He was also responsible for the catastrophic failure of Precia's experiment, the corruption of the Book of Darkness[[spoiler:, killed [[WorldsStrongestMan Saint Kaiser Olivie]] horribly, horribly (which gave Vivio a greater trauma when she is introduced), {{Mind Rape}}d Nanoha, and corrupted Alicia Testarossa into Levi to continue his legacy.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Yunno having learned Shamanistic magic and Resurrection, as well as nearly killing Riksfalto with a modified Ra Tilt, earning him an audience with Vrabazard. Since then, those in the know are already calling him the next Great Sage.
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* TookALevelInBadass: TookALevelInBadass:
** Yunno having learned Shamanistic magic and Resurrection, as well as nearly killing Riksfalto with a modified Ra Tilt, earning him an audience with Vrabazard. Since then, those in the know are already calling him the next Great Sage.
** Yunno having learned Shamanistic magic and Resurrection, as well as nearly killing Riksfalto with a modified Ra Tilt, earning him an audience with Vrabazard. Since then, those in the know are already calling him the next Great Sage.
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** Much earlier is [[NamesToRunAwayFastFrom Death Bringer Garoth]] [[spoiler:and his student Levi, a.k.a. Alicia Testarossa.]]
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** Much earlier is [[NamesToRunAwayFastFrom Death Bringer Garoth]] [[spoiler:and his student Levi, a.k.a. Alicia Testarossa.]]
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* TemptingFate: [[IThoughtItMeant No, not Fate T. Inverse.]] After a meal at an all-you-can-eat buffet, Yunno hoped they can relax for the day and have nothing crazy like an airport fire happen. Hayate bet her current pair of panties against that. [[TheStationsOfTheCanon Guess what happened.]]
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* TemptingFate: [[IThoughtItMeant [[JustForFun/IThoughtItMeant No, not Fate T. Inverse.]] After a meal at an all-you-can-eat buffet, Yunno hoped they can relax for the day and have nothing crazy like an airport fire happen. Hayate bet her current pair of panties against that. [[TheStationsOfTheCanon Guess what happened.]]
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-->[[spoiler:'''Jail:''' I just wish I knew why you were trying to stop us from perfecting our ability to fight against Mazoku.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Subaru:'''...What are you talking about? The Riot Force that I work for was designed to train mages to be able to fight against Mazoku.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Subaru:'''...What are you talking about? The Riot Force that I work for was designed to train mages to be able to fight against Mazoku.]]
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-->[[spoiler:'''Jail:''' I just wish I knew why you were trying to stop us from perfecting our ability [[WellIntentionedExtremist to fight against Mazoku.Mazoku]].]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Subaru:'''...What are you talking about? The Riot Force that I work for was designed to train mages to be able [[DramaticIrony to fight againstMazoku.Mazoku]].]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Subaru:'''...What are you talking about? The Riot Force that I work for was designed to train mages to be able [[DramaticIrony to fight against
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* UnhandThemVillain: [[spoiler: When a Mazoku holds Rio hostage, Nove demands that he let her go. He does, and then blasts her [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice through the torso]] in mid-air. And this is followed by a another magical blast that sends her over a cliff, followed by [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill several other lethal magic blasts after her as she fell]].]]
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* UnhandThemVillain: [[spoiler: When a Mazoku holds Rio hostage, Nove demands that he let her go. He does, and then blasts her [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice through the torso]] in mid-air. And this is followed by a another magical blast that sends her over a cliff, followed by [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill several other lethal magic blasts after her as she fell]]. [[NeverFoundTheBody Surprisingly]], Rio [[{{Determinator}} survives the experience]] and later pulls off a BigDamnHeroes moment near the end of the arc.]]
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* ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime: [[spoiler:Yunno catches Caro and Erio in bed together.]]
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* ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime: [[spoiler:Yunno [[spoiler:Type 1: Yunno catches Caro and Erio in bed together.]]