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* SeeminglyWholesomeFiftiesGirl: Somewhere between this and NaughtyNuns and maybe a HardDrinkingPartyGirl.
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* KissingUnderTheInfluence: He has troubles remembering his first sexual intercourse and struggles to judge if it's been the "drunken number in the woods or the drunken number on the hey in the barn", only knowing that both occassion happened with the same girl whose name he forgot.
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* KissingUnderTheInfluence: He has troubles remembering his first sexual intercourse and struggles to judge if it's been the "drunken number in the woods or the drunken number on the hey in the barn", only knowing that both occassion occasion happened with the same girl whose name he forgot.
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* NotGoodWithPeople: [[NoPunIntended "Nazi"]] has never been a people's person, even per WordOfGod.
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* MatzoFever: Björn says that no catwalk were fit to hold a candle to an ordinary Judean street.
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* BareYourMidriff: This actually matches WordOfGod from the [[Literature/ChaosTimeline mothership]], but here it gets conversed to show that [[PlanetOfHats all Judean women dress like 20-somethings]].
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* JerkassWoobie: There wasn't a place for people like him anymore after the [[VelvetRevolution Streich]] got his SecretPolice disbanded. He first became a cab driver, then turned into a drunkard and essentially lost his licence and lived on the dole ever since. Essentially being a JadedWashout, his daughter is actually running him and, to top it all, dates this Björn guy from the "old motherland" that [[RantInducingSlight left serious issues to him]].
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* JerkassWoobie: There wasn't a place for people like him anymore after the [[VelvetRevolution Streich]] got his SecretPolice disbanded. He first became a cab driver, then turned into a drunkard and essentially lost his licence and lived on the dole ever since. Essentially being a JadedWashout, his daughter is actually running him and, to top it all, dates this Björn guy from the "old motherland" that [[RantInducingSlight left serious issues to him]].him.
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* ShoutOut: Rosi is a shout-out to the song "Skandal im Sperrbezirk" by the SpiderMurphyGang. On a further note, Germans also think of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rosemarie_Nitribitt another Rosemarie]] when they hear that name. But no, the fanfic's characther [[FelonyMisdemeanor never sold her body or did anything especially naughty for that matter]].
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* ShoutOut: Rosi is a shout-out to the song "Skandal im Sperrbezirk" by the SpiderMurphyGang. On a further note, Germans also think of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rosemarie_Nitribitt another Rosemarie]] when they hear that name. But no, the fanfic's characther character [[FelonyMisdemeanor never sold her body or did anything especially naughty for that matter]].
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: During a flashblack to four years before the Streich, you see a fatalist ten-year-old Björn in his classroom whose tutor is worried he might be prone to suicide. Oh, and he became to be a [[JailBait real toyboy]] soon after that.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: During a flashblack to four years before the Streich, you see a fatalist ten-year-old Björn in his classroom whose tutor is worried he might be prone to suicide. Oh, and he became to be a [[JailBait real toyboy]] toyboy soon after that.
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* AuthorAvatar: Yes, there are two.
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* {{Landlord}}
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** The other redhead is LindsayLohan Creator/LindsayLohan whose sexual qualities have been similarly described in the yellow press as, ahem, [[note]] may we advice you to the [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready Expy entry at the main page]] ?[[/note]]
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* [[BrattyTeenageDaughter Bratty Teenage]] [[SubvertedTrope Sex Partner]]: Sorta in the eyes of Björn, at least in 1993. He shook his head about his 17-year-old lay and her disrespect for her adult cousin's professionality and [[ValleyGirl her tendency]] [[PopularIsDumb to rather be]] [[ObfuscatingStupidity "just a girl"]], mind you that he himself was only 14 years old. But [[ItGotBetter she got better]] in the end.
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* CharacterDevelopment: But of course!
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* [[BrattyTeenageDaughter Bratty Teenage]] [[SubvertedTrope Sex Partner]]: BrattyTeenageDaughter: Sorta in the eyes of Björn, at least in 1993. He shook his head about his 17-year-old lay and her disrespect for her adult cousin's professionality and [[ValleyGirl her tendency]] [[PopularIsDumb to rather be]] [[ObfuscatingStupidity "just a girl"]], mind you that he himself was only 14 years old. But [[ItGotBetter she got better]] better in the end.
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* CharacterDevelopment: But of course!
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* ValleyGirl: Björn supposed Natascha to be a so-called ''Paradeiser'' girl. [[note]]Austrian short form of "paradise apple" or "tomato", implying overtanned skin, a bit like in Australian "Pom" for British. Remember that this timeline's Hollywood is actually called [[MeaningfulName Paradies]], make of that [[UnfortunateImplications what you will]].[[/note]]
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* ValleyGirl: Björn supposed Natascha to be a so-called ''Paradeiser'' girl. [[note]]Austrian short form of "paradise apple" or "tomato", implying overtanned skin, a bit like in Australian "Pom" for British. Remember that this timeline's Hollywood is actually called [[MeaningfulName Paradies]], make of that [[UnfortunateImplications what you will]].Paradies]].[[/note]]
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* [[WhyWereBummedCommunismFell Why We're Bummed The Logos Striked]]: An ultimate poster child of this trope. [[WhatHappenedToTheMouse The question what happened to this man]] was a major reason why the whole story has been written.
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* [[WhyWereBummedCommunismFell [[WhyWeAreBummedCommunismFell Why We're Bummed The Logos Striked]]: An ultimate poster child of this trope. [[WhatHappenedToTheMouse The question what happened to this man]] was a major reason why the whole story has been written.
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Born 1976 in [[TwinCities Paulskirchen]], German Atlantis
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Born 1976 in [[TwinCities [[UsefulNotes/TwinCities Paulskirchen]], German Atlantis
Atlantis
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* ShallowLoveInterest: Subverted. Yes, Tascha has first and foremost been good for knocking boots, but Björn achieving OneDegreeOfSeparation with a whole crowd of [[PlayfulHacker Logos]] would have been unthinkable without her.
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* ShallowLoveInterest: SatelliteLoveInterest: Subverted. Yes, Tascha has first and foremost been good for knocking boots, but Björn achieving OneDegreeOfSeparation with a whole crowd of [[PlayfulHacker Logos]] would have been unthinkable without her.
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* ShoutOut: Rosi is a shout-out to the song "Skandal im Sperrbezirk" by the SpiderMurphyGang. On a further note, Germans also think of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rosemarie_Nitribitt another Rosemarie]] when they hear that name. But no, the fanfic's characther [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotHeinous never sold her body or did anything especially naughty for that matter]].
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* ShoutOut: Rosi is a shout-out to the song "Skandal im Sperrbezirk" by the SpiderMurphyGang. On a further note, Germans also think of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rosemarie_Nitribitt another Rosemarie]] when they hear that name. But no, the fanfic's characther [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotHeinous [[FelonyMisdemeanor never sold her body or did anything especially naughty for that matter]].
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* Hypocrite{{Hypocrite}}
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Born January 14, 1979 in Wismar, Mecklenburg, European Germany
Born 1976 in [[TwinCities Paulskirchen]], German Atlantis
[[folder:Patricia Ó Domnhall]]
[[LandDownUnder Antipodian]] from Caisleanúr [[note]]Newcastle, NSW[[/note]].
* Hypocrite
* IdenticalStranger: to Natascha from Judea. This will be noted on at least two continents.
* IrishPriest: or rather missionary
* SeeminglyWholesomeFiftiesGirl
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[[LandDownUnder Antipodian]] from Caisleanúr [[note]]Newcastle, NSW[[/note]].
* Hypocrite
* IdenticalStranger: to Natascha from Judea. This will be noted on at least two continents.
* IrishPriest: or rather missionary
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[[folder:Switzerland]]
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** The essential namesake of the characters is redhead singer Natasha Hamilton from Music/AtomicKitten. [[hottip:*:That's why Björn often contracted his fling to "Tascha" in a way similar to "Tash" at said Hamilton lady]]
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** The essential namesake of the characters is redhead singer Natasha Hamilton from Music/AtomicKitten. [[hottip:*:That's [[note]]That's why Björn often contracted his fling to "Tascha" in a way similar to "Tash" at said Hamilton lady]]lady.[[/note]]
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** A character called Natascha in the German song ''Willenlos'' (lit. "without an own will") from Marius-Müller Westernhagen. [[hottip:*:The line roughly translates as "Her name was Natascha, she came from Novosibirsk, we drank vodka from bottles, she almost strangled me. She had pride, no question, I sent her orchids, man, I really wasn't capable to get out of her way, out of her way."]]
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** A character called Natascha in the German song ''Willenlos'' (lit. "without an own will") from Marius-Müller Westernhagen. [[hottip:*:The [[note]]The line roughly translates as "Her name was Natascha, she came from Novosibirsk, we drank vodka from bottles, she almost strangled me. She had pride, no question, I sent her orchids, man, I really wasn't capable to get out of her way, out of her way."]]"[[/note]]
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* ValleyGirl: Björn supposed Natascha to be a so-called ''Paradeiser'' girl. [[hottip:*:Austrian short form of "paradise apple" or "tomato", implying overtanned skin, a bit like in Australian "Pom" for British. Remember that this timeline's Hollywood is actually called [[MeaningfulName Paradies]], make of that [[UnfortunateImplications what you will]].]]
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[[folder:Finster family]]
* RedOniBlueOni
* ValleyGirl: Björn supposed Natascha to be a so-called ''Paradeiser'' girl. [[hottip:*:Austrian short form of "paradise apple" or "tomato", implying overtanned skin, a bit like in Australian "Pom" for British. Remember that this timeline's Hollywood is actually called [[MeaningfulName Paradies]], make of that [[UnfortunateImplications what you will]].]]
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?[[/note]]
* ValleyGirl: Björn supposed Natascha to be a so-called ''Paradeiser'' girl.[[hottip:*:Austrian [[note]]Austrian short form of "paradise apple" or "tomato", implying overtanned skin, a bit like in Australian "Pom" for British. Remember that this timeline's Hollywood is actually called [[MeaningfulName Paradies]], make of that [[UnfortunateImplications what you will]].]]
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* RedOniBlueOni[[/note]]
* ValleyGirl: Björn supposed Natascha to be a so-called ''Paradeiser'' girl.
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* RedOniBlueOni
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* TheIshmael
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** The essential namesake of the characters is redhead singer Natasha Hamilton from AtomicKitten. [[hottip:*:That's why Björn often contracted his fling to "Tascha" in a way similar to "Tash" at said Hamilton lady]]
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* LikesOlderWomen: Yes, he does. But on the other hand, he started an active sex life as a young teenager and [[JustifiedTrope age mates may hardly match his idea on "real women"]]. And if an average of three years his senior really counts?
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* [[BrattyTeenageDaughter Bratty Teenage]] [[SubvertedTrope Sex Partner]]: Sorta in the eyes of Björn, at least in 1993. He shook his head about his 17-year-old lay and her disrespect for her adult cousin's professionality and [[ValleyGirl her tendency]] [[PopularIsDumb to rather be]] [[ObfuscatingStupidity "just a girl"]], mind you that he himself [[BeyondTheImpossible was only 14 years old]]. But [[ItGotBetter she got better]] in the end.
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* [[BrattyTeenageDaughter Bratty Teenage]] [[SubvertedTrope Sex Partner]]: Sorta in the eyes of Björn, at least in 1993. He shook his head about his 17-year-old lay and her disrespect for her adult cousin's professionality and [[ValleyGirl her tendency]] [[PopularIsDumb to rather be]] [[ObfuscatingStupidity "just a girl"]], mind you that he himself [[BeyondTheImpossible was only 14 years old]].old. But [[ItGotBetter she got better]] in the end.
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* BareYourMidriff: This actually matches WordOfGod from the [[WebOriginal/ChaosTimeline [[Literature/ChaosTimeline mothership]], but here it gets conversed to show that [[PlanetOfHats all Judean women dress like 20-somethings]].
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* ChickMagnet: Deconstructed. May have contributed to his fling in Judea, but gets more of a point in Hamburg where it landed him the acquaintance of a [[RidiculouslyFastConstruction crucial bunch of engineers]] and he lets you know that he grew sick and tired of this kind of attention once in a while. He also says that his [[TroublingUnchildhoodBehaviour early loss of innocence stems]] from the opportunity of external initiative and he doesn't mean Natascha.
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* ChickMagnet: Deconstructed. May have contributed to his fling in Judea, but gets more of a point in Hamburg where it landed him the acquaintance of a [[RidiculouslyFastConstruction crucial bunch of engineers]] and he lets you know that he grew sick and tired of this kind of attention once in a while. He also says that his [[TroublingUnchildhoodBehaviour [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour early loss of innocence stems]] from the opportunity of external initiative and he doesn't mean Natascha.