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This is the thread to use if you feel that the page image itself is good but the caption needs help.

If you think that both the image and the caption are poor, please make a thread in Image Pickin' for the page, and we'll work on the image and caption both at the same time.

As with other TRS and IP threads, please state your reasons and make your case in your first post. Don't make the other posters spend time trying to pry it out of you.

Edited by Willbyr on Jun 21st 2021 at 9:42:03 AM

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#126: Jan 14th 2015 at 2:33:50 PM

Serial-Killer Killer can be confusing. I think a caption something along the lines of, "Notice the knife next to the tie and the syringe behind the other man's back," would help.

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#127: Jan 14th 2015 at 10:10:00 PM

"Hey, Dexter! Ready for a killer night?"
"Patrick, you have no idea."

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#128: Jan 15th 2015 at 1:01:14 AM

Seems OK for me.

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#129: Jan 15th 2015 at 6:49:01 PM

I definitely am for the idea, implementation seems good... yeah, go for it.

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#130: Jan 30th 2015 at 3:46:47 PM

I'd be fine with that caption for Serial-Killer Killer.

In the mean time, I had an idea for Widely-Spaced Jail Bars, but I'm not too confident in it. Tell me what you think.

"Do these bars make me look thin?"

edited 30th Jan '15 3:47:04 PM by MrL1193

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#131: Jan 30th 2015 at 4:37:18 PM

Alright, I've added the caption on Serial-Killer Killer and adjusted the tag to note this thread.

[up] I'm not really feeling it but it's not bad.

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#132: Jan 31st 2015 at 2:29:26 AM

edited 31st Jan '15 2:29:40 AM by SeptimusHeap

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#133: Feb 15th 2015 at 4:03:05 PM

Monster.Comic Books, Monster.Star Wars, and Monster.A Song Of Ice And Fire have an unusual element in their caption: the quote is preceded by "<Speaker name>:". I think that looks bad. Other thoughts?

Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
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#134: Feb 15th 2015 at 6:06:11 PM

It's annoying, not to mention redundant (since the speaker is already depicted in the image, and really, do we really need to know what their names are?)

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#135: Feb 15th 2015 at 7:49:12 PM

I don't care for it either...we already have page quotes, it feels like trying to double up on those.

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#136: Feb 16th 2015 at 9:42:49 AM

Nix the names. The captions are okay without them, but with them they just look redundant.

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#137: Feb 16th 2015 at 12:44:32 PM

I don't get the caption for Brain in a Jar.

I get what fMRI is, just not the reference. I could look it up, but that means the caption is already failed, doesn't it.

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#138: Feb 16th 2015 at 1:37:33 PM

The brain, it is bored, sitting there in a jar. So it's singing "99 Bottles of Beer on the Wall" to itself.

And by the way, "I didn't get it so it's a failure" is not the case.

edited 16th Feb '15 1:38:49 PM by Madrugada

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#139: Feb 16th 2015 at 2:18:01 PM

I agree that "I don't get it, so it's bad" is a very weak argument.

Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
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#140: Feb 16th 2015 at 7:19:13 PM

I admit it may sound like it, it's not just "It's bad because I don't get it."

Shouldn't an image and caption be able to stand by itself without any knowledge of pop cultural reference?

...was what I was going to say, but then upon a quick search it's actually a folk-song, which I find fair enough.

Alright, moving on.

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#141: Feb 17th 2015 at 9:48:14 PM

For the monster pages, all three of them are locked, so an admin is gonna have to nix those names.

Image Source. Please update whenever an image is changed.
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#142: Feb 18th 2015 at 12:11:49 AM

A moderator can do so as well.

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#143: Feb 18th 2015 at 1:31:02 AM

I won't argue, but just to explain the point of the speaker name for the monster pages was in case someone didn't know who it was and was curious. Though I guess a Google search could solve that.

edited 18th Feb '15 1:31:32 AM by ACW

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#144: Feb 20th 2015 at 6:27:14 AM

[up]That additional information doesn't really add anything for people who's not familiar with the work (knowing the character's name doesn't help explain their role or how they fit the trope, unless it's a naming trope); and people who are familiar with the work should already know who the character is, anyway, so they don't need that extra info.

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#145: Mar 31st 2015 at 10:42:06 AM

Medal of Dishonor's caption was changed on 2013/11/10 by Hourai Rabbit from the "a for effort" chosen in the thread to the more-grammatically-correct "An "A" for Effort". Technically this was ignoring the header saying the caption was chosen by the thread and shouldn't be changed, although I imagine grammatical fixups are generally considered allowable - it's just it's funnier (and more consistent) with the Stylistic Suck caption, in my opinion. Are there any objections to me changing it back?

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#147: Mar 31st 2015 at 11:53:55 AM

I agree that "intentionally wrong" is more funny.

Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
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#148: Mar 31st 2015 at 11:59:47 AM

Done, then. Added a pothole to Stylistic Suck, hopefully to make it more apparent what the intention was.

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#149: Apr 9th 2015 at 1:39:12 PM

Caption idea for Western Animation:

This one's mine. Cook her while I have the little one for an appetizer. You know, because I'm a meaner!

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