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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#16926: Jun 7th 2023 at 4:04:26 PM

I think for Dr. Hope I'll link to the Marvel fandom page and have him between Copperhead and Krahn; for Snatcher I'll have him at the end of the recurring characters folder after Carnage?

EDIT: Shit, I'll have both in recurring to be safe.

Edited by ACW on Jun 7th 2023 at 7:12:55 AM

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xie323 Since: Jul, 2009
#16927: Jun 7th 2023 at 4:10:44 PM

[tup] Sauron and Mouth of Sauron

I was wondering about LOTRO Sauron and their incarnation of Saruman too. But the game kept crashing on me that I couldn't move forward with the EP

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#16928: Jun 7th 2023 at 4:12:05 PM

Yes to the Gollum examples:

  • Fire Force: Giovanni, initially a doctor with the heroes, is a mole for the White-Clad and one of the most depraved of the lot. Inheriting a mission to bring the Cataclysm to earth, Giovanni steals countless bodies with the hosts dying in the process and Giovanni inevitably moving on. Proving a sadist who constantly delights in the pain of his victims, even sacrificing his own to get to the heroes, Giovanni finally steals the body of the young boy Yu and initiates a new Cataclysm so that all living themes may become fuel for a new inferno.
  • Hunter x Hunter: Zazan, a commander of the Chimera Ants, is the most sadistic of the ants. Zazan leads raids like her fellows to kidnap humans to feed the hunger of the Queen, but also murders humans for fun and sport. Once the Queen dies in childbirth, Zazan relocates to Meteor City with designs on world domination. Using her "Queen Shot" to agonizingly mutate people into twisted monsters, Zazan plans to convert every human being in Meteor City in this way before using the army to overrun the world.

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#16929: Jun 7th 2023 at 4:13:56 PM

[tup]Oblivion

"No running in the halls!"
SumDumNerd Current mood: sick of your shit from the Ever After Since: May, 2017 Relationship Status: Every rose has its thorn
Current mood: sick of your shit
Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#16931: Jun 7th 2023 at 4:21:40 PM

@ACW: Sounds good bud!

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#16932: Jun 7th 2023 at 4:29:11 PM

BTW, is the Fire Force current keeper Captain the same as Captain Leonard Burns, or is it this guy?

Edited by ACW on Jun 7th 2023 at 7:29:56 AM

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Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#16933: Jun 7th 2023 at 4:31:47 PM

It's the latter. Like oh no, Leonard is NOWHERE near that evil

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#16934: Jun 7th 2023 at 4:40:57 PM

Got it. I'll just make it the Shadow Captain (and pothole "The Holy Sol" to Corrupt Church).

FWIW, I think I'll have Giovanni in the middle of the current keepers.

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Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#16935: Jun 7th 2023 at 5:53:17 PM

Lemme get this in reeeeal quick from the movies:

What's the work?

Sin City is one of Frank Miller's best known works, set in Basin City, AKA: Sin City. Famous for its horrific corruption, the timeline jumps about in non-chronological order. From the second film, our hero is Dwight Mc Carthy, a down on his luck PI...when a beautiful woman from the past wlaks back into his life.

I give you...Ava Lord.

Who is Ava?

Ravishing. Beautiful. Sympathetic. Ava Lord is a dame to kill for, who left Dwight for a rich man, Damien Lord, who abuses her and plans to kill her. she needs Dwight to save her.

These are lies.

Ava is a sociopath. A wicked vamp who uses her charm, beauty, and body to get what she wants. As confirmed in film, ava's MO is always the same: she seduces men to give her everything, to be of use, and when she's done they have a tendency to die. Ava has used, abused and destroyed and killed dozens of people and she works her magic on Dwight rather easily with some help from her brutal servant Manute. After Dwight is convinces and seduced, Ava manipulates him into infiltrating the Lord estate and beating her husband to death.

Then reveals her true colors, shoots Dwight, and gives him the rap for the murder of Damien. Realizing Dwight, who barely escapes, is after her, Ava pulls a fast one and promptly seduces one of the few honest cops to protect her, steadily isolating him from his family and friends. It doesn't last when Mort's partner Bob questions too much and Mort, in a fit of rage, shoots him in the face and then kills himsself. With little recourse, Ava is left to ask the local mob lord Wallenquist for a favor and Wallenquist informs her in no uncertain terms she's an amateur in his game and he wants cash to deal with Dwight and wrap things up.

Dwight does return, for Ava intending to eliminate him. But a full on battle ensues and Ava is cornered. She turns on and shoots Manute before trying to sway Dwight to her side. But Dwight recognizing her for what she is? Shoots her head and flees into the night.

Mitigating issues?

So, the only real issue to Ava before was offscreen villainy and heinousness. Not an issue with loosened standards. ava is a monster and it's made clear she's a sadistic serial killer who isolates her victims, manipulates and uses them to mentally destroy them and arranges their deaths. She's done it to dozens, and Manute has witnessed it so much he considers her some kind of dark goddess for it.

Ava has no excuse. She's amazing at seeming the innocent lamb, but it's an act. She even gloats that she's not crazy: she's evil and she loves it.She has a unique niche, even in Sin City where we have a pedophile serial killer with maybe a hundred victims, the mad Roark family besides him and Kevin himself, or Wallenquist. Ava has such a unique, twisted niche I think we have a winner'

Conclusion?

Keeper.

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#16936: Jun 7th 2023 at 6:02:31 PM

[tup]Ava. Yet another one for fellow Austinite Robert Rodriguez

"No running in the halls!"
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#16937: Jun 7th 2023 at 6:05:07 PM

This going in the film page or comic page?

I remember seeing the movie in theaters and wondering if she could count (don't remember it being dozens).

Sure to Ms. Evil Is Sexy.

Edited by ACW on Jun 7th 2023 at 9:05:21 AM

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Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#16938: Jun 7th 2023 at 6:28:34 PM

[tup] Ava

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#16939: Jun 7th 2023 at 6:46:35 PM

[tup] Ava Lord, a perfect example of beautiful on the outside, but absolutely hideous on the inside.

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#16941: Jun 7th 2023 at 6:57:44 PM

I'll lean yes to Ava. It's not a very strong one given I find Ethan Jr.'s niche as a Serial Killer far, far worse. Kevin also cranks up the bar even with redeeming qualities and the Colonel is a nasty human trafficker... as an independent villain I think she can make it but only just with the whole destroying her victim's lives before offing them business.

Braz The Digital from Cyberspace (Troper in training) Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
HamburgerTime The Merry Monarch of Darkness from Dark World, where we do sincerely have cookies Since: Apr, 2010 Relationship Status: I know
The Merry Monarch of Darkness
#16943: Jun 7th 2023 at 7:02:51 PM

[tup] Ava Lord.

The pig of Hufflepuff pulsed like a large bullfrog. Dumbledore smiled at it, and placed his hand on its head: "You are Hagrid now."
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#16944: Jun 7th 2023 at 7:04:31 PM

Yes to Ava.

[down] Lol.

Edited by SkyCat32 on Jun 7th 2023 at 10:18:04 AM

Rawr.
Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#16945: Jun 7th 2023 at 7:11:32 PM

Sure to Eva Ava

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#16947: Jun 7th 2023 at 7:12:52 PM

Based on the EP, [tup] to Ava. First for Eva Green?

Gotta see these movies sometime.

TheWrongOne41 A nice swimmer from Somewhere, Mexico Since: May, 2022 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
A nice swimmer
#16948: Jun 7th 2023 at 7:16:07 PM

I've seen a proposal for the supposed demon of Skinamarink, and i saw a bunch of upvotes to it but it's not on the page, does anyone know what happened with them?

Edited by TheWrongOne41 on Jun 7th 2023 at 7:16:42 AM

Due to unfortunate events, i will continue to exist until further notice.
TadiTadTa The Dark Priest himself from Probably Side 3 Since: Apr, 2021
The Dark Priest himself
#16949: Jun 7th 2023 at 7:19:00 PM

[tup] To Sauron and the Teeth of Sauron

I think Iike Gundam and Dragon Quest too much
papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
#16950: Jun 7th 2023 at 7:21:05 PM

[up][up]I believe there was an argument that it didn't have enough personality which made people downvote it.

Hope your prepared for an unforgettable luncheon

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