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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
#42727: Apr 26th 2024 at 12:38:49 PM

[tup] for Ramirez.

[tdown] for the Reyes quote.

VengefulBale Dagded Dujardin from The Universe (it's his room) Since: Feb, 2016 Relationship Status: It's complicated
Dagded Dujardin
#42728: Apr 26th 2024 at 12:42:28 PM

[tup] Ramirez

"Bingo! If two species hate each other, they will wipe each other out on their own."
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Orangutans Since: May, 2018 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
#42730: Apr 26th 2024 at 12:46:17 PM

[tup] Salt (damn that's 9 NV candidates now) and Ramirez

Edited by Orangutans on Apr 26th 2024 at 3:46:26 PM

AmateurStorytime Just a starting content creator from Home Since: Mar, 2024
Just a starting content creator
#42731: Apr 26th 2024 at 12:56:44 PM

Love the All-Fucker write-up, Ravok!

Yes to Ramirez and Salt.

EDIT: Upon rewatching the season1 finale of Parkour Civilization, it isn't clear when exactly the Champion cut off the food for the Noobs and Pros, where I previously said he did it right after besting Evbo. I reworded the entry to be more neutral. I also changed "food supply" to "food and other supplies" because he also took away all the blocks from the pros.

Edited by AmateurStorytime on Apr 26th 2024 at 1:19:27 AM

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Libraryseraph Showtime! from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Showtime!
#42732: Apr 26th 2024 at 1:18:48 PM

I don't know how I feel about Otto. Took a quick look at the tropes page for Unicorn Wars and it looks like the movie ends with the lead going insane and leading the bears in a mad suicide charge that wipes out both sides, and then kills his brother himself. It's not automatically disqualifying for Otto, but it wasn't brought up in the heinous standards at all

Absolute destiny... apeachalypse?
xie323 Since: Jul, 2009
VGtree Heghodge Since: Aug, 2016
Heghodge
#42734: Apr 26th 2024 at 1:30:13 PM

[up][up]Otto doesn't so much "go insane" as he does yell at Azulin for questioning his authority. He was more or less enraged that someone stood up against him.

I think you're referring to Azulin, who eventually overthrows Otto

Edited by VGtree on Apr 26th 2024 at 1:35:52 AM

A funny bloo heghodge gorl!
PassingThrough Since: Feb, 2024
#42735: Apr 26th 2024 at 1:39:27 PM

Library didn’t say “Otto” went insane, she said the protagonist did.

Libraryseraph Showtime! from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Showtime!
#42736: Apr 26th 2024 at 1:41:47 PM

Yeah, I pretty clearly said "the protagonist goes insane". All crimes need to be in the heinous section, even those done by a Villain Protagonist

Absolute destiny... apeachalypse?
VGtree Heghodge Since: Aug, 2016
Heghodge
#42737: Apr 26th 2024 at 1:43:51 PM

In that case, yeah those should be mentioned too. You can't really propose a villain without how they stack up to the others.

A funny bloo heghodge gorl!
Bluedeadredemption Since: Feb, 2021
#42738: Apr 26th 2024 at 2:33:56 PM

Eh, I am abstain on Ramirez. I do have a slight concern in that he seemingly just follows Starkweather's orders for the most part, does he have any unique touches to distinguish himself from his boss (Like crimes he committed without Starkweather's input)? In think that one henchmen he killed was a skinhead who called him a racial slur, and Ramirez killed to frighten the others. Not a bad candidate per se, just have that concern at the moment.

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#42739: Apr 26th 2024 at 2:41:59 PM

Nah there isn't a slur, he walks up, the minions stare at him, and he then kills the closest henchman for lulz and proceeds to call them all a homophobic slur and boss them around. Later scenes establish that he runs most of the gangs this way.

And while Ramirez does a lot on Starkweather's orders, he throws in unique bits of sadism like ordering Cash's genitals be mutilated for a bounty; killing and threatening his men; and even Cash's family being kidnapped and threatened the first time, Starkweather remarks that the Wardogs are the ones who "didn't see it my way" and have started using Cash's family as "bait" under threat of killing them one by one. Starkweather makes use of it, but it's treated as something the Wardogs (aka Ramirez's primary minions) carried out on their own.

Edited by Ravok on Apr 26th 2024 at 2:45:21 AM

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#42740: Apr 26th 2024 at 2:47:40 PM

Honestly I’m either way on Otto. I haven’t seen Unicorn Wars, but from what I seen and heard about the protagonist takes a step forward in what Otto did and attempted to burn down the entire forest to wipe the entire unicorn’s out. Something that Otto was againts due to him wanting to perpetuate the war and keep his power.

On the other hand, Otto is responsible for the corruption of the other bears, including Azulín, and sending his men out to be killed while trying to keep a war between unicorn’s and Bears. I can’t be too sure, so Imma abstain

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PassingThrough Since: Feb, 2024
#42741: Apr 26th 2024 at 2:51:58 PM

Ramirez is good for this imo, having played the game I’m with Rav.

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
#42743: Apr 26th 2024 at 3:04:12 PM

Yes to Salty and Ramirez

Sorry if this has been answered before but is Manhunt connected enough to GTA to warrant putting it on the page?

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Goku Black
#42744: Apr 26th 2024 at 3:05:19 PM

Nah. From memory these rocksteady connections are just Easter egg stuff. Nothing more

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Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#42745: Apr 26th 2024 at 3:12:55 PM

[up][up] No not really. While Rockstar likes to put a lot of their games in the universes, there’s not enough story or character connections between them.

Edited by Beast on Apr 26th 2024 at 3:13:17 AM

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Bluedeadredemption Since: Feb, 2021
#42746: Apr 26th 2024 at 3:27:10 PM

In that case [tup] to Ramirez. Also my first vote on a CM proposal, so yay!

Edited by Bluedeadredemption on Apr 26th 2024 at 5:39:25 AM

TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#42747: Apr 26th 2024 at 3:32:19 PM

[tup] for Leon, Salt, and Ramirez.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#42748: Apr 26th 2024 at 3:33:37 PM

[tup] to Colonel Otto, Leon von Felden, Salt-Upon-Wounds and Ramirez.

TrippEverett Since: Feb, 2023
#42749: Apr 26th 2024 at 4:12:05 PM

Okay, got back from seeing Unicorn Wars, I'm personaly giving Otto a very weak [tdown]. While undoubtebly bad and would have likely caused the same amount of deaths as Azulin in the long run, the latter commits so many crimes and causes so much death and destruction that I feel Azulin is meant to be treated as someone who is far worse than Otto.

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#42750: Apr 26th 2024 at 4:26:12 PM

[tup] Ramirez

Switching to [tdown] Otto

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