Not bad, it's a bit understated but I get the gist from it.
It works.
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, pending other suggestions.
Edited by jandn2014 on Apr 9th 2020 at 1:05:24 PM
back lolpending other suggestions.
Currently mostly inactive. An incremental game I tested: https://galaxy.click/play/176 (Gods of Incremental)Sure. The art makes it look 'gentle'.
(Speaking of — there was once a dupe issue with Waking Up Elsewhere; now they share quotes...taking to quotes thread)
Edited by Synchronicity on Apr 9th 2020 at 12:51:29 PM
I like it
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessI hesitant . My only worry is that the image might be confused with You Wake Up on a Beach. Could this image be used for that one instead?
The Rosers were red. The Drownies are blue. I know What the Thunder Said. Do you?This should definitely go to You Wake Up on a Beach, not only for being a better fit but because it's of a better quality than the current image there (and it's in english).
Edited by malias on Apr 9th 2020 at 4:40:36 AM
Good idea. I support putting the suggestion there.
back lolOh wow, yeah, definitely replplace Wake Up On A Beach with this.
Also in favor of replacing the pic on You Wake Up on a Beach.
she/her | TRS needs your help! | Contributor of Trope ReportI don't know...You Wake Up on a Beach is a Beginning Tropes. Not sure that comes across.
Edited by Synchronicity on Apr 9th 2020 at 11:10:05 AM
OP is the start of chapter 1. Not sure if that aspect can be illustrated better.
I'm not a great fan of the OP, but I guess it's better than nothing.
The universe is under no obligation to make sense to us.+1 to replace the pic on You Wake Up on a Beach with the OP instead.
(Annoyed grunt)
In order to avoid an overlap with Unfamiliar Ceiling, I would suggest a different panel composition:
Or this if we are concerned about fair use:
Edited by eroock on Apr 11th 2020 at 3:22:19 AM
20.2 for You Wake Up on a Beach.
Contains 20% less fat than the leading value brand!back lol
I personally prefer 20.1, but if we can't use it, 20.2 is good too.
clearly things are going well.If Unfamiliar Ceiling does not require an actual ceiling, what is the difference between it and Waking Up Elsewhere?
20.1 or 20.2 work for You Wake Up on a Beach
Edited by BlackMage43 on Apr 11th 2020 at 9:55:01 AM
Yeah, it looks like a duplicate trope to me.
The universe is under no obligation to make sense to us.
It says to open a new thread. Suggestion from Cucumber Quest: