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Today I found out an interesting fact from troper Ironeye:

Don't ever make the mistake of using the Laconic version as the canonical trope meaning—the laconics are often written by people who don't actually understand the drop. In this case, the laconic only corresponds to one possible cause of Darkness-Induced Audience Apathy.

The Laconic Description for DIAA states as follows:

The thing is, these descriptions are supposed to make it easier to understand what the page is about. If they can't be accurate as well as short and sweet, then there's a problem.

So for starters, what would be a better description for DIAA?

Edited by MacronNotes on Jan 29th 2023 at 6:23:45 AM

JHD0919 One-Track Mind (he/him) from a 12-pack of Diet Coke (Troper in training) Relationship Status: Abstaining
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#2501: Jun 8th 2023 at 9:12:21 AM

Obvious Rule Patch says "A rule existing solely to counter one specific situation." But I don't think the trope is about that, I think it's about closing loopholes the rulemakers/game designers/whomever else didn't intend to have in their ruleset.

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#2502: Jun 8th 2023 at 9:25:54 AM

"A rule later implemented solely to counter one specific situation."

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#2503: Jun 8th 2023 at 10:32:18 AM

[up]I don't think it's about countering one specific solution tho. I think it's about countering loopholes in the rules.

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#2504: Jun 8th 2023 at 11:23:30 AM

"A rule that only exists to deal with a specific problematic interaction"? An Obvious Rule Patch isn't typically closing multiple unrelated loopholes in one go, if only because a single rule closing multiple loopholes only really can happen if they're related.

Edited by wingedcatgirl on Jun 8th 2023 at 2:24:34 PM

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#2505: Jun 8th 2023 at 11:37:04 AM

[up]Ah, that makes sense. Your laconic proposal makes sense too.

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#2506: Jun 8th 2023 at 11:50:43 AM

The Obvious Rule Patch is singular. The description doesn't say the "patch" must close loopholes plural.

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#2507: Jun 8th 2023 at 12:02:56 PM

[up]That makes sense too. For that reason I'm gonna leave the laconic as-is for now.

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#2508: Jun 8th 2023 at 12:05:01 PM

Moving on, I think the OP is outdated. I believe the kerfuffle about Darkness-Induced Audience Apathy is what led to this thread getting started, but we have long since moved past that.

(Never mind the fact that Darkness-Induced Audience Apathy has long since been renamed and redirected.)

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#2509: Jun 8th 2023 at 2:56:05 PM

If you want the OP to be updated, it would be helpful if you rewrote a new OP or gave us specific things you want to fix. We can't expected to just fix the OP without knowing what needs to be done and why.

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Khoshekh6 Since: May, 2022
#2511: Jun 9th 2023 at 7:08:27 PM

The laconic for Meaningful Name is simply "you don't have that name for nothing"

Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#2512: Jun 9th 2023 at 8:48:57 PM

Suggestion:

The creator named a person after one of that person's qualities.

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TheLivingDrawing Lucas the Dreamer from The Town of Clayton Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
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#2513: Jun 10th 2023 at 9:10:00 AM

Suggestion.

A character is named after one of their qualities.

Why waste time when you can see the last sunset last?
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#2514: Jun 10th 2023 at 9:12:52 AM

I'm skeptical on "qualities" wording, as Meaningful Name is also used for attributes, cultural connections and stealth spoilers.

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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#2516: Jun 10th 2023 at 10:47:40 AM

"Characteristic"?

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Wyldchyld (Old as dirt)
#2517: Jun 10th 2023 at 5:43:01 PM

Suggestion:

A character's name either openly or covertly reveals something about their nature, personality, abilities, background or plot role.

Edited by Wyldchyld on Jun 10th 2023 at 1:43:36 PM

If my post doesn't mention a giant flying sperm whale with oversized teeth and lionfish fins for flippers, it just isn't worth reading.
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#2518: Jun 11th 2023 at 12:00:15 AM

[up]I like that one.

The universe is under no obligation to make sense to us.
TheLivingDrawing Lucas the Dreamer from The Town of Clayton Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Lucas the Dreamer
#2520: Jun 13th 2023 at 4:23:29 PM

How’s this for Evil Is Petty since the current laconic isn’t great.

A villain who is evil on smaller scales as well as larger ones and/or commits great acts of evil for relatively minor reasons.

Edited by TheLivingDrawing on Jun 13th 2023 at 7:28:17 AM

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Khoshekh6 Since: May, 2022
#2521: Jun 13th 2023 at 4:34:34 PM

Does everyone agree with wyldchylds suggestion?

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#2522: Jun 13th 2023 at 5:01:26 PM

Laconic.A Death In The Limelight currently reads:

A Minor/Main character gets an alarming amount of screentime and development before dying.

We're almost sure that it doesn't make sense to include main characters here — you can't get A Day in the Limelight if being in the limelight is your standard role — but even if it does, "minor character or main character" is just "character" with unneeded words, right?

The addition of "main" character was by ~somepersonnamedcaloy a few months ago while expanding the laconic in general.

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#2523: Jun 14th 2023 at 8:06:17 AM

hiyo it's cal/azul here, i thought it would make sense if it wasn't just exclusive to main characters but if you want me to correct it to the prior description I'll be okay with doing so

Amonimus the Retromancer from <<|Wiki Talk|>> (Sergeant) Relationship Status: In another castle
the Retromancer
#2524: Jun 14th 2023 at 8:22:54 AM

Laconic.Safe Word:

When the word "no" can be Played for Laughs or Played for Drama, the word "Red" does mean "no" for real.

That's kind of mouthful and specific. Suggestion:

A code phrase to signal to stop when "no" or "stop" could be interpreted as part of the play.

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#2525: Jun 14th 2023 at 8:35:11 AM

[up][up] tbh at this point we're more questioning whether or not the trope does in fact exclude main characters, because the description is less clear about that than it should be.

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