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* UniformityException: Nafi is the only Ruhi not in Ruhi's hivemind.
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* TheReptilians: A few species, though Geptads resemble the standard version of this trope the most.
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It can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]] on the author's website. An older, outdated version can also be read on [=MSPaint Fan Adventures=] in a "nice clean log" [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=3646 here]]. And the forum thread with the suggestions used to be located [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?55574 here]]. [=The Cosmosdex=] is another helpful site for learning about the species in the Fortuna universe. That site is [[http://cosmosdex.com/ here]]
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It can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]] on the author's website. An older, outdated version that reached its conclusion in 2017 can also be read on [=MSPaint Fan Adventures=] in a "nice clean log" [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=3646 here]]. And the forum thread with the suggestions used to be located [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?55574 here]]. [=The Cosmosdex=] is another helpful site for learning about the species in the Fortuna universe. That site is [[http://cosmosdex.com/ here]]
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It can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]] on the author's website. It An older, outdated version can also be read on [=MSPaint Fan Adventures=] in a "nice clean log" [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=3646 here]]. And the forum thread with the suggestions used to be located [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?55574 here]]. Another newer, currently unfinished redux, as of now, can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]]. [=The Cosmosdex=] is another helpful site for learning about the species in the Fortuna universe. That site is [[http://cosmosdex.com/ here]]
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* AnyoneCanDie
---> ''Maybe the real Fortuna chest was the friends you killed along the way.''
* ArtifactOfDoom: The Helm of the Sun God
---> ''Maybe the real Fortuna chest was the friends you killed along the way.''
* ArtifactOfDoom: The Helm of the Sun God
* BadIsGoodAndGoodIsBad: The creation story of the universe.
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** Also, other v1 AI can be this when they serve as the player's patrons depending on the player's Friendship Level with the patron in question.
* BlobMonster: Tildes.
* BlobMonster: Tildes.
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** Also, other v1 AI AIs can be this when they serve as the player's patrons depending on the player's Friendship Level with the patron in question.
* BlobMonster:Tildes.Tildes and Goopmicks.
* BlobMonster:
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* DecoyProtagonist: [[spoiler: Rodney([[HelloInsertNameHere or whatever you named him/her]]) seems like he'l be the hero of the tutorial...until he gets KilledOffForReal by Apollo. Instead, its Leonard who ultimately is the one to complete the run.]]
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* DecoyProtagonist: [[spoiler: Rodney([[HelloInsertNameHere or whatever you named him/her]]) seems like he'l he'll be the hero of the tutorial...until he gets KilledOffForReal by Apollo. Instead, its it's Leonard who ultimately is the one to complete the run.]]
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* MechanicalHorse: Some Zuid'Tians, and the Magneto Horzz. Helios also has a Horsesona. Cleo's AI One-Punch also counts
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* OurGodsAreDifferent: The Greek and Roman gods are here, except they're advanced AI, and they rule over elements of the game. They can also become the player's patron and support them in specific ways. It's implied that other pantheons exist too as additional DLC. There's also the Limbo Gods, who are implied to be Fortuna's normal endgame bosses.
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* OurGodsAreDifferent: The Greek and Roman gods are here, except they're advanced AI, and they rule over elements of the game. They can also become the player's patron and support them in specific ways. It's implied stated that other pantheons exist too as additional DLC. There's also the Limbo Gods, who are implied to be Fortuna's normal endgame bosses.
---> * Justified once the player learns that [[spoiler:Nicko is actually a vessel for Hades, whose job is to collect and redistribute unneeded items to characters after every game.]]
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* RobotAntennae: Helios has a single one; Apollo has two.
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* RobotAntennae: Helios has a single one; Apollo has Apollo, Artemis, and Diana have two.
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* SapientShip: Thanatos v1 is this, and it has been mentioned that there are more.
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* SapientShip: Thanatos v1 is and Hypnos v1 are this, and it has been mentioned that there are more.
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* SpaceX: Cobalt's "space-gangrene."
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* SpaceX: Cobalt's "space-gangrene." Space Llamas also count.
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* AmbidextrousSprite
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* MechanicalHorse: Some Zuid'Tians, and the Magneto Horzz. Helios also has a Horsesona. Cleo's AI One-Punch also counts
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* HeroicAlbino: Rodney.
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* TVHeadRobot: The first gen Apollo, Artemis, Eros and Hermes.Hermes AI units have this, and later models are likely to have this.
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* OurGodsAreDifferent: The Greek and Roman gods are here, except they're advanced AI, and they rule over elements of the game. They can also become the player's patron and support them in specific ways. It's implied that other pantheons exist too as additional DLC. There's also the Limbo Gods, who are implied to be Fortuna's version of ThatOneBoss.normal endgame bosses.
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**ThirdEye: Drakons wirh psychic powers usually have this.
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**ThirdEye: Drakons wirh with psychic powers usually have this.
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* PlantAliens: Prunus, Celirack, Plantolk, and Virgora, to name a few.
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* BeePeople: The Apidees, quite literally.
** Also, other v1 AI can be this when they serve as the player's patrons depending on the player's Friendship Level with the patron in question.
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* LittleGreenMen: Generics look the part, probably to further their genericness.
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* OurGodsAreDifferent: The Greek and Roman gods are here, except here they're AI.advanced AI, and they rule over elements of the game. They can also become the player's patron and support them in specific ways. It's implied that other pantheons exist too as additional DLC. There's also the Limbo Gods, who are implied to be Fortuna's Those One Bosses.version of ThatOneBoss.
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* PsychicPowers: Some Drakons, like Kelda, have this. Some other races have different types of these as well.
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* PsychicPowers: Some Drakons, like Kelda, have this. Some other races Other species have different types of these as well.
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* QuestForAWish: Main goal of the games themselves.
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* TheReptilians: A few species, though Geptads resemble the standard version of this trope the most.
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* {{Robosexual}}: Most robots towards Nikki, or really anyone else with the [Chip Magnet] trait.
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* {{Robosexual}}: Most robots towards Nikki, or really anyone else with the [Chip Magnet] trait.
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* NestedStory: The different games You plays are like this, especially in the redux where the player talks to their Patrons and even other players more often.
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* NestedStory: The different games You plays play are like this, especially in the redux where the player talks to their Patrons and even other players more often.often and much sooner than in the original run.
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* OurGodsAreDifferent: They're AIs.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The [[http://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/ Cosmosdex]] contains some information on many of the species and AI present in the game, as well as some other mechanics that affect the game such as traits, achievements, and even some elements that don't play into the main comic until much later.
* EasterEgg: The redux has some of these, especially in the first game.
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* EntropyandChaosMagic: What Eris does all the time.
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* InsectoidAliens: Didaskalois
* JerkassGods: Most of the v1 AIs.
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* InsectoidAliens: Didaskalois
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* JerkassGods: Most of the v1AIs.AIs, though the player can still befriend them.
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* KillerRobot: Thanatos AIs seem to be little more than this.
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* KillerRobot: Thanatos AIs seem to be little more than this. Clockworks also technically count.
* NestedStory: The different games You plays are like this, especially in the redux where the player talks to their Patrons and even other players more often.
* RecurringTraveller: Nicko. He even shows up ''on Fortuna.''
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* ShipperOnDeck: Hermes.
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* SpaceX: Cobalt's space-gangrene.
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* WeaponsGradeVocabulary: Athena, who as one of her Patron conditions requires control of the Captain of the ship, [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=3646&p=4441 created a character that could kill with puns.]]
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* WeaponsGradeVocabulary: Athena, who who, as one of her Patron conditions requires control of the Captain of the ship, [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=3646&p=4441 created a character that could kill with puns.]]
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* PsychicPowers: Some Drakons, like Kelda, have this.
**ThirdEye: Usually ones that have this.
* QuestForAWish: Main goal of the games themselves.
**ThirdEye: Usually ones that have this.
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* PsychicPowers: Some Drakons, like Kelda, have this.
this. Some other races have different types of these as well.
**ThirdEye:Usually ones that Drakons wirh psychic powers usually have this.
this.
* QuestForAWish: Main goal of the gamesthemselves.themselves.
* Retcon: The Cosmosdex has slightly different routes that deviate from the original run, which could lead to this trope.
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* QuestForAWish: Main goal of the games
* Retcon: The Cosmosdex has slightly different routes that deviate from the original run, which could lead to this trope.
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It can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]] on the author's website. It can also be read on [=MSPaint Fan Adventures=] in a "nice clean log" [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=3646 here]]. And the forum thread with the suggestions used to be located [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?55574 here]]. Another newer, currently unfinished redux, as of now, can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]]. [=The Cosmosdex=]is another helpful site for learning about the species in the Fortuna universe. That site is [[http://cosmosdex.com/ here]]
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It can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]] on the author's website. It can also be read on [=MSPaint Fan Adventures=] in a "nice clean log" [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=3646 here]]. And the forum thread with the suggestions used to be located [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?55574 here]]. Another newer, currently unfinished redux, as of now, can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]]. [=The Cosmosdex=]is Cosmosdex=] is another helpful site for learning about the species in the Fortuna universe. That site is [[http://cosmosdex.com/ here]]
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so people know about both versions of the comic and the dex with info on species.
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It can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]] on the author's website. It can also be read on [=MSPaint Fan Adventures=] in a "nice clean log" [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=3646 here]]. And the forum thread with the suggestions used to be located [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?55574 here]]. Another newer, currently unfinished redux, as of now, can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]]. [=The Cosmosdex=]is another helpful site for learning about the species in the Fortuna universe. That site is [[http://cosmosdex.com/ here]]
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Website in question has returned to normal operation, with no changes notable in the context of this entry.
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It can be read [[http://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/0 here]] on the author's website. It can also be read on [=MSPaint Fan Adventures=] in a "nice clean log" [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=3646 here]] (site offline as of January 30, 2018).here]]. And the forum thread with the suggestions used to be located [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?55574 here]].
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Updated Image to the first image a reader will see when they start reading. Feel free to replace with an image of the new title screen if you feel it represents the comic better. (I admit, I don't feel either does...) I also replaced the caption.
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[[caption-width-right:350: [[Franchise/{{Saw}} Would you like to play a game?]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Franchise/{{Saw}} Would you like [[TemptingFate Everything is going to play a game?]]]]
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!! ''Fortuna'' contains examples of the following tropes:
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!! ''Fortuna'' contains provides examples of the following tropes:
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->''A Space adventure about life and robots, but mainly about robots, in fact I'm lying it's just about robots. ''
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I keep messing stuff up and I'm fixing it.
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