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* Pretty much every Pokémon trope (ComMons, OlympusMons).
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** [[spoiler:Tobias Snape was not an abusive father/husband, but a loving, while stern, man who not only took good care of Severus, but also adopted Lily Evans.]]
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** [[spoiler:Tobias Snape was not an abusive father/husband, but a loving, while stern, loving (though stern) man who not only took good care of Severus, but also adopted Lily Evans.]]
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** Similarly, Orion Black, Sirius' father, who was too a early Voldemort supporter in the books, was here the one who protected Sirius, helped him escape to the Potters' when tensions got too high at House Black and named him his heir.
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** Similarly, Orion Black, Sirius' father, father Orion, who was too a an early Voldemort supporter in the books, was here the one who protected Sirius, helped him escape to the Potters' when tensions got too high at House Black and named him his heir.
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** Book!Cho Chang was a nice, gentle girl whose most negative qualities were being too clingy and supporting her friend after she betrayed Dumbledore's Army. In ''Chamber of the Unown'', she is an AlphaBitch that leads a pack of girls into stealing Luna's belongings [[spoiler:and willingly becomes Voldemort's host.]]
** Book!Lockhart was just an cowardly idiot who used a memory-wiping charm to take credit for other people's actions. Here, [[spoiler:he manipulates Hermione and other of his fans so they will do his job for him, using his Hypno to wipe their memories whenever they realized what he was doing, and was all too willing to destroy the entrance to the Chamber of the Unown even though it contained the one thing that could revive those people who were petrified.]]
** [[spoiler:Book!Regulus Black was a misguided man who realized too late he was getting himself in a big mess and sacrificed himself to find a way to destroy Voldemort. Here, he was the one that told Voldemort where the Potters were hiding, killed Peter Pettigrew and framed Sirius so he would be sent to Sevii - the Azkaban equivalent.]]
** Book!Lockhart was just an cowardly idiot who used a memory-wiping charm to take credit for other people's actions. Here, [[spoiler:he manipulates Hermione and other of his fans so they will do his job for him, using his Hypno to wipe their memories whenever they realized what he was doing, and was all too willing to destroy the entrance to the Chamber of the Unown even though it contained the one thing that could revive those people who were petrified.]]
** [[spoiler:Book!Regulus Black was a misguided man who realized too late he was getting himself in a big mess and sacrificed himself to find a way to destroy Voldemort. Here, he was the one that told Voldemort where the Potters were hiding, killed Peter Pettigrew and framed Sirius so he would be sent to Sevii - the Azkaban equivalent.]]
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** Book!Cho Cho Chang was a nice, gentle girl whose in the books, and her most negative qualities were being too clingy and supporting her friend after she betrayed Dumbledore's Army. In ''Chamber of the Unown'', she is an AlphaBitch that leads a pack of girls into stealing Luna's belongings [[spoiler:and willingly becomes Voldemort's host.]]
**Book!Lockhart The book version of Lockhart was just an a cowardly idiot who used a memory-wiping charm to take credit for other people's actions. Here, [[spoiler:he manipulates Hermione and other of his fans fanbase so they will they'll do his job for him, using uses his Hypno to wipe their memories whenever they realized realize what he was he's doing, and was all too is willing to destroy the entrance to the Chamber of the Unown even though it contained contains the one thing that could revive those the people who were petrified.]]
**[[spoiler:Book!Regulus The canon version of [[spoiler:Regulus Black was a misguided man who realized he was in over his head too late he was getting himself in a big mess and sacrificed himself to find a way to destroy Voldemort. Here, he was the one that told Voldemort where the Potters were hiding, killed Peter Pettigrew and framed Sirius so he would be sent to Sevii - the Azkaban equivalent.]]
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Whenever Luna makes a way too outrageous comment, someone will either give her something or point something out to her to distract her.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Whenever Luna makes a way too outrageous comment, an overly absurd statement, someone will either give her something or point something out to her to distract her.
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* BigBad: Voldemort.
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* TheChosenOne: Harry is destined to defeat Voldemort even in this world.
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* TheChosenOne: TheChosenOne:
** Harry is destined to defeat Voldemort even in this world.
** Harry is destined to defeat Voldemort even in this world.
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* CloudCuckooLander: Luna is this in at least five different ways.
** Her father is this in at least eleven different ways.
** Her father is this in at least eleven different ways.
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%% Luna is this in at least five different ways.
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* ForWantOfANail: Many.
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* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler:How Voldemort survives. He first took over Tom Riddle, and during the current storyline he does the same to Quirrell, Cho Chang and Alastor Moody.]]
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* HappilyAdopted: Harry by Remus, Jasmine by Jack and Clair.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Many.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Many.InSpiteOfANail:
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** [[spoiler:Umbridge is still the horrendous (Seismi)toad-like pink-wearing woman who derides anyone that does not fit her narrow standards.]]
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** [[spoiler:Umbridge is still the a horrendous (Seismi)toad-like pink-wearing woman who derides anyone that does not fit her narrow standards.]]
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* JustSmileAndNod: what everyone eventually learns to do when around Luna.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Harry likes to think outside of the box.
** During his first Gauntlet match, he averts Flint's Graveler by clinging to the cloth in the ceiling - which is within the rules, since he's not ripping it.
** Several times at class, he sticks to the letter of the assignments while fulfilling the tasks in an unexpected way.
** During his first Gauntlet match, he averts Flint's Graveler by clinging to the cloth in the ceiling - which is within the rules, since he's not ripping it.
** Several times at class, he sticks to the letter of the assignments while fulfilling the tasks in an unexpected way.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Harry likes to think outside of the box.
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** During his first Gauntlet match,he averts Harry avoids Flint's Graveler by clinging to the cloth in the ceiling - which is within the rules, since he's not ripping it.
** Several times at class,he Harry sticks to the letter of the assignments while fulfilling the tasks in an unexpected way.
** During his first Gauntlet match,
** Several times at class,
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* MythologyGag: several.
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* MythologyGag: several.MythologyGag:
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*** At the end of the Fourth Book many of the Nocturne grunts were captured by the arriving police forces that arrived. Things look like they are calming down... til Jack sees that Jasmine was struck in the back of the head hard enough to bleed by the Carrows. He brutally murders the brother and sister and then orders the Johto Officers to kill all the prisoners before declaring war of Voldemort.
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*** At the end of the Fourth Book fourth many of the Nocturne grunts were captured by the arriving police forces that arrived. Things look like they are calming down... til Jack sees that Jasmine was struck in the back of the head hard enough to bleed by the Carrows. He brutally murders the brother and sister and then orders the Johto Officers to kill all the prisoners before declaring war of Voldemort.
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* RunningGag: Luna makes a pop culture reference - sometimes one to stories that no one InUniverse knows about.
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* RunningGag: RunningGag:
** Luna makes a pop culture reference - sometimes one to stories that no one InUniverse knows about.
** Luna makes a pop culture reference - sometimes one to stories that no one InUniverse knows about.
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* ShoutOut: Luna is a veritable fountain of these.
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* ChekhovsGun: Ron accidentally giving Harry his Magikarp and Harry giving him Emolga sets up Harry tricking Lucius Malfoy into accepting a trade, giving him the Magikarp (instead of Zygarde) in exchange of Dobby.
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* ChekhovsGun: ChekhovsGun:
** Ron accidentally giving Harry his Magikarp and Harry giving him Emolga sets up Harry tricking Lucius Malfoy into accepting a trade, giving him the Magikarp (instead of Zygarde) in exchange of Dobby.
** Ron accidentally giving Harry his Magikarp and Harry giving him Emolga sets up Harry tricking Lucius Malfoy into accepting a trade, giving him the Magikarp (instead of Zygarde) in exchange of Dobby.
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Sirius did not die, as believed by the general public.]]
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* TheReveal: TheReveal:
** [[spoiler:Sirius did not die, as believed by the general public.]]
** [[spoiler:Sirius did not die, as believed by the general public.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: After the World Cup attack, Jack gives Harry an extra for his Dex so he can exchange Pokémons in any point. [[spoiler:During the climax, Harry uses this feature to get Zygarde without Voldemort noticing.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: After the World Cup attack, Jack gives Harry an extra for his Dex modifies Harry's Pokedex so he can exchange Pokémons in any point.swap Pokemon into his team whenever he wants. [[spoiler:During the climax, Harry uses this feature to get Zygarde without Voldemort noticing.]]
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* CultureClash: While most of the other schools stay in their ships or at Hogwarts the Johtoians take over one of the Forbidden Islands. When Harry visits he finds them having a massive party complete with a band and many of them having bare chested wrestling matches. Jasmine happily welcomes Harry "to the dark side".
* ForWantOfANail: The Johto-Kanto war may have been averted, if not for Oroku Koga twitching during the Johto protests, which the Kanto Elite Guard believed was an order to attack. This led to the Pokémon League Massacre that killed 47 Johtoian protestors, including Jasmine's parents, and caused Jack Kenway to break off his friendship with Lance Blackthorn and create the Sons of Johto.
* ForWantOfANail: The Johto-Kanto war may have been averted, if not for Oroku Koga twitching during the Johto protests, which the Kanto Elite Guard believed was an order to attack. This led to the Pokémon League Massacre that killed 47 Johtoian protestors, including Jasmine's parents, and caused Jack Kenway to break off his friendship with Lance Blackthorn and create the Sons of Johto.
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* CultureClash: While most of the other schools stay in their ships or at Hogwarts Hogwarts, the Johtoians take over one of the Forbidden Islands. When Harry visits he finds them having a massive party party, complete with a band and many of them having bare chested the students participating in bare-chested wrestling matches. Jasmine happily welcomes Harry "to the dark side".
* ForWantOfANail: The Johto-Kanto war may have beenaverted, averted if not for Oroku Koga twitching during the Johto protests, which the Kanto Elite Guard believed was an order to attack. This led to the Pokémon League Massacre that killed 47 Johtoian protestors, including Jasmine's parents, and caused Jack Kenway to break off his friendship with Lance Blackthorn and create the Sons of Johto.
* ForWantOfANail: The Johto-Kanto war may have been
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* CompensatingForSomething: In his article on Team Nocturne, Xeno states that its members can be identified by this.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath[=/=]CruelMercy: When Patrick Parkinson hides himself in his mansion's panic room, Jonas... chooses not to attempt to get in. Instead, he, Clair and Lance block the door to the panic room - so he cannot escape, and will eventually die of thirst.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath[=/=]CruelMercy: When Patrick Parkinson hides himself in his mansion's panic room, Jonas... chooses not to attempt to get in. Instead, he, Clair and Lance block the door to the panic room - so he cannot escape, and will eventually die of thirst.
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* {{Irony}}: When Harry and Draco are going to send their last Pokémons out, Draco thinks that it will be great to defeat Harry by letting him taste victory only to snatch it in the last second. Draco's Pokémon wins that battle, and just as he begins to gloat, Harry brings out Orion (which he had pulled out, still conscious, after the first combat, and is thus available for combat) and snatches victory from Malfoy in the last second.
* ItsAllAboutMe: Draco Malfoy. Peony Parkinson.
* ItsAllAboutMe: Draco Malfoy. Peony Parkinson.
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* {{Irony}}: When Harry and Draco are going prepare to send their last Pokémons Pokémon out, Draco thinks that it will it'll be great to defeat Harry by letting him taste victory victory, only to snatch it in away at the last second. Draco's Pokémon wins that battle, and battle; just as he begins to gloat, Harry brings out Orion (which (who he had pulled out, still conscious, after withdrew from battle earlier in the first combat, match and is thus available for combat) still conscious) and snatches victory from Malfoy in the last second.
* %%* ItsAllAboutMe: Draco Malfoy. Peony Parkinson.
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* MindRape: Hermione, thanks to her training, can read people's minds. Luna's Veela powers allow her to do this to other people.
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* MindRape: MindRape:
** Hermione, thanks to her training, can read people's minds. Luna's Veela powers allow her to do this to other people.
** Hermione, thanks to her training, can read people's minds. Luna's Veela powers allow her to do this to other people.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: In Chapters 30 and 31, Harry forms a team (dubbed 'Potter's Eleven') to investigate Stan Shunpike, and the information they find results in the Aurors making several arrests, including Stan. [[spoiler:In Chapter 32, it's revealed that the Pack were aware of who he was, and had been planning to use him to infiltrate Team Nocturne.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** In Chapters 30 and 31, Harry forms a team (dubbed 'Potter's Eleven') to investigate Stan Shunpike, and the information they find results in the Aurors making several arrests, including Stan. [[spoiler:In Chapter 32, it's revealed that the Pack were aware of who he was, and had been planning to use him to infiltrate Team Nocturne.]]
** In Chapters 30 and 31, Harry forms a team (dubbed 'Potter's Eleven') to investigate Stan Shunpike, and the information they find results in the Aurors making several arrests, including Stan. [[spoiler:In Chapter 32, it's revealed that the Pack were aware of who he was, and had been planning to use him to infiltrate Team Nocturne.]]
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Umbridge. Among other [[SarcasmMode pearls]], calls Lily a whore and tells Harry his father should have killed him.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Chapter 36 has Harry calling out Dumbledore and the Heads of House over how they rolled over when Umbridge bullied a girl so hard she [[DrivenToSuicide tried to kill herself]], yet they punish him when he was the only one that gave a damn about the girl.
** Jack calls Rufus Scrimgeour and the Aurors out for their unwillingness to do anything about all the Team Nocture members who managed to avoid prison unscathed even though they were known to be horrible criminals, instead going after Jack after he killed several of the Nocturne grunts and agents.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Chapter 36 has Harry calling out Dumbledore and the Heads of House over how they rolled over when Umbridge bullied a girl so hard she [[DrivenToSuicide tried to kill herself]], yet they punish him when he was the only one that gave a damn about the girl.
** Jack calls Rufus Scrimgeour and the Aurors out for their unwillingness to do anything about all the Team Nocture members who managed to avoid prison unscathed even though they were known to be horrible criminals, instead going after Jack after he killed several of the Nocturne grunts and agents.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Umbridge. Among other [[SarcasmMode pearls]], she calls Lily a whore and tells Harry his father should have killed him.
*TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
** Chapter 36 has Harry calling out Dumbledore and the Heads of House over how they rolled over when Umbridge bullied a girl so hard she [[DrivenToSuicide tried to kill herself]], yet they punish him when he was the only one that gave a damn about the girl.
** Jack calls Rufus Scrimgeour and the Aurors out for their unwillingness to do anything about all the Team Nocture members who managed to avoid prisonunscathed sentences even though they were known to be horrible criminals, instead going after Jack after he killed several of the Nocturne grunts and agents.
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** Chapter 36 has Harry calling out Dumbledore and the Heads of House over how they rolled over when Umbridge bullied a girl so hard she [[DrivenToSuicide tried to kill herself]], yet they punish him when he was the only one that gave a damn about the girl.
** Jack calls Rufus Scrimgeour and the Aurors out for their unwillingness to do anything about all the Team Nocture members who managed to avoid prison
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* SuicidalPacifism: Dumbledore spent the entire first war against Team Nocturne preaching against doing anything beyond stunning the terrorists - and is unwilling to buck the trend when Voldemort comes back, even though it's obvious it doesn't work. [[spoiler:This was caused by an attempt to overcompensate for the events of the war against Grindelwald: due to his powers as an Aura Knight, he could see the souls of his fellow Knights as they dissipated into death during the war, so during the fight against Nocturne he sought to save even the terrorists from dying - only for that to backfire when all it did was to prolong suffering and get even more people killed.]]
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* SuicidalPacifism: Dumbledore spent the entire first war against Team Nocturne preaching against doing anything beyond stunning the terrorists - and is unwilling to buck the trend when Voldemort comes back, even though it's despite it being obvious it doesn't work. [[spoiler:This was caused by an attempt to overcompensate for the events of the war against Grindelwald: due to his powers as an Aura Knight, he could see the souls of his fellow Knights as they dissipated into death during the war, so during the fight against Nocturne he sought to save even the terrorists from dying - only for that to backfire when all it did was to prolong suffering and get even more people killed.]]
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* WorldOfJerkass: The Avalon region is viewed as this by Harry as of Chapter 40.
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* HasTwoMommies: Fleur and Gabrielle Delacour are the genetical daughters of Cynthia and Diantha Delacour-Malfoy.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Draco Malfoy calls Fleur "the daughter of two dyke whores". Unfortunately for him, he does it in front of Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn, best friends of Fleur's [[HasTwoMommies mothers]], godfathers to Fleur and his sister and two of the world's best Pokémon trainers.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Draco Malfoy calls Fleur "the daughter of two dyke whores". Unfortunately for him, he does it in front of Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn, best friends of Fleur's [[HasTwoMommies mothers]], mothers, godfathers to Fleur and his sister and two of the world's best Pokémon trainers.
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* AndroclesLion[=/=]BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:It is stated that Gyarados helps Ron and the others because Ron took great care of him even when he believed Magikarp would never evolve.]]
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* AndroclesLion[=/=]BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: AndroclesLion: [[spoiler:It is stated that Gyarados helps Ron and the others because Ron took great care of him even when he believed Magikarp would never evolve.]]
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* BodyHorror: Voldemort's possession of people is described as this, [[spoiler:with the Spiritomb's face appearing somewhere on their body, usually on [[{{BellyMouth}} their]] [[{{EyesDoNotBelongThere}} torso]].]]
* BrokenPedestal: After Harry decides to participate in the Grand Trainer Tournament, Professor [=McGonagall=] gives Harry the cold shoulder. This makes Harry lose most of the respect he has for her (although it had been eroded in past years), and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes her mistake]] Harry isn't exactly keen on forgiving her - and neither does a good part of his class group.
* BrokenPedestal: After Harry decides to participate in the Grand Trainer Tournament, Professor [=McGonagall=] gives Harry the cold shoulder. This makes Harry lose most of the respect he has for her (although it had been eroded in past years), and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes her mistake]] Harry isn't exactly keen on forgiving her - and neither does a good part of his class group.
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* BodyHorror: Voldemort's possession of people is described as this, [[spoiler:with the Spiritomb's face appearing somewhere on their body, usually on [[{{BellyMouth}} [[BellyMouth their]] [[{{EyesDoNotBelongThere}} [[EyesDoNotBelongThere torso]].]]
* BrokenPedestal: After Harry decides to participate in the Grand Trainer Tournament, Professor [=McGonagall=] gives Harry the cold shoulder. This makes Harry lose most of the respect he has for her (although it had been eroded in past years), and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes her mistake]] Harry isn't exactly keen on forgiving her- -- and neither does a good part of his class group.
* BrokenPedestal: After Harry decides to participate in the Grand Trainer Tournament, Professor [=McGonagall=] gives Harry the cold shoulder. This makes Harry lose most of the respect he has for her (although it had been eroded in past years), and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes her mistake]] Harry isn't exactly keen on forgiving her
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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Jack has all the Team Nocturne Agents that were captured in Little Hangleton killed by the Hoods.]]
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** Her father is this in at least [[UpToEleven eleven]] different ways.
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** Her father is this in at least [[UpToEleven eleven]] eleven different ways.
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13777870/1/Harry-Potter-and-the-Last-Aura-Knight Harry Potter and the Last Aura Knight]]'' ([=ongoing=])
* ''Harry Potter and the Hour of Legends'' ([=TBA=])
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13777870/1/Harry-Potter-and-the-Last-Aura-Knight Harry Potter and the Last Aura Knight]]'' ([=ongoing=])
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*''Harry ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14079436/1/Harry-Potter-and-The-Hour-of-Legends Harry Potter and the Hour of Legends'' ([=TBA=])Legends]]'' ([=ongoing=])
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A FusionFic crossover series between Franchise/HarryPotter and Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/464973/Mr-Chaos Mr Chaos]] and published at Website/FanfictionDotNet. It currently consists of:
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A FusionFic crossover series between Franchise/HarryPotter and Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/464973/Mr-Chaos Mr Chaos]] Creator/MrChaos and published at Website/FanfictionDotNet. It currently consists of:
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* HiddenDepths: Hagrid's a Pokémon Coordinator and starts teaching a class about Pokémon contests.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: McGonagall, Flitwick and Sprout die during the battle at the Ministry.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: McGonagall, [=McGonagall=], Flitwick and Sprout die during the battle at the Ministry.]]
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Due to excessive misuse, Getting Crap Past the Radar is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Guilden tells Umbridge that she seems like a "[[CountryMatters See you next Tuesday]]" kind of person.
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* BrainBleach: Chapter 28 has quite a few requests for this: the adults to forget Luna's [[TheImmodestOrgasm reaction]] to figuring out Ginny's ShoutOut, the kids to forget Jack [[ItMakesSenseInContext taking off his shirt]].
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* MindBleach: Chapter 28 has quite a few requests for this: the adults to forget Luna's [[TheImmodestOrgasm reaction]] to figuring out Ginny's ShoutOut, the kids to forget Jack [[ItMakesSenseInContext taking off his shirt]].
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* ''Harry Potter and the Last Aura Knight'' ([=TBA=])
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* ''Harry ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13777870/1/Harry-Potter-and-the-Last-Aura-Knight Harry Potter and the Last Aura Knight'' ([=TBA=])Knight]]'' ([=ongoing=])
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:[=McGonagall]], Flitwick and Sprout die during the battle at the Ministry.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:[=McGonagall]], [[spoiler: McGonagall, Flitwick and Sprout die during the battle at the Ministry.]]
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* DirtyBusiness: Jack infiltrates Avalon to kill all the Team Nocturne agents he can find in order to reduce Voldemort's power and make it harder for him to take over. [[spoiler:Kingsley Shacklebolt kills a traitor Auror by smashing her head with a rock when it becomes obvious that, if he doesn't let her go, she will frame him and the other Aurors as Voldemort supporters.]]
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* DirtyBusiness: Jack infiltrates Avalon to kill all the Team Nocturne agents he can find in order to reduce Voldemort's power and make it harder for him to take over. [[spoiler:Kingsley [[spoiler: Kingsley Shacklebolt kills a traitor Auror by smashing her head with a rock when it becomes obvious that, if he doesn't let her go, she will frame him and the other Aurors as Voldemort supporters.]]
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* BloodierAndGorier: As fights are more physical than in canon, people get worse injuries, and deaths tend to be a lot worse. This picks up when Jack enters the story.
** [[spoiler:Voldemort tricks Harry into going to the Ministry - which leads to several deaths.]]
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:[=McGonagall]], Flitwick and Sprout die during the battle at the Ministry.]]
* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler:Dumbledore reveals he is the Last Aura Knight and unleashes his power when he realizes it is the only way to defeat Voldemort.]]
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:Harry and Dumbledore blame themselves for the events at the Ministry.]]
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* SuicidalPacifism: Dumbledore spent the entire first war against Team Nocturne preaching against doing anything beyond stunning the terrorists - and is unwilling to buck the trend when Voldemort comes back, even though it's obvious it doesn't work.
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* SuicidalPacifism: Dumbledore spent the entire first war against Team Nocturne preaching against doing anything beyond stunning the terrorists - and is unwilling to buck the trend when Voldemort comes back, even though it's obvious it doesn't work. [[spoiler:This was caused by an attempt to overcompensate for the events of the war against Grindelwald: due to his powers as an Aura Knight, he could see the souls of his fellow Knights as they dissipated into death during the war, so during the fight against Nocturne he sought to save even the terrorists from dying - only for that to backfire when all it did was to prolong suffering and get even more people killed.]]
