First thing first, It's well written, and some of the humor is good, and the sexual scenes are pretty.
But that's about it.
The OC Stand In
(If you can even call that, they basically Expies and Captain Ersatz
of someone else outside Naruto fanchise) quickly rob the spotlight.
Character bashing a plenty, and Naruto is even more of a Butt Monkey
than canon. Everyone's suffering, all caused by the fox spirit, played for laughs. This, includes almost being killed and losing your only home. This is basically Harsher In Hindsight
: the Fanfic
And the Fox Spirit still portrayed as if they're the only righteous people, if you can call them that. Karma Houdini
at it's finest, and there' more than one of them.
So if you want to enjoy the story, shut your brain. Recite MST 3 K
mantra all the way, else you'll get offended VERY QUICKLY.