Reviews: Naruto Genkyouien
- Comments: Second of my three great humor fics of Naruto fanfiction. Sayuri (Kyuubi) is hilarious, and Naruto trying to deal with her is pure comedy gold. Also, Pwetty Beam!
- Comartemis: Sweet Jesus on a pogo stick, I think this one might've actually broken my brain. The crack is strong in this one; for just one of many examples, Sayuri casually referring to Shukaku as Pedobear almost made me spew soda all over my laptop.
- Kurtulmak: It's pretty much Kanokon in Naruto* . A lot of emphasis on Ecchi OCs. Not my cup of tea.
- Catt: Utterly hilarious. The ramen gag both makes me laugh and Squicks me out.
- T-bone61: Expect Canon to punch out early. Expect Rule Of Funny-based OOC-ness. Expect crossovers. If absolutely nothing else, read in for that friggin' ramen scene. It's a crack-lover's paradise, really.
- Jomlos: I would personally recommended it after read the earlier chapter, really, but then again not, not after the Destruction of Third Hokage Statue's nose and Ichiraku's Ramen had to be closed permanently because of that (and too ecchi even for Naruto Crack Fic, but then again YMMV).
- Stormofscript: 100% recommended, it has solid humor, characters and plot. One of the best Naruto fics I've ever read.
- It has good gramar and detailed explanations, but the OCC are obscenely overpowered, all the Ninjas are incompetent buffons, Sayuri is kind of a horrible monster for all her cuteness, Ayame (possesed) is a near rapist, Setsuna is a Fair Folk in steroides, Naruto is a complete loser who is literally abused over by all the girls (and this is a good thing), the Bashing is so much its toxic and really, its go extremely heavy with Moral Myopia in line with the Fox spirits, who can abuse and destroy as much as they want without ever suffering repercussions. Imagine Domina No Do in the Naruto Verse but worse. To be fair, the sex scenes are done great and has some funny moments until Naruto blew up the Hokage mountain, where the story went ga ga pretty fast
Do Not Want
First thing first, It's well written, and some of the humor is good, and the sexual scenes are pretty. But that's about it. The OC Stand In (If you can even call that, they basically Expies and Captain Ersatz of someone else outside Naruto fanchise) quickly rob the spotlight. Character bashing a plenty, and Naruto is even more of a Butt Monkey than canon. Everyone's suffering, all caused by the fox spirit, played for laughs. This, includes almost being killed and losing your only home. This is basically Harsher In Hindsight : the Fanfic And the Fox Spirit still portrayed as if they're the only righteous people, if you can call them that. Karma Houdini at it's finest, and there' more than one of them. So if you want to enjoy the story, shut your brain. Recite MST 3 K mantra all the way, else you'll get offended VERY QUICKLY.
- There are some issues I have with this fic. Several plot points and main characters are ripped directly from other stories and fiction that have absolutely nothing to do with Naruto and do not contribute anything towards the mood of the story. How Kotonoha and Setsuna from School Days became kitsune is beyond me. The same feeling towards how apparently the Hyuuga bloodline is forged off a very busty kitsune and is dedicated to busty women, while the Uchiha like flat chests and worship them. Oh, and for no reason that would have mattered up to this point, Tenten is a magical girl. These shout outs have almost no contribution and fit extremely poorly with the other moods of this story. However, the author has managed to make a convincing case with the rivalry between Kotonoha and Setsuna over Makoto, who is still in the gym bag. My god... Everything else however, fails to make sense or fit in at all with the rest of the somber or light mood like everything else. Keep this in mind and if these shout outs don't sound right in a Naruto fic, you may have to pass down what is otherwise a story that captures the mood of Naruto like fish to water.
- (A warning to mods and stuff, this doesn't depict full sex, but some of the act is shown and the aftermath. Does that warrant a nuke for Naruto being far less than 16 by story start? (End of Chuunin Exam Preliminaries). Also, in Chapter 23, a very good example of what I mean by showing part of sex is present. (Scene 29) )
Read this fanfiction. Why? It's comedic (as in you will fall out of your seat clutching your stomach from laughing so hard), filled to the brim with sexual references (and almost lemon scenes), and yet behind it all lies an interesting story that pops up at the most random of times. I completely and utterly suggest anyone with a sense of humor to read this story.