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throwaawy Since: Mar, 2011

11/02/2013 15:21:32 •••

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Comments: Second of my three great humor fics of Naruto fanfiction. Sayuri (Kyuubi) is hilarious, and Naruto trying to deal with her is pure comedy gold. Also, Pwetty Beam!
- Comartemis: Sweet Jesus on a pogo stick, I think this one might've actually broken my brain. The crack is strong in this one; for just one of many examples, Sayuri casually referring to Shukaku as Pedobear almost made me spew soda all over my laptop.
- Kurtulmak: It's pretty much Kanokon in Naruto*
  with a crossover from School Days
  . A lot of emphasis on Ecchi OCs. Not my cup of tea.
- Catt: Utterly hilarious. The ramen gag both makes me laugh and Squicks me out.
- T-bone61: Expect Canon to punch out early. Expect Rule Of Funny-based OOC-ness. Expect crossovers. If absolutely nothing else, read in for that friggin' ramen scene. It's a crack-lover's paradise, really.
- Jomlos: I would personally recommended it after read the earlier chapter, really, but then again not, not after the Destruction of Third Hokage Statue's nose and Ichiraku's Ramen had to be closed permanently because of that (and too ecchi even for Naruto Crack Fic, but then again YMMV).
- Stormofscript: 100% recommended, it has solid humor, characters and plot. One of the best Naruto fics I've ever read.
- It has good gramar and detailed explanations, but the OCC are obscenely overpowered, all the Ninjas are incompetent buffons, Sayuri is kind of a horrible monster for all her cuteness, Ayame (possesed) is a near rapist, Setsuna is a Fair Folk in steroides, Naruto is a complete loser who is literally abused over by all the girls (and this is a good thing), the Bashing is so much its toxic and really, its go extremely heavy with Moral Myopia in line with the Fox spirits, who can abuse and destroy as much as they want without ever suffering repercussions. Imagine Domina No Do in the Naruto Verse but worse. To be fair, the sex scenes are done great and has some funny moments until Naruto blew up the Hokage mountain, where the story went ga ga pretty fast

qtjinla15 Since: Dec, 2010

02/23/2012 00:00:00

So a horribly written and cracktastic story focusing on insane and overpowered OC's set in the Narutoverse?

T-bone61 Since: Nov, 2009

11/02/2013 00:00:00

T-bone61: I typed my above comment while the story was still young, and now, upon retrospect, I have to second many of the later criticisms. A criticism of my own is that while Genkyouien's prose isn't quite at Featureless Plane of Disembodied Dialogue levels yet, it's gotten close. This alone might compromise your reading experience.

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