The Annotated Edition
aka: Once More With Endnotes
A version of a written text, more often than not a collection of previously released material, that contains notes from the author
(or someone else with insight into the work
) in footnotes or sidebars.
This is very common with textbook editions of texts using foreign languages or archaic forms of English, usually to explain idioms that would never make sense to us modern, English-speaking folk
. For instance, pretty much anything Shakespeare
wrote has a few annotated editions. The Canterbury Tales
, being written in Middle and Old English respectively, are also commonly available in annotated editions.
Also common with certain classic works of Literature
, especially those with a reputation for being "dense." Finnegan's Wake
by James Joyce
can be nearly impenetrable without annotation.
It can also serve as a way to explain creative decisions if the creator is A) still alive and B) the one doing the annotations. This variant is very common in collections of comics.
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Comic Strip Collections
- Bloom County: The Complete Library has annotations to explain then-relevant pop-culture references and explain who the political figures being caricatured are. Breathed himself pops up from time to time to explain character origins or thought processes, but mostly just to tell us which strips he thinks are his crowning moments of funny and which are Old Shames.
- Calvin and Hobbes's tenth anniversary best-of book has notes from Watterson, many of which go into more detail on his assorted Author Tracts or give artistic insight.
- Pearls Before Swine's treasury collections contain annotations from Pastis which try to elaborate on where ideas came from and detail reactions to the more controversial strips. And tell us which things he found impossible to draw.
- A few of the Dilbert collections (usually the specialized ones) also have text commentary.
- Jess Nevins has a cottage industry annotating Alan Moore's League of Extraordinary Gentlemen. An interesting variation in that his annotations are not published WITH the books, but first on the web, and, at least for Vols. I and II, in book form separately (Heroes And Monsters and The Blazing World). Moore has said that the existence of these annotations meant that "we could be as obscure and far-reaching as we wanted".
- Nevins has also posted annotations online for Kingdom Come, Top 10, The Nail, and other comics.
- Most recently, Nevins has compiled annotations for Fables which were officially published by DC as The Fables Encydlopedia.
- Neil Gaiman's The Sandman is being released in an annotated four-volume set. An interesting variation here, as the annotated version has reprinted the entire series without colour, using the original black-and-white line-art, as opposed to being a strict reprint with added footnotes.
- While The Complete Peanuts does not have annotations, there is an online set of annotations for the various volumes here: .
- Star Wars: The Annotated Screenplays has its annotations primarily focus on how the scripts of the original trilogy evolved from prior drafts. Scenes that changed in the Special Editions also had the original and revised versions placed alongside one another.
- The Annotated Alice, an omnibus edition of Alice in Wonderland and Through the Looking-Glass with annotations by Martin Gardner explaining historical context, obscure in-jokes, etc. Gardner followed up with The Annotated Hunting of the Snark.
- The Annotated Christmas Carol includes the original text of 1843 and Dickens' 1867 Public Reading Text, which had its world premiere in America and hadn't been reprinted in nearly a century. The notes include explanatory descriptions of foods, customs, legal terms, socio-economic references and so on.
- The second printing of America (The Book) contains humorous "fact check" annotations in red ink.
- Almost all editions of Sun Tzu's The Art of War include annotations by multiple classical-era authors, most notably Cao Cao. These make up 80% or so of the book and are normally considered an indispensible part of the text, providing far more information than the original work. Modern-era publishers will often add a second set of notes. These annotations help because some of the things said in it are vague, and some context is useful, and other things require some knowledge of early Chinese history to make sense.
- The Bible has a multitude of annotations. And these have annotations of their own.
- Around 1970 the Classic Publishing Corporation put out a series of classical books with annotations, such as Captains Courageous and Around The World in Eighty Days. The annotations explained the meaning of words modern readers might not understand.
- Most good editions of The Divine Comedy are heavily annotated: at the remove of 700 years or so, and given that Dante went on Author Tracts and Author Filibusters in long stretches of the work about now-forgotten Florentine politicians or abstruse theological issues, it's often very difficult to tell who's who or what Dante is on about now without extensive footnotes.
- The first ever annotated edition was produced by Dante's son, who at one point in the Paradiso section notoriously gave up and admitted that even he had no idea what his father was talking about.
- Leonard Wolf's The Annotated Dracula (1975) explained a great deal of background information about Dracula that most readers wouldn't know about.
- Almost all editions of Shakespeare's plays are annotated in some fashion.
- Ian McKellen published an Annotated edition of his screenplay for the 1995 film adaptation of Richard III, and it's an invaluable look at the process of adapting Shakespeare to the screen. It's also available for free reading on his website.
- The Annotated Sherlock Holmes is a two volume onmibus of all of Arthur Conan Doyle's Holmes stories, in best-guess chronological order, with lots of annotations.
- Two Gentlemen Of Lebowski's first printing was an annotated edition, to keep up the pretense of it being an authentic reprint of a Shakespeare play. (To be fair, the author did such a good job keeping the linguistics authentic that a fair amount of the annotations are necessary to follow the piece.)
- The classic long-form poem The Rime of the Ancient Mariner was reprinted twice: once with revised language and once with a "gloss" that explained several things.
- Adolf Hitler's Mein Kampf is only available legally as an annotated, censored edition in Germany, with entire parts of the original book missing.
- Anne of Green Gables. One amusing bit is the annotating author observing that somehow Anne obtained a copy of Ben Hur two years before it was published.
- Many compilations of stories by H.P. Lovecraft include annotations explaining the historical context or how individual stories fit into the greater Cthulhu Mythos.
- Gullivers Travels - dozens of political and literary references entirely opaque to the modern reader (to the point that it's often mistaken for a children's fairy tale).
- Don Quixote: Sancho uses many proverbs and Spanish idioms that get lost in translation. There are also many allusions to chivalrous knights, courtly love and mythology that most people are not even aware of today. Snarky volumes point out the continuity errors.
- Anything by Thomas Hardy - the man peppered his novels with classical allusions.
- Paradise Lost. It's probably possible without the notes, but boy, does it make life a lot easier.
- "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner". The writer himself had to write Cliff Notes so that his friends could understand it.
- Isaac Asimov's Annotated Gilbert and Sullivan provides an exhaustive annotation for all 14 Gilbert and Sullivan operettas, including the three than nobody remembers anymore. Many of Gilbert's allusions are either particularly British or particularly Victorian, and Gilbert used the full range of the English language vocabulary as well as occasional terms from other languages. All of this provides rich annotation fodder.
- T. S. Eliot provided some endnotes of his own for his poem "The Waste Land"; the poem includes untranslated quotes from various sources. Unfortunately, the endnotes are sometimes almost as obscure as the poem itself.
- Romance of the Three Kingdoms: Translations are often loaded with annotations explaining all sorts of aspects of ancient Chinese culture, from date conversions to the characters' frequent references to earlier historical characters, as well as notable places where the most commonly read version of the text was significantly changed from the original. One edition has over 100 pages of endnotes, but it is an over 2000 page long novel.
- Sometimes, non-Western literature, especially translated versions of Japanese literature/light novels such as Welcome to the NHK have endnotes to explain even contemporary references which may seem obvious to a Japanese person if they are rooted in the context of the novel, but a Western person like an American or a different English speaking person might miss. ADV comics, notably, is extremely enthusiastic with the footnoting. One time spending an entire page of text to explain how their translation of a single made-up Japanese word in their translation of Tsubasa.
- The edition of Samuel Pepys's Diary has so many endnotes they take up an entire volume, with another volume of general reference.
- Lolita—not because it was written particularly long ago, but because it's packed with allusions and sneaky wordplay.
- The Flashman series has this as well. The annotations play with the Literary Agent Hypothesis, and as well as explaining the various allusions and Victorian pop-culture references, point out occasions on which the eponymous character must have been mistaken, or exaggerated for effect.
- Jane Austen's works are available as annotated editions, which won't be necessary for modern audiences to understand the basic storylines, but certainly will help with understanding all the social criticism that went into her works.
- An annotated version of Star Wars: Heir to the Empire was released for the book's 20th anniversary.
- Bob and George has the on-site commentary, which currently goes up to March 18th, 2005.
- The printed collections of Penny Arcade have text commentary.
- Narbonic is a special case, in that it's available in a separate annotated edition, which came after the "vanilla" release was completed.
- Queen of Wands did rapid-fire annotated reruns after the comic was completed.
- In-Universe example: This Tales from the Pit comic is an annotated version of the previous comic.
- David Willis adorns every page of his Shortpacked! collections with annotations, and scatters them sporadically about the Walkyverse collections.