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ExiledDave Since: Nov, 2010
Sep 1st 2013 at 2:29:37 PM •••

I pulled the following from the Corran Horn entry on this page due to it seeming like character bashing more than anything else.

"Having him killing exur kun's force ghost single handed instead of the Powerof Friendship ending of the original books. Stackpole gave the character a skill set that creeps into Mary Sue territory, while bending the persona's of established characters to fit Horn into a storyline. Again, in I, Jedi he gives us Leia instantly trusting a man she's never met with her twins, who she's kept on a secret planet that not even she knew the location for, after someone on the planet just put the current strongest force user in lore into a coma. It also gives us a Luke with a massive case of Idiot Ball just to allow the author to use Horn to rant an author tract against Anderson's pet."

A couple of points:

  • He didn't beat Exar Kun; Kun messed him up to the point that Mara Jade had to carry him back to the ship and dump him in a bacta tank after Kun decided to save him for last. Kun then left to deal with the other students, thus leading to his Power of Friendship defeat from the Academy trilogy.
  • On the subject of power, Corran has an affinity for illusion (limited use), at the cost of next-to-no telekinesis (stock Jedi Power) plus the ability to absorb energy (a la Luke, Vader, other established Jedi).
  • Leia didn't leave her kids with him; she left them with an entire school of Jedi students, one of which happened to be someone whose reputation she knew.
  • There was a lot of A Million Is a Statistic in the Jedi Academy trilogy, and Kyp is a Base Breaker who essentially got away with blowing up an inhabited star system, Imperial or not.
  • Luke was at a low point when the author tract mentioned above happens. He's notably more in-character when he turns up later in the book.

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GurneyHalleck Since: Aug, 2013
Sep 2nd 2013 at 8:41:58 AM •••

I don't honestly see it as bashing if it's following the reasoning I was told to put in. I was told to provide examples for each of the four points on the page, and I did. Leia's actions were still out of character given the previous established lore, Corran's backstory still reads like wish fulfillment, and his "weakness" with telekinesis is constantly reversed by his "really really rare you guys" energy absorption powers. Injecting a character into another's work, and making them better (Less whiny, more together, more athletic, training with an already established character, and being only one of three people with a lightsaber) then every other character isn't a creator pet? Come on. I've had to rewrite this thing four times already for flimsy reasons when there are far more poorly worded and exampled ones. I'll leave it gone for now, but I don't see how it's any less bashing or wrong then anything else on that page.

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Jordan Azor Ahai Since: Jan, 2001
Azor Ahai
Dec 24th 2012 at 12:24:31 PM •••

I pulled the following:

  • It's fairly obvious that George RR Martin loves Catelyn Tully far more than fans do; consider that nearly all characters treat her as if she's wise and capable, more than one man loves her, and she's always written as the "only adult in the room" when in fact she's usually surrounded by seasoned warriors. She has her "token flaw" (that she cannot stand the sight of John Snow, who serves as a reminder of her husband's infidelity) but otherwise is perceived as near perfect by a lot of people. Problem is, her advice is usually bad, and driven by her swinging moods, and it's arguable that at least one of her brash actions provides the catalyst for much unpleasantness that follows. She frames the wrong person, abducts him without cause, takes him to her crazy sister for judgement, nearly getting him killed when he was in no way at fault, but is still presented not just sympathetically, but as if she's someone whose judgement her war-leader son should trust. Yes, she died later, but that was more an indication of Anyone Can Die, plus she's now back as an undead, apparently having learning nothing about rushing to judgement.
    • In addition to her rashness, her hypocrisy is also an issue. More than once, she reminds her son that he is not just a teenage boy, but a king, and therefore does not have the luxury of thinking or acting like a boy. That's good advice. However, she later frees Jamie Lannister from captivity, in the hopes that her daughters will be returned. In doing so, she seriously harms her son's war effort. She excuses herself by claiming that she acted out of "mother's love". Had she taken her own advice though, she would have realized that she is not just a mother, but the mother of a king, and thus does not have the luxury of thinking or acting like a normal mother. The reason this is so vexing is because the narrative clearly expects us to sympathize with her, portraying her as a tragic heroine, ignoring the fact that the situation is no one's fault but her own.

This really seems to be more character-bashing than an actual example of the trope. (Note that is says she "frames" the wrong person- she honestly thought that Tyrion had tried to kill her son) A lot of the reason that Catelyn is so hated by fans (as the above demonstrates) is because she's mean to fan favorites Jon Snow and Tyrion Lannister, who definitely border on this trope if not fit it. Notably, both of them are presented as very cool and are quite lucky (at least as ASOIF characters go), whereas nothing good ever happens to Catelyn.

I think Catelyn is pretty clearly presented as the personification of "the road to hell is paved with good intentions". All of her decisions are at least somewhat reasonable based on the information she currently had, but all lead to horrible outcomes.

Along similar lines, while Catelyn is basically a good, well-intentioned person, she is very cold and judgmental- she exists to show how unpleasant a good, well-intentioned person can be (which is why fans hate her far more than all the cool mass murderers).

Edit- Catelyn is very rarely treated as the voice of reason/the only adult in the room- the only times she is clearly this is more or less by default, when paired with her crazy sister or trying to mediate between the feuding brothers Stannis and Renly, which is a literal example of Poor Communication Kills. She is sometimes more sensible than her son, Robb or brother, Edmure, but those times are counterbalanced by her own flaws (laid out in excruciating detail above).

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Hodor Since: Dec, 1969
Dec 24th 2012 at 12:35:29 PM •••

Just replying under my new Handle as per my edit on the main page. Apologies for signing in under my old Handle without realizing it.

Edit- Since I can't edit my post above under this username, I just wanted to note as a tl; dr version, that basically, given her opposition to fan favorite characters and the fact that she's almost always wrong, Catelyn seems closer to being a Straw Loser than this trope. Incidentally, I should mention that her being resurrected isn't presented as a good thing (other than for the Pay Evil unto Evil aspect). She [[spoiler: Came Back Wrong as an insane Knight Templar.

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Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
Oct 31st 2011 at 4:58:53 AM •••

The following entry in the Star Wars Expanded Universe example was completely spoilered, which is a violation of our Handling Spoilers policy.

Saba is turning this way, especially after Vortex and Conviction, since Troy Denning tends to take the lead role in writing these nonologies.

After reading it I couldn't see why the writer bothered to spoiler it at all, so I unspoiled everything except the character's name.

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