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* ''Looks around at the beautiful flower-strewn forest and grassland.* I can certainly see the devastation. So what was the name of this, possibly fictional, criminal?''\\
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'*Jenny blinks, and flips back through the last four pages of her notes, then starts crossing bits out.*''\\
'''Officer Jenny''': J? Pokémon Hunter J? The J who we don't even send police against any more, because it was like giving her Growlithe to sell? The J who we only go up against when there's a Gym's whole Pokémon roster on call? The J who once got damn close to capturing at least one of the Legendary Beasts, and we now think her client pulled out? That J?\\
''*Ash looks between Maurice, Misty, Brock, and their assembled Pokémon.*''\\
'''Officer Jenny''': J? Pokémon Hunter J? The J who we don't even send police against any more, because it was like giving her Growlithe to sell? The J who we only go up against when there's a Gym's whole Pokémon roster on call? The J who once got damn close to capturing at least one of the Legendary Beasts, and we now think her client pulled out? That J?\\
''*Ash looks between Maurice, Misty, Brock, and their assembled Pokémon.*''\\
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'''Officer Jenny''': J? Pokémon Hunter J? The J who we don't even send police against any more, because it was like giving her Growlithe to sell? The J who we only go up against when there's a Gym's whole Pokémon roster on call? The J who once got damn close to capturing at least one of the Legendary Beasts, and we now think her client pulled out? That J?\\
''*Ash looks between Maurice, Misty, Brock, and their assembled Pokémon.*''\\
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** When Ash, his friends and Maurice are talking with Officer Jenny about the incident with J:
--> '''Officer Jenny''': So… the flying battleship was invisible, I see. And then it caught fire…\\
*''Looks around at the beautiful flower-strewn forest and grassland.* I can certainly see the devastation. So what was the name of this, possibly fictional, criminal?''\\
'''Ash''': Oh, didn't we mention? Sorry. J.\\
'*Jenny blinks, and flips back through the last four pages of her notes, then starts crossing bits out.*''\\
'''Officer Jenny''': J? Pokémon Hunter J? The J who we don't even send police against any more, because it was like giving her Growlithe to sell? The J who we only go up against when there's a Gym's whole Pokémon roster on call? The J who once got damn close to capturing at least one of the Legendary Beasts, and we now think her client pulled out? That J?\\
''*Ash looks between Maurice, Misty, Brock, and their assembled Pokémon.*''\\
'''Ash''':...is there another one?
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*''Looks around at the beautiful flower-strewn forest and grassland.* I can certainly see the devastation. So what was the name of this, possibly fictional, criminal?''\\
'''Ash''': Oh, didn't we mention? Sorry. J.\\
'*Jenny blinks, and flips back through the last four pages of her notes, then starts crossing bits out.*''\\
'''Officer Jenny''': J? Pokémon Hunter J? The J who we don't even send police against any more, because it was like giving her Growlithe to sell? The J who we only go up against when there's a Gym's whole Pokémon roster on call? The J who once got damn close to capturing at least one of the Legendary Beasts, and we now think her client pulled out? That J?\\
''*Ash looks between Maurice, Misty, Brock, and their assembled Pokémon.*''\\
'''Ash''':...is there another one?
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*** Ash's score on the test: Interfering Busybody.
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*** Not to mention the schadenfreude when Ash handily beats all the practical tests and the instructor is forced to give him the certificate anyway.
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*** Ash's score on the test: Interfering Busybody.
Busybody. The remake changes it to being given an I with Todd noting it means 'Interfering busybody we wish we could flunk, but he scored too high'
*** Not to mention the schadenfreude when Ash handily beats all the practical tests and the instructor is forced to give him the certificateanyway.anyway, with him being given it offscreen in the rewrite, reluctantly at that.
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** Norman saying about some of the stupid errors he did back when he was a rookie. Like trying to catch a Ninjask (a decent Pokemon who is also the ''second fastest Pokemon'', only beaten by Deoxys' Speed Forme) with a Slakoth (a very basic and incredibly slow Pokemon that sleeps half the turns).
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-->'''Norman:''' [[DidntThinkThisThrough "Thinking back, that's just ''painful''...]]
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* Max thinks Alola Pokémon are weird, which Cinder reminds him who's he using first.
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** Damian [[BringMyBrownPants losing his control.]]
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** The "fight", if you could call it that, between Pikachu and Surge'sRaichu; Raichu as a rematch in the original version; it's over in one second.
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* Getting frustrated with Ash's Pikachu, wearing the hat [[NoSell that gives him the Dark-typing and neutralizes all psychic power]], Gary's Alakazam Thieves the hat and puts it on... [[DidntThinkThisThrough forgetting that he is levitating using psychic power]]. GravityIsAHarshMistress indeed.
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* Getting In the original version, getting frustrated with Ash's Pikachu, wearing the hat [[NoSell that gives him the Dark-typing and neutralizes all psychic power]], Gary's Alakazam Thieves the hat and puts it on... [[DidntThinkThisThrough forgetting that he is levitating using psychic power]]. GravityIsAHarshMistress indeed.
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* The punks tormenting Lapras. [[WhatAnIdiot They're so stupid that]] ''[[IdiotHero Ash]]'' was the OnlySaneMan in that scene.
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--> ''Someone should probably remind Ash at some point that the Battle Frontier is invitation only, because he sort of forgot that bit. ''
--> ''Someone should probably remind Ash at some point that the Battle Frontier is invitation only, because he sort of forgot that bit. ''
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*** And then him showing his Legendary Beasts something the Kimono Girls left as a tribute to them: [[EverythingsBetterWithPlushies Legendary Beast Plushies!]] Stylized from their televised battle in the Silver Conference, meaning Raikou's come with signs, Suicune's come with a hat... and Entei's come with hair decorations. [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten Much to the latter's chagrin.]]
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--> '''Pikachu:''' You're a Porygon-line Pokémon that evolved in the Reverse World. I suggest... [[SdrawkcabName nogyroP]].
--> '''Dexter:''' [[NoJustNoReaction No.]]
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-->nogyroP]].\\
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He shrugged. "...aaand there we go, no need to bother telling me no. Sorry about that, wanted to clear that warning."
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'''Dexter:''' [[NoJustNoReaction No.]]
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** Dr. Akihabara welcomes the Cyber-Destined back from another digitization - only to find them CoveredInGunge. They don't say why (WordOfGod says Shiny Grimer).
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** Ash's Primeape goes up against [[spoiler: Gary's Golem]] in the P1 finals. [[spoiler: Primeape lands [[SingleStrokeBattle a]] ''[[FinishingMove Master Blow]]'' that [[CurbStompBattle immediately annihilates Golem in the blink of an eye]].]]
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* Remember Drake and his Ditto? The one that frustrates challengers to no end (and got a huge buff from copying Pikachu)? Lucario and Pikachu finally take it out (after ''three'' of Drake's other Pokémon come and go in the process): [[spoiler: Lucario used [[FastballSpecial Fling]].]]
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** Remember that Moltres that was following James around? [[spoiler: Well, James finally caught it, and he didn't even know it. How? While Moltres was investigating Team Rocket's camp in the middle of the night, she trips over a few Pokéballs, ends up caught in one, and can't struggle to get out because ''Gyarados rolls over onto it in his sleep!'']]sleep!''
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** Warning: Ash's opponent Steve has Pokemon based on the Ookagari from ''Fanfic/YetAgainWithALittleExtraHelp'', and are, if possible, ''crazier than Ash and his Pokemon''. {{Crazy Awesome}}ness and HilarityEnsues here.
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