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* ThePresidentsDaughter: [[spoiler:Sokka]] takes a turn as this [[spoiler:right after he and Azula hook up]].
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* ShoutOut: Several, including one to HouseOfLeaves, a few to the bible Literature/TheBible (specifically [[spoiler:Behemoth, Leviathan, and Ziz]]), and about half a dozen to the CthulhuMythos, of all things - hopefully, this isn't {{foreshadowing}}.

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* ShoutOut: Several, including one to HouseOfLeaves, ''Literature/HouseOfLeaves'', a few to the bible Literature/TheBible (specifically [[spoiler:Behemoth, Leviathan, and Ziz]]), and about half a dozen to the CthulhuMythos, of all things - hopefully, this isn't {{foreshadowing}}.
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Has not been updated since Jan 31, 2011

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Xanatos Roulette has been renamed to Gambit Roulette. Hannibal Lecture is not a \'moment of awesome\' trope. It is about captives interogating their intergogatpr


* ActionGirl: Well, duh. Aside from canon, there's four female [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] to date (of various [[CharacterAlignment alignments]]) who are all very {{badass}}.

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* ActionGirl: Well, duh. ActionGirl: Aside from canon, there's four female [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] to date (of various [[CharacterAlignment alignments]]) who are all very {{badass}}.



* BigBad: Zhou. Hey, don't go...
* BigBadWannabe: OC Doro Kim has some [[XanatosRoulette master plan]] which others repeatedly [[LampshadeHanging state could never possibly work]], though his incompetence is what makes him dangerous:

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* BigBad: Zhou. Hey, don't go...\n
* BigBadWannabe: OC Doro Kim has some [[XanatosRoulette [[ThePlan master plan]] which others repeatedly [[LampshadeHanging state could never possibly work]], though his incompetence is what makes him dangerous:



* HannibalLecture: Azula's Hannibal Lecture to Kazane takes up half a chapter, all told. And it's awesome.

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* HannibalLecture: Azula's Hannibal Lecture to Kazane takes up half a chapter, all told. And it's awesome.*GambitRoulette: A running gag is someone pointing out how OC Doro Kim's plans could never possibly work



* InSpiteOfANail: The point of divergence with canon is about a hundred and thirty-odd years ago, and yet all the canon characters exist (even Aang, though he's dead now). And Ozai is still evil.

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* InSpiteOfANail: The point of divergence with canon is about a hundred and thirty-odd years ago, and yet all the canon characters exist (even Aang, though he's dead now). And Ozai is still evil.
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* WorldBuilding: The whole point of the exercise is to explore the ''Avatar'' universe in greater detail...giving us things like airbender supremacists, slavers, criminal undergrounds, even EldritchAbominations!

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* WorldBuilding: The whole point of the exercise is to explore the ''Avatar'' universe in greater detail... giving us things like airbender supremacists, slavers, criminal undergrounds, even EldritchAbominations!{{Eldritch Abomination}}s!
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Eighty Two ''thousand'' words ''and counting!'' Is this a fanfic or a novel?

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* BeenThereShapedHistory: Ilmarinen is somehow tied to the [[AncientTradition White Lotuses]], [[spoiler:possibly even responsible for their existence]]. Also, Wakaun is Hahn's father.



* TheGump: Ilmarinen is somehow tied to the [[AncientTradition White Lotuses]], [[spoiler:possibly even responsible for their existence]]. Also, Wakaun is Hahn's father.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6255276/1/The_World_without_the_War The World without the War]]'' is an AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~smichael S-Michael]] set in a version of the AvatarTheLastAirbender universe [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin where the century-long war never happened]]. Avatar Aang died sixteen years ago, meaning that the next Avatar will be (1) a waterbender, and (2) female. The Water Tribes do not have the best track record where it comes to women's lib, so Azula is sent to remind them not to try anything. Meanwhile, Toph is plotting to overthrow the Earth Kingdom and Zhou is planning...[[{{spoiler}} something]]...

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6255276/1/The_World_without_the_War The World without the War]]'' is an AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~smichael S-Michael]] set in a version of the AvatarTheLastAirbender ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' universe [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin where the century-long war never happened]]. Avatar Aang died sixteen years ago, meaning that the next Avatar will be (1) a waterbender, and (2) female. The Water Tribes do not have the best track record where it comes to women's lib, so Azula is sent to remind them not to try anything. Meanwhile, Toph is plotting to overthrow the Earth Kingdom and Zhou is planning...[[{{spoiler}} something]]...

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* [[spoiler:AMatchMadeInStockholm: Amy and Tsu hook up.]] Lampshaded:
-->[[spoiler:'''Tsubasa:''' "You've got some sort of late-onset Stockholm Syndrome or something?"]]



* [[spoiler:AMatchMadeInStockholm: Amy and Tsu hook up.]] Lampshaded:
-->[[spoiler:'''Tsubasa:''' "You've got some sort of late-onset Stockholm Syndrome or something?"]]



* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Airbenders are peaceful vegetarians? Nobody told Tsubasa!



* TheOneGuy: Sokka.

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* TheOneGuy: Sokka.



* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Airbenders are peaceful vegetarians? Nobody told Tsubasa!



* ShoutOut: Several, including one to HouseOfLeaves, a few to the bible TheBible (specifically [[spoiler:Behemoth, Leviathan, and Ziz]]), and about half a dozen to the CthulhuMythos, of all things - hopefully, this isn't {{foreshadowing}}.

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* ShoutOut: Several, including one to HouseOfLeaves, a few to the bible TheBible Literature/TheBible (specifically [[spoiler:Behemoth, Leviathan, and Ziz]]), and about half a dozen to the CthulhuMythos, of all things - hopefully, this isn't {{foreshadowing}}.
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Misuse of Chekhovs Lecture, now renamed Chekhovs Classroom


* ChekhovsGun: A couple of the {{info dump}}s have turned out to have contained information useful to the story later. (Some planned, some [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants not]].)



* ChekhovsLecture: A couple of the {{info dump}}s have turned out to have contained information useful to the story later. (Some planned, some [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants not]].)
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* ButtMonkey: No one likes the Northern Water Tribe. Not even the Southern Water Tribe. Also, Doro Kim gets zero respect--even Long Feng thinks he's an idiot. Oh, and he has an in-universe nickname (see above). Yeah.

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* ButtMonkey: No one likes the Northern Water Tribe. Not even the Southern Water Tribe. Also, Doro Kim gets zero respect--even Long Feng thinks he's an idiot. Oh, and he has an in-universe detractor nickname (see above). Yeah.



* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Not in a general sense, but the main characters are Azula, Katara, [[TheOneGuy Sokka]], Ty Lee, Mai, and two female OCs.

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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Not in a general sense, but the main characters are Azula, Katara, [[TheOneGuy Sokka]], Ty Lee, Mai, and two female OCs.[=OCs=].
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* ButtMonkey: No one likes the Northern Water Tribe. Not even the Southern Water Tribe. Also, Doro Kim gets zero respect--even Long Feng thinks he's an idiot. Oh, and he has an in-universe DetractorNickname (see above). Yeah.

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* ButtMonkey: No one likes the Northern Water Tribe. Not even the Southern Water Tribe. Also, Doro Kim gets zero respect--even Long Feng thinks he's an idiot. Oh, and he has an in-universe DetractorNickname nickname (see above). Yeah.
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* [[spoiler:ReallySevenhundredYearsOld: Ilmarinen is one thousand years old.]]

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* [[spoiler:ReallySevenhundredYearsOld: [[spoiler:ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Ilmarinen is one thousand years old.]]



** Any time someone says "X [[TemptingFate couldn't possibly happen" (and it didn't happen in canon), ''it's about to happen!''

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** Any time someone says "X [[TemptingFate couldn't possibly happen" happen]]" (and it didn't happen in canon), ''it's about to happen!''



* UnholyHolySword: [[spoiler:airbending]], of all things! Well, to be more precise, [[spoiler:certain airbenders can (temporarily) increase their power by ''sucking out a person or animal's soul!'']] The truly scary thing is, they don't even know that they're doing it.

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* UnholyHolySword: [[spoiler:airbending]], [[spoiler:Airbending]], of all things! Well, to be more precise, [[spoiler:certain airbenders can (temporarily) increase their power by ''sucking out a person or animal's soul!'']] The truly scary thing is, they don't even know that they're doing it.

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* ChekhovsLecture: A couple of the {{info dump}}s have turned out to have contained information useful to the story later. (Some planned, some [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants not]].

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* ChekhovsLecture: A couple of the {{info dump}}s have turned out to have contained information useful to the story later. (Some planned, some [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants not]].)



* JerkwithAHeartOfGold: Tsubasa, again.

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* JerkwithAHeartOfGold: JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Tsubasa, again.



* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Eight different named OCs at this point, and most of the major canon characters make an appearance.

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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Eight different named OCs [=OCs=] at this point, and most of the major canon characters make an appearance.



** Faina means "shining," Prokhor means "leader of the choir", and Kirill means "master."

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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Not in a general sense, but the main characters are Azula, Katara, [[TheOneGuy Sokka]], Ty Lee, Mai, and two female OCs.



* PinkBishojoGhetto: Not in a general sense, but the main characters are Azula, Katara, [[TheOneGuy Sokka]], Ty Lee, Mai, and two female OCs.

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* ActionGirl: Well, duh. Asside from canon, there's four female [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] to date (of various [[CharacterAlignment alignments]]) who are all very {{badass}}.

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* ActionGirl: Well, duh. Asside Aside from canon, there's four female [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] to date (of various [[CharacterAlignment alignments]]) who are all very {{badass}}.



* CrackShip: Azula/Sokka, and Toph/Teo {{subtext}}.



* GeniusBonus: Several sprinkled throughout the work.
* GoodIsNotNice: Asside from Azula being one of the ''good guys'' in this universe, there's Mai, and Tsubasa [[spoiler:before she's revealed to be TheMole]] and [[spoiler:after her HeelFaceTurn]], not to mention Kasha and Usani.

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* GeniusBonus: Several sprinkled throughout the work.
* GoodIsNotNice: Asside Aside from Azula being one of the ''good guys'' in this universe, there's Mai, and Tsubasa [[spoiler:before she's revealed to be TheMole]] and [[spoiler:after her HeelFaceTurn]], not to mention Kasha and Usani.



* MagnificentBastard: Azula, natch.



* {{Omake}}: Every so often there will be a chibi parody of what has happened thusfar.

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* {{Omake}}: Every so often there will be a chibi parody of what has happened thusfar.thus far.



* PlotTwist: Ja think? There's more blanked-out areas on this page than a transcript from the Reagan administration.

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* PlotTwist: Ja think? There's more blanked-out areas on this page than a transcript from the Reagan administration.



* RunningGag: In the {{omake}}, Ty Lee being accused of being a lesbian.
** And an [[TransparentCloset obvious]] one, at that!
** Any time someone says "X couldn't possibly happen" (and it didn't happen in canon), ''it's about to happen!''
* ScheduleSlip: S-Michael managed to avoid it until recently--but now the story appears to have gone into hiatus.
** It appears to be back.

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* RunningGag: In the {{omake}}, Ty Lee being accused of being a lesbian.
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lesbian, and an [[TransparentCloset obvious]] one, at that!
that.
** Any time someone says "X [[TemptingFate couldn't possibly happen" (and it didn't happen in canon), ''it's about to happen!''
* ScheduleSlip: S-Michael managed to avoid it until recently--but now the story appears to went into have gone into hiatus.
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hiatus. It appears to be back.



* ShoutOut: Several, including one to HouseOfLeaves, a few to the bible TheBible (specifically [[spoiler:Behemoth, Leviathan, and Ziz]]), and about half a dozen to the CthulhuMythos, of all things...hopefully, this isn't {{foreshadowing}}...
** And that's just what this troper ''caught!''

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* ShoutOut: Several, including one to HouseOfLeaves, a few to the bible TheBible (specifically [[spoiler:Behemoth, Leviathan, and Ziz]]), and about half a dozen to the CthulhuMythos, of all things...things - hopefully, this isn't {{foreshadowing}}...
** And that's just what this troper ''caught!''
{{foreshadowing}}.



* WhatAnIdiot: Doro Kim. That's what happens when a mid-level desk jockey tries to play XanatosRoulette.



* WorldBuilding: The whole point of the exercise is to explore the Avatar universe in greater detail...giving us things like airbender supremacists, slavers, and criminal undergrounds.
** Don't forget the EldritchAbominations!
* YuriFan: Methinks S-Michael is one of these.

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* WorldBuilding: The whole point of the exercise is to explore the Avatar ''Avatar'' universe in greater detail...giving us things like airbender supremacists, slavers, and criminal undergrounds.
** Don't forget the
undergrounds, even EldritchAbominations!
* YuriFan: Methinks There's ''some evidence'' that author S-Michael is one of these.
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* YuriFan: Methinks S-Michael is one of these.

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* YuriFan: Methinks S-Michael is one of these.these.

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* {{Expy}}: Kasha is [[HonorHarrington Victor Cachat]], right down to identically-pronounced names. Usani is a {{gender flip}}ped Kevin Usher.

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* {{Expy}}: Kasha is [[HonorHarrington [[Literature/HonorHarrington Victor Cachat]], right down to identically-pronounced names. Usani is a {{gender flip}}ped Kevin Usher.



* MeaningfulName: Kasha and Usani are named for [[HonorHarrington Victor Cachat and Kevin Usher]], respectively (and Doro Kim is a [[AsLongAsItSoundsForeign vaguely Asian-ish]] take on their first villain, a fellow named Durkheim), Tsubasa means "wings," Wakaun means "serpent," Amadahy means "forest water", and Kazane means "sound of wind." At least, according to [[http://www.babynames.com babynames.com]]. Also, Ilmarinen is an UltimateBlacksmith out of Finnish legend.

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* MeaningfulName: Kasha and Usani are named for [[HonorHarrington [[Literature/HonorHarrington Victor Cachat and Kevin Usher]], respectively (and Doro Kim is a [[AsLongAsItSoundsForeign vaguely Asian-ish]] take on their first villain, a fellow named Durkheim), Tsubasa means "wings," Wakaun means "serpent," Amadahy means "forest water", and Kazane means "sound of wind." At least, according to [[http://www.babynames.com babynames.com]]. Also, Ilmarinen is an UltimateBlacksmith out of Finnish legend.
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* ActionGirl: Well, duh. Asside from canon, there's four female OCs to date (of various [[CharacterAlignment alignments]]) who are all very {{badass}}.

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* ActionGirl: Well, duh. Asside from canon, there's four female OCs [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] to date (of various [[CharacterAlignment alignments]]) who are all very {{badass}}.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6255276/1/The_World_without_the_War The World without the War]]'' is an AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~smichael S-Michael]] set in a version of the AvatarTheLastAirbender universe [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a world where the century-long war never happened]]. Avatar Aang died sixteen years ago, meaning that the next Avatar will be (1) a waterbender, and (2) female. The Water Tribes do not have the best track record where it comes to women's lib, so Azula is sent to remind them not to try anything. Meanwhile, Toph is plotting to overthrow the Earth Kingdom and Zhou is planning...[[{{spoiler}} something]]...

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6255276/1/The_World_without_the_War The World without the War]]'' is an AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~smichael S-Michael]] set in a version of the AvatarTheLastAirbender universe [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a world where the century-long war never happened]]. Avatar Aang died sixteen years ago, meaning that the next Avatar will be (1) a waterbender, and (2) female. The Water Tribes do not have the best track record where it comes to women's lib, so Azula is sent to remind them not to try anything. Meanwhile, Toph is plotting to overthrow the Earth Kingdom and Zhou is planning...[[{{spoiler}} something]]...
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curing Fan Myopia. Please don\'t write like that. The first thing I thought of was the Hundred Years War.


''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6255276/1/The_World_without_the_War The World without the War]]'' is an AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~smichael S-Michael]] set in [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a world where the century-long war never happened]]. Avatar Aang died sixteen years ago, meaning that the next Avatar will be (1) a waterbender, and (2) female. The Water Tribes do not have the best track record where it comes to women's lib, so Azula is sent to remind them not to try anything. Meanwhile, Toph is plotting to overthrow the Earth Kingdom and Zhou is planning...[[{{spoiler}} something]]...

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6255276/1/The_World_without_the_War The World without the War]]'' is an AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~smichael S-Michael]] set in a version of the AvatarTheLastAirbender universe [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a world where the century-long war never happened]]. Avatar Aang died sixteen years ago, meaning that the next Avatar will be (1) a waterbender, and (2) female. The Water Tribes do not have the best track record where it comes to women's lib, so Azula is sent to remind them not to try anything. Meanwhile, Toph is plotting to overthrow the Earth Kingdom and Zhou is planning...[[{{spoiler}} something]]...
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* {{Doorstopper}}: sixty four ''thousand'' words ''and counting!'' Is this a fanfic or a novel?

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* {{Doorstopper}}: sixty four Eighty Two ''thousand'' words ''and counting!'' Is this a fanfic or a novel?
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** Faina means "shining," Prokhor means "leader of the choir", and Kirill means "master."
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** Interestingly, S-Michael's villains' positions on the SlidingScaleOfVillainEffectiveness and the SlidingScaleOfAntagonistVileness appear to be roughly inversely related.


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** Don't forget the EldritchAbominations!
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* SlidingScaleOfVillainThreat: Wakaun wanted to kill Sokka (Doro Kim wanted to start a war, but whatever), Kazane wanted to kill the Avatar, Zhou wanted to become immortal (and, presumably, take over the world).

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** And an [[TransparentCloset obvious]] one, at that!



** And an [[TransparentCloset obvious]] one, at that!
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** Any time someone says "X couldn't possibly happen" (and it didn't happen in canon), ''it's about to happen!''

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* AffablyEvil: Koh.



* [[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu Did We Just Have Tea With Koh?]]



* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Airbenders are peaceful vegetarians? Nobody told Tsubasa!



* SealedEvilInACan: [[spoiler:the Phoenix. It's not really "evil", being a mindless beast, but if it is allowed to be reborn in the world, [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt kiss civilization goodbye]].]]

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** It appears to be back.
* SealedEvilInACan: [[spoiler:the [[spoiler:The Phoenix. It's not really "evil", being a mindless beast, but if it is allowed to be reborn in the world, [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt kiss civilization goodbye]].]]


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* TallDarkAndSnarky: Tsubasa, of course.
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* JerkassFacade: Subverted with Tsubasa. It turns out that under the facade is another jerk.
* JerkwithAHeartOfGold: Tsubasa, again.

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