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* {{Adorkable}}:
** The protagonist shows elements of this. Rarity teases him from time to time over his awkwardness, even if she usually finds it quite endearing.
** Morning Blossom similarly shows many traits of this.
** Twilight's reaction to her gift of a telescope in a flashback, particularly where she sheepishly explains away her rapid assembly of it as the result of extensive practice.


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* EndearinglyDorky: The protagonist shows elements of dorkiness. Rarity teases him from time to time over his awkwardness, even if she usually finds it quite endearing.
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* WeddingDay: The story ends with [[spoiler: Rarity and the protagonist finally tying the knot]].

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* WeddingDay: WeddingFinale: The story ends with [[spoiler: Rarity and the protagonist protagonist]] finally tying the knot]].knot.
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* BiTheWay: Rarity and Cashmere both display this. [[spoiler: Fluttershy also does to a lesser extent]].
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** A minor one, where the protagonist and Rarity mock some of the more... [[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment unusual fetishes]] displayed in various fics out there.

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** A minor one, where the protagonist and Rarity mock some of the more... [[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment [[Administrivia.RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment unusual fetishes]] displayed in various fics out there.

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* FishOutOfWater: The protagonist, by virtue of being trapped in Equestria. After some initial adjusting, he does adapt fairly well.
** And again at his construction job, but he warms to it quickly.

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* FishOutOfWater: The protagonist, by virtue of being trapped in Equestria. After some initial adjusting, he does adapt fairly well.
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well. And again at his construction job, but he warms to it quickly.



* GenreSavvy: The protagonist is well aware he is dating a heroine who will not stand idly by when someone puts themselves at risk.
-->(When discussing [[ThePlan their plan]] [[WeNeedADistraction for a distraction]])
-->'''Protagonist''': If I say 'no' you're just going to do it anyway, aren't you?
-->'''Rarity''': But of course, darling.

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* GenreSavvy: The protagonist is well aware he is dating a heroine who will not stand idly by when someone puts themselves at risk.
-->(When
risk. When discussing [[ThePlan their plan]] [[WeNeedADistraction for a distraction]])
distraction]]:
-->'''Protagonist''': If I say 'no' you're just going to do it anyway, aren't you?
-->'''Rarity''':
you?\\
'''Rarity''':
But of course, darling.



* [[GirlOnGirlIsHot Mare on Mare is Hot]]: The protagonist seems to think so and references this several times. Rarity usually ends up chiding him for it... [[HypocriticalHumour before quietly agreeing]].

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* [[GirlOnGirlIsHot Mare on Mare is Hot]]: GirlOnGirlIsHot: The protagonist seems to think so and references this several times. Rarity usually ends up chiding him for it... [[HypocriticalHumour before quietly agreeing]].
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/12546/Sophistication-and-Betrayal Sophistication and Betrayal]]'' is a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic]] fan fiction story by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Drefsab Drefsab]].

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/12546/Sophistication-and-Betrayal Sophistication and Betrayal]]'' is a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic]] ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction story by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Drefsab Drefsab]].
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Badass Damsel has been renamed to Damsel Out Of Distress because distress is necessary


Or at least it was, until a figure from Rarity's past decided to pay her a visit.

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Or at least it was, until Then a figure from Rarity's past decided to pay her a visit.



* AuthorTract: An unobtrusive example. One the author's reasons in writing the story was to show off Rarity's character strengths, something he views as being overlooked and marginalised within the show's fandom.

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* AuthorTract: An unobtrusive example. One the author's reasons in writing the story was to show off Rarity's character strengths, something he views as being overlooked and marginalised within the show's fandom.



** Rarity gets a very similar one later on when she reminds everyone she is not powerless in the face of danger.

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** Rarity gets a very similar one later on when she reminds everyone she is not powerless in the face of danger.



* WeNeedADistraction: As part of ThePlan to distract [[spoiler: [[StalkerWithACrush Slate]], and investigate his house]] [[ShowSomeLeg Rarity offers to be the lure herself]]. When the protagonist initially refuses [[AloneWithThePsycho based on the danger this presents]], Rarity immediately calls him out on this, by pointing out [[BadassDamsel she's dealt with]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic far worse]] and is capable of looking after herself.

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* WeNeedADistraction: As part of ThePlan to distract [[spoiler: [[StalkerWithACrush Slate]], and investigate his house]] [[ShowSomeLeg Rarity offers to be the lure herself]]. When the protagonist initially refuses [[AloneWithThePsycho based on the danger this presents]], Rarity immediately calls him out on this, by pointing out [[BadassDamsel [[SilkHidingSteel she's dealt with]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic far worse]] and is capable of looking after herself.



* [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman What Measure is a Non-Pony?]]: Averted. By virtue of being the [[LastOfHisKind only human in Equestria]], the protagonist is granted special protection by Celestia, and is technically noted to be covered by the Exotic Creatures Act.

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* [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman What Measure is a Non-Pony?]]: Averted. By virtue of being the [[LastOfHisKind only human in Equestria]], Equestria, the protagonist is granted special protection by Celestia, and is technically noted to be covered by the Exotic Creatures Act.

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* AboveTheInfluence: After a night of drinking, [[spoiler: the protagonist resists giving in to the mutual attraction between him and Fluttershy]], knowing that it would only lead to meaningless drunken sex.

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* AboveTheInfluence: After a night of drinking, [[spoiler: the protagonist resists giving in to the mutual attraction between him and Fluttershy]], knowing that it would only lead to meaningless drunken sex. [[spoiler: It's also the closest they ever get]].


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* JustFriends: [[spoiler: After much soul-searching, the relationship between the protagonist/Rarity and Fluttershy ends up as just being this, albeit a very close platonic friendship]].


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* RelationshipUpgrade: [[spoiler: Averted with Fluttershy, who despite some kissing and cuddling never really progresses with a relationship between Rarity and the protagonist, and is not intimate with either before it gets broken off]].
** Fluttershy's friendship with Whip-Smart is strongly implied to be heading in this direction as of the finale, though they're both happy to keep it slow and remain JustFriends for the time being.


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* WillTheyOrWontThey: A large part of the story revolves around just where precisely [[spoiler: Fluttershy's inclusion in Rarity and the progagonist's relationship is headed. After much confusion, soul-searching, and a near-miss after a night of drinking, Fluttershy ends up being JustFriends with the two]].
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* WeddingDay: The story ends with [[spoiler: Rarity and the protagonist finally tying the knot]].

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* {{Doorstopper}}: At over 315,000 words, it's quite a weighty one.

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* {{Doorstopper}}: At Finishing at just over 315,000 over 365K words, it's quite a weighty one.


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* EarnYourHappyEnding: It takes a while and getting there isn't always easy, [[spoiler: but the story ends with Rarity and the protagonist [[TheyDo tying the knot]]]].


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* EnormousEngagementRing: By human standards many engagement 'rings' in Equestria are this, since necklaces or other items are often used instead. The magical necklace the protagonist has made for Rarity fulfills the spirit of the trope however by being particularly unusual and spectacular.


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* ShipperOnDeck: [[spoiler: The protagonist tries to ship Fluttershy and Whip-Smart, and while they're simply good friends as of the finale, it is heading towards a relationship in the future]].


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* TheyDo: [[spoiler: The protagonist and Rarity [[EarnYourHappyEnding finally get married]] in the finale, and get their HappilyEverAfter]].
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* InterruptedIntimacy: Morning Blossom accidentally ends up interrupting Rarity and the protagonist when she shows up to work an hour early, much to their frustration.
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* OhCrap: Fluttershy's reaction to finding out that Rarity's newest employee, Morning Blossom, is a lot like Pinkie Pie.
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* SturgeonsLaw: SecondPersonNarration? Check. Protagonist has a sexual relationship with a canon character? Check. Oh, [[WishFulfillment it's one of tho]]— wait, he actually ''has'' a backstory and characterization? They don't fall in love after a day, but actually become friends first? You actually see their relationship develop over the course of months? The characters actually act like real and well-adjusted people? Yeup, SturgeonsLaw is in full effect ladies and gentlemen. Enjoy it while it lasts.
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* SturgeonsLaw: SecondPersonNarration? Check. Protagonist has a sexual relationship with a canon character? Check. Oh, [[WishFulfillment it's one of tho]]— wait, he actually ''has'' a backstory and characterization? They don't fall in love after a day, but actually become friends first? You actually see their relationship develop over the course of months? The characters actually act like real and well-adjusted people? Yeup, SturgeonsLaw is in full effect ladies and gentlemen. Enjoy it while it lasts.

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* DisappointedInYou: Rarity's reaction to the protagonist finally admitting [[spoiler: he doesn't love Fluttershy in the same way]]. Somewhat unusually for this trope however, it's Rarity admitting just how much she hates the feeling of being disappointed rather than the recipient.



* DisappointedInYou: Rarity's reaction to the protagonist finally admitting [[spoiler: he doesn't love Fluttershy in the same way]]. Somewhat unusually for this trope however, it's Rarity admitting just how much she hates the feeling of being disappointed rather than the recipient.

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** The protagonist shows elements of this. Morning Blossom as well.

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** The protagonist shows elements of this. Rarity teases him from time to time over his awkwardness, even if she usually finds it quite endearing.
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Morning Blossom as well.similarly shows many traits of this.



** [[spoiler: After [[TriangRelations being involved]] with Rarity and the protagonist for some time, Fluttershy eventually admits to having fallen in love with him, which causes him a great deal of stress as he cannot return her feelings in the same way]].



** In a flashback within chapter 7, after teleporting to Canterlot and [[TeleportationSickness throwing up in some bushes]], Twilight displays touching concern for the protagonist by rushing to his side... to inspect the damage done to the plants.

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** In a flashback within chapter Chapter 7, after teleporting to Canterlot and [[TeleportationSickness throwing up in some bushes]], Twilight displays touching concern for the protagonist by rushing to his side... to inspect the damage done to the plants.



* CantSpitItOut: Played slightly differently from normal in that here [[spoiler: it's the fact that the protagonist cannot seem to spit it out that he ''doesn't'' love Fluttershy. When he finally sits down with Rarity and makes this perfectly clear, it does not get received well]].



* DisappointedInYou: Rarity's reaction to the protagonist finally admitting [[spoiler: he doesn't love Fluttershy in the same way]]. Somewhat unusually for this trope however, it's Rarity admitting just how much she hates the feeling of being disappointed rather than the recipient.



* {{Doorstopper}}: At over 300,000 words, it's quite a weighty one.

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* {{Doorstopper}}: At over 300,000 315,000 words, it's quite a weighty one.



* LoveHurts: Cashmere's [[AllLoveIsUnrequited unrequited love]] for Rarity and her resulting heartbreak plays a large part in her actions.
* AManIsAlwaysEager: The protagonist plays this one fairly straight, to the point where Rarity reacts with disbelief when at one point suggests it would be a bad idea.
-->'''Rarity''': Who are you and what have you done with my man?

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* LoveHurts: LoveHurts:
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Cashmere's [[AllLoveIsUnrequited unrequited love]] for Rarity and her resulting heartbreak plays a large part in her actions.
** [[spoiler: The fact that he ''doesn't'' love Fluttershy in the same way ends up causing the protagonist a great deal of anguish when he finally admits it to Rarity]].
* AManIsAlwaysEager: The protagonist plays this one fairly straight, to the point where Rarity reacts with disbelief when at one point suggests it would be a bad idea.
-->'''Rarity''': Who are you and what have you done
idea. This is slightly subverted however by the fact it takes [[LetsWaitAWhile a great deal of time]] for them both to become comfortable with my man?the idea of being intimate with each other in the flashbacks.



* NotSoDifferent: Cashmere accuses Rarity of this when the latter strikes back with some schemes of her own. Rarity protests this assertion, though it's shown over the course of the story that she's not as different as she'd like to believe.

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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferent:
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Cashmere accuses Rarity of this when the latter strikes back with some schemes of her own. Rarity protests this assertion, though it's shown over the course of the story that she's not as different as she'd like to believe.believe.
** The protagonist when he inadvertently ends up making the same mistake Rarity made [[spoiler: with Cashmere all those years ago, and winds up leading Fluttershy on rather than confessing his true feelings to her]].



** To ''Music/PinkFloyd'' numerous times, including chapter 14's title, "Wearing The Inside Out" and chapter 17's title, "High Hopes".
** ''Music/EricClapton'' during chapter 3, when the Protagonist starts singing "Wonderful Tonight" to himself while waiting for Rarity to get dressed.

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** To ''Music/PinkFloyd'' numerous times, including chapter Chapter 14's title, "Wearing The Inside Out" and chapter Chapter 17's title, "High Hopes".
** ''Music/EricClapton'' during chapter Chapter 3, when the Protagonist starts singing "Wonderful Tonight" to himself while waiting for Rarity to get dressed.



** Film/{{Airplane}} gets in with the usual Shirley reference. As above, naturally Rarity doesn't get it.



* TriangRelations: Something of a deconstruction. [[spoiler: Rarity suggests including Fluttershy in their relationship, ostensibly to help coax the shy pegasus out of her shell and allow her to find love of her own, but it's strongly implied that Rarity is using the opportunity to act on her long-nurtured and somewhat one-sided crush on her friend]]. The protagonist spends significant time on trying to figure out where exactly this is going in the long term, as well as worrying about what impact it will have on his existing relationship.

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* TriangRelations: Something of a deconstruction.Deconstructed. [[spoiler: Rarity suggests including Fluttershy in their relationship, ostensibly to help coax the shy pegasus out of her shell and allow her to find love of her own, but it's strongly implied that Rarity is using the opportunity to act on her long-nurtured and somewhat one-sided crush on her friend]]. The protagonist spends significant time on trying to figure out where exactly this is going in the long term, as well as worrying about what impact it will have on his existing relationship.relationship.
** [[spoiler: Later on, this ends up causing him [[LoveHurts a significant amount of angst]] when Fluttershy confesses her love for him which he does not return, and that he admits to Rarity that he only wants to be in a monogamous relationship with her]].
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* CulturedWarrior: Played with. Despite Rarity's claims over the protagonist's lack of culture, he is at least well-read enough to recognise Shakespeare [[labelnote]]the line in question is from Theatre/AsYouLikeIt, though originally a quotation from [[Creator/ChristopherMarlowe Christopher Marlow's]] ''Hero and Leander''[[/labelnote]] when it's quoted at him.

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* CulturedWarrior: Played with. Despite Rarity's claims over the protagonist's lack of culture, he is at least well-read enough to recognise Shakespeare [[labelnote]]the [[note]]the line in question is from Theatre/AsYouLikeIt, though originally a quotation from [[Creator/ChristopherMarlowe Christopher Marlow's]] ''Hero and Leander''[[/labelnote]] Leander''[[/note]] when it's quoted at him.

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* AloneWithThePsycho: [[DefiedTrope Defied]]. As part of Rarity's [[ShowSomeLeg plans to distract]] [[spoiler: Slate]], she points out that she'll be very careful, and plans to stick to public areas for this very reason.

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* AloneWithThePsycho: [[DefiedTrope Defied]]. As part of Rarity's [[ShowSomeLeg plans to distract]] [[spoiler: Slate]], she points out that she'll be very careful, and plans to will stick to public areas for this very reason.



** In a flashback in chapter 7, after teleporting to Canterlot and [[TeleportationSickness throwing up in some bushes]], Twilight displays touching concern for the protagonist by rushing to his side... to inspect the damage done to the plants.

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** In a flashback in within chapter 7, after teleporting to Canterlot and [[TeleportationSickness throwing up in some bushes]], Twilight displays touching concern for the protagonist by rushing to his side... to inspect the damage done to the plants.



* CulturedWarrior: Played with. Despite Rarity's claims over the protagonist's lack of culture, he is at least well-read enough to recognise Shakespeare [[labelnote:*]]the line in question is from Theatre/AsYouLikeIt, though originally a quotation from [[Creator/ChristopherMarlowe Christopher Marlow's]] ''Hero and Leander''[[/labelnote]] when it's quoted at him.

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* CulturedWarrior: Played with. Despite Rarity's claims over the protagonist's lack of culture, he is at least well-read enough to recognise Shakespeare [[labelnote:*]]the [[labelnote]]the line in question is from Theatre/AsYouLikeIt, though originally a quotation from [[Creator/ChristopherMarlowe Christopher Marlow's]] ''Hero and Leander''[[/labelnote]] when it's quoted at him.



* {{Doorstopper}}: At over 300,000 words, it's quite a weighty one.



* {{Doorstopper}}: At over 300,000 words, it's quite a weighty one.



* HugeGuyTinyGirl: The protagonist and Rarity, where due to the species difference, he towers over her by a good foot-and-a-half. [[spoiler: Similarly, between him and Fluttershy; she mentions that he's twice her size at several points]].



* HugeGuyTinyGirl: The protagonist and Rarity, where due to the species difference, he towers over her by a good foot-and-a-half. [[spoiler: Similarly, between him and Fluttershy; she mentions that he's twice her size at several points]].



* PrecisionFStrike: Rarity almost never swears. When she does, you ''definitely'' know she's angry.



* PrecisionFStrike: Rarity almost never swears. When she does, you ''definitely'' know she's angry.



** To ''Film/TheDarkKnight'' when the protagonist responds to her "Simple" with "We kill the Batman?". Rarity naturally doesn't get the reference.

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** To ''Film/TheDarkKnight'' when the protagonist responds to her "Simple" comment with [[MemeticMutation "We kill the Batman?".Batman?"]]. Rarity naturally doesn't get the reference.
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* {{Expy}}: Several famous people from Earth have almost identical counterparts in Equestia, Shakespeare being at least one. Naturally the protagonist lampshades this.

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* {{Expy}}: Several famous people from Earth have almost identical counterparts in Equestia, Equestria, Shakespeare being at least one. Naturally the protagonist lampshades this.



* GoodOldFisticuffs: The fight between the protagonist and [[spoiler: Slate]], when the latter is confronted over his [[StalkerWithACrush stalking]]. Despite the protagonist's martial arts expertise and military training, [[PostVictoryCollapse he still takes a heavy beating]].

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* GoodOldFisticuffs: The fight between the protagonist and [[spoiler: Slate]], when the latter is confronted over his [[StalkerWithACrush stalking]]. Despite the protagonist's martial arts expertise and military training, [[PostVictoryCollapse he still takes a heavy beating]].



* LampshadeHanging: Other characters get in on it from time to time, but pointing out the bizarre nature of Equestia and its residents almost seems to be a second job for the protagonist.

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* LampshadeHanging: Other characters get in on it from time to time, but pointing out the bizarre nature of Equestia Equestria and its residents almost seems to be a second job for the protagonist.
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** To ''Music/PinkFloyd'' numerous times, including chapter 14's title, "Wearing The Inside Out" and chapter 17's title, "High Hopes".
** ''Music/EricClapton'' during chapter 3, when the Protagonist starts singing "Wonderful Tonight" to himself while waiting for Rarity to get dressed.
** ''Music/BobSeger'' as well, in passing.
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* CulturedWarrior: Played with. Despite Rarity's claims over the protagonist's lack of culture, he is at least well-read enough to recognise Shakespeare [[labelnote:*]]the line in question is from Theatre/AsYouLikeIt, though originally a quotation from [[Creator/ChristopherMarlowe]]'s ''Hero and Leander''[[/labelnote]] when it's quoted at him.

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* CulturedWarrior: Played with. Despite Rarity's claims over the protagonist's lack of culture, he is at least well-read enough to recognise Shakespeare [[labelnote:*]]the line in question is from Theatre/AsYouLikeIt, though originally a quotation from [[Creator/ChristopherMarlowe]]'s [[Creator/ChristopherMarlowe Christopher Marlow's]] ''Hero and Leander''[[/labelnote]] when it's quoted at him.

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When [[HelloInsertNameHere our human protagonist]] first wound up in Equestria on the verge of death after having barely survived a military experiment [[StuffBlowingUp gone wrong]], it would have been hard for him to predict he'd end up in [[FantasticRomance a relationship with]] [[InterspeciesRomance the resident fashionista unicorn]].

Yet even though [[YouCantGoHomeAgain he's stuck]] [[TrappedInAnotherWorld in a fantasy world]] run by princesses who manipulate celestial bodies with their minds, and despite being the only member of his species, our protagonist has adapted well to Equestrian life. He's in a loving relationship with Rarity, her business is going great, and their friends are doing fine. [[TemptingFate All is well for them]].

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When [[HelloInsertNameHere our human protagonist]] first wound up in Equestria on the verge of death after having barely survived a military experiment [[StuffBlowingUp gone wrong]], wrong, it would have been hard for him to predict he'd end up in [[FantasticRomance a relationship with]] [[InterspeciesRomance relat]][[InterspeciesRomance ionship]] with the resident fashionista unicorn]].

unicorn.

Yet even though [[YouCantGoHomeAgain he's stuck]] [[TrappedInAnotherWorld in a fantasy world]] run by princesses who manipulate celestial bodies with their minds, and despite being the only member of his species, our protagonist has adapted well to Equestrian life. He's in a loving relationship with Rarity, her business is going great, and their friends are doing fine. [[TemptingFate All is well for them]].
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: The protagonist's initial response to [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E23TheCutieMarkChronicles Fluttershy's backstory]] is one of disbelief, which he only narrowly averts when he reminds himself precisely what kind of land he's now living in.



* BaitAndSwitch: In Chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[DescriptionCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[InnocentInnuendo referring to something completely different]].

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* BaitAndSwitch: BaitAndSwitch:
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In Chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[DescriptionCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[InnocentInnuendo referring to something completely different]].different]].
** In a flashback in chapter 7, after teleporting to Canterlot and [[TeleportationSickness throwing up in some bushes]], Twilight displays touching concern for the protagonist by rushing to his side... to inspect the damage done to the plants.



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* GentleGiant: The protagonist, given that he's taller and stronger than ponies. [[BerserkButton Until you make him mad]]...



* TheImmodestOrgasm: Lightly poked fun at in the first Chapter, though there isn't much reason to suggest Rarity normally displays this. The key word being ''[[FantasticArousal normally]]''.

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* TheImmodestOrgasm: Lightly poked fun at in the first Chapter, chapter, though there isn't much reason to suggest Rarity normally displays this. The key word being ''[[FantasticArousal normally]]''.



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* JawDrop: Rarity's standard response to surprising events. The protagonist sometimes get in on it as well, when he's not giving a YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe reaction instead.



* AManIsAlwaysEager: The protagonist plays this one fairly straight, to the point where Rarity reacts with disbelief when at one point suggests it would be a bad idea.
-->'''Rarity''': Who are you and what have you done with my man?



* ParentalAbandonment: The protagonist, who was raised by his mother. As a result, he's somewhat envious of the fact that both Rarity and Fluttershy had both their parents around when growing up.



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* SeriousBusiness:
** Rarity's take on Poison Joke. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E9BridleGossip Everything it did was hilarious]], ''except'' for the effects on her appearance. In fact, pretty much anything involving her appearance is serious business. Again though, this ''is'' Rarity.
** According to Twilight, do ''not'' date Rainbow Dash!
--->'''Twilight''': Umm...it's not Dash, is it? Please tell me it's not Dash. YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU'RE GETTING YOURSELF INTO!



** The protagonist's disastrous first attempt at building a second staircase for Twilight's astronomy wing is described as the structural integrity "left something to be desired".
** Rarity apparently has something of a talent for this, though it's something of an InformedAttribute.

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** The protagonist's disastrous first attempt at building a second staircase for Twilight's astronomy wing is described simply as the structural integrity "left something leaving "something to be desired".
** Rarity apparently has something of a talent for this, though it's something of an InformedAttribute.



* WeCanRuleTogether: Cashmere uses this several times when trying to convince Rarity to let her buy out Carousel Boutique. Rarity obviously doesn't go for it.



* YouALLLookFamiliar: The Royal Guards, as per the show. Here it's [[JustifiedTrope justified]] as being due to magical armour used to conceal their appearances, to protect them from reprisal.



* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: The protagonist uses a slightly more colourful variant in response to Cashmere's dramatic enterence at her store's opening ceremony, and a response to the general insanity he encounters.

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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: The protagonist uses a slightly more colourful variant in response to Cashmere's dramatic enterence entrance at her store's opening ceremony, and as a response to the general insanity he encounters.

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* BoredomMontage: We get one of the protagonist in Chapter 2, which leads to his ridiculous ImagineSpot.



** Twilight also possesses an extremely low tolerance for alcohol.

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** Twilight also possesses an extremely low tolerance for alcohol.alcohol and claims she gets drunk after two glasses of beer.
** Rarity is also easily intoxicated. In fact it's probably safe to say almost all of the Mane 6 cannot hold their drink, save for AJ.
--->'''Applejack''': Ah swear ta Celestia, am Ah the ''only'' one here who can hold her liquor?



* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Cashmere, when confronted with stalker photographs of Rarity and the protagonist immediately thinks they're gifting her with pornography, rather than accusing her of anything.



* CulturedWarrior: Played with. Despite Rarity's claims over the protagonist's lack of culture, he is at least well-read enough to recognise Shakespeare [[labelnote:*]]the line in question is from Theatre/AsYouLikeIt, though originally a quotation from [[Creator/ChristopherMarlowe]]'s ''Hero and Leander''[[/labelnote]] when it's quoted at him.



* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Pinkie Pie, firstly when she decides to throw Gummy a one-year-of-having-parties-party, and again when she gives her thoughts on Cashmere:
-->'''Pinkie Pie''': (discussing Cashmere) Not a very nice pony, if you ask me. And you didn't, so you should ask me. (walks up to Rarity) Ask me!
-->'''Rarity''': (backing away) Ah...what do you think of Cashmere?
-->'''Pinkie Pie''': [[CaptainObvious She's not a very nice pony]]!



* DistractedByTheSexy: Cashmere often uses her natural beauty for marketing purposes. Rarity [[NotSoDifferent occasionally does it as well]], usually inducing many of the standard comedy reactions in observers.
-->'''Protagonist''': You're gonna cause half the stallions in here [[ExiledToTheCouch to sleep on the couch tonight]].

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* DistractedByTheSexy: DistractedByTheSexy:
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Cashmere often uses her natural beauty for marketing purposes. Rarity [[NotSoDifferent occasionally does it as well]], usually inducing many of the standard comedy reactions in observers.
-->'''Protagonist''': --->'''Protagonist''': You're gonna cause half the stallions in here [[ExiledToTheCouch to sleep on the couch tonight]].tonight]].
** The protagonist is also somewhat prone to this. And it's not always Rarity distracting him either!
--->'''Rarity''': Shall I come back later after you've had the chance to let her play you like a record?



** Played straight when the guards [[RecognitionFailure don't recognise]] Rarity and Twilight.



* EvilPlan: Rarity and the protagonist start plotting one against Cashmere in Chapter 23. Subverted when Fluttershy suggests they talk to her, which they immediately decide to do instead, noting that it's a far better idea.



** And again at his construction job, but he warms to it quickly.



* [[HeWhoFightsMonsters She Who Fights Monsters]]: Despite proclaiming to be above such things, Rarity does display this over the course of the story when she engages in some somewhat unethical behaviour of her own in retaliation, which she does admit to. However, there are some lines - such as resorting to slander - that she absolutely refuses to cross.



* IncrediblyLamePun: Both Rarity and the protagonist occasionally make some truly awful puns, which are usually lampshaded by at least one character.



* InferioritySuperiorityComplex:
** Rarity at times fears that her high-maintenance nature and LargeHam tendencies can be offputting.
** Rainbow Dash becomes somewhat melancholic and insecure after she's had too much to drink, though she passes it off as a result of the alcohol making her overly emotional.



* MotorMouth: Pinkie Pie, naturally. Ditzy Doo also has a propensity to go off on long random tangents.

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* MotorMouth: MotorMouth:
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Pinkie Pie, naturally. Ditzy Doo also has a propensity to go off on long random tangents.tangents.
** Morning Blossom.
** The protagonist as well when he gets nervous.



* ParrotExposition: Twilight in Chapter 10. It's suggested it's not the first time either.
-->'''Protagonist''': There aren't. It's more of a date with a mare.
-->'''Twilight''': A mare?
-->'''Protagonist''': Has anyone ever told you you repeat things a lot?



* RecognitionFailure: The guards completely fail to recognise Twilight and Rarity when they show up in Canterlot to visit the princesses in a flashback within Chapter 7.



** To ''Film/TheDarkKnight'' when the protagonist responds to her "Simple" with "We kill the Batman?". Rarity naturally doesn't get the reference.
** [[VideoGame/WorldOfWarcraft "Time is money, friend"]]



* ATankardOfMooseUrine: Pretty much anything Cashmere drinks, if Rarity and the protagonist are to be believed.
-->'''Cashmere''': Eh, it gets the buzz goin'.

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* ATankardOfMooseUrine: ATankardOfMooseUrine:
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Pretty much anything Cashmere drinks, if Rarity and the protagonist are to be believed.
-->'''Cashmere''': --->'''Cashmere''': Eh, it gets the buzz goin'.goin'.
** Pipe Wrench is also guilty of this.
--->'''Pipe Wrench''': It may be piss water, but it's cheap piss water, ha-ha!



* TemptingFate: Rarity displays a rather startling example of GenreBlindness in Chapter 10, when she suggests that [[spoiler: "I doubt we'll be hearing from that Slate fellow any time soon"]].



* VillainRespect: [[spoiler: After having dealt with Slate]], Cashmere is impressed enough with how Rarity and the protagonist handled the situation to offer to buy them dinner.

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* VillainRespect: [[spoiler: After having dealt with Slate]], Cashmere is impressed enough with how Rarity and the protagonist handled the situation to offer to buy them dinner.dinner at an expensive restaurant.



* XanatosSpeedChess: Cashmere displays this. When Rarity turns up to her store's opening ceremony, she's quickly able to leverage the situation and tricks Rarity into going along with a costly discount.

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* XanatosSpeedChess: Cashmere displays this. When Rarity turns up to her store's opening ceremony, she's quickly able to leverage the situation and tricks Rarity into going along with a costly discount.discount, as well as forcing her into either publicly praising Cashmere as a friend, or refusing and damaging her own reputation.

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* AtLeastIAdmitIt: Cashmere claims to be better than Rarity for this reason.
-->'''Cashmere''': You're capable of just as much spite as I am. The difference is, I don't hide it behind a veneer of civility if I don't have to.



* TheCameo: Octavia, [=DJ-PON3=]/Vinyl Scratch, Ditzy Doo/Derpy and Cheerilee show up for one-shot appearances over the course of the story.



* {{Doorstopper}}: At over 300,000 words, it's quite a weighty one.



* {{Expy}}: Several famous people from Earth have almost identical counterparts in Equestia, Shakespeare being at least one. Naturally the protagonist lampshades this.



* FreudianCouch: Cashmere mockingly asks if she should get one in response to Rarity's increasingly hard-hitting psychoanalysis in Chapter 25.



* [[GirlOnGirlIsHot Mare on Mare is Hot]]: The protagonist seems to think so and references this several times. Rarity usually ends up chiding him for it... [[{{Hypocrite}} before quietly agreeing]].

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* [[GirlOnGirlIsHot Mare on Mare is Hot]]: The protagonist seems to think so and references this several times. Rarity usually ends up chiding him for it... [[{{Hypocrite}} [[HypocriticalHumour before quietly agreeing]].agreeing]].
* TheGlomp: Rarity does this to Fluttershy in Chapter 5, literally tackling her to the ground with her hug. It seems to run in the family, as Rarity's mother later does the same thing in Chapter 19.


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* HeroicBSOD: The protagonist's fairly understandable initial reaction when he finds out he's in a land of talking magical ponies.


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* HypocriticalHumour: Rarity, on several occasions.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: The protagonist and Rarity, where due to the species difference, he towers over her by a good foot-and-a-half. [[spoiler: Similarly, between him and Fluttershy; she mentions that he's twice her size at several points]].
* ImagineSpot: The protagonist has a fairly ridiculous one while bored in Chapter 2, where he single-handedly saves Equestria before [[AThreesomeIsHot having a threesome with Rarity and Spitfire]] on a cloud made of cheerleaders.
* TheImmodestOrgasm: Lightly poked fun at in the first Chapter, though there isn't much reason to suggest Rarity normally displays this. The key word being ''[[FantasticArousal normally]]''.


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* ALadyOnEachArm: The protagonist, naturally, suggests this as one of the benefits of [[spoiler: such an [[TriangRelations unusual relationship]]]].


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* OldShame: Rarity's breakdown in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E14SuitedForSuccess Suited for Success]] has apparently become this, and deeply embarrasses her whenever it's brought up.


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* PrecisionFStrike: Rarity almost never swears. When she does, you ''definitely'' know she's angry.


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* SlasherSmile: [[spoiler: Slate]] gets a terrifying one in Chapter 16.


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* ThinkNothingOfIt: Rarity and Twilight's responses to saving the protagonist's life and helping him out, particularly when he insists on paying them back.
* ThoseTwoGuys: Octavia and Vinyl Scratch.
* AThreesomeIsHot: [[ReallyGetsAround Cashmere]] seems to think so at least. Judging by the protagonist's various [[TwinThreesomeFantasy dreams]] and [[ImagineSpot daydreams]], this is an opinion he shares.


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* {{Understatement}}:
** The protagonist's disastrous first attempt at building a second staircase for Twilight's astronomy wing is described as the structural integrity "left something to be desired".
** Rarity apparently has something of a talent for this, though it's something of an InformedAttribute.


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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: The protagonist does ''not'' enjoy being flown about by a pegasus taxi, and makes no secret of it whenever he encounters one. Something Rarity enjoys teasing him over.


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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: The protagonist uses a slightly more colourful variant in response to Cashmere's dramatic enterence at her store's opening ceremony, and a response to the general insanity he encounters.


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* YoureInsane: Rarity does this in all but name when she tells [[spoiler: Slate]] he needs psychological help. You can probably imagine how well this goes down.
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When [[HelloInsertNameHere our human protagonist]] first wound up in Equestria on the verge of death after barely surviving a military experiment gone wrong, it would have been hard for him to predict he'd end up in [[FantasticRomance a relationship with]] [[InterspeciesRomance the resident fashionista unicorn]].

Yet [[YouCantGoHomeAgain despite being stuck]] [[TrappedInAnotherWorld in a fantasy world]] run by princesses who manipulate celestial bodies with their minds, and being the [[LastOfHisKind only member of his species]], our protagonist has adapted well to Equestrian life. His relationship with Rarity is very strong, Rarity's business is going great, and their friends are doing fine. All is going well for them.

Or at least it was, until an old friend decided to pay a visit...

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When [[HelloInsertNameHere our human protagonist]] first wound up in Equestria on the verge of death after having barely surviving survived a military experiment [[StuffBlowingUp gone wrong, wrong]], it would have been hard for him to predict he'd end up in [[FantasticRomance a relationship with]] [[InterspeciesRomance the resident fashionista unicorn]].

Yet even though [[YouCantGoHomeAgain despite being he's stuck]] [[TrappedInAnotherWorld in a fantasy world]] run by princesses who manipulate celestial bodies with their minds, and despite being the [[LastOfHisKind only member of his species]], species, our protagonist has adapted well to Equestrian life. His He's in a loving relationship with Rarity is very strong, Rarity's Rarity, her business is going great, and their friends are doing fine. [[TemptingFate All is going well for them.

them]].

Or at least it was, until an old friend a figure from Rarity's past decided to pay her a visit...
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Things are good for Rarity. She's a national hero, her business is blooming, her friends are doing fine, and she's found the one thing [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan she's been lacking]]: [[InterspeciesRomance love]]. All is well.

At least, it would be, if it weren't for an [[GreenEyedMonster old friend with a grudge]] who wants to ruin her...

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Things are good for Rarity. She's a national hero, her business is blooming, her friends are doing fine, and she's found When [[HelloInsertNameHere our human protagonist]] first wound up in Equestria on the one thing [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan she's verge of death after barely surviving a military experiment gone wrong, it would have been lacking]]: hard for him to predict he'd end up in [[FantasticRomance a relationship with]] [[InterspeciesRomance love]]. the resident fashionista unicorn]].

Yet [[YouCantGoHomeAgain despite being stuck]] [[TrappedInAnotherWorld in a fantasy world]] run by princesses who manipulate celestial bodies with their minds, and being the [[LastOfHisKind only member of his species]], our protagonist has adapted well to Equestrian life. His relationship with Rarity is very strong, Rarity's business is going great, and their friends are doing fine.
All is well.

At least, it would be, if it weren't
going well for them.

Or at least it was, until
an old friend decided to pay a visit...

From here on in, we follow our couple as they attempt to build their life together. That is, when they're not having to deal with [[TriangRelations increasingly complicated relationships]],
[[GreenEyedMonster old friend with a grudge]] who wants to ruin her...
bitter childhood friends]], [[StalkerWithACrush crazy stalkers]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Pinkie Pie's singing]]...



* BadassBoast:
** Fluttershy gives one on Rarity's behalf before throwing Cashmere outside. See TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
** Rarity gets a very similar one later on when she reminds everyone she is not powerless in the face of danger.
--->'''Rarity''': I have helped banish Nightmare Moon! I have faced dragons and changelings and the very embodiment of chaos itself! I am the bearer of an element of harmony! I am not a helpless damsel in distress!



* BigWhat: Cashmere does this twice after Rarity [[[PayEvilUntoEvil tricks her]] into a buy one get one free sale.

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* BigWhat: Cashmere does this twice after Rarity [[[PayEvilUntoEvil [[PayEvilUntoEvil tricks her]] into a buy one get one free sale.



* BlahBlahBlah: Apparently any time Twilight gives one of her history lectures, which the protagonist compares to the joys of [[AGoodOldFashionedPaintWatching watching paint dry]], or [[HeadDesk repeatedly banging his head against the wall]].



* CurseCutShort: Happens several times, usually with the protagonist's internal monologue being cut short.

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* CurseCutShort: Happens Not with cursing, but characters have a habit of interrupting when anything particularly lewd is about to be mentioned. In several times, usually with cases even the protagonist's internal monologue being gets cut short.off.



* EyePoke: An example occurs when the protagonist accidentally pokes his eye on Rarity's horn during an enthusiastic makeout session.

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* EyePoke: EyeScream: An example occurs when the protagonist accidentally pokes his eye on Rarity's horn during an enthusiastic makeout session.



** Averted on some occasions though, such as the time the protagonist almost manages [[EyePoke to take his eye out]] on Rarity's horn, which somewhat [[MomentKiller kills the moment]].

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** Averted on some occasions though, such as the time the protagonist almost manages [[EyePoke [[EyeScream to take his eye out]] on Rarity's horn, which somewhat [[MomentKiller kills the moment]].



* MundaneLuxury: Rarity is very enthusiastic about the various uses of fingers that we take for granted.



* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Cashmere has a habit of getting very touchy-feely with others, particularly with Rarity. Rather hypocritically, she gets very annoyed if anyone dares to make the same impositions upon her.
* NoSocialSkills: The effects of Poison Joke renders Cashmere completely unable to use flirtatious behaviour without it [[EntendreFailure failing diasterously]].



* [[PoliceAreUseless Royal Guards Are Useless]]: Played with. While the Royal Guards take Fluttershy's warning completely seriously, arrive as quickly as possible, and ensure that everyone is reasonably okay at the end, they're also completely incapable of apprehending [[spoiler: Slate]] until Rarity [[ChekhovsSkill saves the day]], despite outnumbering him two-to-one.

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* [[PoliceAreUseless Royal Guards Are Useless]]: Played with. While the Royal Guards take Fluttershy's warning completely seriously, arrive as quickly as possible, and ensure that everyone is reasonably okay at the end, they're also completely incapable of apprehending a badly injured [[spoiler: Slate]] until Rarity [[ChekhovsSkill saves the day]], despite outnumbering him two-to-one.



* RescueRomance: Between Rarity and the protagonist, when Rarity saves his life after he ends up in Equestria on the verge of death. It's [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] several times.

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* RescueRomance: Between Rarity and the protagonist, when Rarity saves his life after he ends up in Equestria on the verge of death.death, though it does take several months for their relationship to develop. It's [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] several times.



--->'''Rarity''': Yes, perhaps she'll ignore the only human in the entire world walking towards her.

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--->'''Rarity''': [[DeadpanSnarker Yes, perhaps she'll ignore the only human in the entire world walking towards her.her]].

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* BigWhat: Cashmere does this twice after Rarity [[TheDogBitesBack tricks]] [[PayEvilUntoEvil her]] into a buy one get one free sale.

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* BigWhat: Cashmere does this twice after Rarity [[TheDogBitesBack tricks]] [[PayEvilUntoEvil [[[PayEvilUntoEvil tricks her]] into a buy one get one free sale.



* TheDogBitesBack: After tricking Rarity into opening on her day off and offering a heavy discount - to the point of selling at a huge loss - [[PayEvilUntoEvil Rarity retaliates in kind]] by forcing Cashmere to do the same, with the aid of Pinkie Pie's singing and by [[HoistByHisOwnPetard using her own words against her]].


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* {{Revenge}}: A major theme throughout:
** Cashmere's primary motivation.
** [[spoiler: Slate]] wants revenge on Rarity for turning him down.
** After tricking Rarity into opening on her day off and offering a heavy discount - to the point of selling at a huge loss - [[PayEvilUntoEvil Rarity retaliates in kind]] by forcing Cashmere to do the same, with the aid of Pinkie Pie's singing and by [[HoistByHisOwnPetard using her own words against her]].


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* [[WomanScorned Mare Scorned]]:
** The main reason for Cashmere's hatred of Rarity.
** [[GenderInvertedTrope Gender inverted]] with [[spoiler: Slate]], who hates Rarity for turning him down.

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* HeyYouHaymaker: The protagonist gives one to [[spoiler: Slate]] when the full extent of his stalking activities is revealed. It doesn't knock him out, but does hurt him pretty badly and kicks off [[GoodOldFisticuffs their fight]].



* KarmaHoudini: While Cashmere [[spoiler: eventually apologises for her behaviour and makes up with Rarity]], there's no real evidence that her [[CorruptCorporateExecutive unethical business practices]] over the years have come back to haunt her.



* MoralityPet: Rarity ''was'' one for Cashmere when they opened Carousel Boutique together, prior to their falling out, and reined in some of Cashmere's less ethical suggestions on how to run their business.



-->'''Cashmere''': Eh, it gets the buzz goin'

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-->'''Cashmere''': Eh, it gets the buzz goin'goin'.


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* {{Technobabble}}: Pretty much any lecture of Twilight's on the subject of magic. The protagonist's attempt to explain what he did as a US Army engineer also bewilders Pipe Wrench.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Pipe Wrench and the protagonist display this, something both Rarity and Dazzle Drop mock them for throughout. Pipe even [[WolfWhistle whistles]] at an attractive barmaid with his wife sitting right by him, much to her bemusement.

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* AllMenArePerverts: Certainly to be believed if you go by Pipe Wrench and the protagonist display this, protagonist, something both Rarity and Dazzle Drop mock chastise them for throughout. Pipe even [[WolfWhistle whistles]] at an attractive barmaid with his wife sitting right by him, much to her bemusement.



* BaitAndSwitch: In Chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[GilliganCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[InnocentInnuendo referring to something completely different]].

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* BaitAndSwitch: In Chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[GilliganCut [[DescriptionCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[InnocentInnuendo referring to something completely different]].



** Similarly, threatening Fluttershy's friends is a good way to very quickly get on her bad side.

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** Similarly, threatening Fluttershy's friends is a good way to very quickly get on her bad side.side, as Cashmere later finds out.



** Twilight does a pretty good one of Luna's ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE in a flashback.

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** Twilight does a pretty good one of Luna's [[NoIndoorVoice ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE VOICE]] in a flashback.



* DeadpanSnarker: The protagonist has a habit of snarkily lampshading some of the absurdities of Equestrian life. Rarity also turns on the snark on quite a few occasions.

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* DeadpanSnarker: The protagonist has a habit of snarkily lampshading [[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] some of the absurdities of Equestrian life. Rarity also turns on the snark on quite more than a few occasions.



* DemotedToExtra: Most of the main cast appear intermittently, save for Rarity and Fluttershy.

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* DemotedToExtra: Most of the main cast only appear intermittently, save for Rarity and Fluttershy.



* DistractedByTheSexy: Cashmere often uses her natural beauty for marketing purposes. Rarity [[NotSoDifferent occasionally does it as well]].

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* DistractedByTheSexy: Cashmere often uses her natural beauty for marketing purposes. Rarity [[NotSoDifferent occasionally does it as well]].well]], usually inducing many of the standard comedy reactions in observers.



* FantasticRomance: The relationship between the protagonist and Rarity. The sheer absurdity of the situation is lampshaded by him at least once.
* AFatherToHisMen: Pipe Wrench. He [[ParentalSubstitute especially demonstrates this]] towards the protagonist.

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* FantasticRomance: The relationship between the protagonist and Rarity. The sheer absurdity of the situation being in a relationship with a unicorn in a magical fantasy land is lampshaded by him at least once.
* AFatherToHisMen: Pipe Wrench.Wrench, who tries to keep his workers happy and make sure they stay safe. He [[ParentalSubstitute especially demonstrates this]] towards the protagonist.



* IntimateHealing: After being smacked in the head with an iron rebar after a [[MurderTheHypotenuse construction accident]], the protagonist gets some intimate healing courtesy of Rarity. It doesn't do much for the head wound, but it does work pretty well as a way of curing his headache.

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* IntimateHealing: After being smacked in the head with an iron rebar after in a [[MurderTheHypotenuse construction accident]], the protagonist gets some intimate healing courtesy of Rarity. It doesn't do much for the head wound, but it does work pretty well as a way of curing his headache.



* ParentalSubstitute: Pipe Wrench takes on the role as a father figure to the protagonist. His wife Dazzle Drop similarly becomes something of a mother figure.

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* ParentalSubstitute: Pipe Wrench takes on the role as a father figure to the protagonist.protagonist, and gives him advice on how to deal with personal problems on several occasions. His wife Dazzle Drop similarly becomes something of a mother figure.



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