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* RealityEnsues: Has its own [[RealityEnsues/ServiceWithASmile page]].


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Has its own [[RealityEnsues/ServiceWithASmile page]].
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* PeerPressuredBully: Russel is shown to disagree with Cardin's racism against faunus, but Cardin saved his life and pulled him out of his toxic circumstances, so he values his friendship too much to go against him on the issue. After he starts working with Velvet, he does make Cardin promise to tone down the active bullying and gets after him when he does it again without thinking, though.

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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Averted with Alexander Sterling, a regional director of Café Prime, [[MegaCorp a major coffee retailer]], and Jaune's rival. While he does engage in marketing schemes that are barely disguised price-fixing, and he is personally [[{{Jerkass}} unpleasant and rude]] toward Jaune, [[VillainyFreeVillain he is operating within his rights as a competitor]]. Jaune himself tells off the Malachite Twins for wanting to treat a legal business like a rival gang to destroy. [[spoiler:Played straight, as it's revealed that the hoods who wrecked Jaune's place and injured him were working on orders from Café Prime. Later when he starts receiving bad press due to buying Jaune's building and evicting him, Sterling tries to have Jaune evicted sooner than is legal, even if he has to make up a reason why.]]

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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Averted with Alexander Sterling, a regional director of Café Prime, [[MegaCorp a major coffee retailer]], and Jaune's rival. While he does engage in marketing schemes that are barely disguised price-fixing, and he is personally [[{{Jerkass}} unpleasant and rude]] toward Jaune, [[VillainyFreeVillain he is operating within his rights as a competitor]]. Jaune himself tells off the Malachite Twins for wanting to treat a legal business like a rival gang to destroy. [[spoiler:Played straight, as it's revealed that the hoods who wrecked Jaune's place and injured him were working on orders from Café Prime. Later when he starts receiving bad press due to buying Jaune's building and evicting him, Sterling tries to have Jaune evicted sooner than is legal, even if he has to make up a reason why.]] What sinks him is the revelation that he used a person he knew in the government to effectively lay waste to an entire street of businesses, some of which have shut down entirely, just to make things harder for Jaune]].



* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: A benevolent example. When Jaune's shop gets robbed, Weiss uses her connections to get his store repaired, equipment replaced, and insurance paid out on the double.

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A benevolent example. When Jaune's shop gets robbed, Weiss uses her connections to get his store repaired, equipment replaced, and insurance paid out on the double.double.
** An example that's the opposite of benevolent: [[spoiler:Sterling is fully willing to use a personal contact within the government to illegally hamstring rival businesses (and unrelated businesses in the process) while hiding these actions from the public]].
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Averted with Alexander Sterling, a regional director of Café Prime, [[MegaCorp a major coffee retailer]], and Jaune's rival. While he does engage in marketing schemes that are barely disguised price-fixing, and he is personally [[{{Jerkass}} unpleasant and rude]] toward Jaune, [[VillainyFreeVillain he is operating within his rights as a competitor]]. Jaune himself tells off the Malachite Twins for wanting to treat a legal business like a rival gang to destroy. [[spoiler:Played straight, as it's revealed that the hoods who wrecked Jaune's place and injured him were working on orders from Café Prime. Later when he starts receiving bad press due to buying Jaune's building and evicting him, Sterling tries to have Jaune evicted sooner than is legal, even if he has to make up a reason why.]].

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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Averted with Alexander Sterling, a regional director of Café Prime, [[MegaCorp a major coffee retailer]], and Jaune's rival. While he does engage in marketing schemes that are barely disguised price-fixing, and he is personally [[{{Jerkass}} unpleasant and rude]] toward Jaune, [[VillainyFreeVillain he is operating within his rights as a competitor]]. Jaune himself tells off the Malachite Twins for wanting to treat a legal business like a rival gang to destroy. [[spoiler:Played straight, as it's revealed that the hoods who wrecked Jaune's place and injured him were working on orders from Café Prime. Later when he starts receiving bad press due to buying Jaune's building and evicting him, Sterling tries to have Jaune evicted sooner than is legal, even if he has to make up a reason why.]].]]



** One of Pyrrha's fantasies involves herself, Jaune, Jaune's bed and this trope. Time will tell if she manages to invoke it.

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** One of Pyrrha's fantasies involves herself, Jaune, Jaune's bed and this trope. Time will tell if she manages to invoke it.

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** While Ozpin condemns Cinder for murdering Amber, Cinder rightfully points out that her forces fought Amber to obtain the Fall Maiden's power the only way they could, through murder, and they won. Even though Cinder's methods are neither moral nor legal, she won Amber's powers "playing by the rules of the game". She also rightfully points out that [[spoiler:Pyrrha]] will be hunted by Salem's forces for the rest of her life.
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* MythologyGag: Ruby tries to anonymously feed her uncle Qrow the information she knows about the criminal activity leading up to the Vytal Festival (he isn't fooled). When asked for her name, she gives it as [[Fanfic/NotThisTimeFate Silver]].

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* AdaptationalWimp: Jaune in canon is a huntsman-in-training with his Aura unlocked. This version of Jaune is a normal civilian running a coffee shop.

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* AdaptationalWimp: Jaune in canon is a huntsman-in-training with his Aura unlocked. This version of Jaune is a normal civilian running a coffee shop. He does end up with Aura later for its healing and defensive properties, but still doesn't have combat training to support it.


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* BlessedWithSuck: This fic suggests a reason why the entire population of Remnant doesn't get their Aura unlocked: without actual combat training to back the superhuman abilities up, it doesn't help and can actually make things worse. Jaune may be armed with a weapon and Aura, but he still can't actually fight, and Aura only makes it take longer for a Grimm to kill him than normal. Since Grimm are drawn to negativity, his agony from the slow mauling attracts more. Jaune muses that if he were in a frontier village, dying slowly instead of quickly might attract a swarm and get the whole village killed.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: [[spoiler:Junior finds out that the attack on Jaune's happened because one of his men took a bribe to look the other way. While chatting with Roman later, he remarks that the guy will [[CementShoes show up in the bay sooner or later]].]]
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* AdaptationalWimp: Canon!Jaune is a huntsman-in-training with his Aura unlocked. This version of Jaune is a normal civilian running a coffee shop.

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* AdaptationalWimp: Canon!Jaune Jaune in canon is a huntsman-in-training with his Aura unlocked. This version of Jaune is a normal civilian running a coffee shop.
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* AdaptationalWimp: Canon!Jaune is a huntsman-in-training with his Aura unlocked. This version of Jaune is a normal civilian running a coffee shop.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The story slowly goes from a comedy AU where Jaune opens a coffee shop into a story where [[spoiler:Jaune is pretty much single-handedly responsible for stopping the Fall of Beacon]], and the seriousness and dramatic tension increase appropriately.


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* KnightOfCerebus: The fic has a very steady slide along the SlidingScaleOfSillinessVersusSeriousness, going from very silly to very serious later on, but it's no coincidence that the biggest jump from silly to serious happens around the time that Adam enters the narrative.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Jaune, despite becoming moderately successful, still retains his old adorkable charm. This endears him to pretty much everyone, but especially underworld figures.

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** Like the author's other works, Roman's team was killed in the Mountain Glen incident.

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** Like the author's other works, Roman's team was killed in the Mountain Glen Glenn incident.



** When recounting fighting in the tunnels to Mountain Glen and his teammates' deaths, Roman struggles to light his cigar and slips into a different accent.

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** When recounting fighting in the tunnels to Mountain Glen Glenn and his teammates' deaths, Roman struggles to light his cigar and slips into a different accent.


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* RecursiveFanfiction: Roman Torchwick's backstory as a former Huntsman and his philosophy of "Civilian and Huntsman don't mix," is a popular reference for other fanfic depictions of him.

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* RealityEnsues:
** Yang accidentally dislocates Jaune's arm as she's only ever had Huntsman friends and forgot how fragile civilians were.
** Despite being high level criminals and terrorists, Roman and Cinder are far less antagonistic to Jaune than the district manager for a competitor cafe chain. To them Jaune is simply a humble cafe owner and thus not a threat to their plans.
** When Jaune finds his cafe being robbed, his attackers badly beat him with Jaune unable to get in a single blow in return. Despite his shame afterwards, Militia explains that he was alone, untrained, and unarmed against four armed attackers; the best he could hope for was to live through a beating. At worst, he'd have been killed.
** The district manager of Café Prime comes to Jaune with a contract regarding the upcoming Vytal Festival but it's filled with legal terms Jaune has trouble understanding. Naturally he goes to Weiss, who's been acting as his business consultant, right? Nope; Jaune instead makes an appointment with a lawyer specializing in business law to go over the contract and make any necessary revisions.
** Just because Jaune now has a ''very'' expensive lawyer representing him doesn't mean he's won against Café Prime. He still has to fight what is likely to be a long and drawn out legal battle against them, while avoiding any legal pitfalls they may throw his way.
** Ruby's different attempts at hiding when Mercury comes into Jaune's apartment each fail. Hiding on a shelf in his linen closet causes the shelf to come off the wall since it's not meant to hold a teenager's weight. Then hiding under Jaune's blankets fails because she didn't take care to hide her massive cape properly.
** After Jaune and Ruby learn Cinder, Emerald, and Mercury are criminals on a higher level than Junior or Roman, Jaune can't actually do anything about it. Ruby may be a Huntress in training with the support of everyone at Beacon, but Jaune's just a civilian who runs a diner.
** In Cinder's backstory, her mother hid her in a cubby when the Grimm attacked their village. Since Grimm are drawn to negativity, they quickly found Cinder's hiding spot and started digging their way through.
** Eventually, Café Prime decides to simply settle out of court, offering Jaune half a million lien and the firing of Sterling as reparation. While Jaune finds the whole thing anticlimatic, both his solicitor and Roman inform him it was almost guaranteed to happen.
** When the Grimm attack Vale, Jaune is armed with Aura and Crocea Mors. He completely fails to kill the sole Grimm that stumbles across his diner and his fear and pain draw ''more'' Grimm to him.
** After the Breach, all hospitals are overflowing with people injured in the attack and medical staff are dead on their feet trying to care for everyone.
** Jaune's problems with Café Prime officially end after the breach, when he gives out most of his gifts to those injured. His generosity and goodwill make him so beloved that he is untouchable to Café Prime, as it would destroy their reputation.
** Part of Pyrrha's success in tournaments came from her fans sending hate mail and threats to any possible competitors, which ruined their self-confidence and made them easier to defeat.
** Adam and Blake attempt to talk through HandSignals but have trouble getting all the relevant information across since said gestures were meant for silent communication on missions and are mostly used for designating targets and team formation. Also, Yang quickly notices what they're up to and suggests Blake simply go talk to the man.
** As Adam reveals, most of the White Fang didn't notice Blake's departure. She wasn't terribly high ranking so the few that did notice generally just assumed she died on a mission.
** Part of Jaune's rant against everyone involved is that while Vale and Atlas might well win a war against Cinder and the White Fang, countless civilians will die because of it.
** During the meeting, Jaune breaks a tray of cakes out of rage, cutting himself in multiple places, then proceeds to loudly curse out everyone in the room. While the speech succeeds in its goal, between the multiple sites of bleeding and the adrenaline crash he suffers, Jaune passes out as soon as he's finished.

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* RealityEnsues:
** Yang accidentally dislocates Jaune's arm as she's only ever had Huntsman friends and forgot how fragile civilians were.
** Despite being high level criminals and terrorists, Roman and Cinder are far less antagonistic to Jaune than the district manager for a competitor cafe chain. To them Jaune is simply a humble cafe owner and thus not a threat to their plans.
** When Jaune finds his cafe being robbed, his attackers badly beat him with Jaune unable to get in a single blow in return. Despite his shame afterwards, Militia explains that he was alone, untrained, and unarmed against four armed attackers; the best he could hope for was to live through a beating. At worst, he'd have been killed.
** The district manager of Café Prime comes to Jaune with a contract regarding the upcoming Vytal Festival but it's filled with legal terms Jaune has trouble understanding. Naturally he goes to Weiss, who's been acting as his business consultant, right? Nope; Jaune instead makes an appointment with a lawyer specializing in business law to go over the contract and make any necessary revisions.
** Just because Jaune now has a ''very'' expensive lawyer representing him doesn't mean he's won against Café Prime. He still has to fight what is likely to be a long and drawn out legal battle against them, while avoiding any legal pitfalls they may throw his way.
** Ruby's different attempts at hiding when Mercury comes into Jaune's apartment each fail. Hiding on a shelf in his linen closet causes the shelf to come off the wall since it's not meant to hold a teenager's weight. Then hiding under Jaune's blankets fails because she didn't take care to hide her massive cape properly.
** After Jaune and Ruby learn Cinder, Emerald, and Mercury are criminals on a higher level than Junior or Roman, Jaune can't actually do anything about it. Ruby may be a Huntress in training with the support of everyone at Beacon, but Jaune's just a civilian who runs a diner.
** In Cinder's backstory, her mother hid her in a cubby when the Grimm attacked their village. Since Grimm are drawn to negativity, they quickly found Cinder's hiding spot and started digging their way through.
** Eventually, Café Prime decides to simply settle out of court, offering Jaune half a million lien and the firing of Sterling as reparation. While Jaune finds the whole thing anticlimatic, both his solicitor and Roman inform him it was almost guaranteed to happen.
** When the Grimm attack Vale, Jaune is armed with Aura and Crocea Mors. He completely fails to kill the sole Grimm that stumbles across his diner and his fear and pain draw ''more'' Grimm to him.
** After the Breach, all hospitals are overflowing with people injured in the attack and medical staff are dead on their feet trying to care for everyone.
** Jaune's problems with Café Prime officially end after the breach, when he gives out most of his gifts to those injured. His generosity and goodwill make him so beloved that he is untouchable to Café Prime, as it would destroy their reputation.
** Part of Pyrrha's success in tournaments came from her fans sending hate mail and threats to any possible competitors, which ruined their self-confidence and made them easier to defeat.
** Adam and Blake attempt to talk through HandSignals but have trouble getting all the relevant information across since said gestures were meant for silent communication on missions and are mostly used for designating targets and team formation. Also, Yang quickly notices what they're up to and suggests Blake simply go talk to the man.
** As Adam reveals, most of the White Fang didn't notice Blake's departure. She wasn't terribly high ranking so the few that did notice generally just assumed she died on a mission.
** Part of Jaune's rant against everyone involved is that while Vale and Atlas might well win a war against Cinder and the White Fang, countless civilians will die because of it.
** During the meeting, Jaune breaks a tray of cakes out of rage, cutting himself in multiple places, then proceeds to loudly curse out everyone in the room. While the speech succeeds in
RealityEnsues: Has its goal, between the multiple sites of bleeding and the adrenaline crash he suffers, Jaune passes out as soon as he's finished.own [[RealityEnsues/ServiceWithASmile page]].
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: In the epilogue, [[spoiler:it is clear that Team RWBY and his other friends will have to leave Jaune behind in Vale to pursue their own lives. He comes to terms with this and decides he can’t wait for the next batch of Beacon students so he can make more friends... and then ''Salem'' enters his diner and asks for a cup of coffee.]]
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* FriendlyEnemies: In the epilogue, [[spoiler:Ozpin and Cinder are able to have a pleasant conversation at Jaune's. Cinder admits that she ''almost'' likes Ozpin because he killed Tyrian and left his head on a pike for Cinder to find]].


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* PlotParallel: In Salem's brief appearance, a clear parallel is drawn between her relationship with Cinder and Cinder's own relationship with her dog. Salem likes Cinder, enjoys her company, and wants her to be happy and succeed in her goals... but ultimately she's not ''important'', and Salem will kill her without a second thought if she ever becomes an actual problem. In other words, Cinder is Salem's pet.
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** In the epilogue, Ruby gripes about a test question asking what angle a crashing Bullhead should be at to avoid hitting a nearby village. Yang answered ninety degrees straight down. It'd kill everyone onboard but the question was about avoiding the village.


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* GotVolunteered: [[spoiler:In the epilogue, Cinder volunteers Jaune to adopt one of her newborn puppies]].


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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: In the epilogue, Roman Torchwick got off on all charges against him via extremely expensive lawyers.
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* UnsportsmanlikeGloating: [[spoiler:Yang won the Vytal Tournament (in no small part because Pyrrha didn't participate)]] and is absolutely ''insufferable'' after.

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* CharacterDevelopment: Jaune starts the story disappointed he couldn't be a Huntsman and only running a diner because he was too ashamed to return home. By the end of the story, Jaune openly states he'd rather run his diner than be a Huntsman or politician.



* TheGreatestStoryNeverTold: [[spoiler:Jaune's part in preventing a massive attack on Beacon and Vale will never be known to more than a dozen or so people]], but he's happy with that.



* HomeSweetHome: After his CharacterDevelopment, Jaune admits he doesn't want to be a hunter or even expand his business; he just wants to keep running his diner.



* IJustWantToBeSpecial: Jaune admits that at the start of the story, he was only interested in being a hero.
* INever: The Twins take Jaune to the club's private room with Neo and Pyrrha in Chapter 24 for a few rounds of this. We learn in short order that he's been caught masturbating, gone through public exposure, and never kissed a girl. [[spoiler:Milita and Pyrrha happily correct that last one. A minute each. With tongue.]]



* INever: The Twins take Jaune to the club's private room with Neo and Pyrrha in Chapter 24 for a few rounds of this. We learn in short order that he's been caught masturbating, gone through public exposure, and never kissed a girl. [[spoiler:Milita and Pyrrha happily correct that last one. A minute each. With tongue.]]


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** Salem [[spoiler:accepts a deal with Ozpin to have him step down as headmaster in exchange for not attacking Beacon]] because while the compromise sets back her plans a few years, the original plan might have failed and would've set her plans back much longer. Furthermore, the few years lost on her end is nothing compared to [[spoiler:the potentially centuries of Ozma running Beacon]]. WordOfGod notes that for immortals like Salem and Ozma, any assured advantage is worth losing even a century over.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12606073/1/Service-with-a-Smile Service With a Smile]]'' is an ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Creator/CoeurAlAran.

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* RealMenWearPink: Junior is a mafia boss and addicted to Jaune's lattes. Chapter 39 reveals that his DrinkOrder is an extra large extra marshmallow chocolate sprinkle cappuccino.

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* RealMenWearPink: Junior is a mafia boss and addicted to Jaune's lattes. Chapter 39 reveals that his DrinkOrder TrademarkFavoriteDrink is an extra large extra marshmallow chocolate sprinkle cappuccino.
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** Oobleck's DrinkOrder is a triple espresso with less water than usual, which is strong enough Jaune feels sick just thinking about it.

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* TwitchyEye: Ruby gets one after Pyrra, on Jaune's suggestion, goes to her with IHaveThisFriend.

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* TwitchyEye: Ruby gets one after Pyrra, Pyrrha, on Jaune's suggestion, goes to her with IHaveThisFriend.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12606073/1/Service-with-a-Smile "Service With a Smile"]] is an ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Creator/CoeurAlAran.



[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12606073/1/Service-with-a-Smile Service With a Smile]] is an ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Creator/CoeurAlAran. Currently ongoing.

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* EyeTwitch: Ruby gets one after Pyrra, on Jaune's suggestion, goes to her with IHaveThisFriend.


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** Salem apparently doesn't want Ozpin killed since doing so would only inconvenience him for a year or two at most while also causing her to lose track of him.



** Jaune's problems with Café Prim officially end after the breach, when he gives out most of his gifts to those injured. His generosity and goodwill make him so beloved that he is untouchable to Café Prime, as it would destroy their reputation.

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** Jaune's problems with Café Prim Prime officially end after the breach, when he gives out most of his gifts to those injured. His generosity and goodwill make him so beloved that he is untouchable to Café Prime, as it would destroy their reputation.
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