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* YouAreNotAlone: While stuck in hospital [[spoiler:the second time]] and thinking she is all alone, Iwanako receives a suprise visit from Hanako, who she only worked with to get away from Shizune. More than that, she brings Lilly along too. Cue impromptu tea party.
* YuriGenre: According to WordOfGod, anyway.
* YuriGenre: According to WordOfGod, anyway.
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* YouAreNotAlone: While stuck in hospital [[spoiler:the second time]] and thinking she is all alone, Iwanako receives a suprise visit from Hanako, who she only worked with to get away from Shizune. More than that, she brings Lilly along too. Cue impromptu tea party.
* YuriGenre: According to WordOfGod, anyway.party.
* YuriGenre: According to WordOfGod, anyway.
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* CatchPhrase: Aoi Sagawa is a pretty cool person.
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''Mean Time to Breakdown'' takes a darker and (perhaps) more realistic look at the mindset of a recently-added member of Yamaku society, making this fic ideal for people who thought Hisao's personal issues were underplayed. Several OriginalCharacters are introduced to populate ''Katawa Shoujo'''s sparse roster without overshadowing the original cast, and many of the events of Act One play out in [[ForWantOfANail surprising and unexpected ways.]]
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''Mean Time to Breakdown'' takes a darker and (perhaps) more realistic look at the mindset of a recently-added member of Yamaku society, making this fic ideal for people who thought Hisao's personal issues were underplayed. Several OriginalCharacters {{Original Character}}s are introduced to populate ''Katawa Shoujo'''s sparse roster without overshadowing the original cast, and many of the events of Act One play out in [[ForWantOfANail surprising and unexpected ways.]]
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** As of March 2022, the author has officially declared the fic dead and gone so far as to remove it from the KS message board entirely.
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* MulticoloredHair: Two-fold. Iwanako notices [[spoiler:the stress of her situation has turned her temples prematurely gray]] so she has the front of her hair dyed blonde.
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* NotSoDifferent: Hanako's personality is a direct result of her disability, and Iwanako draws some uncomfortable parallels with her recent behavior. Could be the reason she's turning into her OnlyFriend.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Hanako's personality is a direct result of her disability, and Iwanako draws some uncomfortable parallels with her recent behavior. Could be the reason she's turning into her OnlyFriend.
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* DudeNotFunny: Momomi realizes this when she makes a joke about Iwanako's hospital stay and quickly regrets it.
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* TooSoon: In Universe. Momomi realizes this when she makes a joke about Iwanako's hospital stay and quickly regrets it.
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* SpoiledSweet: Iwanako's family is notably well-off so she's hardly wanted for anything. Despite that, at least on the outside she's a very demure soft-spoken girl who is reluctant to ever say a bad or negative thing about anyone. However, [[RageBreakingPoint even she can only stay silent so long]]. And the fact that her parents aren't exactly shining examples, and her greater difficulty than Hisao in fitting in, leaves her feeling very alone.
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* YouAreNotAlone: While stuck in hospital [[spoiler:the second time]] and thinking she is all alone, Iwanako receives a suprise visit from Hanako, who she only worked with to get away from Shizune. More than that, she brings Lilly along too. [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Cue impromptu tea party]].
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* YouAreNotAlone: While stuck in hospital [[spoiler:the second time]] and thinking she is all alone, Iwanako receives a suprise visit from Hanako, who she only worked with to get away from Shizune. More than that, she brings Lilly along too. [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Cue impromptu tea party]].party.
