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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: [[spoiler: Sonic.]] Heck, [[spoiler: he]] loses it, and actually [[FaceHeelTurn turns evil]] as a result. To be blunt, he's worse than [[NeonGenesisEvangelion Shinji!]]
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: [[spoiler: Sonic.]] Heck, [[spoiler: he]] loses it, and actually [[FaceHeelTurn turns evil]] as a result. To be blunt, he's worse than [[NeonGenesisEvangelion [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Shinji!]]
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-->'''GUN Soldier''': *upon seeing [[spoiler: a giant [[{{BFS}} sword]] slicing a building in half]]* "[[{{Alien}} GAME OVER MAN, GAME OVER!]]"
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-->'''GUN Soldier''': *upon seeing [[spoiler: a giant [[{{BFS}} sword]] slicing a building in half]]* "[[{{Alien}} "[[Film/{{Aliens}} GAME OVER MAN, GAME OVER!]]"
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* [[DeadLittleSister Dead Little Brother]]: [[spoiler:Tails]]
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* DeclarationOfProtection: [[TheHero Sonic]] says he will protect Amy from Abbadonia's intention to [[GrandTheftMe possess her.]]
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* IWillProtectHer: [[TheHero Sonic]] says he will protect Amy from Abbadonia's intention to [[GrandTheftMe possess her.]]
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* ColourCodedForYourConvenience: Invoked somewhat with several characters:
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* ColourCodedForYourConvenience: ColourCodedCharacters: Invoked somewhat with several characters:
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*** [[spoiler: Purple for [[NiGHTSIntoDreams NiGHTS]]]]
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** Does Grey the Hedgehog remind you of [[MetalGearSolid someone?]]
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** Does Grey the Hedgehog remind you of [[MetalGearSolid [[Franchise/MetalGear someone?]]
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*** Supreme Commander [[MetalGearSolid4 Big Mama]]
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*** Supreme Commander [[MetalGearSolid4 [[VideoGame/MetalGearSolid4 Big Mama]]
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*** TheRenfield: Metal Sonic
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*** TheRenfield: SycophanticServant: Metal Sonic
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--> '''Mr.Thorn/[[spoiler: Sonic]]''': I am someone who can no longer be helped. I've murdered thousands in the name of truth. And truth be told I am...tempted to murder more...I've succumbed to my rage and my sorrow. But...if I could...if I would...upon knowing [[spoiler: Amy]] survived the attack on Central City, it gave me...regret...but...[[spoiler: if she plans to kill herself]], I feel that there is nothing worthy left in this world in getting the [[TakeUpMySword mantle]]. As the old saying goes, [[TheDarkKnight You either die a hero or live long enough to see yourself become a villain.]]"
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--> '''Mr.Thorn/[[spoiler: Sonic]]''': I am someone who can no longer be helped. I've murdered thousands in the name of truth. And truth be told I am...tempted to murder more...I've succumbed to my rage and my sorrow. But...if I could...if I would...upon knowing [[spoiler: Amy]] survived the attack on Central City, it gave me...regret...but...[[spoiler: if she plans to kill herself]], I feel that there is nothing worthy left in this world in getting the [[TakeUpMySword mantle]]. As the old saying goes, [[TheDarkKnight [[Film/TheDarkKnight You either die a hero or you live long enough to see yourself become a the villain.]]"
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** '''Agent Strider''': "[[MemeticMutation I see what you did there...]] Agent Mjöllnir"
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** '''Agent Strider''': "[[MemeticMutation " I see what you did there...]] there... Agent Mjöllnir"
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* FridgeBrilliance: Once you find out [[spoiler: who Bazza is]], some confusing things suddenly make a lot more sense.[[spoiler: Especially around Vector and Vanillas wedding.]]
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-->'''Bazza''': (Aims her Bazooka at Mr. Thorn)I AM ABOUT TO GIVE YOU [[MemeticMutation OVER 9000]] CCS OF '''GET THE FUCK OUT!'''
* PrettyCoolGuy: Gabriel and Milo.
* PrettyCoolGuy: Gabriel and Milo.
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-->'''Bazza''': (Aims her Bazooka at Mr. Thorn)I AM ABOUT TO GIVE YOU [[MemeticMutation OVER 9000]] 9000 CCS OF '''GET THE FUCK OUT!'''
* PrettyCoolGuy: Gabriel and Milo.OUT!'''
* PrettyCoolGuy: Gabriel and Milo.
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*** And in C15. To an [[BeyondTheImpossible unconscious]] [[TheComicallySerious Drainer.]]
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*** And in C15. [[UpToEleven To an [[BeyondTheImpossible unconscious]] [[TheComicallySerious Drainer.]]
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* EvilPlan: [[spoiler: [[AdventuresOfSonicTheHedgehog Scratch and Grounder,]] [[SonicX Becoe and Decoe,]] and [[VideoGame/SonicColors Orbot and Cubot]] set up a big one for [[MindRape Sonic.]]]]
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* XanatosGambit: [[spoiler: [[AdventuresOfSonicTheHedgehog Scratch and Grounder,]] [[SonicX Becoe and Decoe,]] and [[VideoGame/SonicColors Orbot and Cubot]] set up a big one for [[MindRape Sonic.]]]]
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-->'''Sonic:''' I've already done [[SonicAndTheBlackKnight swords]]. Not everyone was pleased with that [[YourMileageMayVary gimmick]].
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-->'''Sonic:''' I've already done [[SonicAndTheBlackKnight swords]]. Not everyone was pleased with that [[YourMileageMayVary gimmick]].gimmick.
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-->'''Sonic:''' (grinning) [[HowTheGrinchStoleChristmas You could say it's two sizes too small.]]
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-->'''Sonic:''' (grinning) [[HowTheGrinchStoleChristmas [[Literature/HowTheGrinchStoleChristmas You could say it's two sizes too small.]]
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** He also calls [[FullNameBasis Probationary Agent Neptune]] [[{{NCIS}} Probie.]]
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** He also calls [[FullNameBasis Probationary Agent Neptune]] [[{{NCIS}} [[Series/{{NCIS}} Probie.]]
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* SeinfeldianConversation: Sonic and Milo sit on the couch watching CowAndChicken and discuss the discrepancies of a male chicken.
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* SeinfeldianConversation: Sonic and Milo sit on the couch watching CowAndChicken WesternAnimation/CowAndChicken and discuss the discrepancies of a male chicken.
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* IGotBetter: [[spoiler: Neptune]]
** And [[spoiler: Prince Hayden]]
** And [[spoiler: Prince Hayden]]
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* XanatosGambit: [[spoiler: [[AdventuresOfSonicTheHedgehog Scratch and Grounder,]] [[SonicX Becoe and Decoe,]] and [[SonicColors Orbot and Cubot]] set up a big one for [[MindRape Sonic.]]]]
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* XanatosGambit: [[spoiler: [[AdventuresOfSonicTheHedgehog Scratch and Grounder,]] [[SonicX Becoe and Decoe,]] and [[SonicColors [[VideoGame/SonicColors Orbot and Cubot]] set up a big one for [[MindRape Sonic.]]]]
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* CallBack: [[SonicAdventure2 Prison]] [[ShadowTheHedgehog Island.]]
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** [[RuleOfThree And]] [[spoiler: [[TalesOfSymphonia Kratos Aurion.]]]]
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* {{BFS}}: Mr. Thorn's Handsword. [[BeyondTheImpossible ''It slices buildings in half!!!'']]
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* {{BFS}}: Mr. Thorn's Handsword. [[BeyondTheImpossible ''It slices buildings in half!!!'']]half!!!''
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* WeCouldHaveAvoidedAllThis: [[spoiler: If Sonic killed [[GrandTheftMe Muriel.]]]]
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*** It also becomes a ChekovsGun for Olly [[spoiler: When Mr. Thorn calls her by that name, it tips her off who he really is.]]
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--> They had to shove themselves in Vectors [[MenInBlack old and busted hovercar. Bazza insisted he get a one, that was of a new hotness. She even offered Vector to look inside a catalogue and was deliberately pointed out Old and busted, and new hotness of the hovercars.]]
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--> They had to shove themselves in Vectors [[MenInBlack [[Film/MenInBlack old and busted hovercar. Bazza insisted he get a one, that was of a new hotness. She even offered Vector to look inside a catalogue and was deliberately pointed out Old and busted, and new hotness of the hovercars.]]
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* ReallyGetsAround: Big Mama. It's to get what she wants. Olly knows when...she [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean seals a deal]] when she can smell cherry flavoured smoke.
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** And another one whilst being knocked out...[[spoiler: Although this was probably the [[IncrediblyLamePun climax]] out of all the other dreams due the sheer...[[IfYouKnowWhatIMean intensity]] of it.]]
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** And another one whilst being knocked out...[[spoiler: Although this was probably the [[IncrediblyLamePun climax]] out of all the other dreams due the sheer...[[IfYouKnowWhatIMean intensity]] intensity of it.]]
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* GainaxEnding: [[spoiler: The story ends with everyone taking refuge at the Garden of Rosales, where Amy and Team Chaotix investigate the Temple of the Prophets again. Amy sees the Chaotix [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotSymbolic pierced against the wall through their hands]] and then sees a bright light that sends a cryptic message [[BookEnds "Do you like the colour red?"]] before she falls unconscious.]]
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-->''"You know when you're a monster...when you stand alone on top of the world with nothing left to destroy. Maybe I am not that monster yet maybe I am. I contemplate that every single day. I can stand on top of the world knowing my enemy has been defeated but does that make me the monster of his world? Who knows?"''\\
--->'''Mr. Thorn'''/ [[spoiler: Sonic the Hedgehog]] at the beginning of Chapter 21.
-> '''Experiment 282''': "Look up [[spoiler: TegamiBachi]]. Trust me. Oh and don't worry, it only gets [[MindScrew crazier]] from here."
->-- Authors note at the end of C15 . This doesn't add in the other [[spoiler: [[CrossOver Cross]] [[NiGHTS Overs]]]] either.
--->'''Mr. Thorn'''/ [[spoiler: Sonic the Hedgehog]] at the beginning of Chapter 21.
-> '''Experiment 282''': "Look up [[spoiler: TegamiBachi]]. Trust me. Oh and don't worry, it only gets [[MindScrew crazier]] from here."
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-->''"You know when you're a monster... when you stand alone on top of the world with nothing left to destroy. Maybe I am not that monster yet maybe I am. I contemplate that every single day. I can stand on top of the world knowing my enemy has been defeated but does that make me the monster of his world? Who knows?"''\\
--->'''Mr. Thorn'''/ [[spoiler: Sonicknows?"''
--->--'''Mr. Thorn'''/[[spoiler:Sonic the Hedgehog]] at the beginning of Chapter21.
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--> '''Experiment 282''': "Look up[[spoiler: TegamiBachi]].[[spoiler:TegamiBachi]]. Trust me. Oh and don't worry, it only gets [[MindScrew crazier]] from here."
->-- --->-- Authors note at the end of C15 . This doesn't add in the other [[spoiler: [[CrossOver [[spoiler:[[CrossOver Cross]] [[NiGHTS [[{{NiGHTS}} Overs]]]] either.
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--> '''Experiment 282''': "Look up
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