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Shipping Goggles TRS cleanup, examples are to be removed as it's now just Fan Speak (only wicks in descriptions).
* MistakenForRomance: Rarity assumes Twilight and Fluttershy sharing lunch, followed by Twilight's offer to purchase a hat for Fluttershy, equals them dating. She blames it on the romance novels she's been reading lately.
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* ShippingGoggles: In universe, Rarity assumes Twilight and Fluttershy sharing lunch, followed by Twilight's offer to purchase a hat for Fluttershy, equals them dating. She blames it on the romance novels she's been reading lately.
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Expanded on what had been a ZCE. Also a couple of other changes.
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** Twilight, once she realizes Fluttershy’s in danger.
* ActuallyNotAVampire: For some reason Pinkie assumed that ''Twilight'' was a vampire. Like everypony else, she already knew about Fluttershy.
* ActuallyNotAVampire: For some reason Pinkie assumed that ''Twilight'' was a vampire. Like everypony else, she already knew about Fluttershy.
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** Twilight, once she realizes Fluttershy’s Fluttershy's in danger.
* ActuallyNotAVampire: For some reason Pinkie assumed that ''Twilight'' was avampire.vampire, just on the basis of her name. Like everypony else, she already knew about Fluttershy.
* ActuallyNotAVampire: For some reason Pinkie assumed that ''Twilight'' was a
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* TheBartender: Pinkie is trying out a “sympathetic bartender” persona for some reason.
* BerserkButton: Rainbow Dash doesn't respond well to anti-vampire research. At all.
* BerserkButton: Rainbow Dash doesn't respond well to anti-vampire research. At all.
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* TheBartender: Pinkie is trying out a “sympathetic bartender” "sympathetic bartender" persona for some reason.
* BerserkButton: Rainbow Dash doesn't respond well to anti-vampire research. At all.
* BerserkButton: Rainbow Dash doesn't respond well to anti-vampire research. At all.
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* CloseKnitCommunity: How does a vampire survive, even thrive, for years without killing anypony? Ponyville’s annual blood drive is very successful.
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* CloseKnitCommunity: How does a vampire survive, even thrive, for years without killing anypony? Ponyville’s Ponyville's annual blood drive is very successful.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Rarity's puppet show reenactment of Fluttershy's turning employs the classic visual symbolism of a vampire preying on an innocent woman uncannily resembling...well, a comparatively regular guy preying on an innocent woman. Fortunately, Rarity keeps it from going beyond a PG rating.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Rarity's puppet show reenactment of Fluttershy's turning employs the classic visual symbolism of a vampire preying on an innocent woman uncannily resembling... well, a comparatively regular guy preying on an innocent woman. Fortunately, Rarity keeps it from going beyond a PG rating.
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Garlic Flank Stake appears to play this straight at first - but ultimately averts it. She even says that she's in it to protect innocent ponies, not because of hatred.
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Garlic Flank Stake appears to play this straight at first - -- but ultimately averts it. She even says that she's in it to protect innocent ponies, not because of hatred.
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%%* KissOfTheVampire: According to Dash, it feels pretty good.
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-->'''Rainbow Dash''': "At first, it feels
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* LonelyFuneral: Rarity describes Fluttershy’s funeral this way. [[LargeHam Though her account]] [[UnreliableNarrator may not be completely reliable.]]
* MamaBear: Dash reacts... poorly to Twilight’s anti-vampire research.
* MustBeInvited: Subtly implied--Rarity mentions that Fluttershy was turned after inviting a pony who turned out to be vampire into her cottage for "a warm drink". Interestingly, this does not appear to apply to Fluttershy herself, suggesting that this is more of an allusion to vampire lore than an actual quality of vampires in the setting.
* MamaBear: Dash reacts... poorly to Twilight’s anti-vampire research.
* MustBeInvited: Subtly implied--Rarity mentions that Fluttershy was turned after inviting a pony who turned out to be vampire into her cottage for "a warm drink". Interestingly, this does not appear to apply to Fluttershy herself, suggesting that this is more of an allusion to vampire lore than an actual quality of vampires in the setting.
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* LonelyFuneral: Rarity describes Fluttershy’s Fluttershy's funeral this way. [[LargeHam Though her account]] [[UnreliableNarrator may not be completely reliable.]]
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* MamaBear: A purely friends example when Dash reacts... poorly toTwilight’s Twilight's anti-vampire research.
* MustBeInvited: Subtlyimplied--Rarity implied -- Rarity mentions that Fluttershy was turned after inviting a pony who turned out to be vampire into her cottage for "a warm drink". Interestingly, this does not appear to apply to Fluttershy herself, suggesting that this is more of an allusion to vampire lore than an actual quality of vampires in the setting.
* MamaBear: A purely friends example when Dash reacts... poorly to
* MustBeInvited: Subtly
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* PlotDrivingSecret: If Twilight knew what everypony else knew we’d have no story.
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** Vampires ''do'' need to sleep in their native soil (all of Equestria, in this case). Rarity keeps a suitcase of dirt from Fluttershy's garden on hand for that reason.
* PlotDrivingSecret: If Twilight knew what everypony else knewwe’d we'd have no story.
* PlotDrivingSecret: If Twilight knew what everypony else knew
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* ShippingGoggles: In universe, Rarity assumes Twilight and Fluttershy sharing lunch, followed by Twilight’s offer to purchase a hat for Fluttershy, equals them dating. She blames it on the romance novels she's been reading lately.
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* ShippingGoggles: In universe, Rarity assumes Twilight and Fluttershy sharing lunch, followed by Twilight’s Twilight's offer to purchase a hat for Fluttershy, equals them dating. She blames it on the romance novels she's been reading lately.
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** To Dracula: [[IDoNotDrinkWine “I don’t drink… wine.”]]
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** To Dracula: [[IDoNotDrinkWine “I don’t drink… "I don't drink... wine.”]]"]]
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** Pinkie just naturally assumed a pony with a name like [[{{Literature/Twilight}} Twilight Sparkle]] must be a vampire.
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** Pinkie just naturally assumed a pony with a name like [[{{Literature/Twilight}} [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Twilight Sparkle]] must be a vampire.
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* VegetarianVampire: It’s Fluttershy, what did Twilight expect? She survives by mostly drinking blood donated from the local blood bank, with the occasional drink from a willing donor (namely, Rainbow Dash).
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* VegetarianVampire: It’s It's Fluttershy, what did Twilight expect? She survives by mostly drinking blood donated from the local blood bank, with the occasional drink from a willing donor (namely, Rainbow Dash).Dash, who admits she had to talk Fluttershy into doing it the first time).
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* WhamLine: One that doubles as something of a verbal WhamShot — after her heart-to-heart with Pinkie Pie, Twilight notices that the pony who was in Sugarcube Corner with them left in the middle of their conversation. When Twilight asks who she was, Pinkie admits that she doesn't know, but ''did'' see her Cutie Mark, which she draws for Twilight. Cue Twilight panicking when she sees the result...
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* WhamLine: One that doubles as something of a verbal WhamShot — -- after her heart-to-heart with Pinkie Pie, Twilight notices that the pony who was in Sugarcube Corner with them left in the middle of their conversation. When Twilight asks who she was, Pinkie admits that she doesn't know, but ''did'' see her Cutie Mark, which she draws for Twilight. Cue Twilight panicking when she sees the result...
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* YouDidntAsk: “I thought you knew.”
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* YouDidntAsk: “I Nobody bothered to tell Twilight that Fluttershy was a vampire because they all thought you she already knew.”
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* SlidingScaleOfVampireFriendliness: Played with, everything Twilight reads about the rules of vampirism say Fluttershy can’t be a vampire without killing someone. [[IncorruptiblePurePureness Fluttershy proves them wrong]].
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* SlidingScaleOfVampireFriendliness: Played with, everything Twilight reads about the rules of vampirism say Fluttershy can’t be a vampire without killing someone. [[IncorruptiblePurePureness Fluttershy proves them wrong]].wrong.
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* VanHelsingHateCrimes: Twilight takes a while to come to terms with the fact that Fluttershy is a vampire. Rainbow Dash even calls her "Van Horsing" during their argument. Garlic Flank Stake also acts like this, apparently believing that if a vampire hasn't started killing ponies, they will soon, but she immediately relents once she finds out that the vampire is [[IncorruptiblePurePureness Fluttershy]].
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* VanHelsingHateCrimes: Twilight takes a while to come to terms with the fact that Fluttershy is a vampire. Rainbow Dash even calls her "Van Horsing" during their argument. Garlic Flank Stake also acts like this, apparently believing that if a vampire hasn't started killing ponies, they will soon, but she immediately relents once she finds out that the vampire is [[IncorruptiblePurePureness Fluttershy]].Fluttershy.
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Incorruptible Pure Pureness has been renamed to The Incorruptible and redefined to be about characters who are portrayed in-universe as untemptable/incorruptible. Removing ZCE.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/72971/nosflutteratu Nosflutteratu]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fan fiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Charcoal+Quill Charcoal Quill]].
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Being a bloodsucking creature of the night can’t stop Fluttershy from being Fluttershy.
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* KissOfTheVampire: According to Dash, it feels pretty good.
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* AwesomeAussie: Garlic Flank Stake is a Vampire Hunter described as having a [[FantasyCounterpartCulture "Hosstralian"]] accent.
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* WhamLine: One that doubles as something of a verbal WhamShot — after her heart-to-heart with Pinkie Pie, Twilight notices that the pony who was in Sugarcube Corner with them left in the middle of their conversation. When Twilight asks who she was, Pinkie admits that she doesn't know, but ''did'' see her Cutie Mark, which she draws for Twilight. Cue Twilight panicking when she sees the result...
-->I ran to the door and threw it open, then galloped away, leaving behind the sketch of [[VampireHunter a wooden stake impaling a clove of garlic]].
-->I ran to the door and threw it open, then galloped away, leaving behind the sketch of [[VampireHunter a wooden stake impaling a clove of garlic]].
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Super OCD is no longer a trope. Moving examples to other tropes when applicable.
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* SuperOCD: Pinkie drops the trope name when mentioning Twilight's episodes.
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* TemptingFate: Really Twilight should know better than to say “it’s a quiet day” and “what could possibly go wrong?” by now.
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* TemptingFate: Really Twilight should know better than to say “it’s "it's a quiet day” day" and “what "what could possibly go wrong?” wrong?" by now.now.
* VampireHunter: Garlic Flank Stake, an old friend of Fluttershy's, has vampire hunting as her special talent, per her Cutie Mark.
* VampireHunter: Garlic Flank Stake, an old friend of Fluttershy's, has vampire hunting as her special talent, per her Cutie Mark.
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** The Stare is revealed to be the result of vampiric mesmerism not "weaponized Kindness".
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** The Stare is revealed to be the result of vampiric mesmerism mesmerism, not "weaponized Kindness".
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* MustBeInvited: Subtly implied--Rarity mentions that Fluttershy was turned after inviting a pony who turned out to be vampire into her cottage for "a warm drink".
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* MustBeInvited: Subtly implied--Rarity mentions that Fluttershy was turned after inviting a pony who turned out to be vampire into her cottage for "a warm drink". Interestingly, this does not appear to apply to Fluttershy herself, suggesting that this is more of an allusion to vampire lore than an actual quality of vampires in the setting.
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* KarmicDeath: An offscreen one. [[spoiler:The vampire who turned Fluttershy was apparently killed by Garlic Flank Stake, who just so happens to have been an old friend of Fluttershy's]].
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* KarmicDeath: An offscreen one. [[spoiler:The The vampire who turned Fluttershy was apparently killed by Garlic Flank Stake, who just so happens to have been an old friend of Fluttershy's]].Fluttershy's.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Rarity's puppet show reenactment of Fluttershy's turning employs the classic visual symbolism of a vampire preying on an innocent woman uncannily resembling...well, a comparatively regular guy preying on an innocent woman. Fortunately, Rarity keeps it from going beyond a PG rating.
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* YuriFan: Rarity is implied to be a Yuri Fan after suggesting that Fluttershy and Twilight having lunch together was a "date", and when told it wasn't, she blames it on her romance novels. [[LampshadeHanging Twilight demands to know what sort of "romance" novels Rarity has been reading]], but Rarity brushes her off with a casual remark.
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* BerserkButton: Rainbow Dash doesn't respond well to anti-vampire research. At all.
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* TaughtByExperience: Spike says that if nothing exciting has happened this week then it probably will soon.
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correcting example
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* ShippingGoggles: In universe, Rarity assumes Twilight and Fluttershy sharing lunch, followed by Twilight’s purchase of a hat for Fluttershy, equals them dating. She blames it on the romance novels she's been reading lately.
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* ShippingGoggles: In universe, Rarity assumes Twilight and Fluttershy sharing lunch, followed by Twilight’s offer to purchase of a hat for Fluttershy, equals them dating. She blames it on the romance novels she's been reading lately.
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* ContinuityNod:
** The Stare is revealed to be the result of vampiric mesmerism not "weaponized Kindness".
** Rarity explains the animals at the [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver Grand Galloping Gala]] reacted so poorly to Fluttershy because, unlike Ponyville's animals, they weren't used to being around a vampire.
** The Stare is revealed to be the result of vampiric mesmerism not "weaponized Kindness".
** Rarity explains the animals at the [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver Grand Galloping Gala]] reacted so poorly to Fluttershy because, unlike Ponyville's animals, they weren't used to being around a vampire.
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* VoluntaryVampireVictim: Rainbow Dash, who serves as a willing donor when Fluttershy really needs it.
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* NightmareSequence: Twilight’s research brings on one of these.
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* NightmareSequence: Twilight’s Twilight's research brings on one of these.
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** The mirror thing is a myth, as it the tale that vampires don't have shadows.
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** The mirror thing is a myth, as it is the tale that vampires don't have shadows.
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* VegetarianVampire: It’s Fluttershy, what did Twilight expect?
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* VegetarianVampire: It’s Fluttershy, what did Twilight expect?expect? She survives by mostly drinking blood donated from the local blood bank, with the occasional drink from a willing donor (namely, Rainbow Dash).
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* YouDidntAsk: “I thought you knew.”
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* YouDidntAsk: “I thought you knew.””
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* MustBeInvited: Subtly implied--Rarity mentions that Fluttershy was turned after inviting a pony who turned out to be vampire into her cottage for "a warm drink".
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* KarmicDeath: An offscreen one. [[spoiler:The vampire who turned Fluttershy was apparently killed by Garlic Flank Stake, who just so happens to have been an old friend of Fluttershy's]].
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Has nothing do with familiarity with in-universe fiction.
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* GenreSavvy: Spike knows that if nothing exciting has happened this week then it soon ''will''.
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* AFriendInNeed: On the rare occasion that Fluttershy needs fresh blood, Rainbow Dash provides it.
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* AFriendInNeed: AFriendInNeed:
** On the rare occasion that Fluttershy needs fresh blood, Rainbow Dash provides it.
** On the rare occasion that Fluttershy needs fresh blood, Rainbow Dash provides it.
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* ShoutOut: To Dracula: [[IDoNotDrinkWine “I don’t drink… wine.”]]
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** To Dracula: [[IDoNotDrinkWine “I don’t drink… wine.”]]
** To Dracula: [[IDoNotDrinkWine “I don’t drink… wine.”]]
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* PlotDrivingSecret: If Twilight knew what everypony else does we’d have no story.
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* PlotDrivingSecret: If Twilight knew what everypony else does knew we’d have no story.
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* LetNoCrisisGoWaste: When Fluttershy became a vampire, the local hospital finally found a use for all the excess blood for transfusion that continued going bad.
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* LetNoCrisisGoWaste: LetNoCrisisGoToWaste: When Fluttershy became a vampire, the local hospital finally found a use for all the excess blood for transfusion that continued going bad.
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* LetNoCrisisGoWaste: When Fluttershy became a vampire, the local hospital finally found a use for all the excess blood for transfusion that continued going bad.