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* KnifeNut: Marble prefers to use knives.
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* UpbringingMakesTheHero: Thoroughly averted. Edvard's parents are total [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating jerks.]]
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* UpbringingMakesTheHero: Thoroughly averted. Edvard's parents are total [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating [[{{Jerkass}} jerks.]]
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* InTheBlood: Averted. Aahnyas and Saffyra are horrible people but their son Edvard is a [[NiceGuy great guy.]]
** On the other hand, the Borrsons do seem to have a bit of hereditary madness -- aside from Erik's total insanity, Odin is shown to have developed quite a violent temper after becoming All-Father. And then there's [[RoyalBrat Sunset]], who also shows signs of madness at a young age.
** On the other hand, the Borrsons do seem to have a bit of hereditary madness -- aside from Erik's total insanity, Odin is shown to have developed quite a violent temper after becoming All-Father. And then there's [[RoyalBrat Sunset]], who also shows signs of madness at a young age.
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* InTheBlood: Averted. Aahnyas and Saffyra are horrible people but their son Edvard is a [[NiceGuy great guy.]]
** On the other hand, theItRunsInTheFamily: The Borrsons do seem to have a bit of hereditary madness -- aside from Erik's total insanity, Odin is shown to have developed quite a violent temper after becoming All-Father. And then there's [[RoyalBrat Sunset]], who also shows signs of madness at a young age.
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* VillainousLineage: Averted. Aahnyas and Saffyra are horrible people but their son Edvard is a [[NiceGuy great guy.]]
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Trixie is a [[ManipulativeBastard manipulative]] [[TheTrickster trickster]] who goes power hungry when she finds out [[spoiler: her true heritage]], but she genuinely loved each of her children despite their bizarre natures, and still bears the emotional scars from having them taken away from her. And when Hela and Sleipnir refuse to rejoin her upon her taking the throne, it only drives her further over the edge.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Trixie is a [[ManipulativeBastard manipulative]] [[TheTrickster manipulative trickster]] who goes power hungry when she finds out [[spoiler: her true heritage]], but she genuinely loved each of her children despite their bizarre natures, and still bears the emotional scars from having them taken away from her. And when Hela and Sleipnir refuse to rejoin her upon her taking the throne, it only drives her further over the edge.
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''Harmony's Warriors'' is a retelling of the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse and other Marvel films, using characters from WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, originally created by {{Tropers/Avenging-Hobbits}}, and written by [[ProductionPosse Avenging-Hobbits, Phoenix Avalon, thevampman24, iowaforever and fedorasarecool, with additional developmental help from nightcrawlerfan, Taco Belle and The Red Scarecrow]]. There are currently six stories in the series (not counting one-shots or side stories), but many more are planned:
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''Harmony's Warriors'' is a retelling of the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse and other Marvel films, using characters from WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, originally created by {{Tropers/Avenging-Hobbits}}, and written by [[ProductionPosse Avenging-Hobbits, Phoenix Avalon, thevampman24, iowaforever and fedorasarecool, with additional developmental help from nightcrawlerfan, Taco Belle and The Red Scarecrow]]. There are currently six stories in the series (not counting one-shots or side stories), but many more are planned:\n
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* {{Adorkable}}: Dinky. She doesn't have a lot in the way of social skills, and believes that reprogramming a robot would be an easier, more effective route to take than going out and meeting new ponies.
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* CrashIntoHello: Pip and Dinky collide on their way into school. {{Adorkable}} MeetCute ensues.
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** According to {{Word Of God}}, Nightmare Moon will be a combination of ComicBook/{{Thanos}} and {{ComicBook/Darkseid}} {Due to this universe also incorporating DC elements into it}, and Lighting Dust will be both {{The Punisher}} and [[spoiler: [[ComicBook/TheMightyThor Valkyrie]].]]
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** According to {{Word Of God}}, Nightmare Moon will be a combination of ComicBook/{{Thanos}} and {{ComicBook/Darkseid}} {Due to this universe also incorporating DC elements into it}, and Lighting Dust will be both {{The Punisher}} ComicBook/ThePunisher and [[spoiler: [[ComicBook/TheMightyThor Valkyrie]].]]
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* LiteraryAgentHypothesis: How A-H explains Time Turner being Dinky's Dad, [[Series/DoctorWho Doctor Whooves]] showing up at one point in another story, and the existence of a TV show in universe (that takes its name from ''Film/AnAdventureInSpaceAndTime''). Basically, according to WordOfGod the Doctor we see is the Ninth, while the TV show came about when the Doctor visited a bored writer who ran with the idea.
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* RecursiveCanon: Time Turner is Dinky's father and the Doctor exists in the universe, while a TV show named ''[[Series/DoctorWho Adventures in Space and Time]]'' and based off the Doctor's adventures [[LiteraryAgentHypothesis was written by a bored writer the Doctor met once]].
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* RecursiveCanon: Time Turner is Dinky's father and the Doctor exists in the universe, while a TV show named ''[[Series/DoctorWho Adventures in Space and Time]]'' and based off the Doctor's adventures [[LiteraryAgentHypothesis [[ATrueStoryInMyUniverse was written by a bored writer the Doctor met once]].
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** Cheerilee is the counterpart to the [[SpiderMan Lizard]].
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** Cheerilee [[spoiler: as the soon to be [[SpiderMan [[Franchise/SpiderMan Lizard]]]] shows up near the climax. Seems that Fluttershy attracts a lot of intercontinuity attention.
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** All the characters were PettingZooPeople, compared to the CivilizedAnimal style of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic the original show]], due to a {{Retcon}} by Avenging-Hobbits. However, this was eventually retconned back due to widespread dislike of the change.
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** All the characters were PettingZooPeople, {{Funny Animal}}s, compared to the CivilizedAnimal style of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic the original show]], due to a {{Retcon}} by Avenging-Hobbits. However, this was eventually retconned back due to widespread dislike of the change.
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* SlidingScaleOfAnthropomorphism: They were briefly PettingZooPeople (due to a retcon), but eventually changed by to the CivilizedAnimal that is more common in MLP fan fiction.
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* ClothingDamage[=/=]MagicPants: In keeping with the PettingZooPeople {{Retcon}}, both of these tropes are added to the story.
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* BriefAccentImitation: Gilda does this with Applejack as a way to belittle her thick Ozark accent. Counts as a CrowningMomentOfFunny as well.
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* BriefAccentImitation: Gilda does this with Applejack as a way to belittle her thick Ozark accent. Counts as a CrowningMomentOfFunny SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}} as well.
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/67635/harmonys-warriors-flutterhulk Harmony's Warriors: Flutterhulk]]: Fluttershy is on the run from the Equestrian Military, trying to take control of [[TheHulk her (much angrier) split personality]] and deal with a collection of personal demons. Completed.
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/67635/harmonys-warriors-flutterhulk Harmony's Warriors: Flutterhulk]]: Fluttershy is on the run from the Equestrian Military, trying to take control of [[TheHulk [[ComicBook/IncredibleHulk her (much angrier) split personality]] and deal with a collection of personal demons. Completed.
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* BadassNormal: Hoofcuff is just a normal pony going after [[TheHulk a giant monster fueled by pure rage]].
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* BadassNormal: Hoofcuff is just a normal pony going after [[TheHulk [[ComicBook/IncredibleHulk a giant monster fueled by pure rage]].
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* BigBad: None. [[PsychoForHire Herzlos]] is the StarterVillain, [[ShockAndAwe Light Bright/Living Laser]] is the FinalBoss, and [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Fancypants']] mysterious master is alluded to be a BiggerBad, but the story has no central villain.
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* BigBad: None. [[PsychoForHire Herzlos]] is the StarterVillain, [[ShockAndAwe Light Bright/Living Laser]] is the FinalBoss, and [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Fancypants']] mysterious master is alluded to be a BiggerBad, to, but the story has no central villain.
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* SpoiledSweet: Unlike her sister, all the affection poured on Cadence only makes her sweeter.
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* BadassPrincess: Rainbow Dash and Trixie.
* BigBad: Trixie.
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/86876/harmonys-warriors-assemble Harmony's Warriors Assemble]]: When a megalomaniac comes from the stars with the goal of enslaving all of Equestria, it's up to a soldier from the past, a redemption seeking businessmare, a demigod with an ego, an eccentric sharpshooter, and an introverted civilian with a dark secret to put a stop to it. In Progress.
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/86876/harmonys-warriors-assemble Harmony's Warriors Assemble]]: When a megalomaniac comes from the stars with the goal of enslaving all of Equestria, it's up to a soldier from the past, a redemption seeking businessmare, a demigod with an ego, an eccentric sharpshooter, and an introverted civilian with a dark secret to put a stop to it. Of course, forming a team is always harder then it looks, and the six must first learn to work together, and set aside their differences, before they can tackle the greater foe. In Progress.
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* BritishAccents: Pip has a slight Cockney one.
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* WorldOfBadass: At one point or another, pretty much every major character, regardless of gender, has managed to have at least one {{Badass}} moment.
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* WorldOfBadass: At one point or another, pretty much every major character, regardless of gender, has managed to have at least one {{Badass}} badass moment.
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* ButtMonkey: Comet Trail, who seems [[GenreSavvy well aware of his status]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Chrysalis is in the role of Laufey, but due to being more GenreSavvy than him, she survives Trixie's double cross.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Chrysalis is in the role of Laufey, but due to being more GenreSavvy savvy than him, she survives Trixie's double cross.]]
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/86876/harmonys-warriors-assemble Harmony's Warriors Assemble]]: When a megalomaniac comes from the stars with the goal of enslaving all of Equestria, it's up to a soldier from the past, a redemption seeking businessmare, a demigod with an ego, an eccentric sharpshooter, and an introverted civilian with a dark secret to put a stop to it. In Progress.
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* TheObiWan: The Professor is one to Applejack [[spoiler: complete with being killed]].
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''Harmony's Warriors'' is a retelling of the MarvelCinematicUniverse Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse and other Marvel films, using characters from WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, originally created by {{Tropers/Avenging-Hobbits}}, and written by [[ProductionPosse Avenging-Hobbits, Phoenix Avalon, thevampman24, iowaforever and fedorasarecool, with additional developmental help from nightcrawlerfan, Taco Belle and The Red Scarecrow]]. There are currently six stories in the series (not counting one-shots or side stories), but many more are planned:
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** Carrot Cake, Pinkie's kind employer, and Fleur de Lis, like Fancypants one of the few pleasant Canterlot residents, are in the roles of prominent [[AntiVillain Anti Villains]] {{Magneto}} and Mystique.
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** Carrot Cake, Pinkie's kind employer, and Fleur de Lis, like Fancypants one of the few pleasant Canterlot residents, are in the roles of prominent [[AntiVillain Anti Villains]] {{Magneto}} ComicBook/{{Magneto}} and Mystique.
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** Cadence is Celestia and Luna's sister instead of their niece. Likewise, Sunset Shimmer is another sister.
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* ArcWelding: Between ''Captain Equestria'' and ''X-Questrians: First Class'' -- Gustav, the BigBad of ''X-Questrians'', is revealed in ''Captain Equestria'' to have been a member of HYDRA.
* BiggerBad: Nightmare Moon appears to be this, as she's been referenced one way or another in every story.
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* ArcWelding: Between ''Captain Equestria'' and ''X-Questrians: First Class'' -- Gustav, the BigBad of ''X-Questrians'', is revealed in ''Captain Equestria'' to have been a member of HYDRA.
* BiggerBad: Nightmare Moon appearsHYDRA. And later, [[spoiler: Fleur]] is revealed to be this, as she's been referenced one way or another in every story.the assassin who killed Professor Schultz.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Nightmare Moon has been referenced, one way or another, in every story so far, implying she's a BiggerBad.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Nightmare Moon has been referenced, one way or another, in every story so far, implying she's a BiggerBad.GreaterScopeVillain.
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** On the other hand, the Borrsons do seem to have a bit of hereditary madness -- aside from Erik's total insanity, Odin is shown to have developed quite a violent temper after becoming All-Father. And then there's [[RoyalBrat Sunset]], who also shows signs of madness at a young age.
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* [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cuD3dFyqMdDWpZ552tB8oqnIC7l0AbLs2hY6AYYmMQ0/edit?pli=1 Harmony's Warriors: Iron Mare (Original Version)]]: Rarity, Equestria's premiere fashion designer, is injured and kidnapped by terrorists. After being released, she begins to design a high-tech combat suit and becomes the [[IronMan Iron Mare]]. Completed (and labeled CanonDiscontinuity).
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* [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cuD3dFyqMdDWpZ552tB8oqnIC7l0AbLs2hY6AYYmMQ0/edit?pli=1 Harmony's Warriors: Iron Mare (Original Version)]]: Rarity, Equestria's premiere fashion designer, is injured and kidnapped by terrorists. After being released, she begins to design a high-tech combat suit and becomes the [[IronMan [[ComicBook/IronMan Iron Mare]]. Completed (and labeled CanonDiscontinuity).
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/67637/harmonys-warriors-captain-equestria Harmony's Warriors: Captain Equestria]]: Set 70-80 years before ''Iron Mare'', civil unrest grips Equestria and a simple farm pony, Applejack, will step forward [[CaptainAmerica to become a legend]]. In Progress.
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/67637/harmonys-warriors-captain-equestria Harmony's Warriors: Captain Equestria]]: Set 70-80 years before ''Iron Mare'', civil unrest grips Equestria and a simple farm pony, Applejack, will step forward [[CaptainAmerica [[ComicBook/CaptainAmerica to become a legend]]. In Progress.
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** According to {{Word Of God}}, Nightmare Moon will be a combination of SelfDemonstrating/{{Thanos}} and {{ComicBook/Darkseid}} {Due to this universe also incorporating DC elements into it}, and Lighting Dust will be both {{The Punisher}} and [[spoiler: [[ComicBook/TheMightyThor Valkyrie]].]]
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** According to {{Word Of God}}, Nightmare Moon will be a combination of SelfDemonstrating/{{Thanos}} ComicBook/{{Thanos}} and {{ComicBook/Darkseid}} {Due to this universe also incorporating DC elements into it}, and Lighting Dust will be both {{The Punisher}} and [[spoiler: [[ComicBook/TheMightyThor Valkyrie]].]]
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** Snowflake is in the role of Blonsky/Abomination, but upon his transformation becomes the RedHulk.
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/67631/harmonys-warriors-soar Harmony's Warriors: Soar]]: [[TheMightyThor Brash and arrogant warrior Rainbow Dash]] is banished to Equestria after sparking a war between Asgard and the Changelings. As she tries to learn a bit of humility, her adopted sister Trixie has other plans for the throne. Complete.
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/67631/harmonys-warriors-soar Harmony's Warriors: Soar]]: [[TheMightyThor [[ComicBook/TheMightyThor Brash and arrogant warrior Rainbow Dash]] is banished to Equestria after sparking a war between Asgard and the Changelings. As she tries to learn a bit of humility, her adopted sister Trixie has other plans for the throne. Complete.
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** According to {{Word Of God}}, Nightmare Moon will be a combination of {{Thanos}} and {{ComicBook/Darkseid}} {Due to this universe also incorporating DC elements into it}, and Lighting Dust will be both {{The Punisher}} and [[spoiler: [[TheMightyThor Valkyrie]].]]
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** According to {{Word Of God}}, Nightmare Moon will be a combination of {{Thanos}} SelfDemonstrating/{{Thanos}} and {{ComicBook/Darkseid}} {Due to this universe also incorporating DC elements into it}, and Lighting Dust will be both {{The Punisher}} and [[spoiler: [[TheMightyThor [[ComicBook/TheMightyThor Valkyrie]].]]