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* BadassBaritone: He has the deepest voice of any of the heroes, courtesy of Creator/JunichiSuwabe.
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* ToughLeaderFacade: A flashback on Victor's route shows that Victoria was originally a quiet, shy girl. She's had to develop thick layers of poise, resolve, and no small amount of ruthlessness in order to rule effectively as Queen.
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* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: A flashback on Victor's route shows that Victoria was originally a quiet, shy girl. She's had to develop thick layers of poise, resolve, and no small amount of ruthlessness in order to rule effectively as Queen.
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* HistoricalDomainCharacter: The [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Count_of_St._Germain Comte de Saint-Germain]] was a real person, an eccentric European courtier of mysterious origins who made many fanciful claims about himself.
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* HistoricalDomainCharacter: The [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Count_of_St._Germain Comte de Saint-Germain]] UsefulNotes/LeComteDeStGermain was a real person, an eccentric European courtier of mysterious origins who made many fanciful claims about himself.
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* EccentricMillionaire: Saint-Germain is a whimsical nobleman whose excuse for most of the things that he does, from letting Lupin and Impey hide out at his estate onwards, is "I'm bored and it seemed amusing." [[spoiler:"Eccentric aristocrat" is a good cover for a member of Idea.]]
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* RichIdiotWithNoDayJob: Saint-Germain is a whimsical nobleman whose excuse for most of the things that he does, from letting Lupin and Impey hide out at his estate onwards, is "I'm bored and it seemed amusing." [[spoiler:"Eccentric aristocrat" is a good cover for a member of Idea.]]
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* HealingFactor: [[spoiler: Thanks to his immortality, he can regenerate from any damage taken to him, no matter how grave.]]
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* PublicDomainCharacter: From [[Myth/KingArthur Arthurian legend]]. [[spoiler:Under the armor, she turns out to be Queen Guinevere.]]
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* PublicDomainCharacter: From [[Myth/KingArthur Arthurian legend]].Myth/ArthurianLegend. [[spoiler:Under the armor, she turns out to be Queen Guinevere.]]
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* IllGirl: She has a chronic illness that requires a special medicine. [[spoiler:It's revealed the cause is a device Isaac put into her brain to implant the original Cardia's memories into her. It causes her brain to overheat and for memories to overload her. Because the medicine uses poison as part of its base, remnants of it in her system leaves her body somewhat weakened.]]
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A 24-year-old self-proclaimed gentleman thief. He "steals" Cardia from the mansion and decides to cooperate with her in order to free her from her poison while investigating a series of terrorist atacks.
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A 24-year-old self-proclaimed gentleman thief. He "steals" Cardia from the mansion and decides to cooperate with her in order to free her from her poison while investigating a series of terrorist atacks.attacks.
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* RapunzelHair: Impey's hair, braided, reaches to his waist.
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* NotSoDifferent: She makes note of the resemblance between herself and Saint-Germain. Both failed a duty out of love and caused disastrous consequences.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: She makes note of the resemblance between herself and Saint-Germain. Both failed a duty out of love and caused disastrous consequences.
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* VagueAge: Aside from the YoungerThanTheyLook below, it's also left unsaid how old she is supposed to look in the first place. Side material lists her age as "unknown", the thirteen year old Shirley calls her a friend her age, Watson calls her a child while most other characters call her a young woman. Cardia herself goes back and forth between innocent and mature at the drop of a hat so her physical and mental age is left up to interpretation.
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* InSeriesNickname: Everyone close to him just calls him "Van". Averted in the localization where this is left out completely and people just address him by his full last name instead
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* ScaryShinyGlasses: Not at first but post character development they appear quite frequently, almost always when in [[TheGadfly gadfly mode]]
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* TheGadfly: Yes, really. Post character development he doesn't let a single opportunity to tease his friends - most notably Impey and Delly is a close second - pass him by, completely with ScaryShineyGlasses for comedic affect.
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* TheGadfly: Yes, really. Post character development he doesn't let a single opportunity to tease his friends - most notably Impey and Delly is a close second - pass him by, completely with ScaryShineyGlasses ScaryShinyGlasses for comedic affect.
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* TheGadfly: Yes, really. Post character development he doesn't let a single opportunity to tease his friends - most notably Impey and Delly is a close second - pass him by, completely with ScaryShineyGlasses for comedic affect.
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* PublicDomainCharacter: Heavily implied to be non other than [[spoiler: Mycroft Holmes]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several characters comment that Cardia and Catarella act like sisters and even look alike. [[spoiler:That's because their both homuculi created by Isaac.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several characters comment that Cardia and Catarella act like sisters and even look alike. [[spoiler:That's because their they're both homuculi created by Isaac.Isaac which makes them, essentially and genetically, twins.]]
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Is shown to do this in the stage musical.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Despite spearheading a chemical attack on her own people to kickstart a world war, all her actions come from a belief it'll protect Britain in the long run and a knowledge her actions are still evil.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Despite spearheading a chemical attack on her own people to kickstart a world war, all her actions come from a belief it'll protect Britain in the long run run, and a knowledge she does understand that her actions are still evil.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Old enough to be thousands of years old.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Old enough to be thousands of At least 5000 years old.
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* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler:Lupin's mentor, Theophrate, is also Miles' partner and friend from Twilight.]]
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* Cloudcuckoolander: Even when Finis threatens to add deadly traps to the house's reconstruction to deal with Saint-Germaine and Hansel constant dropping in, Hansel simply asks [[ComicallyMissingThePoint if they have pests]]. Saint-Germaine advises Finis to give up on Hansel.
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* Cloudcuckoolander: {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Even when Finis threatens to add deadly traps to the house's reconstruction to deal with Saint-Germaine Saint-Germain and Hansel constant dropping in, Hansel simply asks [[ComicallyMissingThePoint if they have pests]]. Saint-Germaine Saint-Germain advises Finis to give up on Hansel.
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* PublicDomainCharacter: Borrowed from Creator/BramStoker's ''Literature/{{Dracula}}''.
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* PublicDomainCharacter: Borrowed from Creator/BramStoker's ''Literature/{{Dracula}}''. InNameOnly, he's both younger, and approach problems very differently (the original Van Helsing was a bookworm who spent time studying a problem before carefully considering violence).
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* IllGirl: She has a chronic illness that requires a special medicine. [[spoiler:It's revealed the cause is a device Isaac put into her brain to implant the original Cardia's memories into her. It causes her brain to overheat and for memories to overload her.]]
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* IllGirl: She has a chronic illness that requires a special medicine. [[spoiler:It's revealed the cause is a device Isaac put into her brain to implant the original Cardia's memories into her. It causes her brain to overheat and for memories to overload her. Because the medicine uses poison as part of its base, remnants of it in her system leaves her body somewhat weakened.]]
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* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler:Lupin's mentor, Theophrate, is also Miles' partner and friend from Twilight.]]
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* TheDandy: He dresses DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler:Miles was once a member of Twilight who climbed up the ranks due to his expertise in bright, flashy clothing information gathering. After he and is horrified his partner, Theophraste, were asked by Isaac to help him dispose of Cardia clones, their faith in the organization was broken and they ran away. Theophraste took Isaac's research notes with the thought intention of someone going after his hair.stopping Isaac one day while Miles found a barely living Cantarella and saved her.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several characters comment that the pair act like sisters and even look alike. [[spoiler:That's because their both homuculi created by Isaac.]]
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* TheChosenOne: Played with. Aiguille is convinced she's the singer of legend, destined to bring the Clockwork Castle to life. [[spoiler: The reason why is because the castle was intended to be a toy for the original Cardia Beckford. Cantarella, as a homunculus of her, has a voice that's a 100% match (as does Cardia)]].