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Adding a line for Dragon Ball Super -> Awesome(and other sub pages):

• After Vegeto is briefly knocked out by Zamasu. Anyone with a sharp eye will notice his head raising just a tiny bit when Zamasu is about to stab him, Vegeto was just overplaying the injury and waiting for a moment to strike. More impressively, this happens after he got hit in their collective dicks by Zamasu's mutated fist. Showing us that Vegeto can take some insane hits and recover from them like it's nothing.
  • Likewise Zamasu gets points for being only one (so far) actually humiliate Vegeto like that. Mad egomaniac with a god complex or not, that is one moment of awesome Zamasu can take to oblivion without regrets.

Dragon Ball Super -> Funny:

• For anyone that have seen Dragon Ball Abridged and are familiar the running gag of Kaioken Phrase Catcher. The moment Goku busts it out against Merged Zamasu, he responded the same way everyone else did. Utterly priceless.

Dragon Ball Super -> Tear Jerker:

• In Hindsight it's a bit sad to see that while Vegeta has grown as a person and became more fatherly over time. The moment Trunks was born he didn't even hold him or hug him until he was about to die a second time.

Every since we saw Future!Zen'O I came to the conclusion that Zen'O is not omnipotent. Sure he is the most powerful being in the DB universe, but he is does not transcend time. This means for every timeline there is a Zen'O most of the time. People's concept of a multiverse is a universe with multiple timelines and universe all in one. But in this case, all of the multiverse are more or less one and the same expect for the timelines. So, in this case. One can assume that for every timeline, there is a Zen'O. He is only the ruler of one multiverse's timeline, not the multiverse itself. This then opens up the question of; who is the master of the timelines and the multiverse because to truly be a ruling god, one must be on the top and all powerful(i.e the judeo-christian god) or have an patheon that fulfills X task while being nigh unbeatable by mortals.

So either Zen'O is a puppet god, or else he is truly on top and mortal's in every universe is screwed the moment he wants to destroy a universe.

edited 27th Mar '17 8:51:08 AM by xxlogos

After Vegeto is briefly knocked out by Zamasu, anyone with a sharp eye will notice his head raising just a tiny bit when Zamasu is about to stab him; Vegeto was just overplaying the injury and waiting for a moment to strike.

Likewise, Zamasu gets points for being the only one (so far) to actually humiliate Vegeto like that. Mad egomaniac with a god complex or not, that is one moment of awesome Zamasu can take to oblivion without regrets.

For anyone who has seen Dragon Ball Abridged and is familiar with the running gag of Kaioken Phrase Catcher: the moment Goku busts it out against Merged Zamasu, he responds the same way everyone else did. Utterly priceless.

In hindsight, it's a bit sad to see that while Vegeta has grown as a person and became more fatherly over time, the moment Trunks was born he didn't even hold him or hug him until he was about to die a second time.

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But in this case, all of the multiverses are more or less one and the same except for the timelines.

So, in this case, one can assume that for every timeline, there is a Zen'O.

This then opens up the question of "Who is the master of the timelines and the multiverse?", because to truly be a ruling god, one must be on the top and all powerful (i.e the Judeo-Christian God)

So either Zen'O is a puppet god, or else he is truly on top and mortals in every universe are screwed the moment he wants to destroy a universe.

EDIT, some more suggestions:

1) I'd suggest replacing "i.e." before "the Judeo-Christian God", with "e.g.". The 1st means "that is", the 2nd, "for example". See [1]. The Judeo-Christian religion / culture is not the only one with one all-mighty God (e.g. Zeus for the Greeks).

2) "he'' got hit in their collective dicks by" - "he" and "their" don't match up since one is singular and the other is plural, but I don't know the work and maybe this makes sense in context?

3) "The moment Goku busts it out against Merged Zamasu, he responded the same way everyone else did."" - This is switching between present tense ("busts" and past tense "responded" and "did"). You should stick to one tense within the entry (mostly, present tense is preferred).

edited 28th Mar '17 4:36:30 AM by LB7979

Hope that is clear, suggestions are in bold.

P.S. The indentation of "Likewise, Zamasu ... regrets" is unnecessary, and I think against indentation guidelines (it doesn't need to be indented).

Also, in the quote of what Goku and Zamasu say: stage directions ("processes to heel .... to the ground") are supposed to be in Italic, and enclosed in these [ ] straight brackets.

@xxlogos

A few more changes. O.K., more than a few. :)

• notice his head raising just a tiny bit -> notice his head rising just a tiny bit
• this happens after he got hit -> this happens after he gets hit
• in their collective dicks

Putting two or more Pot Holes in a row like this is illegal as per Sinkhole - Chained Sinkhole.

Also, Dragon Ball Z Abridged is a Web Video and should have the Web Video Namespace in front of it.

• mutated fist. Showing us (sentence fragment) -> mutated fist, showing us

• processes to heel Zamasu to the face -> proceeds to heel Zamasu to the face

I'm not sure what you mean by "heel...to the face". Hit him in the face? Hit him with his heel, i.e. some kind of kick attack?

• Every since we saw Future!Zen'O I came to the conclusion ->
  • After we learned about Future!Zen'O, I came to the conclusion
• Sure he is -> Sure, he is
• but he is does not transcend time. -> but he does not transcend time.
• This means for every timeline -> This means that for every timeline
• People's concept of a multiverse -> Most people's concept of a multiverse
• or have an patheon -> or have a pantheon

edited 28th Mar '17 7:39:47 AM by Arivne

I'd like to add Maggie from episode "Funny Business" to section "Others" on page

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/TheLoudHouseKids.

Would this be written correctly?

Voice by: (English) Kari Wahlgren Maggie is an emo girl appearing in episode "Funny Business".

Tropes:

Bratty Teenage Daughter: She has a loving mother but always complains.

Buxom Is Better: Downplayed. She's 13 and already has breasts unlike Lynn Loud Jr. who is also 13.

Eerie Pale-Skinned Brunette: She's a pale girl with black hair.

Emotionless Girl: She barely shows emotions except for anger when Lincoln destroyed her birthday cake.

Emo Teen: She's an emo girl who turned 13 in episode "Funny Business".

Graceful Ladies Like Purple: She wears a purple jacket.

Hidden Depths: She likes mimes.

True Blue Femininity: She wears blue shirt and skirt.

Youthful Eyelashes: She has 6 pairs of eyelashes.

Youthful Freckles: She has freckles on her cheeks.

edited 29th Mar '17 1:24:30 AM by FirstDrellSpectre

Buxom Is Better: Downplayed. She's 13 and already has breasts, unlike Lynn Loud Jr. who is also 13.

Emotionless Girl: She barely shows emotions except for anger when Lincoln destroys her birthday cake.

(Keep the same tense; present tense is recommended)

Emo Teen: She's an emo girl who turned 13 in the episode "Funny Business".

True Blue Femininity: She wears a blue shirt and skirt.

Thanks, LB 7979.

Those examples are not formatted correctly: please use proper markup even when posting here — that means that you should use bullets to generate lists and use WikiWords to create trope links. Most of the examples are zero-context as well.

I have tropes for Sentinels of the Multiverse

• Call-Back: Void Guard Writhe's Darkly Dreaming is similar in effect to the Sentinels' Blackout. ^note Darkly Dreaming lets Writhe deal damage to all non-hero targets, then if his Shadow Cloak is in play he destroys it to have those same targets damage themselves. Blackout has one of the Sentinels deal damage to a target, and if Writhe was the hero he then deals all non-heroes damage
• It Only Works Once: Void Guard Dr. Medico's From the Brink card lets him prevent all damage that would normally incapacitate a hero character and then heals every hero, but after doing so From The Brink is removed from the game.

edited 29th Mar '17 12:18:50 PM by Kingofsouls

• The grammar on Call-Back seems to check out, but I think the more important issue is that it needs more context. That is, a "similar effect" could be an accident, whereas "the movement is the same and the colors are inverted" could be intentional.
• and then || to || , and then
• after doing so From The Brink is || to || after doing so, From The Brink is

edited 29th Mar '17 2:48:06 PM by WaterBlap

For the character page for Pinocchio

• Suddenly Voiced: Gideon speaks in the 1970's touring arena show Disney on Parade.

I can't see any problems with English, but there are a couple of problems with TV Tropes rules.

• Disney on Parade -> Disney on Parade (How to Write an Example - Emphasis For Work Names)

The Suddenly Voiced trope is "A character who was previously The Voiceless now talks much more frequently and is, more or less, given a permanent tone of voice."

In your example you don't say that Gideon is normally The Voiceless, which is a required part of the trope. Leaving out that information makes this a Zero-Context Example.

edited 30th Mar '17 5:22:42 AM by Arivne

A post for The Aristocats Woolseyism: In the italian dub Thomas O'Malley is not irish but roman (i.e. from Rome), his name is changed into Romeo, and is dubbed with a roman accent.

p.s. It's also Adaptational Nationality

p.p.s. here, we can only write what we wish to add on the site (wich i can't do, for now) or even something else, for practice purpose?

edited 30th Mar '17 8:16:49 AM by simonsolly

For Mobile Suit Gundam (Katz, Letz, & Kikka folder)

• Spanner in the Works: In the Alternate Continuity of Mobile Suit Gundam: The Origin. While the White Base crew is in Jaburo's base, they accidentally discover a Zeon's unit infitrated that has planeed to destroy the new mobile suit GM with some bombs. They remove the bombs and this lead to Zeon failed attempt to conquer Jaburo because Garcia Romeo (Rear-Admiral assigned to an Zeon base overseeing the Jaburo Invasion operation) army is defeat thanks to GM.

simonsolly, looks good, just capitalize the letters of nationalities / nations:

Italian dub

Irish

Roman

and he is dubbed with a Roman accent.

p.p.s. here, we can only write what we wish to add on the site (wich i can't do, for now) or even something else, for practice purpose?

I think this forum is only to let other people read what you write for this site, yes. If you'd like help specifically for writing English as your not-first language, you can try sites like English Language Learners at StackExchange.com.

And what do you mean with "I can't do, for now"? Of course you can add to this site!

Saluti da un altro Troper, mia seconda lingua e anche Italiano :-)

Rafi,

infiltrated

planeed —> planned

this leads to Zeon's

to a Zeon base

is defeated

@rafi

A few more:

• discover a Zeon's unit infiltrated that has planned -> discover that a Zeon unit has infiltrated and plans
• Garcia Romeo...army -> Garcia Romeo's...army
• thanks to GM. -> thanks to the GM.

edited 31st Mar '17 3:55:57 AM by Arivne

LB 7979 thanks, but i've been suspended because of my poor grammar and so i can't edit for a while p.s. ok, i'll just write what i'd wish to edit (damnit, it would've been fun to trope my own characters, but i guess this really isn't the right place) p.p.s. Tanti saluti anche a te!

edited 31st Mar '17 5:36:00 AM by simonsolly

I know you didn't ask for this to be proofread, but you need to know this:

Whenever you're using the letter I to refer to yourself, it's always capitalized, even in contractions.

So in your post above:

• i've been suspended -> I've been suspended
• i can't edit -> I can't edit
• i'll just write what i'd wish...but i guess -> I'll just write what I'd wish...but I guess

@Arivne Thanks, I always forget it

I'm going to add a Reality Ensues entry for Supermarioglitchy4s Super Mario 64 Bloopers:

• Reality Ensues:
  • While SMG4 and Toad were in the stone age, they met the prehistoric Professor E. Gadd called Professor E. Gugh. Even though E. Gugh was supposedly the smartest caveman during his time, he's still a caveman and thus, he didn't know how to make a time machine or send the two friends back to their time. At best, he induced a coma to SMG.

edited 1st Apr '17 8:53:38 PM by kennydarmawan13

Samurai Jack -> Aku

(Under Nigh-Invulnerable):

• Super-Toughness: Make no mistake, while Aku is vulnerable to Jack's divine sword and getting cut by it hurts like a motherfucker. He is tough enough to survive several blows from it and can even harden part of his body to outright No-Sell the corrosive effects of the blade touching him when his attacks are parried by the sword.
• Made Of Liquid: Any attacks from a non-divine source that do pierce him just pass through.or get stuck in his body. He can even weaponized this ability to sent back arrows that were shot at him.

• Healing Factor: Aku can heal form any injury, even those inflicted by Jack's sword. Its the reason he is still in his prime and not crippled from several life threatening injuries and cut down to tiny forms anytime Jack defeats him.

edited 9th Apr '17 12:05:02 AM by xxlogos

@kennydarmawan13

• were in the stone age, they met...was supposedly...he didn't know...he induced ->
  • are in the stone age, they meet...is supposedly...he doesn't know...he induces (How to Write an Example - Write in Present Tense)
• Professor E. Gadd called Professor E. Gugh. -> Professor E. Gadd (called Professor E. Gugh).
• during his time -> of his time.
• induces a coma to SMG. -> induces a coma in SMG4.

edited 2nd Apr '17 5:17:19 AM by Arivne

@xxlogos

• Make no mistake, while Aku is vulnerable to Jack's divine sword and getting cut by it hurts like a motherfucker.

This is a sentence fragment and needs to be joined with the next sentence to make sense. Since this would make the total sentence too long, it should be broken up further on.

• he is also -> he is
• tough enough several blow's from it -> tough enough to survive several blows from it

Final result:

• Any attacks that do pirce him from a non-divine source just passes...or gets stuck ->
  • Any attacks from a non-divine source that do pierce him just pass...or get stuck

• Its the reason -> It's the reason (it's = it is)