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BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#176: Feb 4th 2010 at 3:32:45 PM

This is really the relevant wave; good thing it's also the easiest to post in here because it's the most forumlike:

Black Humor: This is kind of filling up the plot wave, so I made a new wave to discuss it.

Also I want to try an experiment:

Comment on this wave only to defuse an edit war. Otherwise, be bold and edit it like a wiki. I suspect it'll be faster, and certainly produce less junk.

So, the meat of this wave:

The villains for the first act of the game are the orcs, who have been gathering mysteriously near the Awesomegate. The reason is suspected to be is that they want to get in on the war, and are forming an orc alliance for that purpose. You don't have much contact with actual orcs until the end of the act; this act is the gather party act.

For the second act, the villains are the entercoolname [gods/demons/spirits, something like that], who are a sentient race of creatures from a plane loosely bordering the base plane, which have long been worshipped by the orcs, who opened the Awesomegate at the above great meeting of the orc tribes to get the entercoolnames' guidance on how they should stop the huge war. The entercoolname decide, near the end of the act, that the best way to stop the war is to attack all the governments and force them to band together against a common enemy.

For the third act, the villains are the evil governments, who had for the first part been all trying to get the entercoolname to kill each other, and now continue the war with each other.

eX: Ok, I just post my Idea:

Prologue: One day, right in the middle of the battlefield, the dead rise! The combination of thousands of corpses, magic spells and other superweapons has boundtogether to form a threat for the whole world, the entercoolname. Due to the nature of their birth their goal is the destruction of every faction in the war. This event gives the war-ridden population of every races the rest, a mass panic breaks out and the the five governments are forced to sign a ceasefire, to deal with their rebelling people.

First Act: The high-ups of the five races decide, as a signal to the population that they are working together to save the world, to send a joint group of soldiers to secure an ancient artifact of vast power, left behind by an old, long gone civilization, that should be able to stop theentercoolname and that is located in some remote location. And while a lot of people actually believe in this plan, it is ultimately fake. The high-ups are just trying to keep the population in a state of false hope, while each nation is preparing their own method to protect themselves from the entercoolname. They (the high-ups) hope that the entercoolname will finally be able to end the grindlocked situation in which the war has been for the past years, by weakening each opposing force significantly, before they can destroy the entercoolname.

So our protagonist is recruited for the decoy quest, thinking he is going to rescue the world. He travels to the four other nations and joins up with thedifferent soldiers these nations send.

Second Act: Our heroes start their journey to the remote location. This part pretty much plays like a stereotypical RPG plot: Go rescue the MacGuffin. On their journey there, they learn to trust each other, while beingpursued by a group of the entercoolname , who of course, think that the MacGuffin is real. This arc should show, that the entercoolname are a lot stronger than the expected. Also, aside from them, there is missing a main antagonist in this arc. Anyway, in the end, they find out that there is no MacGuffin and thatthere whole quest was fake, a tool to keep the people calm and they find out that each nation is plotting their own strategy.

Because they actually fought some of the entercoolname, our heroes also know, that they are extremely resistant against single attacks, due to their origin, and that one has to combine the abilities of the different races to beat them and that therefore, the single strategies are doomed to fail.

Third Act: After failing to reason with the government of the five races to combine their forces, our Heroes become fugitives and trying to steal the strongest weapon each faction has, to combine them and beat the entercoolname. In this Act, they mainly fight the soldiers of the different races.

Forth Act: Our heroes combine the the different weapons, enter the fortress of the entercoolname, that is hovering over the main battlefield of the long war, beat the big bad boss and destroy whatever combination of magic andtechnology brought them back to life in the first place, thus, saving the world.

Btw: Black Humor and I have kind of a disagreement over the overall story, so an other opinion, or a completely different idea would be nice.

Wicked223 Okay, so here's an idea I've been kicking around.

First Act: In the middle of the war between the five races, one of the races attempt to call a conference between the rest. The reason: omens of an impending (entercoolname) invasion. On the surface, the conference appears to go well, with each race agreeing to send someone to investigate. This act will serve as the party meeting up. Alternateidea: each of the races discovers the (entercoolname ) invasion on their own, decide to seize the oppurtunity. One race discovers them first, decides to send an envoy to the other races, who have already discovered it.

Now that it's out there, I'm not really sure this'd work.

edited 4th Feb '10 3:34:54 PM by BlackHumor

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#177: Feb 15th 2010 at 10:35:29 AM

Month is halfway over and nobody's posted here.

I think we need more people; probably also want to move off wave, people seem to be avoiding it for some reason.

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
Wicked223 from Death Star in the forest Since: Apr, 2009
#178: Feb 15th 2010 at 10:37:07 AM

We really could use more people.

You can't even write racist abuse in excrement on somebody's car without the politically correct brigade jumping down your throat!
Blueeyedrat YEEEEAH— no. from nowhere in particular. Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Mu
YEEEEAH— no.
#179: Feb 15th 2010 at 3:23:02 PM

I'm still here... -has been waiting for discussion to come back-

EDIT: Quick question: idea would it be awesome or Narmy if one of the protagonists had a Big Damn Heroes moment while screaming "DEEEEEUUUUUS EEEEEXX MMAAAAAAACHIIINNAAAAAA"? 'Cause if it's the former, we should totally do that.

edited 15th Feb '10 9:02:06 PM by Blueeyedrat

"I've come to the conclusion that this is a very stupid idea."
BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#180: Feb 17th 2010 at 7:36:42 PM

If we pull it off right, anything can be awesome.

That said, I don't really want to stick in random cool things until we run into a situation where they would work; otherwise we've got to plot around the cool thing and that's no fun.

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
Rented Slacker from your head Since: Oct, 2009
Slacker
#181: Feb 25th 2010 at 3:18:54 AM

I just found this thread worthy to dig out.

Why don't you two just combine those ideas, Black Humor and eX?

Like this:

  • it seems like the orcs are forming an alliance to join the war
  • they actually try to find a way to stop it, with the help of the ecn (entercoolname)
  • they attack the governments to force them to band together against a common enemy
  • the ecn are well known among the five factions, so a mass panic breaks out
  • the factions have to sign ceasefire
  • the factions send the party to search for the McGuffin to give the people false help while trying to protect themselves
  • the party notices the fake and the resistance of the ecn to singe attacks, but also that they may be beaten by the combined forces of the five races.
  • While they're shunned by they're governments for these stupid ideas, they steal the strongest weapons each faction has, with help of the people who still have hope
  • the party defeats the ecn (actually not, as the ecn are of a higher existence and cannot be defeated by mere mortals)
  • they're celebrated and set an example for an alliance
  • While the governments are still not convinced, the simple people are and it will not take THAT long to get they're wanted peace
  • The orcs and ecn sit in a corner and say "just as planned"

well, I tried

BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#182: Feb 25th 2010 at 3:53:03 PM

Y'know, that's pretty good. I think I could actually agree to that as presented, but just a few changes I'd like to make:

  • Move the Plot Coupon collecting bit to the first part (or really second part; the first part will be the party collecting bit)
    • Or hmmm... it doesn't seem like a good idea to stack two collecty parts on top of each other like that, at least not without a Wham Episode in between. Maybe kind of mix it with the party collecting bit.

Anyway, going with it anyway: The orcs have collected around the Awesomegate[to be named later] in order to summon the ecn[kind of a Precursor/spirit race whom all the races trust to be impartial] to make a decision and end the war.

There's a bunch of Mac Guffins they need for this, which is why none of the other races could do it alone. Each member of your party brings their race's MacGuffin along, supposedly to help the orcs end the war.

The orcs insist on a week long [5-day] ceremony before they open the gate. During this, each member of your party, on orders from their government, takes everyone else's MacGuffin and bribes the ecn to decide in their favor. Therefore, when the orcs actually do summon them, the ecn are a combination of disgusted and amused at all the infighting and decide they would be better rulers then anyone else, and wage one hell of a half a war during the next few months [which we probably will timeskip over].

The rest of the game is spent convincing (or "convincing") all the governments to band together to fight the ecn. Once this happens, the ecn are impressed at this display of unity, reverse their previous judgment, and go home.

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
Rented Slacker from your head Since: Oct, 2009
Slacker
#183: Feb 25th 2010 at 11:25:32 PM

So, from what I can gather, the orcs don't care how this war ends, but just want it to end.

The order of the acts seems to depend on the overall length you want this game to be. If you mix the party and coupon collecting, then it is a lot shorter than if you the the coupon collecting two acts later. But I don't think that makes sense and would feel like awful backtracking, unless you just meet your party in your town aka the prologue...

edited 25th Feb '10 11:55:54 PM by Rented

BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#184: Feb 26th 2010 at 6:36:21 PM

Hmmm... I think it might be better if we actually start with the game before we decide that. The story arc works pretty much the same anyways.

So, anyone have anything to say about the gameplay? So far it's no random encounters, maybe TBS, maybe not.

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#185: Mar 7th 2010 at 4:37:59 PM

*waves hands*

Hello?! Is anyone home?!

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
Blueeyedrat YEEEEAH— no. from nowhere in particular. Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Mu
YEEEEAH— no.
#186: Mar 7th 2010 at 4:52:17 PM

I'm still here...

"I've come to the conclusion that this is a very stupid idea."
Barcode711 Clutch pedal = sidestep from Uddiyana Since: Apr, 2009
Clutch pedal = sidestep
#187: Mar 7th 2010 at 9:17:09 PM

I'll look into this later. May be interested in proofreading as this thing gets underway. But it'll most likely have to wait - school and all.

edited 7th Mar '10 9:28:12 PM by Barcode711

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BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#188: Mar 12th 2010 at 10:23:49 PM

Hmm... I think it might help to break this up into some explicit roles, instead of just having everyone do everything. Then maybe we can get a conversation going in this topic, which should keep the game going.

So first few obvious things we'll need: writers and spriters (maybe some musicians too, but that's going kind of far ahead). We sort of already have a plot, so all we have to do is flesh it out a bit and then write a script.

Oh, and also one or two "designers" besides me, to figure out what the gameplay should be like.

Any volunteers for any of those?

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
Blueeyedrat YEEEEAH— no. from nowhere in particular. Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Mu
YEEEEAH— no.
#189: Mar 12th 2010 at 10:36:00 PM

Hmm. I'll try to see where I can fit in; I'd like to design levels someday, so why not start here?

"I've come to the conclusion that this is a very stupid idea."
BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#190: Mar 12th 2010 at 10:44:00 PM

Yeah, ok.

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#191: Mar 14th 2010 at 2:31:55 PM

So, looking over the database, we need (I am assuming we will stat these out later):

  • A list of all the playable characters, with approximate role in the party. Probably we will also need sprites for all of these eventually.
  • List of all the classes in the game. This might be as short as the list of playable characters, or we might decide to add a gameplay mechanic to change classes, in which case this list might actually take some thinking.
  • A list of all the magic/skills in the game, along with exactly what each does.
  • Seperate lists of all the usable items, weapons, and armor in the game, along with what they all do.
  • A list of all the enemies in the game. We will probably need sprites for these, also.
  • A list of all the status effects in the game, along with what they do.
  • Animations to correspond with all those skills from above. A lot of these we should certainly be able to get from the RTP [Run Time Pack - all the sprites/music/animations/whatever that RPG Maker XP comes with].
  • [We don't really need a list of extra tilesets; just whoever is making maps know that you can use tilesets that RPG Maker doesn't come with]
  • The party you start with. We seem to have already decided this will be The Hero only.
  • All the elements in the game. (Super effective against, say, undead is an element.)
  • There's a bunch of random sound effects at this point but I think we can probably just use the defaults.
  • Names for all the stats in the game, plus all armor slots, plus the names of the options in the combat menu (Attack, Item, that kind of thing)

Plus any scripts we want to use.

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#192: Apr 19th 2010 at 5:42:01 PM

So, anyone still interested in this? I really don't want to just let it die.

Maybe I could make a new thread and start from scratch? Might help us to regain our inertia.

edited 19th Apr '10 5:42:29 PM by BlackHumor

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
Blueeyedrat YEEEEAH— no. from nowhere in particular. Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Mu
YEEEEAH— no.
#193: Apr 20th 2010 at 7:54:31 AM

Again, I'm still here...

We should probably keep this thread, 'cause I don't think restarting will do much.

"I've come to the conclusion that this is a very stupid idea."
BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#194: Apr 20th 2010 at 8:22:36 PM

You wanna help us write then? Because I think with you, me, and eX we could actually get somewhere.

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
Blueeyedrat YEEEEAH— no. from nowhere in particular. Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Mu
YEEEEAH— no.
#195: Apr 21st 2010 at 6:31:04 PM

...Maybe? I was never that great in narrative; I spend my time with other aspects. And besides, I have a slightly awkward style: I think up an idea (a character, a weapon, an element, etc.) and slowly build a world around it (and hopefully tie it in with other ideas of mine).

...But alright then.

edited 21st Apr '10 6:35:25 PM by Blueeyedrat

"I've come to the conclusion that this is a very stupid idea."
BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#196: Apr 21st 2010 at 7:42:13 PM

So then, should the entercoolname be kinda like demons or kinda like zombies? Because that was really the big thing me and eX were fighting about, if I'm remembering it right.

I'm pretty sure the views of the plot we had go like this:

Me: You, as the hero, spend the first act gathering the other four members of the party from the lands of the other races, along with their respective MacGuffins. This part serves mainly as character development.

Then at the beginning of the transition to the second act, you travel to the point where the orcs are trying to contact the entercoolname with all your respective racial Plot Coupons needed to contact them. At this point, a sequence happens where each member of your party individually contacts the entercoolname and bribes them. At the end of the sequence, Wham Episode where the entercoolname tell everyone what happened over the previous week or so and on the basis of this (claim to) decide to kill everybody.

Then a bit where your party is going around to the various racial govts and trying to convince them to unite against the entercoolname. At the end of the game, (and after you start fighting) the entercoolname reveal that they were hoping for exactly this reaction and so leave you alone.

eX: (sorry if I get any of this wrong) The vast mago-technical war has caused enough residue that the dead are beginning to rise as entercoolname. First act, the various govts send you to get a party of soldiers to get a MacGuffin or MacGuffins to fight the entercoolname.

Second act: You go get the MacGuffin. It doesn't work, it turned out the plan was crap all along. The govts were actually all hoping that the entercoolname would attack somebody else first, which would have allowed them to swoop in and win the war. This act is also the first act where you really start fighting entercoolname, as opposed to wild animals and stuff.

Third act: The heroes run away and start stealing superweapons from the various races to fight the entercoolname.

Final dungeon: The heroes, using all their powers combined  *

, storm the entercoolname's base and defeat them [my commentary here: it doesn't seem like zombies should have a base, or should be able to be defeated in this way. Wait... aaagh I'm criticizing my opponenent's position within a description of it sorry sorry sorry]

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
Blueeyedrat YEEEEAH— no. from nowhere in particular. Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Mu
YEEEEAH— no.
#197: Apr 21st 2010 at 7:55:50 PM

To be honest, I'd say demons would work better in a setting like this, and the story could still be tweaked as we see fit.

"I've come to the conclusion that this is a very stupid idea."
BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#198: Apr 22nd 2010 at 1:01:04 PM

Great.

But the problem now is that eX doesn't seem to be paying attention. So I think I'll PM him.

EDIT: Done. Probably should poke NSBL, Wicked, and Kinky also.

EDIT 2: That's done too now.

edited 22nd Apr '10 1:08:34 PM by BlackHumor

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1
Wicked223 from Death Star in the forest Since: Apr, 2009
#199: Apr 22nd 2010 at 1:13:52 PM

The thread! It lives!

You can't even write racist abuse in excrement on somebody's car without the politically correct brigade jumping down your throat!
BlackHumor Unreliable Narrator from Zombie City Since: Jan, 2001
#200: Apr 22nd 2010 at 2:16:29 PM

YEEESSSS!

Though actually, I don't know why I'm not just outsourcing this to Bison, so:

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

edited 22nd Apr '10 2:17:01 PM by BlackHumor

I'm convinced that our modern day analogues to ancient scholars are comedians. -0dd1

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