Reiterating my vote to keep. Did a (less than) quick glance over the fic, and while there's plenty of absurd graphic violence, there doesn't seem to be any sex other than what's in Chapter 13.
back lolAnything significant other than in Chapter 13?
Absolute RainbowKeep
"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."Good. Cut the Chapter 13 contents only.
Absolute RainbowWe’ve already argued that Chapter 13 is fine as well. I would recommend peering through the rest of the discussion if you haven’t already.
Edited by jandn2014 on Feb 16th 2024 at 10:25:25 AM
back lolBut Chapter 13 have the sex stuffs.
Absolute RainbowRecap.
Absolute RainbowWhy don't you just go read it yourself? It's awkward and terribly-written, but if you're so insistent about this, then I don't understand why you do your own review.
But might as well:
- Marcus shows up at the Loud household, Lori and Leni are in bikinis
- Lori and Leni's appearances are described lustfully
- Leni and Marcus make out
- They all get undressed, the two admire Marcus' penis
- They all continue making out, Marcus gets erect
- Lori begins licking Marcus' balls and dick, eventually having him penetrate her
- Marcus begins to thrust and soon ejectuates, all while Leni masturbates watching them
- Marcus moves onto Leni and penetrates her as well
- He begins to thrust, and stops to have her call him Daddy
- He then continues and Leni reaches orgasm
- They all fuck some more, with very little detail provided
...well, that was a painful read.
Edited by jandn2014 on Feb 20th 2024 at 11:08:33 AM
back lolAlright, so. I think we have a consensus to keep.
...with a warning about Chapter 13, that is. Otherwise, cut the chapter.
Definitely keep the rest though.
Absolute Rainbow…it’s just a crappy sex scene. No need to fuss about it so much.
You’re free to find it disgusting and disturbing if you do, but there’s no reason why we should put a warning or scrub any mention of it. The consensus is “the sex scene between a 24-year-old and two older teenagers is acceptable under the Content Policy” not “keep everything but references to chapter 13”.
back lolWait... what's their ages?
Absolute Rainbowim not familiar with the show, but someone above said 16, 17 and 24
do you have a disagreement with the other posts about why the scene is/isn't acceptable to trope?
Edited by Tremmor19 on Feb 22nd 2024 at 6:09:14 AM
Keep. We trope works with this kind of content.
Avatar: Amethio (Pokemon Horizons)Nose count:
- Keep: Ramidel, miraculous, ReynTime250, jandn2014, DemonDuckofDoom, Tremmor19, jlvs200s, JHD0919, Zazie122, CompletelyNormalGuy, Siegfried1337, opal6561
- Do something about Chapter 13: AbsoluteRainbow
- Cut: Tython, StalkerGamer, mightymewtron
This is a supermajority to keep, unconditionally, including Chapter 13 with no warning or editing.
Edited by Ramidel on Feb 22nd 2024 at 8:03:57 AM
I'll add another keep vote. It seems like it's fine.
Bigotry will NEVER be welcome on TV Tropes.Keep, with no edits to Chapter 13
MB Pending | MB Drafts | MB DatesIf you don't do something about chapter 13, children might be creeped out with that chapter. That said, I won't force anyone, just a suggestion, and it's clear were keeping everything else. Literally.
Absolute RainbowWhat do you expect us to do, Rainbow? Remove the chapter from the internet? Children are far more likely to go reading these fanfics themselves than they are to be reading about them on TVT, and our recap can hardly be that disturbing.
It's not that serious.
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessContent warnings on trope pages aren't something we generally do— there's no graphic content on this site, and anyone who reads the story would see the M rating and content warnings on the fic itself. Its not really something we need to deal with
Edited by Tremmor19 on Feb 22nd 2024 at 2:52:43 PM
Edited by Amonimus on Feb 22nd 2024 at 8:20:11 PM
TroperWall / WikiMagic Cleanup
With the info mentioned above in mind, I'm giving this fic a keep until somebody else reads the fic and confirms there's stuff that would violate the content guidelines unrelated to the reported sex scene.
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