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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#19801: Jul 11th 2023 at 12:41:05 PM

[tup] Crossbrocks

"No running in the halls!"
Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#19802: Jul 11th 2023 at 12:44:50 PM

Yes to Crossbones, great job!

Edited by Ravok on Jul 11th 2023 at 12:44:55 PM

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#19803: Jul 11th 2023 at 12:56:01 PM

[tup] for Bross "Crockbow" Rumlones

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#19804: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:08:19 PM

Slight yes to Crossbones. This novel I'll assume.

GOTG 2 stops before Ego? That's like...pointless.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#19805: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:08:44 PM

[tup]crossbones.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
FlowerPicking Since: Feb, 2023 Relationship Status: A heart full of love
#19806: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:09:59 PM

[tup]Crossbones, Aldrich Killian, the Mandarin, and Gerwed

MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#19807: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:23:13 PM

[tup] to Ronan, Walter Simmons, Azoz, Red Skull, Mandarin and Adrian Killian (have to admit I kind of like this version better than the film), Gerwed and Crossbones.

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
#19808: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:39:02 PM

Yes to the Iron Man duo and Crossbones (what pushes me over with him is the danger of the virus being more explicitly spelled out than in the film).

Hope your prepared for an unforgettable luncheon
TotemGenitor Bye Since: Apr, 2021 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
Bye
#19809: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:39:52 PM

[tup] Ronan, Simmons, Azov, Red Skull, Killian, Mandarin, Gerwed, Crossbones

[tdown] Juntao, Parallel Nightmare

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#19810: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:42:24 PM

Alright here's one me and MGD have had a chat about so thanks for helping me there bud!

What is the work?'

Doctor Who is a massive franchise I'm sure needs little introduction to you guys. Within the revival episode "Smith And Jones" in Series 3 and the first official debut episode of companion Martha Jones, the Doctor ends up in a hospital teleported to the moon to allow the Judoon (basically space police) to freely search the hospital for a criminal they're pursuing. And who is this criminal you ask? An alien Plasmavore taking on the appearance of a human.

Who is the Plasmavore and what have they done?

A blood sucking alien, the Plasmavore murdered the "Child Princess" of an alien planet out of a mere whim and bitterness over her appearance, causing the Judoon to be tasked to hunt it down. Hiding on Earth ,the Plasmavore takes the human identity of a human woman named Florence Finnegan, eventually ending up in the hospital within the episode.

Because the Judoon are scanning the people within the hospital to check whether they're an alien, the Plasmavore kills a doctor named Stoker by draining his blood while he's alive to assimilate it so she can blend in as a human to avoid detection, while she plans her escape route. Her escape plan? To use an MRI scan room to use it to wipe out everyone within the hospital...and the half of Earth facing the moon, deeming the other half living "her little gift" to them so she hijack a Judoon ship so she can escape alone.

When the Doctor discovers her and her scheme, she drinks his blood to further hide her alien identity when misinformed about the Judoon upping the scanners, almost killing him. Due to the Doctor being very much not a human, the Judoon detect Alien DNA within the Plasmavore, revealing her to them. Facing her demise, the Plasmavore gloats about her crime and then spitefully activates the MRI machine so the Judoon would "burn with her"... and everyone in the hospital and half of Earth before the Judoon shoot her. Thankfully the Doctor was able to disable it so everyone survives and he now has a new companion, Martha.

Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

No for the latter, the Plasmavore is a incredibly sadistic personality.

Now agency concerns? This is the only time we ever see a Plasmovre and while it's noted their species feed off blood, they're not stated to be inherently evil or whatnot and she doesn't commit her crimes out of hunger so we're good on that behalf.

Heinous Standard?

Now this is Doctor Who and we've got a nasty standard. The Plasmavore though? Honestly I think it makes it, she has nothing and I mean nothing in resources apart from human hospital equipment and two human sized robots ,who she only uses to hold Stoker and the Doctor down before she drinks their blood, and she almost wipes out a hospital full of people and half of Earth out of a scheme to escape Space Police. All from her sadistically murdering a child princess ,also stating that the child was "begging for the bite of a Plasmavore" ,and willing to go this far to escape justice? And even facing death she still spitefully triggers the MRI machine with sadistic glee.

Now here's the biggest comparison to another similar character listed, Bennett.

Bennett's crimes consist of murdering someone, and killing the crew and all but two of the Didoi race in an explosion, however the Plasmavore majorly eclipses that number by her attempted scale of half of Earth and doing it out of mere petty spite in her final moments.

Final Verdict?

She's got literally no resources and attempts this scale? I think she just abouts make it, albeit tentatively.

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#19811: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:44:30 PM

Happy to help Wet, and yeah I'll give a [tup] to the Plasmavore. The show has a seriously high heinous standard, but as you say she's got literally nothing and comes close to nearly murdering billions. Brilliant find.

Edited by MGD107 on Jul 11th 2023 at 2:18:53 AM

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#19814: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:46:55 PM

Any reason she doesn't just try to blow up the entire planet?

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#19815: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:48:23 PM

From the way its presented that's all she's capable of with the equipment she has at her disposal.

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#19816: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:49:03 PM

[up][up] It's stated that it only effects living things, not like it's some terraformer or bomb, and she's using hospital equipment so it's not exactly some top tier weapon there.

Edited by WetFlannels on Jul 11th 2023 at 9:49:35 AM

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#19817: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:49:20 PM

[tup]plasmivore.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#19821: Jul 11th 2023 at 1:54:12 PM

[tup] Plasmavore

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
TotemGenitor Bye Since: Apr, 2021 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
NTG Since: Aug, 2014
#19823: Jul 11th 2023 at 2:37:50 PM

Any thoughts about this suggestion, anyone?

[tup] for Aldrich Killian and the Mandarin. I actually want see a Shang-Chi junior novel in the same continuity. That could be interesting. evil grin

[tup] for Gerwed.

Honestly, the henchmen who threatened to drop the virus vial sounds a lot worse. And what about Zemo? Isn't he just one guy who bombed the UN building in the movie? Does he do the same thing in the novel?

[tup] for the nice little old lady aka the Plasmavore. Woah I watched the epsiode and totally forgot about the part of her plan that involved whipping out half of Earth. Good catch you two.smile

TheGrayFox ....Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
....Phenomenal
#19824: Jul 11th 2023 at 2:45:18 PM

[tup] for the regicidal old lady space vampire committing mass medical malpractice. (Sentence of all time right there).

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#19825: Jul 11th 2023 at 2:48:41 PM

[tup] to Killian, Mandarin, Crossbone, and Plasmavore.


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