Prematurely launched pages and pages that weren't fully fleshed out at the point of launching, are a big problem. Since these usually share several problems at once, this thread is aimed at re-running them through the TLP for fixing - the usual fix - or cutting them if they are too bad.
Problems this thread deals with include bad names, not enough/bad examples, unclear description, etc.
For the interested, here's a list of recently created pages. Launches
Note: Please do not request a mod to unlaunch drafts that don't have any issues besides lacking a launch notice/24hr launch notice. While 24hr launch notices are mandatory, there are a few exceptions to the rule. If you see a draft's sponsor launch a TLP without an announcement, it's best to remind them of our TLP Guidelines first. If they continue to repeatedly launch drafts without a launch notice, you can report them on Ask The Tropers or the TLP Community Issues thread.
Edited by MacronNotes on Jun 24th 2023 at 12:24:55 PM
Yup, you can do it yourself; just cite the TLP draft in the edit reason.
It needs to be added to the index, but one of us can do that.
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessOkay — I’ve added the trope’s NRLEP status to the page, citing this thread and the original TLP draft in the edit reasons. It’s ready to add to the NRLEP index whenever is convenient.
I have no objections to the trope staying launched at this point. Thanks for the help, everyone.
Edited by BoltDMC on Dec 22nd 2023 at 7:11:12 AM
Sponsor here. I actually already requested that it be added to the No Real Life Examples, Please! index but it hasn't been done yet (likely because of proximity to Christmas). The policies on marking things as NRLEP are a little unclear, I haven't been sure for a while whether we're supposed to include that link in the description or if simply indexing it there is enough.
Appreciated.
Edited by StarSword on Dec 22nd 2023 at 12:47:58 PM
I usually include it in the description.
Anyway, enough procrastination; I'll get it on the index.
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessThe trope Threatening The Ties, that I created, was launched without my permission. I didn't announce a launch date nor did I give it up for grabs. How do I get it unlaunched?
Now that you've reported the issue here, a mod or engineer will unlaunch it soon. No worries.
135 - 169 - 273 - 191 - 188 - 230 - 300I mean, I can unlaunch it but I can't do anything about the rogue launcher. It might be ideal to holler for a mod.
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessA mod will take care of it eventually.
To change the topic: I have some major concerns about deerhornsaresopretty’s draft Sweet Squirrel Sidekick. I’ve repetitively questioned whenever the core concept here is an actual trope or not, given that “adjective animal” tropes have been troublesome for a while.
Early on, the core concept was pretty much “nice squirrel”, which I had qualms about, given that such a concept doesn’t seem to have much of a cultural basis and “good/evil animals” are prone to Trope Decay, primarily of the “coexists, but isn’t meaningful” type. Their counter-argument then was that it stood in opposition to Screwball Squirrel, which I found odd, as Screwball Squirrel is less “mean squirrel” and more so “wacky/trickster squirrel”, and a few of the examples on their draft seemed to overlap with such already.
From there on, they kept on changing the definition as more criticisms (largely from myself, admittedly…) were made, going from Friendly Neighbourhood Squirrel (in a snowclone of Friendly Neighborhood Spider), to Surprisingly Domestical Squirrel, to Squirrel Mascot (when I pointed out that Weasel Mascot arguably already covers many of the examples), and finally to the current title. Through all those supposed definition changes, they failed to appropriately alter the description or examples, leaving the definition increasingly muddled.
Recently, they actually did bother to try to properly rework it, defining it as “Because squirrels represent innocence and a love for nature, they are used to convey the goodness of a hero”. Yet, after all of this, I have to ask: is it a trope? There’s a more specific concept here, at least, but many of the examples fail to reflect that, instead boiling down to “character has squirrel sidekick, they’re nice and cute”.
I’d feel a little bad for shooting down the draft again given that I’ve already criticized it a ton, but I still think it’s far from ready (even disregarding all the previous criticisms, it only has 13 examples so far, and I’d argue that drafts should have some more examples to ensure that they have enough wicks to not fade into obscurity after launch). I’ve raised concerns about how productive deerhornsaresopretty has been, as it’s causing them to seemingly rush some of their drafts.
Apologies for the major Wall of Text, but I needed to bring this up somewhere and I wasn’t sure if ATT was the right place for this.
Edited by jandn2014 on Dec 23rd 2023 at 3:07:33 PM
back lolAnyway, I posted on the squirrels draft. If it still launches I'd have to send it back, but I made it clear that there are still significant problems.
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessI suspended the rogue-launcher of that TLP.
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"With that, I'll unlaunch it.
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessI'll go ahead and send the laconic to the Cut List to cap it off.
E: Oh well, better luck next time to myself I guess
Edited by Coachpill on Dec 23rd 2023 at 3:45:08 PM
Silver and gold, silver and goldI already did
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessTipped Off by the Tail has been launched without a launch date; the draft was made 3 days ago, and there are still a discussion and an example from the comment section while this was launched.
Edited by alnair20aug93 on Dec 26th 2023 at 8:59:18 PM
ᜇᜎᜈ᜔ᜇᜈ᜔|I DO COMMISSIONS|ᜇᜎᜈ᜔ᜇᜈ᜔Bump.
ᜇᜎᜈ᜔ᜇᜈ᜔|I DO COMMISSIONS|ᜇᜎᜈ᜔ᜇᜈ᜔The discussion seemed finished; I don't see any lingering problems. Just need to ask the troper to slow down and add launch tags.
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessUnlaunched Dinky Dilophosaur (TLP) per request, as there was significant unresolved discussion on the draft at the time of launching. Also announced the unlaunching in the draft comments.
Edited by Twiddler on Dec 28th 2023 at 8:06:17 AM
I forgot. Hoped that the sponsor would've replied to my ping on the last page. Didn't want to make the move without someone else chiming in since I was in the discussion. Anyway, thanks!
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessFlux 55 just rogue-launched my draft Soda Candy Gag.
back lolSuspended them and unlaunched the draft.
'Nother rogue launch. This time it's The Help Helping Themselves.
Currently Working On: Incorruptible Pure PurenessSuspended the user, unlaunched the draft.
Oh okay, thanks for the clarification. Given this, can a note please be added to the trope description or as a commented out note there? Happy to remove any objections if that’s done. I can do it myself, if it’s okay — let me know, if so.