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%% * AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: No royal warriors have been seen yet, but Madame Wranx, the "endboss" of chapter 1 seems to be some sort of royalty to the Fire Sprites.
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''Crystal Rave'' is a [[Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures Forum Adventure]] by the MSPA forums member user Dexexe1234. It follows the tale of [[FanNickname The Crystal Raver]], your [[EasyAmnesia Friendly Neighbourhood Amnesiac]] who just so happened to wake up in a prison cell with a missing eye and [[HearingVoices a large amount of voices in his head]] nagging him to do stuff. It just so happens that you, the readers, [[InteractiveComic are these voices]].
It may sound simple at first, but it is not. the characters are interesting, it takes place in a completely fleshed out and interesting universe, and the art could even be considered eye candy to the easily distracte—oh, shiny.
It may sound simple at first, but it is not. the characters are interesting, it takes place in a completely fleshed out and interesting universe, and the art could even be considered eye candy to the easily distracte—oh, shiny.
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''Crystal Rave'' is a [[Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures Forum Adventure]] by the MSPA forums member user Dexexe1234.[=Dexexe1234=]. It follows the tale of [[FanNickname The Crystal Raver]], your [[EasyAmnesia Friendly Neighbourhood Amnesiac]] who just so happened to wake up in a prison cell with a missing eye and [[HearingVoices a large amount of voices in his head]] nagging him to do stuff. It just so happens that you, the readers, [[InteractiveComic are these voices]].
It may sound simple at first, but it is not.the The characters are interesting, it takes place in a completely fleshed out and interesting universe, and the art could even be considered eye candy to the easily distracte—oh, distracte— oh, shiny.
It may sound simple at first, but it is not.
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After a while the creator got bored with working on crystal rave, claiming that it was simply a "Test." This is understandable since it was his first of these adventure things, and to him it became a test that grew too much. From this, he decided to do a cosmic reboot where we are turned back to a "what-if" situation of the whole story. This new iteration is called "Mineral Caper," which seems to be a pun on Crystal Raver, with a crystal being a mineral, and a caper is also a type of dance like the rave is.
In Mineral Caper Crystal Raver is now a digger, who recently hit a good amount of Taranium Crystals. He is digging with his brother who is named Wedge. [[NoodleIncident Who is not happy for that name for some reason.]]
In Mineral Caper Crystal Raver is now a digger, who recently hit a good amount of Taranium Crystals. He is digging with his brother who is named Wedge. [[NoodleIncident Who is not happy for that name for some reason.]]
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After a while the creator got bored with working on crystal rave, Crystal Rave, claiming that it was simply a "Test." This is understandable since it was his first of these adventure things, and to him it became a test that grew too much. From this, he decided to do a cosmic reboot where we are turned back to that features a "what-if" situation of the whole story. This new iteration is called "Mineral Caper," which seems to be a pun on Crystal Raver, with a crystal being a mineral, and a caper is also a type of dance like the rave is.
In MineralCaper Caper, Crystal Raver is now a digger, who recently hit a good amount of Taranium Crystals. He is digging with his brother who is named Wedge. [[NoodleIncident Who is not happy for with that name for some reason.]]
In Mineral
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It has actually stopped updating on it's forum, instead it has begun running on Dexexe1234's website [[http://www.Dexworks.net Dexworks.net]] where you can go to the latest page and command. It is updating daily.
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It has actually stopped updating on it's its forum, instead it has begun running on Dexexe1234's [=Dexexe1234's=] website [[http://www.Dexworks.net Dexworks.net]] where you can go to the latest page and command. It is updating daily.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny:"This Form also seems to be able to travel over specially marked "Paw Prints" that only you can see! That is very nice!" CR: "Ooh, whats that? Oh! This is exciting!" "...ARE YOU EVEN PAYING ATTENTION?!?" In this particular scene, [[spoiler:Crystal Raver had fusioned with his pet ferret SUGARLOAF and gotten its twitchy nature, so its only natural.]]
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny:"This AttentionDeficitOohShiny: In a particular scene, Crystal Raver fuses with his pet ferret SUGARLOAF and inherits its twitchy nature.
-->"This Form also seems to be able to travel over specially marked "Paw Prints" that only you can see! That is verynice!" CR: nice!"\\
"Ooh, whats that? Oh! This isexciting!" exciting!"\\
"...ARE YOU EVEN PAYINGATTENTION?!?" In this particular scene, [[spoiler:Crystal Raver had fusioned with his pet ferret SUGARLOAF and gotten its twitchy nature, so its only natural.]]ATTENTION?!?"
-->"This Form also seems to be able to travel over specially marked "Paw Prints" that only you can see! That is very
"Ooh, whats that? Oh! This is
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* AnimeHair: Crystal Raver has completely white hair, but due to being a Monochrome, it might be normal to its species. Feather Dove on the other hand have two giant whips hanging from both sides of purple hair.
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* AnimeHair: Crystal Raver has completely white hair, but due to being a Monochrome, it might be normal to its species. Feather Dove on the other hand have has two giant whips hanging from both sides of purple hair.
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* ElementalPowers: Crystal Raver can control carbon. Which may seem pretty [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway useless at first]], if it is used creatively it can [[LethalHarmlessPowers screw people over pretty badly]]! His ability to control carbon actually makes him able to lift carbon even with himself standing on top of it. Through this he can create his own sky surfboards! Also the graphite shields he can create have already served as some excellent defense.
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* ElementalPowers: Crystal Raver can control carbon. Which may seem pretty [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway useless at first]], if it is used creatively it can [[LethalHarmlessPowers screw people over pretty badly]]! badly]]. His ability to control carbon actually makes him able to lift carbon even with himself standing on top of it. Through this he can create his own sky surfboards! surfboards. Also the graphite shields he can create have already served as some excellent defense.
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* LethalLavaLand:
** The first moon that Crystal Raver visits is a giant dark red rock filled with lava, fire elementals and lanky creatures called Fire Sprites.* NightmareSequence: Crystal Raver has a [[spoiler:flashback to the day his parents were murdered]] in one of these after falling into lava, yikes.
** The first moon that Crystal Raver visits is a giant dark red rock filled with lava, fire elementals and lanky creatures called Fire Sprites.* NightmareSequence: Crystal Raver has a [[spoiler:flashback to the day his parents were murdered]] in one of these after falling into lava, yikes.
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* LethalLavaLand:
**LethalLavaLand: The first moon that Crystal Raver visits is a giant dark red rock filled with lava, fire elementals and lanky creatures called Fire Sprites.Sprites.
*NightmareSequence: NightmareSequence:
** Crystal Raver has a [[spoiler:flashback to the day his parents were murdered]] in one of these after falling intolava, yikes.lava.
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** Crystal Raver has a [[spoiler:flashback to the day his parents were murdered]] in one of these after falling into
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* PaperThinDisguise: Just being covered in soot is enough to make all of the fire sprites mistake Crystal Raver for a fellow fire sprite. Named Veronica. [[spoiler: Veronica eventually becomes playable. They look nothing alike.]]
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* PaperThinDisguise: Just being covered in soot is enough to make all of the fire sprites mistake Crystal Raver for a fellow fire sprite. Named sprite named Veronica. [[spoiler: Veronica eventually becomes playable. They look nothing alike.]]
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* TheNoseLess: The Monochrome race doesn't seem to have either noses or ears. This first became majorly evident in Mineral Caper, where we meet other Monochromes for the first time.
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* TheNoseLess: TheNoseless: The Monochrome race doesn't seem to have either noses or ears. This first became majorly evident in Mineral Caper, where we meet other Monochromes for the first time.
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* AlwaysNight: Day hasn't been seen yet in the story, just the night sky. The sun might rise at some point, but we still don't know if it will.
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* AlwaysNight: Day hasn't been seen yet in the story, just the night sky. The sun might rise at some point, but we still don't know if it will.
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* ArcNumber: The author has stated that the arc number for his entire universe is 1536. It still haven't shown itself in any way in Crystal Rave.
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: There is a small black creature (which was quickly named Clarence) that directly "Took" the focus of the viewers, granting it the "voices" help to get out of a prison cell.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: No royal warriors have been seen yet, but Madame Wranx, the "endboss" of chapter 1 seems to be some sort of royalty to the Fire Sprites.
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: There is a small black creature (which was quickly named Clarence) that directly "Took" the focus of the viewers, granting it the "voices" help to get out of a prison cell.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: No royal warriors have been seen yet, but Madame Wranx, the "endboss" of chapter 1 seems to be some sort of royalty to the Fire Sprites.
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%% * AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: No royal warriors have been seen yet, but Madame Wranx, the "endboss" of chapter 1 seems to be some sort of royalty to the Fire Sprites.
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* ConvectionSchmonvection: Lampshaded. Crystal Raver wonders why he doesn't feel the heat from all the lava he's standing right next to.
** [[AWizardDidIt Apparently, it's his scarf.]] It protects him from feeling hot or cold in hot or cold environments. But he still takes damage from fire and ice attacks. [[SarcasmMode Makes total sense, right]]?
** [[AWizardDidIt Apparently, it's his scarf.]] It protects him from feeling hot or cold in hot or cold environments. But he still takes damage from fire and ice attacks. [[SarcasmMode Makes total sense, right]]?
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* ConvectionSchmonvection: Lampshaded. Crystal Raver wonders why he doesn't feel the heat from all the lava he's standing right next to.
**to. [[AWizardDidIt Apparently, it's his scarf.]] It protects him from feeling hot or cold in hot or cold environments. But he still takes damage from fire and ice attacks. [[SarcasmMode Makes total sense, right]]?
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** This particular quote could also go under AttentionDeficitOohShiny
* ElementalPowers: Crystal Raver can control carbon. Which may seem pretty [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway useless at first]], if it is used creatively it can [[LethalHarmlessPowers screw people over pretty badly]]!
** Well its not entirely useless! His ability to control carbon actually makes him able to lift carbon even with himself standing on top of it. Through this he can create his own sky surfboards! Also the graphite shields he can create have already served as some excellent defense.
* EyeBeams: Ramblax.
** "[[OhCrap ...oh SHIT!!!]]"
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Crystal Raver is currently on a quest to free a powerful being. This turns out to be [[spoiler:'''[[SealedEvilInACan the Big Bad of the entire setting!!]]''']]
* LethalLavaLand: The first moon that Crystal Raver visits is a giant dark red rock filled with lava, fire elementals and lanky creatures called Fire Sprites.* NightmareSequence: Crystal Raver has a [[spoiler:flashback to the day his parents were murdered]] in one of these after falling into lava, yikes.
* ElementalPowers: Crystal Raver can control carbon. Which may seem pretty [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway useless at first]], if it is used creatively it can [[LethalHarmlessPowers screw people over pretty badly]]!
** Well its not entirely useless! His ability to control carbon actually makes him able to lift carbon even with himself standing on top of it. Through this he can create his own sky surfboards! Also the graphite shields he can create have already served as some excellent defense.
* EyeBeams: Ramblax.
** "[[OhCrap ...oh SHIT!!!]]"
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Crystal Raver is currently on a quest to free a powerful being. This turns out to be [[spoiler:'''[[SealedEvilInACan the Big Bad of the entire setting!!]]''']]
* LethalLavaLand: The first moon that Crystal Raver visits is a giant dark red rock filled with lava, fire elementals and lanky creatures called Fire Sprites.* NightmareSequence: Crystal Raver has a [[spoiler:flashback to the day his parents were murdered]] in one of these after falling into lava, yikes.
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** Well its not entirely useless!
%% * EyeBeams: Ramblax.
* LethalLavaLand:
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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Crystal Raver is currently on a quest to free a powerful being. This turns out to be [[spoiler:'''[[SealedEvilInACan the Big Bad of the entire setting!!]]''']]
* LethalLavaLand:
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* OhCrap: Several times when fighting Ramblax.
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%% * OhCrap: Several times when fighting Ramblax.
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* MascotMook: From what we have seen of the fan-art made of this story, the Hobo Imp is quickly becoming this.
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%% * MascotMook: From what we have seen of the fan-art made of this story, the Hobo Imp is quickly becoming this.
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* AlwaysNight: Day haven't been seen yet in the story, just the night sky. The sun might rise at some point, but we still don't know if it will.
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* AlwaysNight: Day haven't hasn't been seen yet in the story, just the night sky. The sun might rise at some point, but we still don't know if it will.
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''Crystal Rave'' is a [[MSPaintAdventures Forum Adventure]] by the MSPA forums member user Dexexe1234. It follows the tale of [[FanNickname The Crystal Raver]], your [[EasyAmnesia Friendly Neighbourhood Amnesiac]] who just so happened to wake up in a prison cell with a missing eye and [[HearingVoices a large amount of voices in his head]] nagging him to do stuff. It just so happens that you, the readers, [[InteractiveComic are these voices]].
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''Crystal Rave'' is a [[MSPaintAdventures [[Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures Forum Adventure]] by the MSPA forums member user Dexexe1234. It follows the tale of [[FanNickname The Crystal Raver]], your [[EasyAmnesia Friendly Neighbourhood Amnesiac]] who just so happened to wake up in a prison cell with a missing eye and [[HearingVoices a large amount of voices in his head]] nagging him to do stuff. It just so happens that you, the readers, [[InteractiveComic are these voices]].
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny:"This Form also seems to be able to travel over specially marked "Paw Prints" that only you can see! That is very nice!" CR: "Ooh, whats that? Oh! This is exciting!" "...ARE YOU EVEN PAYING ATTENTION?!?"
** In that particular scene, [[spoiler:Crystal Raver had fusioned with his pet ferret SUGARLOAF and gotten its twitchy nature, so its only natural.]]
** In that particular scene, [[spoiler:Crystal Raver had fusioned with his pet ferret SUGARLOAF and gotten its twitchy nature, so its only natural.]]
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny:"This Form also seems to be able to travel over specially marked "Paw Prints" that only you can see! That is very nice!" CR: "Ooh, whats that? Oh! This is exciting!" "...ARE YOU EVEN PAYING ATTENTION?!?"
**ATTENTION?!?" In that this particular scene, [[spoiler:Crystal Raver had fusioned with his pet ferret SUGARLOAF and gotten its twitchy nature, so its only natural.]]
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* [[IncrediblyLamePun Elemental]] [[ElementalPowers Powers]]: Crystal Raver can control carbon. Which may seem pretty [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway useless at first]], if it is used creatively it can [[LethalHarmlessPowers screw people over pretty badly]]!
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* [[IncrediblyLamePun Elemental]] [[ElementalPowers Powers]]: ElementalPowers: Crystal Raver can control carbon. Which may seem pretty [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway useless at first]], if it is used creatively it can [[LethalHarmlessPowers screw people over pretty badly]]!
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* LethalLavaLand: The first moon that Crystal Raver visits is a giant dark red rock filled with lava, fire elementals and lanky creatures called Fire Sprites.
* MismatchedEyes: Crystal Raver gets these after getting his [[ElectronicEyes Bionic Eye]]. It's blue, while his normal eye is yellow.
* NightmareSequence: Crystal Raver has a [[spoiler:flashback to the day his parents were murdered]] in one of these after falling into lava, yikes.
* MismatchedEyes: Crystal Raver gets these after getting his [[ElectronicEyes Bionic Eye]]. It's blue, while his normal eye is yellow.
* NightmareSequence: Crystal Raver has a [[spoiler:flashback to the day his parents were murdered]] in one of these after falling into lava, yikes.
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* LethalLavaLand: The first moon that Crystal Raver visits is a giant dark red rock filled with lava, fire elementals and lanky creatures called Fire Sprites.
* MismatchedEyes: Crystal Raver gets these after getting his [[ElectronicEyes Bionic Eye]]. It's blue, while his normal eye is yellow.
Sprites.* NightmareSequence: Crystal Raver has a [[spoiler:flashback to the day his parents were murdered]] in one of these after falling into lava, yikes.
* MismatchedEyes: Crystal Raver gets these after getting his [[ElectronicEyes Bionic Eye]]. It's blue, while his normal eye is yellow.
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* DivideByZero: Literally -- a typo on the statusventory screen once caused Crystal Raver to have 140/0 MP (It was later fixed).
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* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: Dude... It IS DRUGS!
** But seriously, even though there is a giant overtone about rocks and crystals, a lot of the comic's designs are pretty trippy, and sometimes the adventure's art kind of looks like something out of a drug trip, the author has said otherwise about where he gets his ideas.
** But seriously, even though there is a giant overtone about rocks and crystals, a lot of the comic's designs are pretty trippy, and sometimes the adventure's art kind of looks like something out of a drug trip, the author has said otherwise about where he gets his ideas.
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* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: The first run of Crystal Rave did have some music, but none that was really memorable. Mineral Caper starts with an 8-bit like starting screen (Which was retroactively added to the story no less) and also starts Chapter 1 with a haunting refrain of wind and chimes. It is all pretty glorious.
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** This particular quote could also go under [=~Attention Deficit... Ooh, Shiny!~=]
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** This particular quote could also go under [=~Attention Deficit... Ooh, Shiny!~=]AttentionDeficitOohShiny
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Has retroactively gotten a bad end.
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It is hosted on a forum, so if you are going to post commands, you'll have to join the forum before doing so.
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It is hosted has actually stopped updating on a it's forum, so if instead it has begun running on Dexexe1234's website [[http://www.Dexworks.net Dexworks.net]] where you are going can go to post commands, you'll have to join the forum before doing so.latest page and command. It is updating daily.