History Redundancy / FanWorks

-->-- ''Fanfic/SoullessShell''

* At one point in ''[[FanFic/SoullessShell soulless shell]]'', [[TheUnpronounceable Thrnos]] bows to Leif twice in a single run-on sentence.

-->He swept his spear at the muscular guy’s feet, causing him to stumble, and then followed it up with a jab to the stomach from the spear’s blunt end. This didn’t work perfectly because the muscular guy was, well, really muscular but it did push him backwards.

* ''Hogwarts Exposed'' would probably be a third as long without all the redundancy. There are entire scenes that establish points of plot and characterisation that had already been established, exposition that tells the reader things they already know and sometimes things they'd already been told ''earlier in the same scene'', and several instances of characters [[CaptainObvious "nodding yes" and "shaking their heads no"]]. Admittedly in some areas, nodding is a no and shaking is a yes, but these characters are [[WeAllLiveInAmerica supposedly]] British.

* In '''Fanfic/KyonBigDamnHero''' when Kyon is depressed after being grounded Taniguchi makes a list of silver linings that contains how Kyon is now popular with the ladies again and again and again.

** Queen Celesia has elite elite guards.

* Parodied in ''FanFic/BringMeAllYourElderly''. It makes fun of the movie ''The Last Airbender'' 's extreme redundancy using a disease that makes Sokka, Suki, and Katara talk redundantly, like they do in the movie.

* In '''KyonBigDamnHero''' when Kyon is depressed after being grounded Taniguchi makes a list of silver linings that contains how Kyon is now popular with the ladies again and again and again.

-->A few seats down the table, Professor Dumbledore was not pleased with not being pleased.

-->'''Snape:''' We have come to prove to you that your ridiculous suspicions are ridiculous.

** There's also this example in Chapter 23:
--->"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5PLCmmHViFU#t=01m56s All of a sudden?? a terrible man with red eyes and no nose flew in on his broomstick. He had no nose and was wearing a gray robe.]]"

* In ''Fanfic/TheNightmareHouse'', the song in Lucy's nightmare is just, "Join us, Lucy. Join us, Lucy. Join us, Lucy. Join us now. Join us, Lucy. Join us, Lucy. Join us, Lucy. [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Lucy Loud]]." repeated ad nauseum.

* In ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' fanfiction ''Fanfic/BirthdayBreakfast'', Lana and Lola are described as "the two twins".

[''Editor’s note: You forgot the sand.'']

* ''Fanfic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen'': "I cryed and cryed but he didn’t stop for hours and when he finally stopped he left me on the floor and spat in my face and left me there. I pulled on my clothes and cryed madly and ran off into the seething darkness of the midnight street. I ran and ran un till I came to some woods and then I fell down in the woods and cryed." Later on, someone has "black hair like the black feathers of a raven in the black darkness".
* '[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1012651/Nightfoot Nightfoot]] does this in chapter 47 of ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4497752/47/Tales_of_Cosplayers Tales of Cosplayers]]''. Among others, she lets one of the protagonists sing "The song that never ends" to annoy her captor.

** There's also this [[MindScrew confusing]] 'sentence'...

* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6680806/1/The_Big_Room_That_Is_Big The Big Room That Is Big]] Makes up about 90% of the entire story. If the title itself weren't enough, it has quotes such as "And then Johnny woke up and it was the morning and Johnny is a morning person and he likes to wake up in the morning it is great, singing birds are singing!"
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w8JPEq0Qp4Q The Mother of All Trailers!]]

* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1012651/Nightfoot Nightfoot]], [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4497752/47/Tales_of_Cosplayers in Chapter 47 of her story Tales of Cosplayers]] among others lets one of the protagonists sing "The song that never ends" to annoy her captor.
* At one point in [[FanFic/SoullessShell soulless shell]], [[TheUnpronounceable Thrnos]] bows to Leif twice in a single run-on sentence.

* There's a lot in the fifth chapter and onward of a Naruto (possibly troll) fanfic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7984851/5/battle_of_the_bands "The Battle of the Bands"]].

* Extremely common in Fanfic/TwilightSparklesAwesomeAdventure.

* The [[LemonyNarrator narrator]] in the essay-fic, [[FanFic/EquestriaAHistoryRevealed Equestria: A History Revealed]], is guilty of this a few times, going to the extent that a source in the bibliography is specifically cited as [[LampshadeHanging "Redundant Things Are Redundant, and Other Truths"]].

* The ''Radio/OurMissBrooks'' story [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10203524/1/Our-Miss-Brooks-The-Reunion-Assembly The Reunion Assembly]]. Apparently the author was unaware that a reunion is an assembly of sorts.

* agentmatt's fanfiction has fallen victim to this many times, especially one of his gems [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5133787/1/LIFE-S-LITTLE-JOY Life's Little Joy]]. (He may be a troll)

* In Fanfic/HarryPotterAndTheMethodsOfRationality, Harry considers the meaning of life while gazing out over "ice-colored ice".

* In ''Website/LemmysLand'', Morton Koopa Jr. is based on his characterization as Big Mouth Koopa from ''WesternAnimation/TheAdventuresOfSuperMarioBros3'' and ''WesternAnimation/SuperMarioWorld'', and thus has a tendancy to speak like this.

--> Luminosity is created with no commercial intent or gain. Stephenie Meyer owns all things that she owns, completely, wholly, and tautologically. I intend to write fanfiction, not to be a bad evil stealing-type person who is bad and evil and stealing and a person.
* Done deliberately in the fic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8494289/2/Fifty-Shades-of-Blue Fifty Shades Of Blue]] by the author to make fun of her own writing style. It even shows in the summaries:

* A side story for ''[[FanFic/JusticeLeagueOfEquestria Mare of Steel]]'', [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56362/6/the-adventures-of-supermare-side-stories-to-mare-of-steel/evil-things-that-are-evil Evil Things That Are Evil]], refers to Brainiac's evil base with his evil machines that are carrying out his evil plans of evil. Because he's evil. AndThatsTerrible.

* ''Fanfic/SonicHighSchool'' Has redundancy in nearly every line; if you played a drinking game for every redundant phrase you would be dead before chapter 2.
* ''Fanfic/ADiplomaticVisit'': In chapter 4 of the sequel ''Diplomat at Large'', Discord (almost) departs after saying "Until next time; arrivederci!" "arrivederci" is Italian for "See you later", which Pharynx lampshades, pointing out that they mean almost the same thing. Luna responds that this is Discord, and he doesn't find it fun to make sense.
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* In Fanfic/HarryPotterAndTheMethodsOfRationality, Harry considers the meaning of life while gazing out over "ice-colored ice"

* This [[http://anime-fanservice.org/coppermine/displayimage.php?pos=-567 NSFW edit]] of a screencap from the ''Manga/RanmaOneHalf'' anime.

-->"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5PLCmmHViFU#t=01m56s All of a sudden?? a terrible man with red eyes and no nose flew in on his broomstick. He had no nose and was wearing a gray robe.]]"

-->'''John Freeman:''' It's a good day to do what has to be done by me and help my brother to defeat the enemys.

-->He didn’t want nothing to happen to Henry Freeman because Henry Freeman was John Freeman saw Combines start to run like monsters to humens and Henry Freeman and saw Henry Freeman and humens run like brave to Combines.

* FanFic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen: "I cryed and cryed but he didn’t stop for hours and when he finally stopped he left me on the floor and spat in my face and left me there. I pulled on my clothes and cryed madly and ran off into the seething darkness of the midnight street. I ran and ran un till I came to some woods and then I fell down in the woods and cryed." Later on, someone has "black hair like the black feathers of a raven in the black darkness".

* ''Fanfic/HogwartsExposed'' would probably be a third as long without all the redundancy. There are entire scenes that establish points of plot and characterisation that had already been established, exposition that tells the reader things they already know and sometimes things they'd already been told ''earlier in the same scene'', and several instances of characters [[CaptainObvious "nodding yes" and "shaking their heads no"]]. Admittedly in some areas, nodding is a no and shaking is a yes, but these characters are [[WeAllLiveInAmerica supposedly]] British.

* From Fanfic/{{the Calvinverse}}:

* There's a lot in the fifth chapter and onward of a Naruto fanfic, The Battle of the Bands [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7984851/5/battle_of_the_bands]]. (It may be a trollfic)