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* '''Gender Inverted''': Kayla has to carry [[DistressedDude Alex]].
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'''Basic Trope''': A person (normally male) carries another (normally female) with one arm under her legs and the other supporting her back
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'''Basic Trope''': A person (normally male) carries another (normally female) with one arm under her their legs and the other supporting her backtheir back.
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* '''Exploited''': ???Kayla discreetly shoots herself in the foot in the hopes of getting Alex to carry her later.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???'''Downplayed''':Alex does it for a short amount of time.
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* '''Parodied''': Alex [[FoeTossingCharge wades through a horde of enemies]] to rescue an unconscious Kayla. He picks her up and gets the hell out. She wakes up while still in his arms, and they look into each other's eyes soulfully. [[MoodWhiplash But what is that noise? An ice cream truck!]] [[ManChild He drops her on the pavement with a loud *thud* and runs over to the ice cream truck like a seven year old.]]
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Alex [[FoeTossingCharge wades through a horde of enemies]] to rescue an unconscious Kayla. He picks her up and gets the hell out. She wakes up while still in his arms, and they look into each other's eyes soulfully. [[MoodWhiplash But what is that noise? An ice cream truck!]] [[ManChild He drops her on the pavement with a loud *thud* and runs over to the ice cream truck like a seven year old.]]]]
** "Here Comes the Bride" plays as Alex carries Kayla.
** Alex [[FoeTossingCharge wades through a horde of enemies]] to rescue an unconscious Kayla. He picks her up and gets the hell out. She wakes up while still in his arms, and they look into each other's eyes soulfully. [[MoodWhiplash But what is that noise? An ice cream truck!]] [[ManChild He drops her on the pavement with a loud *thud* and runs over to the ice cream truck like a seven year old.
** "Here Comes the Bride" plays as Alex carries Kayla.
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* '''Defied''': ???'''Defied''': Kayla refuses to let Alex do this because she might get injured.
* '''Deconstructed''': This is not the best way to carry someone, and Kayla gets more injured.
* '''Reconstructed''': Kayla has a HealingFactor, and just needed to get out of danger so she could use it.
* '''Reconstructed''': Kayla has a HealingFactor, and just needed to get out of danger so she could use it.
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* '''Played For Drama''': While Alex is busy carrying Kayla to safety, an [[{{Mooks}} enemy]] [[ScareChord suddenly]] jumps out from behind a nearby pillar and [[SlashedThroat slits Alex's throat]]. Since his hands were full holding the girl, he really didn't have any way of defending himself. As Alex [[TheHeroDies collapses and dies]], Kayla tumbles from his hands and the assailant [[KillTheCutie stabs Kayla]].
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* '''Played For Drama''': While Alex is busy carrying Kayla to safety, an [[{{Mooks}} enemy]] [[ScareChord suddenly]] jumps out from behind a nearby pillar and [[SlashedThroat slits Alex's throat]]. Since his hands were full holding the girl, he really didn't have any way of defending himself. As Alex [[TheHeroDies collapses and dies]], Kayla tumbles from his hands and the assailant [[KillTheCutie stabs Kayla]].her]].
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** Alex carries Kayla slung over his shoulder, instead.
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** Alex carries Kayla [[OverTheShoulderCarry slung over his shoulder, shoulder]], instead.
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* '''Parodied''': Alex [[FoeTossingCharge wades through a horde of enemies]] to rescue an unconscious Kayla. He picks her up and gets the hell out. She wakes up while still in his arms, and they look into each other's eyes soulfully. [[MoodWhiplash But what is that noise? An ice cream truck!]] [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments He drops her on the pavement with a loud *thud* and runs over to the ice cream truck like a seven year old.]]
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* '''Parodied''': Alex [[FoeTossingCharge wades through a horde of enemies]] to rescue an unconscious Kayla. He picks her up and gets the hell out. She wakes up while still in his arms, and they look into each other's eyes soulfully. [[MoodWhiplash But what is that noise? An ice cream truck!]] [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments [[ManChild He drops her on the pavement with a loud *thud* and runs over to the ice cream truck like a seven year old.]]
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* '''Deconstructed''': Kayla's back is injured, and Alex ends up [[WorstAid making it worse]].
* '''Reconstructed''': But since they're [[HeroicFireRescue in the middle of a fire]] which will surely kill her, [[GodzillaThreshold he really doesn't have much choice]].
* '''Reconstructed''': But since they're [[HeroicFireRescue in the middle of a fire]] which will surely kill her, [[GodzillaThreshold he really doesn't have much choice]].
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* '''Deconstructed''': Kayla's back is injured, and Alex ends up [[WorstAid making it worse]].
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*'''Reconstructed''': But since they're [[HeroicFireRescue in the middle of a fire]] which will surely kill her, [[GodzillaThreshold he really doesn't have much choice]].'''Reconstructed''':
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* '''Deconstructed''': Kayla's back is injured, and Alex ends up [[WorstAid making it worse]].
* '''Reconstructed''': But since they're [[HeroicFireRescue in the middle of a fire]] which will surely kill her, [[GodzillaThreshold he really doesn't have much choice]].
* '''Reconstructed''': But since they're [[HeroicFireRescue in the middle of a fire]] which will surely kill her, [[GodzillaThreshold he really doesn't have much choice]].
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* '''Straight''': [[TheHero Alex]] carries his girlfriend, [[DistressedDamsel Kayla]] after she is rendered unable to walk by an injury.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheHero Alex]] carries his girlfriend, [[DistressedDamsel [[DamselInDistress Kayla]] after she is rendered unable to walk by an injury.
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* '''Parodied''': Alex [[FoeTossingCharge wades through a horde of enemies]] to rescue an unconcious Kayla. He picks her up and gets the hell out. She wakes up while still in his arms, and they look into each other's eyes soulfully. [[MoodWhiplash But what is that noise? An ice cream truck!]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny He drops her on the pavement with a loud *thud* and runs over to the ice cream truck like a seven year old.]]
* '''Zig Zagged''': Kayla is shot in the leg. Alex offers to carry her, but she [[WellExcuseMePrincess angrily declines]]. Later on, she does actually get carried around, but by an [[TouchOfTheMonster antagonist]]. Towards the ending, there's a part where she has to carry [[LesYay Alicia]] to safety.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Kayla is shot in the leg. Alex offers to carry her, but she [[WellExcuseMePrincess angrily declines]]. Later on, she does actually get carried around, but by an [[TouchOfTheMonster antagonist]]. Towards the ending, there's a part where she has to carry [[LesYay Alicia]] to safety.
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* '''Parodied''': Alex [[FoeTossingCharge wades through a horde of enemies]] to rescue an unconcious unconscious Kayla. He picks her up and gets the hell out. She wakes up while still in his arms, and they look into each other's eyes soulfully. [[MoodWhiplash But what is that noise? An ice cream truck!]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments He drops her on the pavement with a loud *thud* and runs over to the ice cream truck like a seven year old.]]
* '''Zig Zagged''': Kayla is shot in the leg. Alex offers to carry her, but she [[WellExcuseMePrincess angrily declines]]. Later on, she does actually get carried around, but by an [[TouchOfTheMonster antagonist]]. Towards the ending, there's a part where she has to carry[[LesYay [[HoYay Alicia]] to safety.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Kayla is shot in the leg. Alex offers to carry her, but she [[WellExcuseMePrincess angrily declines]]. Later on, she does actually get carried around, but by an [[TouchOfTheMonster antagonist]]. Towards the ending, there's a part where she has to carry
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* '''Enforced''': Kayla is written as a "cute" DistressedDamsel, and Alex is deliberately MrFanservice. It also fits in with his [[DeclarationOfProtection Modus Operandi]].
* '''Lampshaded''': " Oh, great..my ankle's busted. Listen, since you're TheHero and all, you probably wouldn't mind [[BridalCarry giving me a lift?]]".
* '''Lampshaded''': " Oh, great..my ankle's busted. Listen, since you're TheHero and all, you probably wouldn't mind [[BridalCarry giving me a lift?]]".
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* '''Enforced''': Kayla is written as a "cute" DistressedDamsel, DamselInDistress, and Alex is deliberately MrFanservice. It also fits in with his [[DeclarationOfProtection Modus Operandi]].
* '''Lampshaded''':" Oh, "Oh, great..my ankle's busted. Listen, since you're TheHero and all, you probably wouldn't mind [[BridalCarry giving me a lift?]]".lift]]?"
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* '''Played For Drama''': While Alex is busy carrying Kayla to safety, an [[{{Mook}} enemy]] [[ScareChord suddenly]] jumps out from behind a nearby pillar and [[SlashedThroat slits Alex's throat]]. Since his hands were full holding the girl, he really didn't have any way of defending himself. As Alex [[TheHeroDies collapses and dies]], Kayla tumbles from his hands and the assailant [[KillTheCutie stabs Kayla]].
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* '''Played For Drama''': While Alex is busy carrying Kayla to safety, an [[{{Mook}} [[{{Mooks}} enemy]] [[ScareChord suddenly]] jumps out from behind a nearby pillar and [[SlashedThroat slits Alex's throat]]. Since his hands were full holding the girl, he really didn't have any way of defending himself. As Alex [[TheHeroDies collapses and dies]], Kayla tumbles from his hands and the assailant [[KillTheCutie stabs Kayla]].
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* '''Inverted''': [[ActionGirl Kayla]] is actually the one who has to carry [[NonActionGuy Alex]].
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* '''Inverted''': [[ActionGirl Kayla]] is actually the one who has to carry [[NonActionGuy Alex]].EffortlessAmazonianLift
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** [[ActionGirl Kayla]] is actually the one who has to carry [[NonActionGuy Alex]].
** [[ActionGirl Kayla]] is actually the one who has to carry [[NonActionGuy Alex]].
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* '''Inverted''':
**'''Inverted''': [[ActionGirl Kayla]] is actually the one who has to carry [[NonActionGuy Alex]].
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* '''Enforced''': Kayla is written as a "cute" DistressedDamsel, and Alex is deliberately MrFanservice. It also fits in with his [[IWillProtectHer Modus Operandi]].
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* '''Enforced''': Kayla is written as a "cute" DistressedDamsel, and Alex is deliberately MrFanservice. It also fits in with his [[IWillProtectHer [[DeclarationOfProtection Modus Operandi]].
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* '''Double Subverted''': But then she gets a TwistedAnkle, or she mentions she appreciates that position.
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* '''Double Subverted''': But then she gets a TwistedAnkle, or she mentions she appreciates that position.
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* '''Deconstructed''': While Alex is busy carrying Kayla to safety, an [[{{Mook}} enemy]] [[ScareChord suddenly]] jumps out from behind a nearby pillar and [[SlashedThroat slits Alex's throat]]. Since his hands were full holding the girl, he really didn't have any way of defending himself. As Alex [[TheHeroDies collapses and dies]], Kayla tumbles from his hands and the assailant [[KillTheCutie stabs Kayla]].
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** Alex [[GrievousHarmWithABody just swings Kayla at whoever is attacking him]].
** '''Re-deconstructed''': Kayla later expresses [[BerserkButton volumous amounts of rage]] at Alex for using her as an ImprovisedWeapon.
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** Alex [[GrievousHarmWithABody just swings Kayla at whoever is attacking him]].
** '''Re-deconstructed''': Kayla later expresses [[BerserkButton volumous amounts of rage]] at Alex for using her as an ImprovisedWeapon.
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* '''Defied''': ???
* '''Played For Laughs''': Alex [[GrievousHarmWithABody just swings Kayla at whoever is attacking him]]. Needless to say, she's [[BerserkButton not happy, at ALL]] with the prospect of being used as ImprovisedWeapon.
* '''Played For Drama''': While Alex is busy carrying Kayla to safety, an [[{{Mook}} enemy]] [[ScareChord suddenly]] jumps out from behind a nearby pillar and [[SlashedThroat slits Alex's throat]]. Since his hands were full holding the girl, he really didn't have any way of defending himself. As Alex [[TheHeroDies collapses and dies]], Kayla tumbles from his hands and the assailant [[KillTheCutie stabs Kayla]].
* '''Played For Drama''': While Alex is busy carrying Kayla to safety, an [[{{Mook}} enemy]] [[ScareChord suddenly]] jumps out from behind a nearby pillar and [[SlashedThroat slits Alex's throat]]. Since his hands were full holding the girl, he really didn't have any way of defending himself. As Alex [[TheHeroDies collapses and dies]], Kayla tumbles from his hands and the assailant [[KillTheCutie stabs Kayla]].
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* '''Subverted''': Kayla mentions that turns out to be able to walk just fine.
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* '''Subverted''': Kayla mentions that turns out to be able to walk just fine.
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** Alex is actually a cute little boy. This makes more sense as he is light enough for a young woman to carry around.
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* '''Inverted''': [[ActionGirl Kayla]] is actually the one who has to carry [[NonActionGuy Alex]].
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** [[ActionGirl Kayla]] is actually the one who has to carry [[NonActionGuy Alex]].
** [[ActionGirl Kayla]] is actually the one who has to carry [[NonActionGuy Alex]].
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* '''Reconstructed''': Alex [[GrievousHarmWithABody just swings Kayla at whoever is attacking him]].
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Alex [[GrievousHarmWithABody just swings Kayla at whoever is attacking him]].
** Alex [[GrievousHarmWithABody just swings Kayla at whoever is attacking him]].
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* '''Averted''': Kayla is never seriously injured or knocked out, of if she is, she is never carried as a result.
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** Kayla is never seriously injured or knocked out, of if she is, she is never carried as a result.
** Kayla is never seriously injured or knocked out, of if she is, she is never carried as a result.
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** Alex is actually a CuteShotaroBoy. This makes more sense as he is light enough for a young woman to carry around.
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** Alex is actually a CuteShotaroBoy.cute little boy. This makes more sense as he is light enough for a young woman to carry around.
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* '''Enforced''': Kayla is written as a "cute" DistressedDamsel, and Alex is deliberately EstrogenBrigadeBait. It also fits in with his [[IWillProtectHer Modus Operandi]].
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* '''Enforced''': Kayla is written as a "cute" DistressedDamsel, and Alex is deliberately EstrogenBrigadeBait.MrFanservice. It also fits in with his [[IWillProtectHer Modus Operandi]].
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** '''Re-deconstructed''': Kayla later expresses [[{{Understatement}} mild annoyance]] at Alex for using her as an ImprovisedWeapon.
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** '''Re-deconstructed''': Kayla later expresses [[{{Understatement}} mild annoyance]] [[BerserkButton volumous amounts of rage]] at Alex for using her as an ImprovisedWeapon.
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* '''Subverted''': Kayla can walk just fine.
* '''Double Subverted''': But then she gets a TwistedAnkle.
* '''Double Subverted''': But then she gets a TwistedAnkle.
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* '''Subverted''': Kayla can mentions that turns out to be able to walk just fine.
* '''Double Subverted''': But then she gets aTwistedAnkle.TwistedAnkle, or she mentions she appreciates that position.
* '''Double Subverted''': But then she gets a
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* '''Discussed''': ???"Hey, uh, Alex, you've been carrying Kayla for a mile, now. Your arms must be getting pretty tired. Do you want a hand?"
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* '''Conversed''': "See the way Alex is carrying Kayla? You just ''know'' they're going to be together at the end."
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* '''Conversed''': "See the way Alex is carrying Kayla? You just ''know'' they're going to be together at the end.""
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** Alex uses a [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fireman's_carry fireman's carry]].
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** Alex uses a [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fireman's_carry fireman's carry]].
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* '''Conversed''': ???"See the way Alex is carrying Kayla? You just ''know'' they're going to be together at the end."
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* '''Invoked''': ???Kayla complains that her feet are sore and begs Alex repeatedly to carry her.