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-->'''The Doctor:''' "Not magic instead of technology, but magic ''as'' technology. [[CatchPhrase Brilliant!]]"
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-->'''The Doctor:''' "Not magic instead of technology, but magic ''as'' technology. [[CatchPhrase Brilliant!]]"Brilliant!"
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Thanks to the Elements of Harmony destroying the S'Müz, the ponies that were killed through out the story get resurrected, including Zecora and ''the Doctor''.]]
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Thanks to the Elements of Harmony destroying the S'Müz, the ponies that were killed through out throughout the story get resurrected, including Zecora and ''the Doctor''.]]
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* ApocalypseHow: The S'Müz can cause a Class X-5 as it can destroy one reality and move on and destroy another. As a [[GodzillaThreshold last ditch effort]], the Doctor can detonate the Tardis to cause a Class X-4 which would destroy the current universe but would also kill the S'Müz, thus keeping other realities safe.
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* ApocalypseHow: The S'Müz can cause a Class X-5 as it can destroy one reality and move on and destroy another. As a [[GodzillaThreshold last ditch effort]], the Doctor can detonate the Tardis to cause a Class X-4 X-4, which would destroy the current universe but would also kill the S'Müz, thus keeping other realities safe.
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** The Doctor himself is already serious when colts are attacked but when the Hervoken says the destruction of his own race was necessary to destroy another and end a long war, he becomes ''very'' serious.
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** The Doctor himself is already serious when colts are attacked attacked, but when the Hervoken says the destruction of his own race was necessary to destroy another and end a long war, he becomes ''very'' serious.
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* ArcWords: ''Méchant Loup'' ([[spoiler: [[GratuitousFrench French]] for Bad Wolf]]).
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* ArcWords: ''Méchant Loup'' ([[spoiler: [[GratuitousFrench ([[spoiler:[[GratuitousFrench French]] for Bad Wolf]]).
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* ArcWords: ''Méchant Loup'' [[spoiler: [[GratuitousFrench French]] for Bad Wolf]].
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* ArcWords: ''Méchant Loup'' [[spoiler: ([[spoiler: [[GratuitousFrench French]] for Bad Wolf]].Wolf]]).
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--> "I'm the Doctor, and these (''MLP Mane Cast...[[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Zecora]]'') Are my friends. And we are going to stop you. Understood?"
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--> "I'm the Doctor, and these (''MLP Mane Cast...[[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Zecora]]'') Are are my friends. And we are going to stop you. Understood?"
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** Twilight has a couple of these throughout the story. They're typically called 'The Doctor'.
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** Twilight has a couple of these throughout the story. They're typically called 'The Doctor'."The Doctor".
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* ChickMagnet: Ten has a reputation for it, but it's taken up a level here when almost everypony has a ShipTease with him. There is a scene in the third chapter where Pinkie Pie lists off what makes him attractive to the Mane Six
** For Applejack it's his strength and charisma
** For Twilight it's his boundless knowledge and endless line of questions
** For Applejack it's his strength and charisma
** For Twilight it's his boundless knowledge and endless line of questions
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* ChickMagnet: Ten has a reputation for it, but it's taken up a level here when almost everypony has a ShipTease with him. There is a scene in the third chapter where Pinkie Pie lists off what makes him attractive to the Mane Six
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** ForApplejack Applejack, it's his strength and charisma
charisma.
** ForTwilight Twilight, it's his boundless knowledge and endless line of questionsquestions.
** For
** For
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* NoodleIncident: Sometime in the past the Doctor had some adventure with Princesses Celestia and Luna. By the end of it, the latter had developed a crush on him. Because of the TimeyWimeyBall involved, the Doctor himself doesn't know what happened and is looking forward to it.
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* NoodleIncident: Sometime in the past the Doctor had some adventure with Princesses Celestia and Luna. By the end of it, the latter had developed a crush on him. Because of the TimeyWimeyBall involved, the Doctor himself doesn't know what happened happened, and is looking forward to it.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Who would have thought anything based on MyLittlePony G1 villains could be so damn ''dangerous''?!
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* AdaptationalBadass: Who would have thought anything based on MyLittlePony Franchise/MyLittlePony G1 villains could be so damn ''dangerous''?!
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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** The Doctor himself is already serious when colts are attacked but when the Hervoken says [[NotSoDifferent the destruction of his own race was necessary to destroy another and end a long war]], he becomes ''very'' serious.
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** The Doctor himself is already serious when colts are attacked but when the Hervoken says [[NotSoDifferent the destruction of his own race was necessary to destroy another and end a long war]], war, he becomes ''very'' serious.
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"Time Lords and Terror" is a crossover fanfic between ''Series/DoctorWho'' and ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''.
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It can be found in its entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8858961/1/Timelords-and-Terror here.]]
Followed by two sequels, ''Fanfic/MinesOfDragonMountain'' and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8863551/1/The-Nightmare-Engine The Nightmare Engine]].
Followed by two sequels, ''Fanfic/MinesOfDragonMountain'' and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8863551/1/The-Nightmare-Engine The Nightmare Engine]].
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Followed by two sequels, ''Fanfic/MinesOfDragonMountain'' and [[http://www.fanfiction.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Draggle, the only Carrionite to see the S'Müz for the [[OmnicidalManiac indiscriminate]] UltimateEvil that it is, is the only one to make the switch to the friendship side of the force.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Draggle, the only Carrionite to see the S'Müz for the [[OmnicidalManiac indiscriminate]] UltimateEvil monster that it is, is the only one to make the switch to the friendship side of the force.]]
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* UltimateEvil: Again, The S'Müz. [[ForTheEvulz It has no reason to destroy the multiverse]] beyond spite, it's simply ''offended'' by the rest of reality.
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** Zeitgeist Stardust's name is potentially one, especially if [[Music/DavidBowie if Ziggy could be a nickname for Zeitgeist.]]
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* HumansAreUgly / IWasQuiteALooker: While not technically human, the Doctor insists he was fairly good-looking as [[CallAHumanAMeatbag a bald ape]].
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* HumansAreUgly / IWasQuiteALooker: HumansAreUgly: While not technically human, the Doctor insists he was fairly good-looking as [[CallAHumanAMeatbag a bald ape]].
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* SubvertedCatchphrase: Rarity enters the TARDIS and the Doctor prompts her to comment along the lines of how it's bigger on the inside or something similar. She instead starts critiquing the decor
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* SubvertedCatchphrase: Rarity enters the TARDIS and the Doctor prompts her to comment along the lines of how it's bigger on the inside or something similar. She instead starts critiquing the decordécor.
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday:
-->"Ooh...waking up in a strange hospital room, no idea where or when I am, the taste of embalming fluid on my tongue...must be Wednesday."
-->"Ooh...waking up in a strange hospital room, no idea where or when I am, the taste of embalming fluid on my tongue...must be Wednesday."
* SeenItAll:
-->"Ooh...waking up in a strange hospital room, no idea where or when I am, the taste of embalming fluid on my tongue...must be Wednesday."
-->"Ooh...waking up in a strange hospital room, no idea where or when I am, the taste of embalming fluid on my tongue...must be Wednesday."
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* SequelHook[=/=]AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler: After the S'Müz is vanquished and everything's back to something approaching normal, the Doctor offers to take the girls on further adventures in the TARDIS... which they gladly accept once they realize the implications of having access to a time machine.]]
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* SequelHook[=/=]AndTheAdventureContinues: SequelHook: [[spoiler: After the S'Müz is vanquished and everything's back to something approaching normal, the Doctor offers to take the girls on further adventures in the TARDIS... which they gladly accept once they realize the implications of having access to a time machine.]]
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* BadassBoast: A fairly subdued but effective one from The Doctor.
--> "I'm The Doctor, and these (''MLP Mane Cast...[[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Zecora]]'') Are my friends. And we are going to stop you. Understood?"
--> "I'm The Doctor, and these (''MLP Mane Cast...[[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Zecora]]'') Are my friends. And we are going to stop you. Understood?"
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* BadassBoast: A fairly subdued but effective one from The the Doctor.
--> "I'mThe the Doctor, and these (''MLP Mane Cast...[[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Zecora]]'') Are my friends. And we are going to stop you. Understood?"
--> "I'm
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* BrickJoke: That book of Twilight's the Doctor accidentally teleported into the sun; it's spoken of in chapter 2 and [[spoiler: The Doctor returns it in the finale. Twilight makes it explode so it won't embarrass her any further.]]
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* BrickJoke: That book of Twilight's the Doctor accidentally teleported into the sun; it's spoken of in chapter 2 and [[spoiler: The the Doctor returns it in the finale. Twilight makes it explode so it won't embarrass her any further.]]
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* DeusExitMachina: At the start of the story, the princesses are patching holes in the universe that would cause its heat death if left unattended. This means they are unable to help with the current crisis and the Mane Six are the only ones who can help The Doctor. [[spoiler: It's a JustifiedTrope because the holes are a by-product of the villain's entry into the pony universe.]]
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* DeusExitMachina: At the start of the story, the princesses are patching holes in the universe that would cause its heat death if left unattended. This means they are unable to help with the current crisis and the Mane Six are the only ones who can help The the Doctor. [[spoiler: It's a JustifiedTrope because the holes are a by-product of the villain's entry into the pony universe.]]
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* EverybodyLives: [[spoiler: Name dropped by The Doctor after his, Zecora, Draggle and Cherry Swirl revive at the end. The only permanent casualities are those TooDumbToLive and a DeathSeeker.]]
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* EverybodyLives: [[spoiler: Name dropped by The the Doctor after his, Zecora, Draggle and Cherry Swirl revive at the end. The only permanent casualities are those TooDumbToLive and a DeathSeeker.]]
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* HumansAreUgly / IWasQuiteALooker: While not technically human, The Doctor insists he was fairly good-looking as [[CallAHumanAMeatbag a bald ape]].
* InexplicablyAwesome: Not even The Doctor can figure out how Pinkie Pie does the things she does. Twilight has long since given up.
* InexplicablyAwesome: Not even The Doctor can figure out how Pinkie Pie does the things she does. Twilight has long since given up.
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* HumansAreUgly / IWasQuiteALooker: While not technically human, The the Doctor insists he was fairly good-looking as [[CallAHumanAMeatbag a bald ape]].
* InexplicablyAwesome: Not evenThe the Doctor can figure out how Pinkie Pie does the things she does. Twilight has long since given up.
* InexplicablyAwesome: Not even
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Each of the Mane 6, [[spoiler:after The Doctor steps in on Twilight's PunctuatedPounding on Draggle]]. He doesn't want any of them [[BeAllMySinsRemembered to become like him]].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Each of the Mane 6, [[spoiler:after The the Doctor steps in on Twilight's PunctuatedPounding on Draggle]]. He doesn't want any of them [[BeAllMySinsRemembered to become like him]].
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** A second time, when [[spoiler: Draggle]] reincarnates as a foal and is held by Twilight, everyone assumes The Doctor is the father.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Twilight gives a horrific one to [[spoiler: Draggle]], ignoring her frantic pleas to stop. It takes The Doctor's intervention to keep Twilight from killing her.
* NoodleIncident: Sometime in the past The Doctor had some adventure with Princesses Celestia and Luna. By the end of it, the latter had developed a crush on him. Because of the TimeyWimeyBall involved, The Doctor himself doesn't know what happened and is looking forward to it.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Twilight gives a horrific one to [[spoiler: Draggle]], ignoring her frantic pleas to stop. It takes The Doctor's intervention to keep Twilight from killing her.
* NoodleIncident: Sometime in the past The Doctor had some adventure with Princesses Celestia and Luna. By the end of it, the latter had developed a crush on him. Because of the TimeyWimeyBall involved, The Doctor himself doesn't know what happened and is looking forward to it.
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** A second time, when [[spoiler: Draggle]] reincarnates as a foal and is held by Twilight, everyone assumes The the Doctor is the father.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Twilight gives a horrific one to [[spoiler: Draggle]], ignoring her frantic pleas to stop. It takesThe the Doctor's intervention to keep Twilight from killing her.
* NoodleIncident: Sometime in the pastThe the Doctor had some adventure with Princesses Celestia and Luna. By the end of it, the latter had developed a crush on him. Because of the TimeyWimeyBall involved, The the Doctor himself doesn't know what happened and is looking forward to it.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Twilight gives a horrific one to [[spoiler: Draggle]], ignoring her frantic pleas to stop. It takes
* NoodleIncident: Sometime in the past
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** Applejack calls The Doctor "Professor", much like another companion he used to have.
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** Applejack calls The the Doctor "Professor", much like another companion he used to have.
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** Draggle frantically pleads with Twilight to stop [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown pummeling her to near death]]. When The Doctor steps in and saves her, Twilight is ''horrified'' at [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone what she almost did.]]
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** Draggle frantically pleads with Twilight to stop [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown pummeling her to near death]]. When The the Doctor steps in and saves her, Twilight is ''horrified'' at [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone what she almost did.]]
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* SubvertedCatchphrase: Rarity enters the TARDIS and the Doctor prompts her to comment along the lines of how it's bigger on the inside or something similar. She instead starts critiquing the decor
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* BadassAdorable: Zecora, Twilight, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity all kick a fair amount of ass.
** Pony!Doctor probably also counts
* BadassBoast: a fairly subdued but effective one from The Doctor.
** Pony!Doctor probably also counts
* BadassBoast: a fairly subdued but effective one from The Doctor.
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* BadassAdorable: Zecora, BadassAdorable:
**Zecora, Twilight, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity all kick a fair amount of ass.
** Pony!Doctorprobably also counts
counts because Pony!
* BadassBoast:a A fairly subdued but effective one from The Doctor.
**Zecora, Twilight, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity all kick a fair amount of ass.
** Pony!Doctor
* BadassBoast:
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** The Doctor himself is already serious when colts are attacked but when the Hervoken says [[NotSoDifferent the destruction of his own race was necessary to destroy another and end a long war]], he becomes very serious.
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** The Doctor himself is already serious when colts are attacked but when the Hervoken says [[NotSoDifferent the destruction of his own race was necessary to destroy another and end a long war]], he becomes very ''very'' serious.
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* BrickJoke: That book of Twilight's the Doctor accidentally teleported into the sun; it's spoken of in chapter 2 and [[spoiler: The Doctor returns it in the finale. Twilight makes it explode so it won't embarrass her any where.]]
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* BrickJoke: That book of Twilight's the Doctor accidentally teleported into the sun; it's spoken of in chapter 2 and [[spoiler: The Doctor returns it in the finale. Twilight makes it explode so it won't embarrass her any where.further.]]
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* ClarksThirdLaw: Magic? PKE? Sounds the same to me!
** [[Webcomic/GirlGenius Any sufficiently analyzed magic is indistinguishable from SCIENCE!!]]
** More specifically the magic readings that Twilight gets are nonsensical because she doesn't understand (or doesn't know) the "science" behind it. The Doctor on the other hand...
** [[Webcomic/GirlGenius Any sufficiently analyzed magic is indistinguishable from SCIENCE!!]]
** More specifically the magic readings that Twilight gets are nonsensical because she doesn't understand (or doesn't know) the "science" behind it. The Doctor on the other hand...
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* ClarksThirdLaw: Magic? PKE? Sounds the same to me!
**me! [[Webcomic/GirlGenius Any sufficiently analyzed magic is indistinguishable from SCIENCE!!]]
**SCIENCE!!]] More specifically specifically, the magic readings that Twilight gets are nonsensical because she doesn't understand (or doesn't know) the "science" behind it. The Doctor on the other hand...hand is well versed in all things hallo-baloo.
**
**
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* CuteBruiser: Zecora especially gets this during her first encounter with the Carrionites; all three are wiped out thanks to her manticore dust and staff. Applejack and Rainbow Dash also qualify.
* DeusExitMachina: At the start of the story, the princesses are patching holes in the universe that would cause its heat death if left unattended. This means they are unable to help with the current crisis and the Mane Six are the only ones who can help The Doctor. [[spoiler: Justified, the holes are a by-product of the villain's entry into the pony universe.]]
* DeusExitMachina: At the start of the story, the princesses are patching holes in the universe that would cause its heat death if left unattended. This means they are unable to help with the current crisis and the Mane Six are the only ones who can help The Doctor. [[spoiler: Justified, the holes are a by-product of the villain's entry into the pony universe.]]
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* CuteBruiser: Zecora especially gets this during her first encounter with the Carrionites; all three are wiped out thanks to her manticore dust and staff. Applejack and Rainbow Dash also qualify.
staff.
* DeusExitMachina: At the start of the story, the princesses are patching holes in the universe that would cause its heat death if left unattended. This means they are unable to help with the current crisis and the Mane Six are the only ones who can help The Doctor. [[spoiler:Justified, It's a JustifiedTrope because the holes are a by-product of the villain's entry into the pony universe.]]
* DeusExitMachina: At the start of the story, the princesses are patching holes in the universe that would cause its heat death if left unattended. This means they are unable to help with the current crisis and the Mane Six are the only ones who can help The Doctor. [[spoiler:
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* [[spoiler: EverybodyLives: Name dropped by The Doctor after his, Zecora, Draggle and Cherry Swirl revive at the end. The only permanent casualities are those TooDumbToLive and a DeathSeeker.]]
* EvilIsNotAToy: The S'Müz kills Hydia right after she summons it.
* EvilIsNotAToy: The S'Müz kills Hydia right after she summons it.
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* [[spoiler: EverybodyLives: [[spoiler: Name dropped by The Doctor after his, Zecora, Draggle and Cherry Swirl revive at the end. The only permanent casualities are those TooDumbToLive and a DeathSeeker.]]
* EvilIsNotAToy: [[spoiler: The S'Müz kills Hydia right after she summonsit. it.]]
* EvilIsNotAToy: [[spoiler: The S'Müz kills Hydia right after she summons
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* FeelingOppressedByTheirExistence: The S'Müz's reason for doing so, reality's existence simply offended it that much.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Draggle, the only Carrionite to see the S'Müz for the [[OmnicidalManiac indiscriminate]] UltimateEvil that it is.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Draggle, the only Carrionite to see the S'Müz for the [[OmnicidalManiac indiscriminate]] UltimateEvil that it is.]]
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* FeelingOppressedByTheirExistence: The S'Müz's reason for doing so, killing everything is that reality's existence simply offended it that much.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Draggle, the only Carrionite to see the S'Müz for the [[OmnicidalManiac indiscriminate]] UltimateEvil that itis.is, is the only one to make the switch to the friendship side of the force.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Draggle, the only Carrionite to see the S'Müz for the [[OmnicidalManiac indiscriminate]] UltimateEvil that it
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Also, [[spoiler: the S'Müz is defeated when the ponies use their Elements of Harmony to absorb both the PKE it stole and the PKE that makes up its body and disperse it into Equestria.]]
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Also, [[spoiler: the S'Müz is defeated when the ponies use their Elements of Harmony to absorb both the PKE it stole and the PKE that makes up its body and disperse it into Equestria.]]
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* PsychicNosebleed: Twilight [[spoiler: while defeating the S'Müz]].
* PhraseCatcher: Twilight begins to say 'bigger on the inside' but is too awed to finish it.
* PhraseCatcher: Twilight begins to say 'bigger on the inside' but is too awed to finish it.
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* PsychicNosebleed: Twilight [[spoiler: while defeating the S'Müz]].
S'Müz]] because of the titanic amount of energy involved.
* PhraseCatcher: Twilight begins to say'bigger "bigger on the inside' inside than the outside" but is too awed to finish it.
* PhraseCatcher: Twilight begins to say
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* [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld Really Nine Hundred And Five...ish Years Old]]: The Doctor, naturally, much to Twilight's surprise.
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* [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld Really Nine Hundred And Five...ish Years Old]]: ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: The Doctor, naturally, much to Twilight's surprise.surprise is Really Nine Hundred And Five...ish Years Old.
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** And a MythologyGag when Zeitgeist Stardust first hears the TARDIS: 'It's kind of like... scraping one's front door keys on piano wire...'
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** And a A MythologyGag when Zeitgeist Stardust first hears the TARDIS: 'It's kind of like... scraping one's front door keys on piano wire...'