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* ShoutOut: To ''[[WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas II|JourneyToANewWorld}}''. When the Starg Prince and Princess of Evenos, the new land discovered to the west, visit King's Landing some of their guards make marks on sticks with obsidian knives.
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* ShoutOut: To ''[[WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas ''WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas II|JourneyToANewWorld}}''. When the Starg Prince and Princess of Evenos, the new land discovered to the west, visit King's Landing some of their guards make marks on sticks with obsidian knives.
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* HonorBeforeReason: when news of Eddard's victory against Tarly's troops reach him, Mace Tyrell breaks the Storm's End siege, and leaves behind a cart with provisions for the besieged. Stannis considers it the last insult towards him and has it burned. The realistic outcome occurs when this simply leads to most everyone in his household deserting Storm's End.
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* HonorBeforeReason: when When news of Eddard's victory against Tarly's troops reach him, Mace Tyrell breaks the Storm's End siege, and leaves behind a cart with provisions for the besieged. Stannis considers it the last insult towards him and has it burned. The realistic outcome occurs when this simply leads to most everyone in his household deserting Storm's End.
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* HistoryRepeats: Rhaela has a vision [[spoiler:of Baelor crowning princess Lyarra as the Queen of Love and Beauty]].
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* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/1546010/chapters/3274772 So Soars the Young Falcon]]''' (''complete'')
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/1803976/chapters/3869767 A Pack of Wolves]]''' (''complete'')
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3427292/chapters/7509539 When the Stars Fall]]''' (''incomplete'', no update [[DeadFic since 2017]])
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3418796/chapters/7488251 Tales from the World of the Young Falcon]]''' (''incomplete'')
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3454814/chapters/7579667 Appendices to the Young Falcon]]''' (''incomplete'')
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/1803976/chapters/3869767 A Pack of Wolves]]''' (''complete'')
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3427292/chapters/7509539 When the Stars Fall]]''' (''incomplete'', no update [[DeadFic since 2017]])
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3418796/chapters/7488251 Tales from the World of the Young Falcon]]''' (''incomplete'')
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*'''[[https://archiveofourown.''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3427292/chapters/7509539 When the Stars Fall]]''' Fall]]'' (''incomplete'', no update [[DeadFic since 2017]])
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* HonorBeforeReason: when news of Eddard's victory against Tarly's troops reach him, Mace Tyrell breaks the Storm's End siege, and leaves behind a cart with provisions for the besieged. Stannis considers it the last insult towards him and has it burned. RealityEnsues The realistic outcome occurs when this simply leads to most everyone in his household deserting Storm's End.
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* AbelAndCain: Adverted with Stannis and Renly. This actually has effect of making Renly more sexually repressed.
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* AbelAndCain: Adverted Advertised with Stannis and Renly. This actually has effect of making Renly more sexually repressed.
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* WouldHurtAChild: High Septon Bones has dozens of smallfolk children executed and their bodies left to rot in the streets of King's Landing.
* YourCheatingHeart: one of Lyanna's quibbles with her marrying Robert is his penchant for sleeping around. One of her demands to get married is that he stop sleeping with whores. [[spoiler:Not that it works, because Robert is still sleeping with whores, although he manages to hold off for the most part.]]
** Averted with Ned. He slept with [[spoiler:Ashara Dayne]] only once, and that was during the Harrenhal tourney, way before he married Catelyn.
* YourCheatingHeart: one of Lyanna's quibbles with her marrying Robert is his penchant for sleeping around. One of her demands to get married is that he stop sleeping with whores. [[spoiler:Not that it works, because Robert is still sleeping with whores, although he manages to hold off for the most part.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: High Septon Bones has dozens of smallfolk children executed and their bodies left to rot in the streets of King's Landing.
* YourCheatingHeart: one of Lyanna's quibbles with her marrying Robert is his penchant for sleeping around. One of her demands to get married is that he stop sleeping with whores. [[spoiler:Not that it works, because Robert is still sleeping with whores, although he manages to hold off for the most part.]]
** Averted with Ned. He slept with [[spoiler:Ashara Dayne]] only once, and that was during the Harrenhal tourney, way before he married Catelyn.Landing.
* YourCheatingHeart: one of Lyanna's quibbles with her marrying Robert is his penchant for sleeping around. One of her demands to get married is that he stop sleeping with whores. [[spoiler:Not that it works, because Robert is still sleeping with whores, although he manages to hold off for the most part.]]
** Averted with Ned. He slept with [[spoiler:Ashara Dayne]] only once, and that was during the Harrenhal tourney, way before he married Catelyn.
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* TerrorHero[=/=]TheDreaded: Ned "The Bloody Wolf" Stark. So much, that he becomes a sort of monster to scare the kids with in the South.
* TooDumbToLive: Aerys the Mad really lived up to his nickname ''when he swallowed '''wildfire''''' and [[InfantImmortality had Viserys and Aegon do the same]], expecting this to "wake the dragon" in them. Instead, it killed the three of them and caused enough chaos to allow the rebels to take King's Landing without a fight.
* TooDumbToLive: Aerys the Mad really lived up to his nickname ''when he swallowed '''wildfire''''' and [[InfantImmortality had Viserys and Aegon do the same]], expecting this to "wake the dragon" in them. Instead, it killed the three of them and caused enough chaos to allow the rebels to take King's Landing without a fight.
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* TerrorHero[=/=]TheDreaded: TerrorHero: Ned "The Bloody Wolf" Stark. So much, that he becomes a sort of monster to scare the kids with in the South.
* TooDumbToLive: Aerys the Mad really lived up to his nickname ''when he swallowed '''wildfire''''' and[[InfantImmortality had Viserys and Aegon do the same]], same, expecting this to "wake the dragon" in them. Instead, it killed the three of them and caused enough chaos to allow the rebels to take King's Landing without a fight.
* TooDumbToLive: Aerys the Mad really lived up to his nickname ''when he swallowed '''wildfire''''' and
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* ComingOutStory: Renly's storyline in ''When the Stars Fall'', due to being raised by [[AloofBigBrother Stannis]]. The storyline itself is a result of the author finding [[AgentPeacock Renly's portrayal]] in the books to be DatedHistory and wants a better portrayal.
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* ComingOutStory: Renly's storyline in ''When DeathOfAChild: Aegon and Viserys die when they are little, and the Stars Fall'', due to being raised by [[AloofBigBrother Stannis]]. The storyline itself is a result of the author finding [[AgentPeacock Renly's portrayal]] Ironborn have no problem in murdering babies during their raiding in the books to be DatedHistory and wants a better portrayal.Westerlands.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Most of the highborn have complete disregard for the smallfolk. When witnessing the dozens dead children executed by High Septon Bones, Lord Commander Manly says they're only smallfolk and probably committed [[DesproportionateRetribution petty theft]].
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Most of the highborn have complete disregard for the smallfolk. When witnessing the dozens dead children executed by High Septon Bones, Lord Commander Manly says they're only smallfolk and probably committed [[DesproportionateRetribution [[DisproportionateRetribution petty theft]].
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* WeddingDay: The wedding of Rhaenna and Durran takes a great focus on ''When the Stars Fall''. This being Westeros, the wedding is set to be or cause disaster.
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* ShoutOut: To ''[[Disney/PocahontasIIJourneyToANewWorld Pocahontas II]]''. When the Starg Prince and Princess of Evenos, the new land discovered to the west, visit King's Landing some of their guards make marks on sticks with obsidian knives.
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* ShoutOut: To ''[[Disney/PocahontasIIJourneyToANewWorld Pocahontas II]]''.''[[WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas II|JourneyToANewWorld}}''. When the Starg Prince and Princess of Evenos, the new land discovered to the west, visit King's Landing some of their guards make marks on sticks with obsidian knives.
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* AlphaBitch: Rhaenys. She's a SpoiledBrat who takes advantage over her mother's grief to manipulate her into sending her AnnoyingYoungerSibling to Riverrun and holds nothing but contempt for the smallfolk.
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* ShoutOut: To ''[[Disney/PocahontasIIJourneyToANewWorld Pocahontas II]]''. When the Starg Prince and Princess of Evenos, the new land discovered to the west, visit King's Landing some of their guards make marks on sticks with obsidian knives.
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** Rhaegar Targaryen is remembered much less fondly here than in canon, albeit due to AlternateCharacterInterpretation.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The appendices give lot of information on characters and the internal politics of Westeros. On another note, the author often gives insight on the [[NoCelebritiesWereHarmed historical influences]] as well hints into what is going to happen down the line.line on the comments section of [=AO3=].
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''[[http://www.alternatehistory.com/discussion/showthread.php?t=313550 So Soars the Young Falcon]]'' (only for Website/AlternateHistoryDotCom members; an alternative link is [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1546010/chapters/3274772 here]]) is an ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' fanfiction written by CDA with an apparently minor, but of long-reaching consequences, point of divergence: Denys Arryn, instead of dying at the Battle of the Bells, kills Jon Connington, leading to the destruction of the Royal Army of King's Landing since there was no one to call for a retreat. From there, many changes happen, such as the death of Aerys, Viserys and Aegon, Lyanna Stark's survival and many more events. However, in spite of all of this, the Game of Thrones continues unabated, but with different players in the game, the situation is quite different from the one in the books.
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Initially starting on ''[[http://www.alternatehistory.com/discussion/showthread.php?t=313550 Alternate History]]'', the series is composed of the following stories:
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/1546010/chapters/3274772 So Soars the Young Falcon]]''' (''complete'')
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/1803976/chapters/3869767 A Pack of Wolves]]''' (''complete'')
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3427292/chapters/7509539 When the Stars Fall]]''' (''incomplete'', possibly on hiatus)
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3418796/chapters/7488251 Tales from the World of the Young Falcon]]''' (''incomplete'')
* '''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3454814/chapters/7579667 Appendices to the Young Falcon]]''' (''incomplete'')
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* TheEndIsNigh: The followers of the Whytclyffian interpretation of the New Faith believe this, and claim that the day that happens is Durran and Rhaeny's wedding day.
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** [[spoiler:Rhaella has a vision of HistoryRepeating and religious fundamentalists attacking the Maesters' Citadel and BookBurning their library after stabbing the High Septon]].
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* HistoryRepeating: Rhaela has a vision [[spoiler:of Baelor crowning princess Lyarra as the Queen of Love and Beauty]].
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* HistoryRepeating: Rhaela has a vision [[spoiler:of Baelor crowning princess Lyarra as the Queen of Love and Beauty]].
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* ChummieCommies: The early Faith of the Seven established an egalitarian society with conspicious wealth distribution. The New Faith seeks to establish this, however the GreyAndGreyMorality means that they are GoodIsNotNice.
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* ChummieCommies: ChummyCommies: The early Faith of the Seven established an egalitarian society with conspicious wealth distribution. The New Faith seeks to establish this, however the GreyAndGreyMorality means that they are GoodIsNotNice.
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* DemocracyIsBad: Played with. After a smallfolk rebellion in Oldtown during Starry Septon Hugh's funeral, the nobles decide to throw them a bone by established an elected town council, with half of the seats being appointed. The problem is that most of the appointees will be [[SleazyPolitician quite wealthy]] and [[SubvertedTrope can't be bought off]] while the religious reformers supports because in their belief in egalitarianism.
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* GreyAndGreyMorality: The conflict between the Old Faith and the New Faith. On one hand, the New Faith is egalitarian but also misogynist and xenophobic, and willing to use violence to achieve their goals. The Old Faith is controlled by SinisterMinister and its a SaintlyChurch InNameOnly.
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* HistoryRepeating: Rhaela has a vision [[spoiler:of Baelor crowning princess Lyarra as the Queen of Love and Beauty]].
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* ThePlague: New deseases start spreading to Westeros from the new lands discovered in the Sunset Sea, such as the Black Pox.
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* OCStandIn: The author seeks to advert this mostly but it crops up. In example, Robb Goldstagg is a stand-in for Gendry though their personalities are completely different.
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** Renly claims he would never usurp's his nephew and nieces right to inherit Storm's End, and in the books he seeks to usurp Stannis of the Iron Throne.
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